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Originally posted by: Krish58


Aree subha already mere pass dusra sandle tha toh woh na tootne ki halat pe tha toh woh oehnke nahi gayi mein aur dusra sandle pehn kuya .. Patah nai clg premises aayi aur toit gaya sandle toh duptaa tha already bag mein toh usko siree se padja mein ne aur bandha mein takibatleast clg mein chalbe mein taklif na ho aur jo koi bhi meri frnd dekhta mujeh puchta ki tujeh pair mejn chot lagi hai as mein ne woh sandle ko support karne ke liye duptta bandha tha and travel by auto ghar se auto karni padti hai clg tak ..toh aate waqt toh mein ne meri frnd ko bola ki tu Aaj mujeh ghar chodke jaa .and woh mujeh ghar tak chodne aayi and oura din clg mein

Hmm.. Tujhe chot toh nai ayi na.. Woh bahut h. Sandle gai tel pine...
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Nai aaj tu pi..
Maine toh kab ki pili..
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Anji mein ne PM bhi kiya padhna ...aur haan mere ff pe bhi comment baki hai
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Anjudarling meri ff PE aati hi nai😭😭
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Chapter 1



Characters Biodata updated





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Chapter 2





Sharad is confused that what is Manav waiting for? Moon or Stars... But he could think logically or ask Manav he saw a Bright light in d dark sky.. The light was getting brighter & brighter every passing moment. He saw carefully to it & started thinking logically. First he was surprised on thinking may b moon had come by an inch of line. Then d light got brighter so he knew it couldn't be moon. The light started coming more & more & in few minutes he was able to see full object of light. It was directed towards their direction.. He was shocked to realise it was a spaceship which was coming in their direction. Then he started getting angry that though colonywale know they are aliens & have accepted them, they won't be able to accept another alien & it would create more problems. He was angry on the coming alien & also the one due to whom it is coming. As he thought it may be Hemant who would have called the alien due to some reason. ...

& decides he should immediately talk to Vasant about the same. He ran to Vasant coz this had to be serious & long talk which would include a plan so he wanted to talk face to face & not through his mind telepathy.

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Meanwhile, Vasant-Varsha romance is on.. They stand hugging each other taking in their peace & relaxing. & suddenly Vasant became stiff coz of noticing d light in sky. Varsha feeling Vasant stiff got surprised & noticed Vasant's facial expreasions carefully, the face which had a smile on making her cheer had lots his smile & got a worriedness in his eyes. She got worried that what was the reason for her love to get this stuff suddenly & noticed where he was looking & was shocked to see the object of worry herself. Both came out of shock & just catching each other's hand started going downstairs hurriedly. No words exchanged. There was no need for one. Coz they understood each other's feelings well enough for words. After all they are together since 400 years..
Vasant - Varsha had just outside their house in their veranda where they see Sharad running towards them. He was looking worried which confirmed even he knew what it is.

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Anna after deciding that she alone wil try & find out what is Manav hiding decides call it a day. Before sleeping she goes to close the window as she would sleep in AC. But she sees Manav standing outside his house in colony garden alone. & thinks y is he up this late. Is it related to his secret. Thinking it could be the case she decides to start her job of detective from now itself. & so without making any noise or giving hint of her gone she made a dummy body of pillows & rolled them in blanket indicating her sleeping & tiptoed towards the door. Slowly opening the main door of the house she went out.



Liza just got awake to drink water & noticing the jug in her room was empty goes to kitchen for drinking water. After drinking water as she was returning she saw Anna cuming out from her room & moving towards the door. First she was surprised & slightly angry that Anna was awake this late, she was about to question her but she noticed Anna moving towards main door & that too quietly without making noise. & when Anna went out she was worried. She immediately ran to her room & woke up Ronnie..



