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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kras

omg it's so cute and lovely

ishra was was cute and lovely
and light hearted also

but i love adi realization part the most

Thanks alot dear!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Armor_ishra..

haye,,,,,,,,kash real amin aisa hota...

koi nhi it was awesome...
ab isse bada kya bolu...
loved it
update soon
thnx for the pm!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks alot!!! Tanu!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Roohachu

Haye Rabba
Kya bolun main
Itni achi se likhi hai yeh jo kahani hamari toh bolti hi band ho gayi
Ishra Romance ki baath hi mat karao☺️
Hayeee
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Nice update
Just loved it
Adi is also changing
But still uss apshagun is trying hard to instigate him against Ishra
N the morning scene
It was so hilarious🤣
Bechara Ishra😳
Shagun is fuming
🤣
Update soon

Thanks alot 4 ur cmnt dear!!! Will update 2moro mrng!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: 9900

Awesome update shreya😃

Loved it loads😃
Please continue soon can't wait to read the next part😃

Thanks alot dear!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vaishnavi28

superb update dear

loved it totally
loved ishra scenes
ishita slept on raman
and the family teasing was awsm
loved it
continue soon
thanx for pm

Thanks for liking it dear!! Will update 2moro!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Adi has become very good and matured
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: traveller_girl

Awesome update

Loved it
Adi has become very good and matured
Continue soon

thanks for liking it dear!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago


Previous part

Part:4

There she was walking to and fro wearing a blue saree and using extra makeup as if going to a high class party. She was muttering how ignored she was by everyone over the breakfast. Exaggerating her looks she went to the living room only to get fumed by the couple cuddled up too close for air to pass. She so wanted to give them the rudest awakening of their lives but calmed herself not to reveal herself to the family this early.

She put-on an artificial smile and bend down to take the blessings of toshi who had royally ignored her ,by passing away shouting at their maid not to do things she isn't habituated of. Even though she knew the taunt was directed towards her, she greeted simmi who had blasted her openly asking not to bother her stating a lame excuse of head ache in the early morning. Not willing to get herself offended anymore, shagun started having her breakfast silently glaring at the couple who were deep in slumber obvious to the world around them.

It was then when ishitha woke up smiling brightly thankfully to put an end to the looks and jokes regarding the couple on couch which were irritating her to the core. But the drama had started once again as raman and ishitha were wide awake and had stopped only after retiring to their respective rooms for the day even after raman scolded and left to his room.

She was pissed. She had worn something of other's choice, especially raman's for the first time. She had worn a shimmering blue saree which would definitely grab the attention of people who didn't even intend to acknowledge her. But what was the result for her early wakening despite the hangover of alcohol, last night? Not even a look upon her, she hadn't expected raman to be this aloof. She knows how much passion and desire raman would err... used to feel for her. Now getting raman to the self he was back six years was her goal and she wouldn't accept defeat this early. Motivating herself,she reapplied her lipstick and headed to the living room to seduce her ex-husband.

Whistling and humming some unknown tune to himself, raman was combing his hair smiling,replaying the morning scene of theirs with his blushing wife who had run to their daughter in pretext getting her ready to her school. He wearing the suit which ishitha had kept for him left to the living room to have his breakfast.

Once again the dining room had become crowded by all the family members except ishitha. Shagun was calling adi irresponsible for being late while adi was trying to tie his tie' around his neck failing nth time and rejecting everybody who came forward to help him expecting his mom to help him which never happened.

Then came ishitha with loose and wet long hair due to the disturbance in her schedule in a peach simple saree bordered with a thin red strip marking an exact contrast to her milky skin making it impossible for raman to take off his eyes from her. She was looking simple but divine. A smile had instantly curled up on his lips seeing her offer help to adi but it was replaced by a frown on his forehead and called his son for rejecting her rudely but was again silenced by her eyes. She asked simmi to help adi while she would get ruhi ready and also informed that driver was waiting for them, so they have to leave within 5minutes which made adi accept simmi's help as he knew that he couldn't make it possible in given time. Everybody was now grinning seeing ishitha's way dealing him.

