Arshi SS ' Apna hai phir bhi Ajnabee' CS & Teaser,pg 4

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Tumpa12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

loved it

awesome

thnx for pm

cont soon

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kowshira9

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Nice update but i am a bit confused

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Zariya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

poor khushi is going to be in mess

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1029751

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Hihihi Didu This is an amazing teaser and CS... Hope The Gupta gets her happiness soon and trust me I'll rip ASR off if he tried to hurt or torture Khushi...😆

Humari phool si Khushi ko kisiki nazar na lage 😉

Aap karoge na meri madad ASR ko pitne mein???😃

mujhe pata hai aapko bhi yeh wala ASR nahi pasand.. Chalo ab isme chupana kya? Nahi pasand toh nahi pasand... Hum milke uske chhote chhote...chhote chhote tukde karenge😃

BTW amazing way of writing.. Waiting for more👏

I LOVE YOU DAMMIT...!!!!

Love,

Kiddo

Edited by Kiddo_Star - 9 years ago

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noordina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Loved the cs, and the teaser is very interesting

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manjunaidu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Intriguing concept.would love to read more of this story.Good work.

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rn94

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Nice cs and teaser.
Thanks for pm.

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laavanya4u

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Gosh!! What a damakhedaar start?? Khushi preggy with akashs child. This is definitely not less than the eighth wonder of the world. Akash intimated with khushi ignoring his payalji. Like ASRS what the Unbelievable. Waiting for the next heart Attack. Go ahead and rock the forum sweetie