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Posted: 9 years ago

Can't say how proud and happy I truly feel after having done this chapter on time. Okay, now no juta-chappals for the update.

Chapter 53

The morning bathed in the sunshine of the valiantly rising sun across the eastern sky and the warm breeze blew lazily over the trees, rusting their leaves listlessly and making hushing sounds among them. The last night's rain had subsided and only here and there little bedraggled puddles were left as a product. The wisps of the trees dripped idly with the remnants of the rainwater that one night before encompassed the town tremendously. At the sensation of warmth of the rays of the morning sun, Ishani stirred in her sleep, stretching up her arms. Thankfully there was no alarm clock chiming in today and she could sleep as long as she wanted to. Last night she had slept deeply and unmoved in her dreams, for there only seemed to be her and a pleasant feeling of wholeness. The sunrays penetrated her room and prickled her closed eyes. "It's not too early now," she whispered to herself but sleep now would not come over her. Ishani sat up, rubbing her eyes and yawning heavily and it was not long when she realized her room had taken a completely different shape and it by no means looked like her old house that she had been in for over a year. It couldn't be any magic that she had landed in a different world altogether. It wouldn't be a surprise if she found herself now being persuaded by something extremely unexpected. Her heart gave a fierce leap as soon as she realized she was not in her own clothes. She timidly looked down beneath the green sheet that covered her body and concluded she wore a white sweatshirt and a black pair of jeans and she remembered herself owning neither for they were not women's wear. She huddled closer on the bed as her quivering lips shouted the first name they could form. "Ranveer! Are you there?"

In a few moments, Ishani heard a soft knock on the door as an old woman in her late 50s entered into the room. She wore a large working gown and her hairs were secured in a bun while a pair of spectacles adorned her dark and compassionate eyes. "Ah, you're awake!" the woman said, her lips curving in a kind smile. "I'm Emily and have been assigned to look after you. I hope you are feeling better now."

"W-where am I?" Ishani asked, still quivering, though she somewhere knew the answer.

"This is RV Mansion, and it's Ranveer's room. You don't remember anything?" the woman answered softly.

Ishani shook her head. "Ranveer brought me here?"

"Yes, he did," the woman said, smiling.

"But I don't remember anything... where is he now?"

"I assume he is somewhere for a morning walk and will soon be returning. I haven't seen him since he left the room."

Ishani finally asked the question she was dying to know about. "M-my cloths... I'm--they are not here. And who changed them? I couldn't have done it on my own, to be sure?" Ishani gulped.

"Oh, it was you," the woman answered. "I have never seen as energetic as you when drunk."

"I? But I was drunk--"

"Yes, you were but as soon as you came into the house you told Ranveer you wanted to change into something else, and that's how you came to wear his cloths."

"I hope I wasn't embarrassing last night," Ishani muttered to herself.

"Not at all," the woman said. "In fact, I haven't seen anyone more adorable than you, when drunk."

"Did- did I do something...?"

Ishani could see the woman was having hard time controlling her laughter as she covered her mouth with her hands and smiled in silence. "Nothing wrong, sweetheart." She chuckled.

"Are you sure?" Ishani asked, unsure if the question really made any sense.

"Well, he really went quite at length for you," the lady said, and pulled out the drawer from the nearby table, and picked up an old copy of The Hobbit from it. "You made him read all your favorite parts and..." she said, handing Ishani the book, but was cut short by her immediately.

"And he read that?" Ishani frowned.

"Of course he did!"

"Oh, no. That was so stupid of me to do that!" Ishani repented. Reading the books from Ranveer was her favorite pastime at night when they were kids; though before he could finish the destined chapters, Ishani would already have fallen asleep. The next days afterwards used to be for her own scolding from him and she would get away, saying, "You read so nice that it works as a lullaby for me and I sleep sooner than I'm supposed to." Ranveer would simply smile at her and not say anything more. But it was different now.

"That was cute." Ishani's thoughts were interrupted by Emily.

"Sorry?"

"What you did."

"What did I do?"

"Nothing much. You just wanted him to read in some old style like he used to."

Ishani, embarrassed, hid her face in her palms. She always loved when Ranveer read her something in the tone of the text, but she made him do that again? She did not want to, but a small smile erupted on her lips at the remembrance of the old times when Ranveer so easily mimicked the voices of the characters of the books and she could not stop laughing. She always loved how he adapted the vicious but comical features of Smaug, the dragon, and his first encounter with Bilbo.

"He did all that?" Ishani wondered while Emily smiled in affirmative.

