RAGA SS MY DREAM GIRL MY QUEEN PT4 ,PG4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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AM PLANNING TO WRITE A THREE SHORT . ITS MY FIRST WRITING .

NOTE - IN MY TS INDRAVADAN IS UNMARRIED . No sulakshama character here . As shown in first episode he returns from war . Also there is no debt . Ameerkot is financially wealthy state .

INDRAVADAN - prince of ameerkot .he is 23 years old now . Completed his graduation in London and went to war for 3 years and finally returned back to ameerkot after 8 years . He went to London when he was 15 .

GAYATHRI - she is also a rajput and royal . But she is not a princess . She is 18 years old .She is ameerkot prime ministers daughter . She has a brother who is ranaji friend

SURYA PRATAP SING - he is Gayathri elder brother . He is 24 years old . He loves his sister a lot . He is ranaji best friend . He also served in military for 3 years along with Ranaji.

AMAR PRATAP SING - he is Gayatri father and prime minister of ameerkot. A loyal person .


INDEX -

Part 1 - pg 2



PART 2 - PG 3

PART 3 - PG 3

PART 4 - PG 4



THANKS EVERYONE FOR YOUR LIKING THE SS . Am thanking everyone
I can't reply for ur post sorry . Thanks everyone
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Posted: 9 years ago
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introduction seems to be simple story with no politics smmith and cute ... m u ryt... plz cont...
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Alex congrats on your story.
Loved the CS
Please continue soon, waiting to read more.
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Congo 4 ur first story n welcome to the forum
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Lovely cs good to hear there will be no sula do cont soon
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Congrats for the new story..please continue it..!!
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Congrats for new story nice cs
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Thanks everyone for ur encouragement . I'll continue soon . Hope u guys will like it
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PART - 1


INDRAVADAN - he returns to mahal after 8 years . He is welcomed in a grand manner . He comes on a horse .

RAJMATAH - she welcomes indravadan n gives Aarthi . Everyone is happy to see king back .

GAYATHRI - she comes to mahal to meet her father on some work .she searches for him

INDRAVADAN - he is going to his room to take rest . He happens to hear Payal sound which attracts him . He goes behind her and watches Gayathri from back . It's some kind of feeling he is is new to It and couldn't understand but that girl has strong impact on him

RAJMATHA - ranaji ur here . I want to talk something important

INDRAVADAN - he has no choice he says yes to Rajnath and follows her . He looks back at Gayathri disappearing figure .

NEXT DAY

GAYATHRI - she goes to her friends house .

RANAJI - he is in disguise to check his kingdom . He finds Gayathri on the way the same Payal sound . He follows her

GAYATRHI - as wind blows she propers her hair .

RANAJI - he looks Gayathri and is mesmerised . In fact that was love at first sight . His heart was beating fast for the girl . He saw many beautiful girls who are more beautiful than her but it never happens to him like this . He is just blank . He wishes to talk to her .

GAYTAHRI - she talks to her some Lady on the way .

RANAJI - he watches her talking to someone . " she is lovely so cuteee " he observes her face and lips when she talks

A SOLIDER - ranaji it's not safe to stand here for long time . Shall we move the person has come we have to hurry or else he may leave

RANAJI - he comes out of trance and moves out . He asks soldier to find details of the lady in 2 days

SOLDIER - ( soldier name is rathan sing )yes ur highness . He sees not Gayathri but that Lady beside her

THE LADY WHOM GAYATHRI SPOKE TO IS HER TO BE SISTER IN LAW PADMINI .

PADMINI - good neighbour hood friend of Gayathri and also fiyance of surya pratap sing that is Gayathri brother

AFTER 2 DAYS

RANAJI - he thinks about the lady . He even gets her in his dreams . He orders to call rathan sing

SERVENT - sorry ur highness "Rathan sing mother is not well he went to village . He will be back in 2 more days

RANAJI - okay u can go . " I have to wait two more days ..oh girl who are u ...my mind is occupied with you am not able to come out of ur thoughts am I a king or some crazy guy "

SURYA PRTAP - Indra wat happened I have been calling you and ur not answering

RANAJI - hi surya sorry it's nothing just like that . Come let us go and meet farmers

GAYATHRI - she is going to library

RANAJI - he finishes talking to farmers about their problems and finishes the conversation . He is about to leave he finds Gayathri entering library from a distance . He excuses surya and rushes to library

SURYA PRATAP - he wonders wat made ranaji Rush like that . " I know he is fond of books but Today it's wierd to see him rush for something like that "

GAYATHRI - she finds ranaji while seeing books . She has crush on ranaji from childhood . He is her dream man and Rajkumar of dreams . She just stares at him

RANAJI - he is searching for Gayathri . He acts as if he so seeing a book n takes one and looks for her

GAYATHRI - book falls from her hand and draws and due to sound all see her

RANAJI - he looks at her n goes near

GAYATRHI - she picks up book n shocked to see rana infringement of him . " Pranam ranaji "

RANAJI - he stares at her like that only without answering

GAYATHRI - she feels nervous and awkward . " Pranam ranaji "

RANAJI - he comes to senses and say " woh mein woh mein "

GAYATHRI - woh app kya

RANAJI - can I Have the book in ur hand

GAYTARHI - ya surely ? She gives book .

LIBRARY man - ranaji ur here . Pls welcome am glad ur here . U should have ordered I would send books

RANAJI - he speaks to him

GAYATRHI - she looks surya her brother looking for her and rushes from there as her brother doesn't like her coming out alone without guards . She looks at ranajo lovingly and leaves

RANAJI - by the time he turns Gayathri is gone

SURYA - so ur here ranaji

RANAJI - he composes himself though is sad that girl left . " surya no one is around pls call me indrrr and not ranaji pls "

SURYA - k Indra . Hey u rushed for this book . Such an interesting novel . My sister was asking for it from many days .

