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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: syvalini

sai...

i was so curious about the relation between niranjan n aastha y they were showing dat much concern
i think they have relation with aastha,
atleast give clue in next update yar...
who kidnapped avdoot?
y anjali, niranjan were tense wen shlok was meeting aastha regularly?
many questions r coming in my mind give answers one by one.
good going...
keep it up...

thank u akka
hmm hmm wait wait yaar
hmm relation tho baad main pata chalega first njoy this track hope u r enjoying it
hmm every question has its own answer hope u r liking this current track
thanks for ur comments and supports
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: chickyhoney

Wow awesome bt wht is the mystry can't solve it bt one request plz bring ashlok together n strt their love story soon waiting for next update

hmm k k u r waiting for ashlok romance directly first njoy this track hope u r njoying it
anyway thanks for commenting its not any mysterious one u will get to know soon
keep following
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Catherine06

Nice update,eager to know who kidnapped Avdoot,why niranjan showing concern, they r not searching him.

Making us to wait for next update.

Every day is interesting,like the way it is going...wow

hmm Avdoot kidnap Niranjan relation with Aastha uffo leave it na jus njoy the track thats it k u will like it
trust me
thanks for ur comment
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nadeeka1200

Hi sai

Thank you, nice update
I am waiting for your update daily
Tc

hi nadeeka1200
oh u liked it thanks a lot
hmm i update daily k for u ppl
u ppl r really a great support to me keep it up
i m blessed to have such readers
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

Wow bhai ...

Nice formatting..

thank u 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vaishux

Nice update..

Loved aastha and anjali bonding

yes they always have great bond in my writings and in ebp too
thank u
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: chandalekha

there is something mysterious about anjali and niranjan. why they are helping astha??

poor girl, crying a lot😭😭

even i too feel bad for Aastha 😭 😭 dont cry dont cry
everything will be revealed jus wait and watch
u will like it
thanks for comment and support
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

Wow bhai ...

Nice formatting..

didi aaj kaunsi color lagaana hain batayiye na
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Posted: 9 years ago

Episode 14


Shlok got ready and directly went to detective and also asked him to find him soon and also said to not worry about payment and he went to office. He had lot of work to catch up. After sometime Anjali made Aastha sleep. Anjali took the album on the bed and saw it and caressed Kalindi. Anjali again saw Aastha and caressed her hair and tears rolled in her eyes again and went away. Slowly Aastha woke up and found no one but only her album. She took it and saw her family laughing and unknown tears started again. Aastha kept it aside and went to search Anjali. Sita came and said she went. Aastha didnt know wat to do she just stared blankly at anywhere else.

Sita understood and came near her and said
"achcha mam aap jaante hain mere bare main..." and she said everything to her and they were talking endlessly. That's all wat she needs a support. Aastha was going on talking like this suddenly police came to the house. Aastha was feared.

Police came directly to her and asked
"R u Aastha." Aastha nodded with total fear. Police "U have to come with us now." Aastha was excited "Kyun Baba milgaya." Police "nahi ham tujhe investigate karna hain." Sita came there. Aastha "Kya investigation." Police "wo sab ham station main hoga." And they took her with them. Sita got feared and called Niranjan. Niranjan was shocked.

He immediately came to guest house and shouted
"Aastha Aastha beti.." Sita came and said everything. Niranjan rushed to police station. Niranjan entered and saw Aastha in cell. Niranjan "Aastha." Aastha saw him and started tears again "uncle pls mujhe dar lag raha hain yaha pls take me away from here pls." Niranjan "Aastha beti mat ro main aagayi hoon na." and he called inspector.

Inspector
"dekhiye Sir we need to interrogate her few questions that's it we will drop her again don't worry nothing will happens I ensure u." Niranjan "lekin wat u want to ask she is a small girl she doesn't know all this." Inspector "Sir aap fiakr mat kijiye if u want u can be here until interrogation finishes." Niranjan "theek hain." Niranjan went to her "beti just few minutes they will ask few question that's it don't worry I will be here k I came to take u don't worry." Niranjan nodded and police went in. She was centered. She was also feared a lot.