"Was he mad at me for all this? Angry?"

"I have been working here since last one year and I haven't seen him happier before," Emily answered earnestly.

Ishani smiled nervously as she saw the old woman leave the room. Ishani was alone now and her thoughts only wandered back to the last night. Her painful encounter with Ranveer. She looked about the room and it hadn't changed too much since her last visit in his house. However happy she felt, Ishani could not keep the feeling of slight embarrassment aside for making Ranveer do all that she did in her stupidity. She shook her head as she could imagine Ranveer and his reluctance for the things he always considered were "too childish" and that was the precise thing she had made him do.

Ishani took bath and changed into a light blue denim shirt and white jeans. The outfit hanged loosely about her body but it felt right and she proudly descended the stairs. Her eyes fell on Ranveer who, she believed, had just returned from his morning walk. Ishani glanced at her watch. 7.30, it said. She awkwardly came down and smiled as she saw Ranveer looking at her.

"How are you feeling now?" he said. His voice was normal and he did not look like he was mad at her.

"I'm fine," she said slowly, not looking at him. "How are you?"

"I'm good."

There was a long silence and Ishani could hear the sounds coming from the kitchen as servants worked for the breakfast. After a while she saw Ranveer walking towards his room and she herself made her way to the couch in the hall, and took to reading one of the latest editions of TIME Magazine. 20 minutes later Ranveer returned back and smiled at Ishani. Ishani returned the smile as Ranveer sat beside her.

"It'll be better if you take this day off," Ranveer said.

Ishani nodded. "I'm thinking the same."

"Don't worry about the meetings. I'm sure Mr. Khanna will look after everything well."

"He definitely will. Aren't you too early for the office today?" Ishani asked.

"Not really. But today there is a meeting in an hour and I have to be there on time."

"You'll be the only one on time," Ishani chuckled. No matter how much others tried, they could never keep themselves from becoming the slave of time and thus resulting getting delayed according to him. Ranveer smiled at her while Ishani blushed.

"That is true," he said.

"I can't see Kaka and Kaki anywhere. Where are they?"

"They have been to India since last 4 days, but will be returning by the midweek."

"And you've been alone for that long?" Ishani answered in surprise.

"There is no other option, is it?" Ranveer said.

"Don't you feel weird?"

"About what?"

"About being alone like this for so long."

"I'm used to this." Ranveer smiled. Ishani, not knowing why, felt a pang of guilt hitting her once again as she felt lump rising in her throat. She didn't want this conversation to end. She wanted to see him talking to her. She wanted to hear his voice as much as she could and she wanted to be with him as long as possible. The workers arranged the breakfast on the table but Ranveer denied, saying, he needed to leave early and none of Ishani's words of him having finished his breakfast would have any effect on him. He was too stubborn to listen to others when he'd decided something in his mind.

"Well, I'm leaving now," Ranveer said, taking a final look at Ishani.

"When will you come back?" Ishani asked him, and felt surprised at the question herself.

"I'm not sure, but it could be quite late."

Ishani nodded and saw Ranveer leave. She ran to the door and saw Ranveer's car vanishing into the mist of the morning sun. For a change, Ishani realized, Ranveer himself did not drive the car, rather there was a driver today.

"That's such a pleasantly novel thing," Ishani whispered to herself and returned back.

"I think you should have your breakfast. Ranveer never stops throwing his tantrums, and you'd starve really bad if you wait for him like that," Emily said as Ishani came to the breakfast table. Ishani realized Ranveer would never want anyone as old as Emily to address him as sir' and probably that was the reason she called him by his name.

"No, thank you. But I don't really want to take anything right now."

"But Ranveer has asked me to make sure to give you your breakfast on time. It will help you recover your strength."

"He did? In that case, he himself should have followed his own advice." Ishani said the last sentence to herself, and frowned. He could never change.

"Come, come." Emily dragged Ishani to the table and served her with fried mushrooms, pancakes and juice of fresh apples.

"This is too much, Emily," Ishani squeaked but the old lady only laughed in response.

"I hope you don't want us getting fired, do you?" she said after a while, as she placed the things togehter.

"Of course not!" Ishani said. "But you have to understand..."

"No buts, Miss Ishani, it's an order from someone none of us will dare go against."

Ishani gave out an exasperated sigh. She was never a foodie and would suffice even in the little she could get; but what did this Ranveer really think of himself? Was he taking any revenge from her for the previous night? Only if he were here, things wouldn't be so messy. Ishani sighed. "Alright," she said. "I'm sorry. I'll just eat whatever I can."

