Hai everyone... I'm a new member of the forum.Just love the show and the
pair.I'm writing an OS for the first time..Dnt knw if it works out...but pls check it
out and do give your reviews...
Well it's little different from the original story.Ishwari is not that much possessive as in the show and wants dev to get married and this story is about his meeting with his girl
DevAkshi OS : Jab We met
Dev had just arrived from Newyork. As soon as he entered his car his mobile rang. Dev smiled when he saw the name it was none other than his dearest mom.
" Haa maa main safely pahun chukka hu , khaana bhi khaa chuka hu aur bass pahunchne waala hu" . Dev answered before she could say anything
Ishwari smiled , "Oh...mera pyaara bachha...par maine na yeh kehne ke liye call nahi kiya hai.. tumhein aaj kissese milna hai"
"Kis se ?"
"Ek ladki se... bahut achhi hai beta.. bahut pyaari hai... ab main toh boodi ho gayi hu..mujhe bahu chahiye bass... driver tumhe seedha uske ke paas le jaayega..."
"Par maa.. mujhe abhi shaadi nahi karni..aap samajhthi kyun nahi?? "
"Achha ab apni maa ko bhi mana kar doge??"
Dev became silent.His eyes was filled , " AApko lagtha hai maa main aisa karoonga..teek hai mil loonga use..rakhtha hoon... davaayi time pe khaana.. warna shaadi nahi karoonga"
Ishwari smiles, "Achha chal teek hai.." and she cuts the phone " Mere bete ko kisee ki nazar na lage"
Dev says to the driver , " Aap jaayiye..mujhe bass pata deejiye main chala jaaunga "
"Arrey nahi dev baba... Maalkin daategi..."
"Maa ko main sambhal loonga... aap jaayiye..."
Driver leaves and he starts driving. Suddenly a girl bumped in to the car.Dev stops the car and gets out.
"Arrey aap teek haina... ". The girl looked at him and he also looked at her. He couldn't take his eyes from that beautiful girl. He stretches his hands. But she gets up by her own.
"Aap dekh ke gaadi nahi chala sakthe?? Ek toh giraathe ho phir haath dethe ho..Ajeeb aadmi hai "
"Dekhiye Mam...aap ko dhyaan se chalna chahiye tha..."
"Achha aap mujhe suna rahe ho??aapki wajah se mere pair mein mocha aa gayi hai..bahut dard ho rahi hai abh aap hi mujhe ghar drop kee jiye"
"Kya?? Oh halow...main tumhara pati nahi hu jo mujhpe aise hukum chala rahi ho hitler ki tarah. Yahi problem hothi hai ladkiyon ki..isliye main shaadi nahi karna chahtha"
"Toh aapse shaadi karne keliye kisne kaha...? BTW Patiyan patniyon par hukum chalaathe hai, unhein ghar mein bitaathe hai , unhein aage badne nahi dethe hain aur...
"Arrey meri maa bass... Mujhe aapse bahas nahi karni hai...aap ko kya chahiye main aapko ghar chhod dun? Toh teek hai...chaliye.."
And both gets in and starts their ride.
"Waise aapko apni naam toh nahi bataaungi...but you can call me Ms.Bose.."
"Hmmm...naam character dekh ke hi rakha hai..aise behave karthi hai jaise sabki Boss hai..Dev murmers.
"Aapne kuch kaha??"
"Jee nahi...Ms.Bose..Well...I'm Dev..Dev Dixit
"Waah naam dev aur kaam asur ki tarah...She murmered.
"Ms.Bose aapne kuch kaha???"
"Jee nahi...Mr.Dixit...waise lagtha hai aapki maa shaadi ke liye aapko force kar rahi hai.."
"Haa...infact abhi ek ladki se milne jaa rahi hu..kaun hai,kya hai kuch nahi pata..par main maa ki baat mana nahi kar saktha tha..unkeliye kuch bhi karoonga main..."
She smiles, " Par...bina interest ki aapko shaadi nahi karni chahiye...aap bhi khush nahi hogi aapki biwi bhi.."
"Par meri maa toh hogi na??..mere liye unki khushi sabse zyaada important hai...well aisa nahi hai ki mujhe shaadi mein dilchaspi nahi hai bas aajtak kisee ladki ko dekhkar pyaar nahi aaya..aur main maantha hu ki shaadi main pyaar hona zaroori hai..."