Niranjan just sat there. Inspector Mahesh "Dekho aapka naam kya hain." Aastha "Aastha Kirloskar." Inspector "So u were studying in America." Aastha nodded. Mahesh "So Aastha how did ur mother die." Aastha "Wat is it anything to do with aayi." Mahesh "pls just say the answer." Aastha hesitatingly "accident hua." Niranjan felt heavy in his throat. Mahesh "K do u suspect anything in that incident." Aastha shouted "Kya hain ye sab kya bakvaas hain ye sab aap mere baba ke bare main bat kar rahe hain na so wat is it anything to do with Aai haan aap kya jaan na chahta hain."

Mahesh
"cool down Aastha achcha theek hain then y ur mother wrote run Aastha run." Aastha saw at him with tearful eyes and thoughtfully. Mahesh "dekho I m just trying to figure out everything ur mother said u to run away but I don't understand from wat did she just asked u to go away from wat did she imply u to run away from ur own home think Aastha ji didn't u ever suspect ur Baba." Aastha "Bas bas kijiye ye sab Baba aisa nahi kar sakte kisi ne baba ko kidnap kiya mujhe pata nahi wo log kaun hain I think they r creating all this drama and framing baba y cant u think like that haan. Y r u all around baba haan he is very nice person don't ever dare to think about him k now if u leave me I want to leave."

Mahesh
"ek aur last question pls." Aastha stood there. Mahesh "haan Aastha did u ever notice someone being close to ur Dad some one being very friendly pls think Aastha ji we might know anything pls help us every where we go there is a dead end we need t dig into this." Aastha "mujhe thoda vakt chahiye." Mahesh "Its k Aastha ji take ur time thanks for co-operating us if u want we will give protection to u u can live in ur home."

Aastha again saw him with shock. She didn't expect this. Aastha
"nahi I don't want to be there I will be in their guest house no pblm if I be there I cant let go off my thoughts so thanks a lot pls find my baba asap I m safe in their guest house they r treating me as princess I owe them very much so can I leave now."

Mahesh nodded and constable switched off the recorder. Aastha came out of cell
and hugged Niranjan
"bohut dar lag raha hian uncle bohut dar lag raha hain." and cried "chup hojao Aastha nothing happened Baba jaroor milenge don't worry." Aastha broke the hug and turned around and saw them. Aastha "Inspector wat happened in that cc video did u find anything how much time it will take haan how long it takes to find one person."

Niranjan "Aastha cool down baba ko kuch nahi hoga Inspector saab ye kaam jaldi hona hain don't do late I know commissioner if u want I will talk with him." Mahesh "nahi Sir we r at our best we definitely will find him don't worry." Aastha "Uncle cheliye pls iss logo se kuch nahi hoga ham hi dhoondenge Baba ko." Niranjan "nahi beti don't worry ham hain na y do u need to take strain I m friend of ur Baba I too want him back don't worry I will find him dekhiye inspector sab bohut der ho raha hain cant u see wat she is going through cant u do it soon if u want we will consult CBI pls do it fast." Mahesh "Ji aap jaasakte hain abi."

After they left Mahesh is asking to one of his constable
"Ravi ye Niranjan kaha se aayi achanak kaunsa rishta hain iss logo se." Ravi "Sir I also searched about it Sir these ppl were following Avdoot after her mother's death I don't know y we also need to keep an eye on them Sir but I don't understand one thing y r they taking care of Aastha." Mahesh "uff bappa jaante hain sab kya case hain ye ajeeb hain Ravi chai lekar aao na mera dimaag kharab ho raha hain." Ravi "Yes Sir."

Mahesh played the recording again and again. He was listening it to the umptieth time and he suddenly woke up and went to her home. Ravi came in
"Sir chai." And frustrated "Uff ye sab hamesha aisa karte hain chai keliye bulate hain ghayab hota hain." Ranjan "Ravi u know na he gets something after ordering chai not while drinking it achcha wo Murthy ki FIR de." And he gave it to him and done his work.

