all's not well, that just begins!

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IKRS Tuesday 12th April 2016 ep 216 My Take ~ all's not well that just begins!

The devil once again has the upper hand, quite easily as the family he deals with is devoid of foresight. Effortlessly Raja can blow dust in the respectable family's eyes . Much to his advantage the majority of the Tirpathi's see things on face value ,that which looks and sounds good, bar one person Viplav, the bane of Raja's life. Awasthis fluke about leaving has the whole family pleading for them to stay. One by one all members from the girl's mother right up to grand old man begs Raja to stay back. The air is tense and finally the attention is diverted to the cause of Raja s exit Dhani! Kanak clearly sees her as the culprit . But Dhani is preoccupied with the notion , fairly sane too , if Raja leaves then he will be out of their sight , and they will be at a loss to gauge what treatment he is likely to give Shalu. Time to go! but this time Dhani stops them much to Viplav's angst.. Sulochana waits upon the moment when hot coals can be heaped on Dhani's head! Of course she needs to instigate the right person who has the liberty to rip Dhani apart ,her mother in law. Kanak lambasts Dhani that in their household a SIL is nothing short of a god and she has disrespected their god ! so Dhani has to publically before all with head bowed down and folded palms seek Raja's pardon! Viplav loathes the idea , even commands her not to! but Dhani publically so to speak defies her husband ,in the hope that her priority of the moment is to save the situation! Viplav she will deal with later! Thus Dhani's apology an asking Raja to stay back is seen as a moral victory by all who hate Dhani .The Awasthi's, Dashrant , Kanak delight in their wickedness that Dhani has been brought low ,her face rubbed on the ground. Sadly none can recognise the girl's true worth, to sacrifice her seemingly self respect for the greater good of her new family. Raja deceives all , when he tells Dhani , that he will stay but in future he is not prepared to comprise his self respect so let it be known to his bhabi ji he will not put up with her warped mistakes! For Dhani in the eyes of the gods ,she scales far above from the rich ,powerful and learned individuals of the Tirpathis .Even Dashrant the high priest of Banaras is dwarfed beneath the moral height of Dhani.. and lowly girl who puts others first and serves others as her faith!

Now to appeasing her god of love , her husband Viplav..who lets off steam at shooting ball at the basket in the privacy of his room. His rage takes the better of him, he fails to see purpose in Dhani s ultimate apology that the dirty Awasthi's angled for and got out of her. All he can see is rage against the rascal fiend Raja. Viplav has never accepted him and never will.. Raja was a conniving, digressing ,deviating , diverging devil! who detours his deeds and damns all others especially Viplav's wife Dhani! Dhani has the tender ,loving job of talking through with her husband of the rationale behind her apology . To restrict, restrain and confine Raja in AN so he can be monitored and stopped from harming Shalu! but Viplav is concerned about Shalu with the scoundrel in the same room. Dhani assures Viplav , the doubts she planted in Shalu's mind should keep her away from Raja's advances. This section Raja over hears as he happens to be passing Viplav and Dhani's room ,and thus with a content smile he decides to use this most hated couple's very strategy of sowing misgivings, mistrust , to his advantage! But Dhani decides to cool her beloved husband off! and suggests he take her out for some ice cream to divert his highly strung mood..

Raja knows which buttons on Viplav to make his life hell! He knows Viplav can't stand the sight of him and so he instigates his wife and both Shalu and Raja barge into the car which Viplav sat in to take Dhani for a spin. Raja knows Viplav loathes him making references to Dhani and the past in their family .. and Raja uses that as a weapon ,with the view to spoil Viplav and Dhani's evening. Shalu is primed to big his image him ,by saying that Raja is so amicable and forgiving ,that despite all he still wishes to make amends with Dhani babhi for the sake of family harmony. Raja taunts Viplav ,as he touches on pleasant memories where in the past his older brother used to take them out to eat ice cream! The idea is to plant doubts in Viplav's mind that him and Dhani as Suman bhabi were very close. He went far into knowing her favourite flavour too.. but then Viplav was not jealous of this cheapster ,as he trusts his wife completely ,it was more so to share the same space as this burden on the earth Raja. Fed up they return home and Raja thinks he's scored a moral victory by causing distances between Viplav and Dhani.. Viplav finds it difficult to keep his lid on! but every second Dhani holds him and appeals to him to keep it together. Raja meanwhile enjoys winding Viplav up , more because he knows Viplav is at his mercy to listen to his rubbish , as he cannot do much due to Shalu being there! More of Raja's guile at home when Viplav goes to his room in a mood.. Raja tells Dashrant innocently, don't know what's happened ,he was only trying to bond with Viplav... so he plants doubts in dada and dadi's mind that its Viplav who wants to carry on with the animosity..