"That's good. And I will have to leave now. Today is the parents-teacher conference at my grandson's school and I should be going there now," Emily said and left. Within next few minutes, the entire house was devoid of the presence of any living being save her own presence. The workers had left, given there was no one in the house today and they would return back when their call comes. Ishani turned to her--Ranveer's room, not knowing if she should go there or not. But she wouldn't really like to be anywhere else but close to him by any means.

She had never felt so relaxed in her own house before and today it felt like... having come back home.

"But we cannot keep him locked up, sir. It's not what the law says," the officer told Ranveer, while Chirag stood next to the cop, wavering as Ranveer eyed him ferociously. "Miss Ishani Parekh signed the papers of his bail yesterday and since she has no problem in letting him go, I'm very much afraid you cannot do anything unless you're breaking the law."

Chirag coughed as though trying to grab Ranveer's attention to his successful adventure out of the jail and his wandering eyes showed he was enjoying Ranveer's supposed failure very much.

Ranveer glared at Chirag but felt helpless.

"Alright, sir," Chirag said as he extended his hand to the officer, "I'm about to leave and it's going to be our first and last meeting."

The inspector only nodded his head while Chirag took to the exit and before disappearing in the white shadow out of the police station, he winked at Ranveer and waved his hand in a goodbye and his lips made a non-verbal "Good bye."

Ishani did this and Ranveer had no further reasons to argue over the matter.

The night fell slowly over the planes of the town, enveloping it in a weary shadow of delicate felicity as silvery moon rose beyond the trees. Ranveer stepped out of the car and made his way to the house and the driver drove to park it in the garage. The day was not very pleasant for Ranveer, for today two of the most important deals had slipped out of his hands right when he had the opportunity to make things better. That, however, could not be considered a big deal, but it was Ishani who would not leave his thoughts no matter how much he tried. She had occupied his mind like warmth gripping over summer ever since he had left in the morning.

Ranveer slowly walked in, his heart beating irregularly, for an unknown fear now crawled in his heart but it disappeared as soon as it had come. As he entered the house, he felt his heart skip unsteadily in his chest. Ishani sat there on a chair on the dining table, head bent on the table and resting calmly on her arms. He could not acknowledge but a relieved sigh left his lips as he advanced further towards her. Ishani did not yet discover his presence. Ranveer stood by her side, and a tired smile formed on his lips, and in a moment weariness was replaced by curiosity. She still wore the loosely hanging cloths she had in the morning, but she looked exceptionally beautiful.

Unknowingly, his fingers traced across her face, as he knelt before her, and pushed aside the strands of hair that teased her cheeks. At his touch, Ishani opened her eyes, slightly alarmed, but at his sight, her face relaxed in a pretty smile.

"You're back," she said, opening her eyes languidly. "When did you come?"

"Just now," Ranveer said slowly.

"Oh, I'm sure you haven't had dinner. Come."

Ranveer followed Ishani. There was no one else in the house and their voices echoed, reflecting the solitude of the place.

"I hope you don't mind me staying here for today," Ishani said as she arranged the plates for dinner. "I couldn't leave."

"It's completely alright," Ranveer assured her. Ishani looked at him as if expecting him to say more but he didn't. Ishani busied herself in the preparation again.

"I'm sure you haven't had dinner as well?" Ranveer said. Ishani shook her head.

"I don't feel like..."

"I don't want to hear these excuses," Ranveer said and brought her back to the dining table. He refused to listen to Ishani's pleas and continued, "You look so thin and weak. I don't want you to disappear of weakness, if you know what I mean."

"You're not my mommy. Stop behaving like her," Ishani growled.

"Oh, really? You should call up Falguni Maa'. She'll have the best treatments for you." Ranveer laughed.

Ishani squinted her eyes at him, but subsided immediately. "It's not funny," she said and fell silent.

They ate in silence, avoiding each other's eyes and not saying anything. Often an awkward smile would be passed from one side and be returned from another but no verbal contact was made. Ishani often looked at Ranveer guiltily when he was not looking at her and withdrew her gaze away from his otherwise. In this dead silence, it was still impossible for her to look into his eyes.

