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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzles

Nice going saiii... Loved their confession...

thank u anu 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rd0309

It was a very good update

thank u 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Catherine06

nice going,another twist is waiting i think,wow

thanku
hmm twist dont take it serious u will know about it after 10 parts so njoy the current track
hope u liked it

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nadeeka1200

Hi sai

Nice update finally they are confessed
Waiting for the wedding
Keep them happy
Waiting for next update

thank u 😳
yes atlast they have confessed god knows wen will they confess if Shlok wouldnt have kissed her
hmm k madam will try to keep them happy
will update in few minutes
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vaishux

Wow..beautiful update

Really loved their confession..❤️
Gud going ...thank you👏

thank u 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: syvalini

good going sai.

finally confessed eachother loved it
i think troubles r waiting for their marriage hey na...
waiting for the wedding...
awesome that anjali,niru,varad were teasing shlok...
superb update...👏👏👏

thanks a lot akkkiii
well the confession is not planned one i wrote that in a hurry bcoz its a long story i didnt think it will be liked
wedding koi khaas nahi hain
hmm thanks again
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sudhamadhu

Hai Sai gud evening yaar. Thanks for your update and pm
Nice and awesome update yaar. U wrote it beautiful really I enjoyed it so much.
U r taking us to somewhere. 😉 .
Thanks a lot chechi really is it that interesting
Kalindi didn't know which person did astha loving. Ankush told that it was shlok but he didn't think y shlok rejected her. That was confusing arey Ankush v r also was confused yaar.
Waw shlok came calling astha astha. Waw super Sai.
Shlok asked kalindi and Ankush where is astha and took her to the mandhir. But it was for nice that to give her a surprise but in our show shlok took astha to the mandhir for refusing her love and for rejecting her as his wife. In the show it was so sad to see the part yaar. But in ur ff u gave a good treat for us thank you Sai thank u so much. 👏 😛 😉 hahaha.
Yes but i didnt think so i jus wrote it thats it but i didnt know u ppl like it so much yes i too didnt like that in our show
Waw shlok what an amazing confession. Really v loved this shlok. Shlok asked her y she left. She knows everything about him and y . He didn't ask anything to anyone in his entire life. Because without asking anything he got everything because his father will get everything for him.
For the first time he feels that he wants to be with her and don't leave him .waw Sai this confession was superb. Loved the way you wrote. Awesome yaar 👏 .
Thank u oh did i?? u liked it na thats the best response from anyone and yes Shlok has everything except love and he saw that in Aastha
Astha know that he loves her waw
She also said that on that night in guesthouse she was with him. She know that he loves her. But she happy. In his house she got his dairy and read it and she thought he is still loving Swati that's why she was hurted waw kya dialogue yaar.
Sai u wrote every thing clear. 👏
Shlok got shock because how astha understand him. He said no I don't love my past. I hate only it. Butt he loves astha only and asked to her don't leave him.
She also said that she cannot live without him and hugged him tightly.
Shlok also hugged her back. They forgot the time. Atlast he called her to go home but she refused to leave him. So he lifted her and tried to kiss her.
Waw wat a confession Kamal hey. Waw Sai u r amazing. No words to describe yaar. 👏
Hmm confession u liked it right for now u will njoy it hope i continue to make u feel happy realy but i didnt think it has that impact on u ppl
Shlok also talking about previous ff waw
When shlok tried to kiss her she told it will be only after marriage.but shlok's teasing was superb
Anyway he accepted then they went to their home.
Kalindi teased astha so much. She began to cry and told she can't live without shlok waw astha now u became brave girl. 👏
Same shlok was also in same condition.
Varad and niranjan told they've fixed shloks marriage withh his friends daughter arey waw kya acting yaar.
Arey Kavya u also acting waw
Atlast shlok said he will only marry astha waw now everything us clear.
Ashlok will be together nice.
Sai please show some office romance yaar.
Anyway nice update u rocked. Keep it up
V r waiting...
Continue soon... 👏 😛

Thanks a lot chechi such a big comment really i liked it a lot and now i m continuing to write jus bcause u ppl really there is a lot of support from u keep it up
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Posted: 9 years ago

Episode 29


Shlok and Aastha both were thinking about each other ye kya haal hogaya yaar. Ye sab kaisa hua. Aastha was thinking her first meet with him. Shlok too took her photo which he stole from her house wen he went there with her second time. He just caressed her face and said "kya hain tujh main how can u just be perfect haan." He just kept on staring at her but slept with continuous recalling of her words her cries her angry her care her scent which drives him crazy always.


He again took her phone and messaged "hmm mere bare main soch rahi ho na tum." Aastha took her mobile and read his message "nahi tho I was just checking mails." Shlok saw it and thought ab ye majak kar rahe hain "hmm jhooti how can u forget our kiss haan bohut badi jhooti ho tum haan theek hain if u forgot it shall I remind u how it was."


Aastha was shocked to see these type of messages "besharam ladka kuch bhi bolte ho chi Shlok tum bohut badmaash hogayi." Shlok "main badmaash u r disturbing me and u r saying main badmaash.." and they went on like that for hours. Aastha cant take it anymore. She just switched off the phone and tried to sleep. Yes she slept peacefully without thinking wat all he said but here she left him turned on. Shlok was restless wat to do. After sometime he too slept without thinking anything.