Liza : Ronnie... Uthho man..
Ronnie : Liza... Some deo man.. 5 min...
Liza : Ronnie.. Uthho man...
Ronnie : Opening his eyes, knowing well that his wife won't let him sleep unless he listened to her. Kya haye Liza man. Itna raat ko kyu .. Wo ba wo ba..
Liza : Ronnie tum chalo pehle.. Baad me bolna.. Waise bhi bolta kam haye atak ta jyada haye tum man.. Tumko maloom haye Anna abhi itna raat ko ghar se bahar gaya haye.. Chalo uthho abhi dekhta haye woh kahan gaya haye.. Chalo man..
Ronnie : Kya Anna itna raat ko.. wo ba wo ba..
Liza : Ronnie!! Me tumko bola na tum Kuch bolo. Tum bolta kam haye atakta jyada haye. Abhi atak ne ka time nai haye..
Ronnie : Liza ruko man. Me dusri baar atak gaya haye tum mere ko aisa chup nai Kara sakta haye. Phir me Hindi kaisa sikhenga..
Liza : Haan thik haye bolo.. Lekin chalte chalte bolo..
Ronnie : wo ba wo ba.. Haan.. Jahan daaru milta haye us jagga ko English me kya bolta haye..
Liza : Ronnie!!! Abhi tum English me bhi atenga... Woh bhi raat ko jab humara Anna ..
Ronnie : Arey tum mera help karo na..
Liza : Bar!!
Ronnie : Haan, Anna itna raat ko bar gaya haye.
Liza : Anna itna raat ko bahar gaya haye.. Aur hum bhi ab bahar aa gaya haye..
Ronnie : Haan. Tum samjana... Aee woh dekho Anna .. Manav bhi bahar .. Wo ba wo ba..
Liza : Ronnie!!! This is a limit ... Tum raat ko 1:45 ko aisa dhadadhad nai sakta haye man..
Ronnie : Liza... Me kabhi bhi kahibn bhi kitni bhi baar atak sakta haye.. Abhi mere ko help karo man.. Wo ba wo ba... Haan pithole ko Hindi me kaisa bolenga.. Dekhi haan abhi Hindi me Hi ataka haye..
Liza : Pithole ko Hindi me.. Haan .. Khadda..
Ronnie : Haan Woh dekho Manav bhi bahar khadda haye..
Liza : sirf Manav hi nai koi aur bhi bahar khadda haye..
(purposely saying in Ronnie's language to taunt him)

& just then they see an object like big air balloon cuming down frm sky. They wer shocked would be an understatement when they realised it was a spaceship & it was landing in their colony. Though they wer living with aliens they never thought they would be able to witness a spaceship landing let alone in their colony garden. They dint knew hw to react. To be happy, to b sad, to be angry, or to not mind. But they stood there to know who had come plus Anna was outside so they wouldn't live her alone & go inside. They moved where Anna was standing. & Just then the lights of colony go off.

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Earlier Lajjo Aunty had seen Manav standing outside & looking worried & she thought it to be aloof. So she decides to talk with him but when she sees Sharad talking with Manav she thought let the boys have a talk may be Manav wil open up to Sharad as he considered him his friend & now even Sharad reciprocated to the friendship. But now as lights had gone she was worried as her husband wil wake up & throw his tantrums such a drama queen he is.. But soon she saw a very bright light from the colony garden. She was surprised at the light so she thought to look outside.. But as she was afraid her husband, the drama queen, Murlidhar Ojha, came outside. Before he could start his tantrums he saw his wife going out which never happens as almost he is the first one to wake when light goes & checks outside, his wife can also sleep in steaming hot weather. Here even, Ramdulari & Chandrabhan come outside & seeing Lajjo going out & Murlidhar following her they also go out..


Meanwhile, the spaceship is already down & is just landing safely. But without affecting the earth atmosphere how can it land. So as usual all lights of colony go away but still there wasn't blackout coz of light from spaceship. The spaceship almost creates a storm near the garden where it is landing. Finally after 5 minutes the spaceship is stable & ready to open.. Due to light gone and bright light outside Ojha uncle, Lajjo Aunty, Ramdulari mausi, Chandrabhan Mausa come to see outside.


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All gather together & wonder who has come. Manav is worried seeing other colonywale specially his parents. He dint want them to know from where the guest is coming. But it seems his stars are not in right direction then whatever he plans changes his destiny. But keeping all worries aside he thought to welcome the guest,
"HIS GUEST"..


Finally the spaceship lands & the door opens. A tall, slim, beautiful, lovely, cute girl walks out of spaceship & gives a reassuring but satisfied smile to Manav gesturing she is happy & satisfied coming there. She comes outside & sees the surroundings & just immediately her eyes fall on the one whom she was dying to see, her life, her smile just brightened more. Standing at her place she saw him carefully & not just him but his family too. The two.most important persons of his life. Even they both wer special to her. Smiling she rushed to the man & hugged in tight. After having relief she pecks his cheek & announces ..


