Our Luv Story -Yall Are So Creative! :D - Page 5

On a rainy day a boy named aakash ran outside with anger on his face....
got on his bicycle and and and and and and cycled away...trying to forget the frustrations in his life...
and then his eyes find this simple looking (but gorgeous) gal completely soaked......at the bus stop.....he just can't take his eyes off of her...
but he was afraid to approach her coz he saw a guy standing next to her and thought maybe thats her boyfriend...
She turns back n looks at him watching her. Both starring each other .. the boy standing next to her leaves ... Akash now tries to go near her but ....
Gets uncomfortable he has never really went up to a girl like that before but he thinks this time he can....

But before he could speak to her, she got into the bus and went away..
akash felt very bad n made his mind dat he will surely meet this gal tom.........at night he cant sleep thinking abt her

tomorrow... at the same time.. he went at that bus station... and again.. it was raining.. he saw Shruthi waiting there.. he thought maybe she is waiting for him.. then walk up to her and said "tum beekh gai ho... yeh jacket lelo"... shruthi said "no thanks... aap ko bhi to jacket chaiye...".. then Akash said " mujhe se zaida tumhe zaroorat hai".... then... their eyes started talking......
after a while the bus came and shruti went in the bus and aaksh stand right their staring at her. all of sudden someone knock on the door. aakash wake up. he realizes that it was a dream. he went to open the door it was his best friend bhatti

Bhatti came in.. started cracking up.. as he always do... Akash was looking tensed.. he was all into his dream... then bhatti asked "abey kya huwa tujhko".. he said " kuch nai yaar...".. then bhatti was like ok and went to get some food .... Akash was thinking abt her all day... he went crazy.. coz he never felt like this before...

B: aakash tuhjhe aaj subha subha kya ho gaya aaja khana kha le
A: aata hu muh to dho lu
B: tu muh dhota hai mujhe to pata hi nahi tha
aakash throw pillow at him and went to the bathroom to wash his face. and than all of a sudden dev comes there.
Dev: Yo broz, wots up!!!
Abey Bhatti aaaj tu subeh subeh badaa ban-than ke aaya hai....hmmmm...kya baat hai paajeee...koi date hai kya aaj!?!

Kahin woh Jhilmil maan to nahin gayee??!?!?



B: arey nahi iyaar woh itni aasani kaha manne wali hai. kuch jayda hi bhayo shayo kha rahi hai. mian to bas waise hi aaya tha. per ek baat batau ?
D: ha bol..........
B: apna hero aaj subha se hi na kahi khoya hua hai.
D:kaha
B: llle mujhe pata hota to main kahi thoda kehta. sidha aat batata.
they were talking when aaksh come there.
A: kya baatein ho rahi hai? arey dev tu kab aaya
D:Kuch Nahin Hum Tumhari Hi Baat....

Bhatti: nahin kar rahey thhey ... n winks at Dev
A: chal chaaye hojaaye? Maaaaaaaaaaaaaa...plz chaaye pilaaaeeyenaaa
Ritu: Main bahaar jaarahee hoon A...daer horaahee hai...khud banaaa lenaa betaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
A: Mommmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Bhatti: Auntie g lagraa ki koi CHAAYE WAAYE banaane waali chaiye, kyun Dev?
A gives him a look...haaaaaan....to tu hi kyun nahin reh jaata idhar paaaajeeee, waisey bhi din main baar baar aata rehtaa idharrr....grins!!!