Kitchen kanaks's territorial empire from which Dhani the widow is banned.. joke but why is Kanak there , she's the misfit as her widow rule applies to her and not to Dhani who is married...dhani enters the kitchen ,is told to leave by Kanak , but Dhani poses her a question , how come she was allowed in to cook for the bhoj? Kanak is gobsmacked by Dhani's insolent retort.. Viplav hears Dhani and pulls her out of the kitchen and takes her in foyer so an audience can gather! and gives Dhani a good firing for back chatting to his mother that which he finds unacceptable he yells at Dhani with a finger pointed in her face!she'shis mother!she can say what she likes to her ,she shouldn't answer back! He yells, everybody is annoying him ,if she too annoys him where is he meant to go? Dashrant has a smile on his face and he thanks the gods that Viplav is over this widow! Viplav yells whenever his mother went against her ,he always took her side!and stop crying Dhani!if mother isn't happy! Shalu isn't happy!then how can he remain happy? and if he is not happy! then how is he expected to keep her happy Dhani he bellows in her tearful face!.. from today no matter what his mother says she will not answer her back! He warns and wags his finger in her face!..the elation on Dhani's foes is noteworthy! And seeing his finger raised up..and she turns and leaves as Viplav yells he has not finished yet!..

Dhani enters her room ,dazed and crying. Viplav follows her , and shuts the door..and so does Kanak for more possible fireworks.. she eavesdrops outside the door.. Viplav turns her round to face him and glares at her ,then growls, he has not finished yet! Outside Kanak strains for more fighting.. Viplav wipes Dhani's tears from her cheeks with his fingers.. his eyes soften and she looks up at him with tearful yet smiling eyes as he gathers his love in his arms and whispers to her ,seems the plan has worked.. Dhani snuggles against his shoulder and gives a broad smile.. if to hoodwink and throw dust in others eyes is the war tactic, then Viplav and Dhani too will fight guile with guile ,deception with deception..

For starters,its again camera on ra...then its was usual gunning dhani galore! Dashrant's hate for dhani was so evident today. No wonder raja is always in his elements.. both viplav ,dhani scenes were great..Raja dosen't quite beilef vioplav and dhani fight..now that viplav will be proclaimed heir ..raja will come out with some more nasty deeds.. hamlet53 13. 4. 16

Precap: Dashrant asks Viplav the reason for falling out with Dhani? Viplav replies he cannot take anyone go against his mother, for Dhani he went against all his family, he tells his mother ,he was selfish, didn't think about others ,so now he has decided dadaji ji that he wants to take over the responsibilities of this house ,being the son of this household.. Dashrant announces, after Navratri I will declare Viplav as my sole heir.. Raja and his mother are devastated!

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revathirk thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanx hammi...for d wonderful update ..it ll b interesting to watch cute cat fights of vidha...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Have not watched the last few episodes, but this explains the whole thing so precisely.
Thanks for the lovely update.
I liked the title too!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks hammmie for a brilliant take👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hammie ,
i loved ur title.how can u give title to every single episode?really amaging.
it was a very interesting episode,nice plan by viplab dhani,provoking raja to come out if his shell n viplab gining d trust of his family by disrespecting dhani.
very well said mahant DT is nothing in comparison to dhani,a true devotee of God.i love d way dhani teaches viplab things.once upon a time viplab taught dhani how to take a stand for her dignity,here dhani teaches viplab how to handle delicate relations.perfect couple..
u r such a great writer hammie,i learn new English words from u everyday.yes u put some words together n together they make magic,ur storytelling is just perfect.always gives me d feel of watching d episode live.👏⭐️
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Dear Hammie 😃...I thoroughly enjoyed the episode ...When the demon himself wanted to leave they could have bid him farewell na but no the tripathi's have to beg him to stay...the blame as usual falls on dhani...Kanak and sulochana belong to chudails club 😆,they have been trained pretty well you see...mauka dekhte hi dhani pe attack especially kanak with her hands and claws always itching to slap and pull everyone's hair 😆

Dhani is a fore thinker, she is the one who is always been composed...she apologized to raja despite viplav's protest and wow look at the way all chudail's and demons face glows ...noor hai unlogo ki chehron pe 😆...Dhani dhani my respect for her increases day by day...viplav did some punya to have her by his side...she always put others before her...So much she does for shalu later shalu should be extremely grateful to her.

