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Posted: 9 years ago
shivin narang but why love triangle yaar i hate love triangles story
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nakh5683

shivin narang but why love triangle yaar i hate love triangles story


I bet u would love this
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shivin...but why this love triangle?
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Posted: 9 years ago
Any Guy will do its a love triangle
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n note. hmm y the triangle??? any guy wld do
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shivin
I want a super jealous maan ..😉 update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
With Maaneet i don't like love triangle
If u have planned the story like that u can choose any 😊
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shivin want to see maan super jealous, whoever it may we know that it is maaneet story so bring it on waiting to read more
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Posted: 9 years ago
thanks for loving this concept 😃...
plz buddy me to get PMs...😊

hope you like this...

Part 11

Maaneet with kids reached Port Blair, Andaman by evening. Kids with Geet were tired but excited at same time. Maan felt peaceful looking at all smiling face. Especially Geet who was not less than a kid infact smallest in the lot. Maan chuckled at his thoughts. As soon as they reached airport they were taken to a resort via ship. Dadi had booked everything which didnt go well with Maan. Geet could sense Maan's iritation on something. They reached their room.

hotel..their room



Nia and Neil went to see the view from their room while Geet was helping Nia to change her dress. As soon as Nia was done she rushed to her siblings.
So.. Geet said.
hmm..
what hmm.. Maan apka bulb 0V mein kyun hai?
what?
Geet rolled her eyes. Something is bothering you..
hmm..actually I own an island here thought to take you all there. It would have been so thrilling to be all alone in that island. only we five. ...you know tent, camp fire, and all. Maan had a spark in his eyes but Geet was shocked.
you wanted us to live in jungle with crocodiles surrounding us from all sides?
Maan rolled his eyes. Geet we have built a house there.
Geet went near him and took his hand in hers. we will stay here for few days and go there. Simple. Dadi will be happy and you too..Geet went to kids leaving Maan alone. Maan stared at Geet and kids for few minutes and then joined them.
At night all slept on same bed.

Next day morning,

It was 9 in the morning. Maan woke up to see Nia sleeping on his chest. others were not there. It was after many years he had such a blissful sleep. He smiled and made Nia sleep on the bed and got up and went to balcony. He saw Nia and Niel playing on beach while Geet sat on the bench on the shore. Niel and Dia started pulling Geet into water but she was not ready. At last went to just wet her legs. But kids pushed Geet into water. They started laughing as Geet was fully wet. Maan too smiled looking at them but next moment all his smile washed away when Geet drowned in the water.
shit! Maan almost jumped from balcony. Geet was drowning and kids were screaming for help. Maan almost reached the place when someone came out with Geet. Maan didnt see his face as he was bending making Geet lay on sand. kids covered his face. He ran to the place only to find Geet unconsious. He patted Geet's cheeks.
Geet..wake up. Geet slowly opened his eyes after giving her first aid. Maan felt his life came back.

Thanks uncle..thanks a lot..Dia told hugging Geet and looking at the Man. Maan looked up to thank the person who saved Geet.
thank you to save her life. hmm... Mr
Sidharth..you can call me Sid. Maan smiled.
the man extended his hands to Geet. Geet gave her hand half willingly. But to her shock, Sid pulled her with the hand to get up. Maan was stunned but kids loved it. they just thanked him for his help. Geet too thanked him many times. But in all this Maan felt ignored.

So you are here for vaccation or any work?
this resort is mine.
oh...its so cool na! you can stay in this senary 24*5. Niel said.
24*5 ??? Dia asked. According to a research we sleep at a average 48 hours so left is 24*5. Neil stated as a fact. Dia rolled his eyes.
Sid chuckled. Smart boy. It then strik Geet Nia..Maan where is Nia?
Maan who was in a trance came out. she is in the room...Alone. Oh shit.
Geet just dashed to the room.

Geet got scared as she was a small kid... Geet went to the room only to find Nia with a handful of choclates. As soon as she saw Geet she hid all chocolates behind her. Geet sighed. Sorry to leave you alone baby. Geet pulled her for a hug and kissed her.
with chocolates you can leave me alone anywhere. Nia giggled. Others came back by that time.
Maan first took Nia from Geet and hugged her and mouthed a Sorry to Geet. Geet glared at Maan.

I just cant believe you are mother of 3 kids...Sid said amused.
She is our godmother. Dia said with pride. Geet smiled at her.
oh..thats why you look so young..and beautiful..you know someone for whom a guy like me can fall head over heals.
Next second you can get punched too. Maan said glaring at Sid. Sid was confused while Geet looked at Maan shocked.
She is my wife said Maan side hugging Geet.
But dont worry they will get divorced soon. Niel added.
It didnt go well with Maan.
Geet was just engaged to scold Nia in eating chocalates in empty stomach.
I think you should leave Sid. It as the politest way to say get out.
Sid was embarrased. So was Geet . Sid left without a word.
Maan looked at Niel. Is it necessary to tell we are getting divorced? Maan asked.
Its a fact..so why to keep it a secret? Geet asked this time to Maan.

Maan didnt knew what to answer. at last sighed and left the room.
Geet took Nia to washroom.
Niel and Dia smirked...

Flashback...
yesterday night when all slept Niel and Dia slipped out of the room. They took out their mobile that was given by dadi and made a call. Dadi took in first
ring.
Dia : Dadi its already 11:30..didnt u sleep?

Dadi: Bete I come in your category only. you know above 60 is like a six year old. If you can be awake I too can.

Niel and Dia rolled there eyes.

Niel: Dadi whats your plan...

Dadi smirked. tomorrow morning someone will come. just help him in whateverway you can. OK. now go and sleep.

kids were confused but they couldnt clear the doubt too as. they couldnt be away from bed at night for long time. Geet may get suspicious. So they went back to sleep.
Next early morning Dadi messaged kids to come in the balcony. Sid stood at the beach and waved his hand to them and called them to meet at beach now. As Maan was
sleeping and Geet in washroom they slipped out and made plan to save drowning Geet. But Maan was not in their plan at least for today. But alls well that ends well.😉

Flasback end.





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Posted: 9 years ago
hi masti
its a sweet and hilarious update ..neil is too smart to be called as kid ..oversmart kid who just state too much facts ..
geet was drowning and sid ne maari entry ..
maan ka dil jaala dekh ke usko yaar..
bechara maan ..waise neil ka question perfect tha jab divorce lena toh chupana kya?
maan told sid to get out from the room ...jealous kitna zayada hai maan ..

thanks for update
waiting for next ...
p.s ..waiting for maneet and kids moments together ..enjoying with each other
Edited by tabby999 - 9 years ago

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