" I love you so much","I missed you" & again hugs him for a moment. But all this while the man is expressionless & stiff not wanting to make her upset or heartbroken & not giving her any hopes. & the girl smiling moves towards the other two & hugs them one by one. & pulls cheeks as they looked cute cuter even from her. Though the most cutest was her life, him but she would dare pull his cheeks as he would be angry with her. & she wouldn't want to upset or angry him.



Then she moved towards Manav, the one who invited her here. "Ah! Manav!! My boy!!" Happily hugging him. "Kaise ho? Thik toh ho na"
Manav : Haan, Rutu...
Rutu : Didi hi bolna me jyada badi nai lagti humse umar me.
Manav : Rutu didi, me thik huu.. Aap kaisi hain? Yahan aane me koi takleef toh nai hui na.
Rutu : Nai Manav, koi takleef nai hui..
Murlidhar : Manav, kaun hai yeh jara mhare se bhi toh milwa.
Manav : Papa, yeh Rutu didi hai, Aapke chachere Bhai ki saali ki beti...
Murlidhar : Ke ke ke ke ke ke ke ke ke ke bol rha hai jhalar.. Mhare chachere Bhai ko toh koi saali hi na hai.
Manav : Papa, yeh baat aapko pata hai, puri duniya ko nai.. Aur yeh Rutu didi humare ghar pe Hi rahengi.
Murlidhar : Heen, vibhishan, arey itni sundar mhare hum umra ki ladki ghar laya hai to kam se kam apni didi toh na banata...
Lajjo : Ke Matlab hai thara, Ojhaji..
Murlidhar : Me bus mahol mahol halka kar rha tha.
Manav : Papa plz abhi mahol halka karne ki jaroorat nai hai..
Anna : Oh my god!! I don't believe this!! Manav yeah alien hai na.. To tum isse apni rishtedar kyun bana rahe ho..
Manav : Anna,...


Before he could complete his statement a voice came from behind.. "Yeah yahan prithvi pe nai rahegi" telling directly to the girl "Abhi ke abhi spaceship me baitho aur apne grah wapis jao." The girl was about to refuse, " Koi behes nai. Maine kaha na wapis jao to wapis jao. Tum yahan nai reh sakti. Samji tum. Wapis jao.. Abhi..."


Shivers ran down her spine hearing this angry voice. Being hurt she lives. Yes, she goes insides her spaceship & flies off.


All colonywale were just shocked first hearing his angry tone coz he never spoke in this tone with anyone, they haven't heard this tone. Secondly, the girl immediately went coz the man said her to go. & just as the spaceship goes light comes back in all the houses. Here, sumone is angry on that man as he talked so rudely.. That person storms off at their home. The man too follows at his home. Not wanting to talk about this but at the same time wanting to pacify the one who is upset with him. Manav too follows that man as he wants to know why he send his Rutu didi back to her planet.. All others follow Manav ... In order to get sum gossip for next day...


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But this whole incident was witnessed by two other persons also.. They wer masked men wearing black clothes. They couldn't understand that what was that ballon plane type in which a beautiful girl went. They wer far so they couldn't hear the noises & talks but hey saw coz of the bright light.


Person 1 : Aye Bhai, yeah dekh kya tha joh aisa udd gaya. Itni roshni thi usme. Aur woh ladki Jo usme baith ke gai woh kitni pataka lag rahi thi. Bhai dekha tune kya item lag reli thi woh.. Kash apun ko bhi aishich item mil jaye toh life set ho jaye.
Person 2 : Yeah Bhai, zameen pe aa. Woh item gai. Tereko nai Milne wali. Aur waise bhi bhul gaya kya yeah colony me saare ke saare item hi rehte hain.. Woh pichli baar jab hum haath saaf karne aaye the tab woh item ne humko thaili me daalke ghene de diye the, toh hum kitna khush huye the, aur lalach me dusre ghar bhi gaye the jahan se humne yeah chandi k bartan churaye the. Woh gheno ke wajah se toh bahut pitai hui hai.. Ab yeah ghene aur yeah chandi k bartan bhi wapas kar dete hai kya pata yeah sirf dikhne me chandi k ho aur nakli ho. Phirse pitai hogi.. Yeah wapas kar dete hai phir Kuch din aaram karke sehat banayenge phir haath maaarne ka sochenge.. Chal aab..