Ruhi came out cheerfully wishing everybody a very good morning and ran into her mother's waiting arms who was awarded with numerous kisses by her mother and returned them generously. This was what that made the day of bhalla family, the infinite and pure love between the mother and daughter duo which was now having a new member, raman. Shagun made faces seeing them whereas adi was in a dilemma how to react and chose to ignore which is difficult for him as they were leading to his last night's thoughts.

"Ahem!! Ahem!!" raman cleared his throat wantedly to gain the attention of his girls which made both of them giggle and say

"jallu ravan!!!"

They made their way towards raman with ruhi in ishitha's arms playing with her hair. Ishitha had expected only ruhi to give a morning hug to raman but to her surprise raman had gotten up from his chair and back hugged ishitha encircling his hands around both of them. Ruhi tilted her head and kissed his cheek wishing him a good morning for which raman replied a kiss on her cheek in the process rubbing his one night old stubble onto ishitha's cheek. Ishitha shivered under his touch and a hue of red covering her milky cheeks. He uttered a husky good morning looking into his wife's eyes and running his left hand over her the length of her arm which was around her neck earlier.

There stood ishitha unable to control her raging hormones in the middle of her family and their kids. It was not that raman had never given attention or loved her publicly but he was never this expressive. He always concealed his love and care behind his taunts or stating it as a forceful pretending. But the raman now was not living a chance to shower his love upon her. Also it was not that she wasn't enjoying or feeling uncomfortable with these, she was more than happy to bask into his love oblivious of everything. It was just that she was surprised and feeling shy for this visible change in him.

It was then when she had observed that the whole attention of family was upon them which made her a bit shy .But the father and daughter where happily chatting away their plans for the day ahead curling her hair around their fingers and splashing the water dripping from her hair, playfully upon each other. She smiled looking them happy and reminded them their chores to be completed which bought them out of their worlds. She gently wiped their faces with her pallu and kissed ruhi.

"Bye papa!! Bye ishima!!" ruhi said throwing her little hands around both of her parent's neck making their faces come much closer than they already were and kissed them giggling.

"Bye beta!!" they said feeling ecstatic by seeing the innocent and pure love of their daughter. Ruhi after adieu to everyone except shagun hopped out of their home with her brother in tow. Shagun eventhough got annoyed as she was ignored, she shouted an over enthusiastic good day' for her kids which was left unreplied because they were already gone. Then she immediately went to the dining table greeting raman and ishitha.

"ishitha!! Thanks a lot!! Joh tumne adi ke liye kiya tha..."she continued only to get interrupted by simmi.

[ishitha!! Thanks a lot!! For what you have done to adi...]

"ishitha tho dusre ki fikr hamesha hotha especially bachon ki, shukar hai agar kisi aur ko bhi hota hai!!" she taunted.

[ishitha always has this concern for everyone especially for kids. It would be too good if someone else also behave.]

Continuously offended she sat silently having a cup of coffee only to look what the couple of her concern was doing. She has seen all the not so innocent touches of the couple which had been adding fuel to her anger.

"maa!! Iss saal ka best ceo award function aur new year party ek hi baar hai!! Next week!!! Mein kya chahata hoon iss saal aap sab bhi mera sath ayiye!! Invite tho poori family kho kiya tha!!!" said raman.

[maa!! The ceo award function and new year party will be held simultaneously in the next week. I wish every one of you to attend it. They have invited the whole family.]

"haan!! Putar hum sab jaroor ayenge!! Waise bhi jeethne wale tho tum ho!!hame party sharty tho karna hai na!!", said toshi excitedly.