Next day Niranjan and Anjali went to Aastha's house and asked her hand. Kalindi too happily accepted their proposal. Kalindi and Anjai hugged each other. Ankush took blessings of Niranjan and Anjali. Every one were happy. Aastha and Shlok were in office. Aastha was dancing in his cabin. Aastha "Shlok aai phone kiya aaj aap ki aai baba came to my home and asked my hand oh god Shlok we r going to marry."


Shlok "Aastha tum pagal hogayi kya ye office hain ghar nahi hain." Aastha "Kya karu patidev tumhe dekh ke mera dil thikaane pe nahi hota aaphi batayiye kya karu main." Shlok "achcha main batadu so let me show wat makes u silent idar aao." Aastha "kya." Shlok "arey idar aao." Aastha came near him. Shlok pulled her and made her sit in his lap.


Aastha "kya hain Shlok kaam nahi hain kya." Shlok "kaam tho hain lekin preference badal gayi ab tum hain mera bada kaam." He tried to kiss her on cheek. Aastha got up "Ji nahi I said na everything after the marriage ab aap kaam kijiye I wont disturb u k." Shlok "theek hain jara Kamlesh HOD ki file de." Aastha gave it to him and went to do her own work. Days were very boring for her. Shlok too didn't try to come near her. Aastha felt weird. Shlok was controlling himself to not touch her.


After some days muhurat was fixed. Aastha too went to his house now and then. She didn't feel shy she thought it was her home too. She also bcame close to Sojal, Kavya used to play with her too. But she intentionally avoiding Shlok. Shlok too recognised it yet he didn't say anything he himself busied in work. At nights she used to call him but talked less. She was waiting for the marriage.


Shlok too cant take this silence. One night Shlok felt weird and thought to do anything to see her to talk with her. So he simply took the keys and went to her home. He slowly parked the car outside and thought to climb by pipe afterall he is experienced right. Aastha was having bath. Shlok slowly climbed the pipe and entered her room. He listened shower sound so he thought she was having bath. He slowly went and locked her door from inside and went down her bed to hide.


He listened her coming out and she stood b4 dressing table. Shlok came out from other side. Aastha was in towel. She saw him through mirror and was shocked. She immediately turned and saw him and shouted "Shlok." Shlok immediately went near her and closed her mouth with his hand. Shlok "Aastha shshsh.." Aastha cooled down and took his hand away. Aastha "Shlok tum yaha iss vakt kya kar raha hain." Shlok "First tell me y were u ignoring me." Aastha "haan m I ignoring u r ignoring me u r bored of me hain na." and she looked angrily. Aastha was still wet its not helping him to say anything. She was tiny really tiny.


Shlok "Aastha jhoot mat bolo y were u ignoring me haan." Aastha "dekho Shlok yaha se chali jao I will talk with u tomorrow in office koi aajayega." Shlok "jab tak tum nahi bologi I wont go anywhere." And he neared her. Aastha "Shlok pls tang kyun kar rahe hain aap." Shlok "nahi jaogi."


She was stucked between him and wall. Aastha "Shlok if u wont go now I will call aayi and bhai." Shlok "achcha call them I wil see." And he was going to kiss her. Aastha suddenly shouted "aayi bhai." Shlok was shocked and quickly went below her bed again. Arey ye ladki sach main pagal hain he thought oh god how to bear her all the life. Kalindi and Ankush came running and knocked the door. Aastha smiled and opened the door.


Kalindi was worried "Aastha kya hua." Aastha said nothing it is just a rat. Kalindi released a huge sigh. Ankush "didi do u want me to get rid of it." Aastha "nahi bhai its gone." Kalindi "Ankush tum chalo ye ladki aisa hi chillate hain hamesha pata nahi kal sasural main kaisa sah paogi." And they left. Aastha closed the door. Shlok came out "heyy tum pagal hogaya kya jao jo karna hain karlo I wont come to u again bye." And he was going to leave.


Aastha rushed to him and hugged from behind. Aastha "I m sorry aap mujhe dekhne keliye aaya aur main tumhe tang kiya na sorry if u want u can kiss me." Shlok turned and backed her to her bed. He had a smirk on his lips. He was coming over her such that she leaned onto the bed. Aastha "ye aap kya kar raha hain." Shlok "arey u said u can kiss me right." Now she was under him with towel. Shlok was on top of her.


Aastha was nervous she regretted for saying like that. Shlok's lips were almost going to touch her's Aastha came up to meet his lips he backed down. She opened her eyes in shock. Shlok smiled "nahi baby I m not going to kiss u I m going to bite u." and he bit on her shoulder and he gave a wet kiss there and stood up. Aastha was shivering, her body temperature increased she really wants him to kiss her. Shlok left away saying bye to her. She was disappointed.