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Deciding they first go towards Ronnie's house as the door of that house was opened.. They ran & kept all d silver vessels & other things which they took from that house... Then they ran towards Bhairavi's house. There the house was locked so they thought to enter from Window. As they had prayed window was slightly opened & they entered the house & kept all d jewelleries like it was kept that day.. Along with a note..

Stating...
"Humse bahut badi Galati ho gai thi ki hum aapke ghar aaye the chori karne. Aainda se iss colony me koi chori karne nai aayega.. Aapne Hume bahut achha sabak sikhaya hai joh him zindagi me kabhi nai bhulenge. Hume maaf kar dijiye."



While leaving one of the theif dashed with the jhoola & a scream of hurt left from his mouth.. Hearing this voice Bhairavi who was washing clothes in bathroom came outside & saw the same theif with the same mask.


She asked him,
" Bhaisaab aapko lagi toh nai na? Aapko na raat ko nai aana chahiye kisike ghar me woh kya hai na humare colony me sirf Ghotala hi hai Jo raat ko bhi batti jala kar rakhte hai baki hum sabke yahan battiyan band ho jati hai to andhere me chalne me dikat hoti hai. Hume bhi hoti hai par phir hum mobile ka flash light chalu karke chalte hai toh aap bhi yahi kijiye gaa.. Mobile toh hai na aapke pass.. ?"



Theif 1: "Arey, yeah to wahi item hai pichli baar wali!! Hey Bhagwaan!! Isse bhola samaj kar isse loota tha pichli baar toh itni pitai hui humari. Iss baar iski baat maan ke Kuch liya toh pakka dubara pitne ki nobat aayegi."
Theif 2 : Bhai, Tera akele badbadane ka khatam ho gaya ho toh chal. Warna yeh ladki Hume baato me uljaa degi aur baki colonywale aake humari pitai karenge.


Bhairavi hearing the last sentence of theif 2 says To BAROBAR😛 & starts calling.. "Baaa... Baaa... Jaldi aayiye, Mitesh pritesh aapne papa ko uthha kar leke aao.. Humare ghar 2 chor aaye the... "

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Bhavana : (coming out fast from her room)Aaee Chakudi, tu thik toh hai na beta.. Woh chor ne tujhe Kuch kiya toh nai na... Tu thik hai na... & hugs her & kisses her on forehead.. Ronnie, Manav, Murlibhai, lajjo, liza, Ghotala bhai, jaldi aayiye humare ghar chori hui hai... Aaeee baba tu utth jaldi.. Humare ghar chori hui hai... Aaee Ronnie, Manav jaldi aao.. Oo Ghotalabhai, Murlibhai jaldi aao...
Bhairavi : Baa... Aap shaant ho jayiye... Me sabko aawaz laga ke bulane hi wali thi.. Woh chor bhaisaab yahi bolke gaye mujhe sabko bulalo...
Bhavana : Aae Chakudi kya bol rahi hai tu..

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IF u want to know How..
stay tuned...


I know this chapter is boring as it doesn't reveal anything..
but trust me this chapter is important..
How? u wil cum to know soon...
Do read Characters Biodata(CB) to know who the new entry was..
As & when the characters wil come CB wil b updated...
Sorry for being late..
Next update next weekend... or sooner if i m motivated..😉



Chapter 3



Edited by coolhi1988 - 9 years ago
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unres
beautiful write up😳
loved it hiyu😳
i am so sorry i took so much time. but yest I completed.
do write more😳
Edited by PRINCESS_ALISHA - 9 years ago
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Hey Hiyu🤗
Your ff is amazing. You surely the art of writing. I was sitting on the edge as to who this girl is? Whom Did she hug and who scolded her?
I loved it. There is so much suspense. Well written👏

For humour there are poor thieves😆😆
Hamari bhairu se darr gaye. To barobar😛
Can't wait till the next week.
How can I motivate you to write earlier😆
Achha no forcing but update soon.

Love ya🤗
Edited by Senoritaamor - 9 years ago

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