RANAJI - hey surya how is ur sister ? I saw her wen i was 13 I guess . How is she

SURya - she is good a big girl now

RANAJI - nice . I came to know from someone that ur gonna get engaged this week . U don't tell me u cheater

SURYA - no actually we dint get time to discuss after all u were busy with riyasath works after u came

RANAJI - okay when ur going to show me her n introduce ur friend

SURYA - hello Indra this is not England we cannot meet like that or introduce you

RANAJI - I know it's India n ameerkot . We should have our means to go and meet don't u think unromantic buddu

SURYA - look who is telling it . U don't even look at girls n telling me Buddhu . I'll see wen its ur turn . Then u will know urself

RANAJI - k come let us go and meet ur grand mother

SURya - ya surely let us go . On the way he has some work and goes .

RANAJI - he meets grani is returning back . He here's some screams from a girl " bachav "

GAYATHRI - she is running for help some two bad guys ( decoits ) follow her

RANAJI - to his shock he finds from his car the girl shouting for help was Gayathri and two guys chasing her . He stops car and gets down immediately .

GAYATHRI - she finds ranaji and hides behind him touching his shoulder

TWO GUYS - they run away seeing it's king

GAYTHRI - she sits down and cries out of fear

RANAJI - he sits down n tries to touch face and backs out . " they are gone don't cry "

Gayathri - am very thankful to u ranaji. Dhanyavad . She wipes tears

RANAJI - it's okay don't fear . Stop crying .

GAYATHTI - she wipes tears n gets up

RANAJI - what are you doing here alone . Why are you here

GAYATHRI - am coming in a car . They stopped the car and attacked . Oh my driver Ramu kaka he is hurt she starts running

RANAJI - he follows her and finds hurt driver .that guys beat him up

GAUATHRI - kaka are u okay she cries

RAMU KAKA - Betiya aap tho teek hai na

GAYATHRI - am fine don't worry ranaji saved me.

RANAJI - come let us go to hospital . He takes him and rushes to hospital

DOCTOR - nothing to worry he is fine . I dressed his wounds

RAMA DEVI (Gayathri mother ) - she comes to hospital after she knows about incident

RANAJI - he sees Gayathri mother from behind dint see face but stand s behind as she is scolding Gayathri

RAMA DEVI - how may times did I tell u not to go alone . Wat If something happens to u . If ur father or brother gets to know it will be worst

GAYATHRI - but mother listen to me

RAMA DEVI - not a word from u . Just shut up and Ramu kaka son is here to take care of home now I return home. She drags her hand and takes her

GAYATHRI - while going she turn backs and see Ranaji with sad expression

RANAJI - he just stares at her leaving with her angry mom . I DINT even ask her name . She is gone again . Being a king am just helpless . This girl is killing me . I think I love her . Wen i saw goons chasing her I feared to death with a thought of she getting hurt .

NEXT DAY

GAYATHRI - after sorting out things with her mother . She goes to palace to thank ranaji as she left without informing him or thanking him

RANAJI - a servant comes and informs a lady is waiting for his appointment to meet him

RAJMATHA - I tell her wait a while . Now we have an important guest

GAUAYRHI - she is been informed . She so waiting from n hour n bored . She roams in palace n and goes pool side .

RANAJI - he finishes meeting and coming to his room . He is passing pool

GAYATHRI - some leaf fall on her out of fear she trips and fall in pool .

RANAJI - he rushes n help her out . " aap teek hai "

GAYATHRI - am fine thank you

RANAJI - your here

SERVENT - your highness she is the last who came to meet you

RANAJI - k u leave now . He looks at drenched clothes of Gayathri and gives his coat

GAYATRHI - am sorry actually and bored and walking here

RANAJI - that's okay no problem am happy ur safe

GAYATHRI - I came to thank you as I left without a word yesterday . Am really sorry . My mother was mad at me n took . Am really thankful to you for yesterday and today

RANAJI - it's my duty . By the way ur name

A BIG SOUND IS HEARD . Bam!!!!!


BOTH RANAJI AND GAYATHRI RUSH .

RANAJI - what happened what is the sound . Is my mother okay

SEVENT - nothing to worry ur highness it's a nee statue which they are trying to fix and it fell down

GAYATRI - she finds her father coming that direction and disappears from there as she doesn't want him to know about last day incident

RANAJI - k go now . He turns n find Gayathri missing " this girl really is giving me a hard time where is she now " he shouts for guards " where is the girl "

GUARDS - hukum we dint see any

RANAJI - then why are you here . Don't know who is coming and going u fools

RAJMATHA - beta r u fine what was the sound

RANAJI - am fine mother . They hug each other

AFTER 4 days

RANAJI - he is so restless . " where is the girl i been looking for her from 3 days she is not seen anywhere . Is she fine "

RATHAN SING - ur highness

RANAJI - finally ur here . K how is ur mother now

RATHAN SING - she is good now .

RANAJI - k tell me who was the lady

RATHAN SING - she is daughter of a land lord .

RANAJI - her name where does she stay and her details

RATHAN SING - her name is Padmini she is going to be engaged to surya pratap sing soon

RANAJI - his face becomes pale after hearing it

RATHAN SING - and ur highness she has a sister

RANAJI - he is in no mood to Listen further . K u Leave now . I'll see you later


END OF PART 1 . NEXT PART WILL BE UPDATED IN 2 days .
THANKS EVERYONE FOR ENCOURAGMENT .
Edited by Alex00 - 9 years ago
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Nice part!! Hope he comes to know soon about gayatri ! dont want rana to be like this !!
Waiting fr next part!! 😊

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