Dev: chal kuch kartey aaaj....
B: nahi yaar kuch bahar se hi khate hai...
A: ha yeh sahi rahega. waise bhi humein cook karna kaha aata hai
they all laugh
They were just about to go in to some dhaba to eat food, suddenly someone touches aakashs shoulder, he turned around . its shruti.
S: kya aap mujhe bata sakte hai ki yeh address kaha ka hai.

aakash just stairs at her. tabhi

B: aap mujhe bataiye yeh pata nahi kaha khoya rehta hai.
S: Oh Kaheen Yeh Kisi Ke Khayalon Main Tu Nahin Khoya Rehta?
B: *Starts Laughing* Oh Yeh Pata...Tumhe Bohot Door Jana Padega
S: Oh ab main kya karoonge
B: DONT WORRY JI! Yeh Aakash Kab Kaam Ayega! Aakash jao shruti ko is pate pe chod ke aaoAakash Blushes um Chal Bhati Tu Bhi Chal Humere Sath
B: Whispers loud enough for everyone to hear LOL...Mujhe kabab main haadi thodi baan na hainA:Shoots him a ugly face....um chalo shruti main tumhe chod doonga...

S: ok
A: uummm tu tu tum rehti kaha ho?
S: what?
A: well wiase nahi. i mean . ummmm actually maine tumhe bus stand mein khada dekha tha jo ki chandni chok ki taraf ja rahi thi. to waise hi pucha.
S: oh well yes main wahi rehti hu chandni chok mein, she said it with smile on her face.COLOR>
A: tum yaha nai ho kya?
S: haaaa actually abhi thoda time hi hua main mumbai se aayi hu.
A: Tu Tumne Koi Naya Freindz Banaye? Tumhe koi pasand aya
S:Smiles hain ek freind banai hain shez very sweet uska naam jhilmil hain A:Haha woh tu bhatti wali hain naS:Kya?A:Nahin Nahin Kuch Nahin
A:tum radio suno gi?
S:hain sure

Radio---kaise kahoon tujhse rubarooooo...hai yahaan dabee hui dil ki kaee armaaaaaaaaaaaaaan....

S: wow...kitni achchee song hai naa?
A: just staring at her,,,
S: hai naa?
A: (waapas aataa reality main...hehhehe)
haan haan haaan
tumhein music pasand hai?
S: hmmm...bahutttttttttttttttt,,,mujhe singing aur dancing main bahut dichuspi hai...waisey ootnaa achchaa toh nahin gaati feer bhi
A: woh mujhe decide karney digee? chalo kuch sunaa hee do feeer
S: (is shy...) kabhi ek din...

A: whisper, wow she is perfect.
S: stop singing and say " what"?.?.?
A: nothing.
They both look down
A: oh woh zagha aa gayi.

S: baaton baatoun mein pata hi nahi chala ki kab aa gaye
A: smiles and says yeah
S: thank you so much. bye
A: ummmmmmm phir kab milege?.?.?.?
S: laugh a little and says " destiny mein hoga to zarur milenge"

shruti start walking but sudenly turn to aakash, who was standing right there,and ask
S: tumne apna naam nahi bataya.?.?.?
A: laughs and says" jab dobara milenge tab batauga" and goes shruti stays right there looking at him.


after one week they meet in a hotel...
S: hi... kaise ho..?? after one week haan...
A: hello.... main theek.... yeah.. after one week...
S: to chalo abb apna Naam batao
A: Akash...
S: wow..!! nice name..
A: thanks...! tum yahan kaise..?
S: main Apni friend ke saath dinner pe aai hoo...
A: oh.. ok... cool... i wont disturb u then...
S: No.. No.. u arent disturbig me.. Infact.. tumhare saath accha lagta hai mujhe..!
A: mujhe bhi... meri yaad aai??
BOTH BLUSH...
S: hmmmmmmm.... haan..! tumhe..?
A: hmmmmmm.. HAAN..!!!
BOTH STARTED BLUSHING.....
and suddenly.. Tauji came..!
Tauji stares at both of them with questioning eyes
He comes and smiles hi tumhara naya dost sai mujhe nahin milvao gi shruti
S:oh haan yeh aakash hain
A:Namaste
T:Namaste

T: To betaa kaise ho? Kya kartey ho?
A: Gee main theek thaak. Main college main hoon abhi...Business Administration (ok naa guys?!)
T: bahut achchey...
kabhi leke aaooo apney doston ko ghar pey S, chaaye waaye peeyenge, baatey karengey, ok betaaa...chalo miltey hain
S, mujhe thodaa kaam hai, jaldee aajaana ghar.
S: g tau ji

Jhilli: Haaaaaaaaaaayee...sorry thodaa daer hogayaaa...stupid rikshaw nahin milree thhheee...
yeh kaun hai?