"Well pyaar ka koi bharosa nahi hai,kab kahan ho jaye kiseeko bhi nahi pata,ho saktha aapko aaj hi ho jaaye...agar jisse aap milne jaa rahe hain useese hogaya toh??"
Dev smiles now he was enjoying her company. "Ms.Bose aap bahut baatein karthi ho..waise aapki shaadi ho gayi ya koi boyfriend??"
"Arreyy nahi...mujhe bhi aajtak apna type ka nahi mila na..."
"Shayad aapko bhi aaj mil jaaye...waise sorry I was rude initially..mujhe aap pe aise bhadakna nahi karna chahiye tha"
She smiles, " hmm...achha hai ki aapne apni galathi maan lee...warna main toh Boss hu aapki chutti kara dethi.."
"Oopss...aapne sun lee?? Sorry main bass yunhi ghusse main kaha tha...waise kya abh bhhi aapko main asur lagtha hu??"
She smiles , "Nahi asur se thode kam ho...actually utne bhi bure nahi ho...yahan se right...leejiye...haa yahi rok leejoye"
And she gets out , "Thank you Mr.Dixit and yeah sorry for my rude behavior,it was great meeting you"
He smiles , "Kya hum phir kabhi milenge??"
Her head lowers , " Pata nahi...shayad milenge ya nahi...par aap yeh ride kabhi nahi bhoolenge .."
"That's true...achha teek hai main chaltha hu..der ho rahi hai aur use bhi milna hai na?"
"Okay , bye...all the bst..."
And he leaves.Suddenly his mother calls him , " Dev tum usse mile??"
"Nahi mom bass jaa raha hu.."
"Nahi tum ghar laaut aao un logo ne kaha ki woh log aajraat ko humare ghar aayenge..so tum waapas aajao.."
Dev returns.It was night and he was getting ready.Then he notices something stuck on the dhaaga in his hand. It was a bead of her dupatta.He takes that and smiles , " Kaash uske jagah aap hothi.."
Suddenly he heard Neha s voice , "Bhaiyya...woh log aaga ye neeche aayiye..."
He descends the stairs and reaches the hall. Ishwari introduces everyone to him. , "Beta yeh ladki ki father, yeh bhai, yeh mother aur yeh naani.Dev touched elders feet and embraced brother.
"Aur yeh hai humari beti...Sonakshi...sonakshi bose.." Dev who was looking down lifted his head and he couldn't believe his eyes. She was infront of him draped in beautiful red and golden colored saree.
"Ms.Bose aap?? "
"Dev tum shone se mil chuke ho??par tumne toh kaha tha kit tum nahi mile is se.." asked Ishwari
Sona smiled. " Auntyji hum mil chuke hai par Dev babu ko yeh nahi pata tha ki main kaun hu.."
And she explained the whole incident.All started laughing.
"Kya Shona?? Shadi hone se pehle hi pati ko bewakoof banana shuru kardi??" asked Saurabh
"Shona...mere bechare bete pareshaan karogi toh main daatungi tumhein.." told Ishwari.
Everyone was happy.Dev was above the heaven. Sona's dad asks , "Achha dev beta toh tumhein humari SHona pasand hai?? Everyone was eager to know his reply
"Jee...jab maa ko pasand aaya hai toh mujhe toh waise bhi aayenge.."
And they started the roka ceremony.Sonakshi asked in a low tone , "So...Dev Babu Mr.Dixit se mr.Bose ban ne keliye taiyyar ho??"
"Woh mera dialogue tha..and aise nahi aise, "Ms.Sonakshi Bose se Mrs.Sonakshi Dev Dixit ban ne keliye taiyyar ho?? "
"Yahi problem haina iss duniya ki..shaadi ke baad sirf ladkiyan naam badlengi,ladkein kyun nahi badal sakthe..apne ghar ki Boss toh main hi banoongi.."
"Achha meri..Boss..tum shaadi se pehle Bose thi aur shaadi ke baad Boss ban jaao.."They both smiled and dev added , "Par...meri asur waale harqatein toh sehna padega.."
"Asur waale harqath??matlab??"
"Kamrein mein aajao..akele..dikhatha hu..."
She pinched him. "Aahh...Shona...waise...ek baat kahun...I LOVE YOU jab pehli baar dekha tab se hi.."
She turned red. "I love you too...warna official Milan se pehle hi aapke peeche nahi aathi..
They both smiled...
How's it guys?? SRy for the mistakes... Do leave your opinions on my writing...
Thanks for reading...
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