[Ofcourse!! All of us will attend the party. We have to party hard as you are going to win"]

Then started the discussion of what to wear and how to manage their schedules of everyone in which ishitha was a mute spectator. Raman had observed this and asked,

"ishitha!! Is everything fine??" snapping her out of her thoughts and shifting the whole focus of family onto them.

"ille raman!! Nothing!! Just purane yaadein mein phass gayee!! Kitna badal gaya ab sab kuch!! Jab meri choti si friend ab meri beti ban gayi!!"

[no raman!! Nothing!! I am just struck with the memories!! How much everything had changed?! My little friend had now became my daughter.]

she said smiling revisiting her past with ruhi for which raman fondly spoke

"woh to hai!! Lekin uss award function ka raat woh mein kabhi bhool nahi pavunga!!"

[It is so!! But I can never forget the night of award function]

"mein bhi raman mein kitna restless feel kar rahi thi ruhi keliye!! Bas ek baar usko dekne ka man kar raha tha!! Jab aap ayithe us raat mein ne socha aap ko samjavoon!! Lekin aap tho mujhe..." she trailed off remembering what he had done later.

[Me too raman!! I was feeling very restless!! I just wanted to meet ruhi once!! When you came i thought of explaining but you...me..]

"kya kiya tha bhai ne?" simmi asked showing greater interest in the topic.

[What did bro do??]

"Woh...um...Um..." she stammered not knowing how to explain that to his family. He understood her situation and thought of teasing her.

"Bolo na ishitha mei ne kuch jyada hi piya uss din!! kya kiya meine?"

[Tell me ishitha!! I was heavily drunk that night!! What did I do??]

Asked raman moving towards her with his eyes boring into hers. Stammering she was continuously moving backwards increasing the distance between them which he was trying to decrease. Their steps ceased as she had been blocked by the dining table. Raman stepping a bit further had kept both of his hands on either sides of the table caging her.

"yehi kiya na meine uss din?!! Aur yeh..."

[Did I do like this??Or this...]

He asked holding her tightly against him by her shoulders and then put his left hand on her left shoulder over her neck mirroring his actions of that day.

That was enough for her to forget the proximity they shared and react in his favourite avatar.

"toh iska matlab aapko sab kuch yaad hai lekin meri muh se kehalvaani thi ki aap...aap kaise mujpe gir rahe the!!badtameez!!" she whined pushing him away which made everybody laugh.

[this means you remember everything but you want me to spit out how you..you were falling upon me!! Mannerless!!]

"oh hello!! Jhansi ki rani!! Unlike you mujhe sab kuch yaad hota hai even when i'm drunk", he had moving back, laughing.

[oh hello!! Jhansi ki rani!! Unlike you i remember everything even i'm drunken!!]

"bhai!! Aap bhi na kitna chedthi ho bhabhi ko!?" romi asked side-hugging his brother.

[bro!! You are too much!! How much will you tease my sister-in-law?!]

"tuh chup kar!! Mera biwi hai, mera marzi!! Aab chalo office jaana hai" raman said collecting his belongings.

[you shut up!! She is my wife i behave as i wish!! Now lets go to the office!!]

"bhai ki biwi chalo tum bhi apna clinic ke liye tayyar hojav" said simmi to an already scarlet ishitha which made sprint into her room.

[bro's wife!! Now get ready to your clinic]

"Sharma gayi kudi!!" once again shouted simmi which made everybody to laugh. Raman and ishitha happily left to their respective works with an unfading smile on their faces.


Next part

PS: i have written something light hearted this time!! Next part will be ishra confession and consummation. It may be a bit late because i have lost complete interest and motivation after this leap and ishra separation news. I feel like quitting!! pls do cmnt whether to continue or not because for not disappointing you people i have started writing this part!!

Edited by shreya303 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
offcourse do continue yaar
aise kaise lost interest in writing
we love ur writing
so do continue it
just one word for the update

now update soon
and thnx for the pm!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nycc update dear
luvd shagun fuming n family teasing
continue soon
thnxx 4 pm

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