We do get chota cool right viplav needs it now and then 😆...jab dimag garam hoga toh thodi der ke liye chota cool mai rakh sakta hai 😆 Dhani calms and reasons with him that its better to keep your enemy closer. Raja overhears the conversations where dhani speaks of shak ki beej and he tries to implement the same seed of doubt against them...dhani plz close the door next time you see dewaron ko bhi kaan hote hai.

Aww viplav asks dhani to have paan such a sweet moment in spite of so much tension around here comes the chipkali ya blu kabab mai haddi...i totally get viplav's frustration he is so getting on his nerves...they leave the place.

Now comes my favourite part of the episode...kanak with her do not enter the kitchen tag to dhani ...it should have been beware of me mai katthi hu bhi chikti hu chillati hu lol dhani retorts back saying why when can cook for mahabhoj why not now??

Viplav drags her to the hall warns her not to say anything to his mother her saas...they fight for some time gather the crowd...by God such glows on DT kanak and the avasthi's faces 😆...it's been some time to see them smiling 😆 mujhe toh badi hassi ayi thi especially looking at DT who kya tha he was the moon , the sun itni chamak dhamak chehre pe 😆haan haan hass le jina hasna hai baad mai rona bhi toh hai ...for viplav and dhani will have the last laugh.Dhani and viplav leave with kanak on their toes full of eavesdroppers around the house...luckily they close the door and hug...the plan is damn good...kanta ko kanta hi nikal sakta hai ...chal ko chal se hi baazi mar sakte hai...The precap is good raja and his amma have their faces burning when viplav takes the AN's responsibility and he is going to be the official heir soon.

As usual you have written extremely well 👏...loved reading your take...waiting for your next part...till then take care.😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Enjoyed reading a lot. Thank you.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hammie , you are right All's not Well in the Tripathi's house... and by that I mean mentally , the adults of the house have lost their Screws...

The main Stink Creepo wants to leave and all seem Hell bent on letting him stay ...
Even Dhaani should have not apologized and let them go...Shallow Shaalu has made her bed ...let her find out WHAT she has her sight set on...A jobless, lech that has his sight on others wealth...

I firmly believe one learns by their mistakes if they are left to figure it out themselves,
trying to save S S for her own good is not going to help because she will always resent those that tried to help her...

Always wronged Dhaani of course does what she knows best is trying to save S S from the same misery that she went through with the Creepo and apologizes to the Creepo with his evil smirk for getting away with his lecherous behaviour.

Dhaani is left with her hubby that is hurt and in no mood to be talked out of his Foul mood, Dhaani tries and talks him to take her out for Ice Cream...Nice thought...

Naw !! the Creepo and S S , I don't know how they find out ... come barging into the car to join them for the outing... How Rude !! Uninvited Rodents...

Viplav get even sulkier, and who could blame him, with the Snake poking at Viplav with trying to say he knows his ex S I L better ...Viplav should have asked him WHY does he know her so well ? Then knocked his smirk off his face..😡

The Fake Fight... I do not know if it will work...because it is too fast a change in their
behaviour too soon after all the lovey dovey they did in front of everyone.
But then again these resident adults that seemed to have the cunning to smell a Rat before now seem to be in a stupor and are ready to believe anything that seems to go along with what they privately want... A Real Loony Bin... A N has turned into...

Thank you Hammie, let's hope the Tripathi's wake up before it is too late..

Take care, my friend, wish you nothing but the best always...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi here , thanks for the comment . love hammie
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: revathirk

Thanx hammi...for d wonderful update ..it ll b interesting to watch cute cat fights of vidha...😊


hi reva thanks for reading and commenting .. the fights were not real so lacked sincerity... but will see todays... muchlove hammie

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