S: yeh Akash hain... my friend.... (BLUSH)
J: ohhh..... HI AKash...
A: hey...
J: ummm... sirf friends yaaaaaa
S: shut up jhilmil.... kuch bhi bolte rehti hai..
J: nai nai.. bass yuhi pooch rahi hoo..
A: ji... abhi tak to sirf friends hain.... aage dekh te hain...
Both Shruthi and Jhilmil are shocked ....
J: oohoo... Aaaggeeee..... ummmm
S: ok ok... abb main chalti hoon... see u later AKash..!
A: maine permission di hai jane ki..?
S: maine permission maagi...??
A: nai... lekin maine to permission nai di....
S: ok baba.... bolo... jao....
A: Ok.... but... kal milo mujh se...
S: ok... BYe..!!
J: umm.... chale abb.... baath cheet khatam... Bye Akash..!
and they both left..!


A meets up with his boys later...

Bhatti: Paaajeeeeeeeeee...kidhar thhey aap this afternoon?
A: aise hi kuch kaam thhha
Bhatti: Kaam thhhhaaa ya kaaam thhhhheee paajeee... =P
A: arey kaakey, kuch bhi boltaa rehta tu bhi naa...(grins)
Dev: Kuch to hai...tere shakal pey dikhraa hai yaaar
abhi bataa bhi dey...
Bhatti: yeh aise nahin maanegaaa Devender...chal pakad isse...
Dev: Kya?
Bhatti: kya paajee tu bhi...pakkad isse..aaj to bulwaake chhodengey

B & D grab A's legs...

A: wot the heck man....chhodo...come on...oyeeeeeeeeeee
leave me...

Bhatti: paajeeee....pehle...out with it...

A: ok ok ok...kabhi peeechhha nahin chhodtey saaley
Dev: AB bole bhi dey
A: alrite...woh mil gayeeeee hai...

Both B & D are like....KAUN?!?!?!

A: Bata Doon
B & D : HAAAAAAAAAN hbata do
A: Bata Doon
B & D: YESSSSSSS BATA DO
A: ACHA AHCHA THEEK HAIN BATA TA HOON uska naam hain........SHRUTI!
B:OMG STARTS LAUGHING MUJHE PATA THA
D:SLOWLY BACKS AWAY AND STARES...

D: S?
A: Haan..pataa hi nahin yeh kaise hogayaa,,,
pataa hi nahin chalaaa...kab....
koi itna pasand kaise aasaktaa hai...
ooske baare main ... main kuch bhi to nahin jaantaaa,,,
per woh achchi lagtee hai...bahut achchhhhi...
ooski hanseee...oooski aankhen,
ooske honth,,,chup bhi rehtey hain to lagtaa hai ki mujhse hazaaaron baatein kar rahi hai...
oosne mere dil ko chhhuwaa hai,,,
jee kartaa hai...

Bhatti: Oye A,,,,she...aajaaa zameen pey aaaa...

A is still...khoyaaaa huaa in S's .....



B: oye hosh mein aaa. na jaan na pehchan tu mera mehmaan. huh
A: arey janta hu main usko. abhi ussi se to mil ke aa raha hu............
D: Acha!!!! to tu do din mein uske baare mein sab jaan gaya. huh.....
A: arey yaar pyar ke liye time ya jaga thodi dekhi jati hai..... woh to bus ho jata hai......
B to D: yeh to gaya kaam se.......
aakash's mom enter and say " kaun gaya kaam se"B was about to say some thing but aakash start talking.... " ma aap aa gaye"

B stares at aaksh with weired face.... ,because aakash didn't let him tak