Ankush went to Kalindi. Ankush "aai main samaj sakta hoon aap kya soch raha hain if u want I can bring him out in bail but Aastha.." Kalindi "I know Ankush but its Aastha's marriage he should be at her marriage whatever he done but he loves Aastha a lot I know he was screwed up but Aastha should understand that too Ankush if u don't mind will u make Aastha to accept his bail pls." Ankush "aai main koshish karunga."


Ankush went to Aastha slowly and asked "hmm didi r u happy with him." Aastha "kya hain bhai y r u asking like this everything is right haan bhai Shlok bhi mujhse bohut pyaar karte hain." Ankush smiled and patted her head "didi I want to ask u something." Aastha "Kya hain bhai." Ankush "didi I m thinking Avdoot Baba bhi iss shaadi main shaamil hona hain." Aastha "bhai main kitni baar kah chuki hoon baba ki baate mat karna I don't want him to be in my marriage."


Ankush "lekin didi y r u not thinking ike this Baba bhi tumse bohut pyaar karte hain chahe kuch bhi galat kiya usne aur Baba galat nahi kiya galat karna pada wo bhi Salman ki vaje se don't take him wrong didi if u want I can get bail." Aastha "nahi bhai do u even know how much I felt wen he was missing every second I was dying thinking of him something might have happened to him but now wen I came to know the truth that he really made those mistake I lost love on him I cant see him I really hate him bhai uski vaje se aai ki accident hui nahi bhai Baba galat ki hain uski saza milna hi hain."


Ankush lost the battle "theek hain didi ye tumhari shaadi but u should also think in this way he really loved u didi he also wants to see ur marriage I just asked u that's it." And he left. Aastha didn't know wat to do. But she was angry on her father really angry for wat he did.


Ankush came and said to Kalindi that she is not accepting. Kalindi went in. Shlok was really excited for marriage so that he can be with her all the time. He was recalling her in that towel oh god he could have ended up there thank god he only knows wat made him to stop in going further. Ankush thought to call Shlok she might listen him.

Episode 30


Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hai Sai gud evening. Thanks for ur updates and pm
Sai thanks for ur reply for my comment. Really I didn't expect like this yaar.
U gave me most wonderful reply. Thanks a lot yaar.
Sai I only said the truth. I always liked ur updates.
It is really like a magic yaar. Ur writing skill is excellent that's y I am commenting to ur update. But today u gave me a treat yaar. I loved it very much. 😉 😉 👏 .
Yes Sai ur every updates r very interesting yaar. U know everybody cannot write story yaar. If writing every story will not being interesting . But I reader so many stories about ashloks. Some r very natural some r fine some r so sad but some r interesting. But if what ever it I I loved ashlok stories. All most I readed near 90 stories about ashlok. Now also I will read the old stories of our ashlok which I already readed.
But ur stories r interesting yaar. I didn't give anyone comments before ur ff. First I started to write the comment is urs yaar. From that I didn't stop commenting ur updates. Really ur stories r superb yaar. U r rocking. Keep it up yaar.
👏 👏👏
Hmmm shlok and astha missing each other. They are recollecting their beautiful moments and thinking about each other. They can't sleep now they two r in love deeply. Shlok mgsd her and teasing her was superb. They talk for 2-3hours. Atlast she can't take it anymore.she switched off her mobile. But shlok was restless waw superb. Wat a romantic moments yaar. 😉 😉[;)}]😉
Next day Niranjan and Anjali went to Astha's house and asked astha's hand for shlok. Kalindi was happy.
And she accepted waw. Now no problem from their parents side 😉
Astha was happy and dancing but shlok is naughty .
Waw marriage preparation was going on. 👏
Sai we want some romance before marriage yaar.
And in marriage we want every function yaar.
Arey astha stopped shlok kissing her. She told him only after marriage only he can kiss her. So now shlok is also controlling himself waw shlok tum 😉
Astha y r going to AM and playing with Kavya. Waw then ashlok r avoiding each other waw how can they. Really Sai don't do this yaar. V want their romance yaar. 😉
Arey shlok can't take this silence from his baby doll waw he wants to see her. And his entrance to her was super in our show also he climbed through the window but in the show asthu was on bed in ur ff she was in bathroom and came out in towel waw. Romance hey.
Shlok was asking y she is ignoring him she also asking it to him. He wants to kiss her but naughty girl called her mom and bhai.but she told them that she saw a rat and it gone. She laughed and this made shlok angry. He was going but our drama queen stopped him waw after then again romance super Sai
Ankush asking kalindi will he release avdoot from jail for astha's marriage but kalindi refused because astha didn't like but Ankush u r really good boy yaar. U convinced kalindhi and told he will ask astha.
But our asthu didn't like that she didn't agree. She said she didn't like that avdoot coming to her marriage.
Y asthu at least he is ur baba henna 😲
Ankush thought to tell shlok and he will convince astha. Arey now shlok was dreaming because after marriage she will always be with him.
Anyway Sai superb u wrote well. Really I an exited will their will be done or not. Something is coming
Ok anyway congrats to ur updates and keep it up yaar. U r rocking always be like this
Continue soon 👏
Edited by sudhamadhu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update...
Loved astha and shlok teasing each other
Keep it up
Thank you😳

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