Niranjan brought Aastha to guest house. Aastha slowly walked in she was really disturbed and also feeling restless. Niranjan "Sita bring some water." Sita brought water and gave to Aastha. Aastha drank and said "Uncle aap jayiye main theek hoon." Niranjan "theek hain beta don't think about all these leave it to me eat something Sita will cook tum rest le lo theek hain Aastha." Aastha nodded and said "Ji uncle." And he left.

Aastha went to her room like a dead one and sat on the bed and saw the album and took it and put that album close to her heart and cried a lot until she got tired and tears got over in her eyes. Sita cant see her like that and came near her and placed a hand on her. Aastha got up and hugged her and cried harder
"kyun ho raha hain kyun kyun.." Sita "mam chup hojao kuch nahi hoga tumhari Baba ko main aaj mandir gaye the dekho aap ye Prasad lelijiye while I was praying for u this flower fell from idol that means ur Baba is safe u will be happy as b4 good days r not so far mam don't cry chup hojao mam." Aastha broke the hug "tum mere liye mandir gaye." Sita "haan." Aastha "aap log mere liye itna kar rahe hain sach main I m very lucky to meet u ppl thank u thank u so much Sita." Sita "k mam ye Prasad khalo Bappa tera saath hain don't worry."

Aastha took the Prasad and ate in tears. Niranjan was also tensed y r they taking so long to find him wat happened to him. He thoughtfully entered his cabin and found Shlok there. Shlok recognised his thoughtful mind and asked "Kya hua Baba aap itni tension kyun hain." Niranjan then saw him and asked "tum yaha kya kar raha hain." Shlok "kuch nahi main ye file lene aaya lekin aap itni tension kyun hain."

Niranjan sat in his chair and Shlok too sat b4 him and saw him. Niranjan
"kuch nahi Shlok aaj Aastha ko police ne interrogate kiya hain bichari bohut disturbed hain lekin wo log itna time kyun le rahi mujhe pareshan lag raha hain mujhe kuch samaj main bhi nahi aa raha hain." Shlok thought for sometime and said "Baba aap tension mat le I will look into it aap isme mat panda I definitely will see where he can go pls aap pareshan mat ho main tumhe pareshan nahi dekh sakta hooon." Niranjan "Shlok don't worry about me I m fine thanks mere bachche now go and do ur work aur haan ek baar shyam ko Aastha se milke aao theek hain." Shlok nodded. Shlok also thought wat she must be going through and hit some one in his office. He too bcame restless everytime her face asks him to find her father. How helpless he is she is literally begging for her father yet he couldn't bring him.


Episode 15

Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hai Sai gud evening. 😛 Thanks for your update and pm. Nice update Sai.
Anjali consoling astha. She slept arey waw 😛 👏
Anjali looking to the album and cried 😭 . Really it is mysterious.
Hai astha is speaking with sita 😛
Really I also got fear when police came to the guest house to enquire astha 😡
Hai sita u did a wonderful job u called niranjan and told everything 👏
Police nicely behaved with astha and niranjan 👏
How did police get the letter. I think shlok gave them.
Is avdoot killed kalindi 😡 kalindi's death is mysterious.]Police are intelligent they r observing niranjan and family also 👏
V r also suspecting something against niranjan
But niranjan is also sad. Y don't know
Police try to finding avdoot 👏
Sita praying for astha waw 👏
Really astha us helpless now 😭
Niranjan told about police enquiry to shlok. Nice.
I think shlok is searching the reason from his father.
He also feels sad for astha 👏
Anyway nice update
Keep rocking. Continue soon. V r waiting yaar.

Arey Sai today u updated at 5 pm what yaar. R u changing the time yaar.really nice. 👏 [=D^]

U can use blue-rose, red-green, blue and orange is also nice.
Edited by sudhamadhu - 9 years ago

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