Ishani walked to and fro with a tender pace in her room- one that Ranveer settled for her at her insistence and she took again the one she had stayed the last time in. It had everything except sleep that she dearly needed now. She came outside the room, dim silver lights illuminating her path occasionally, and walked upto the porch on that jutted out of the floor next to her room, leading to a pleasant destination. The place shimmered in the vibrant glow of the full moon. Unexpectedly, her feet led her there, her eyes devouring the beauty that lay before her: a large lake stretched out wildly as far as her eyes could explore in the darkened night. On its surface, the moon shone glamorously and stars reflected their faint shadow littering above it gracefully. Ishani smiled and moved towards the railing that secured the border of the porch. But before she could take a look around, her eyes fell on Ranveer whose unblinking eyes stared out into nothingness in front of him.

"I thought you would be asleep by now," Ishani said, as she came close and took a seat beside Ranveer. He stirred slowly and smiled at her.

"I couldn't sleep," he said.

"How? You didn't even get to sleep the night as well..."

Ranveer looked at Ishani uneasily and smiled. "Yeah."

"I'm sorry," Ishani said suddenly.

"What for?"

"For annoying you the whole night yesterday."

"You can never annoy me," Ranveer said and Ishani looked at the reflection of the moon below in the simmering lake.

"I love it," she said. "I love everything about this house, Ranveer. And I can't express how happy I am for you. You achieved everything on your own. When the whole market was drowning in dirt, you showed them anything is possible if you have the will to do so."

"It was more of your dream than mine," Ranveer answered, reminiscing how Ishani always believed in him to be a big man.

She looked at him, and heart beat differently for a few seconds. She needed to tell him the truth.

"Ranveer."

"Hmm."

"I want to tell you something."

"I think I know that already."

"I expected so, but you're not mad at me for that either?"

"I don't think so."

"Why?"

"I cannot answer that." Ranveer lay down on the marbled floor, back of his head resting on his palms as he looked at her intently as if expecting her to say something.

"He put this condition before me to tell the truth. Had it not happened, I'd never have known anything."

Ranveer now looked at the brightest constellation in front of him that shone the fiercely in that hour, and sniffed the pungent smell coming from the garden. To Ishani, it felt exceptionally peaceful. He felt peaceful.

"I never expected him to do anything better," Ranveer said, his eyes still fixed on the stars. "Anyway, why are you not asleep? It's quite late now."

"I have slept enough today," Ishani said.

"Don't lie!"

"Come on, Ranveer! Everything you want me to do applies equally on you as well."

"No, it doesn't."

"Of course it does! Just because you don't admit it, wouldn't mean it's different for us."

Ranveer chuckled under his breath and Ishani glared at him, but her glare vanished as she saw him smiling at her. Slowly, he closed his eyes and Ishani could feel he now drifted into a peaceful sleep and she could not dare wake him again.

She, smiling, stared at him and couldn't understand why or how, but her eyes glided down to his lips and an overwhelming desire to kiss him again brimmed in her heart; and for a moment everything around her blurred down to a shadow and all she could feel was Ranveer before her. She lay down beside him and smiled. Ranveer in his sleep stirred and turned his face towards her. It was too unexpected for him to sleep so early. But she loved seeing him. She could feel his warm breath falling on her lips and her heart desired to move closer but this time she pulled back, slightly sweating, and her breath getting unsteady. A spell that had suddenly overtaken her senses was suddenly broken. No, she couldn't do that! She couldn't look at him again. No. Next time she would probably end up kissing him if he smiled at her like that once again.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey Elvish🤗🤗

I could give you biliion hugs for this but it wont be enough yaar🤗🤗🤗 You write so magically dear, and this update was nothing but a beautiful masterpiece , when u & LM write a book of your own I can only hope they will publish here as well or else I will threat you both to send copies😆😆

Coming to this magical update Gosh they way you started chapter was so beautiful❤️❤️ And Ranveer read for her favorite parts of Hobitt Can these two get anymore cuter?❤️❤️ And Ishani blushing and smiling when she heard about it was making me smile and giggle . Damn they are so in love , Elvish get them together and I want them to have cute babies soon🤣🤣

The way Ishani did not want the conversation to get finish between them , and how these two care for each other is simply beautiful written by you sweetie❤️❤️

And the last part was FREAKING AMAZING🤗 I dont have any words about it , just pretty please with sugar on top get them together

As always you have written so damn beautiful🤗🤗 Update soon 🤗

Loads of love
MM❤️❤️

Ps.I am still waiting to when they have a football team of their own🤣
Edited by ShadikaIshVeer - 9 years ago
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Okay seriously, what are you made of, girl?

You are a magic box, you know that, right? Every time you say that you're afraid before posting a chapter, I know that there must be nothing short of a treat in wait for me, and you've never disappointed me even once. This chapter has just been a treat for me (and sufficient motivation to get my lazy ass back to completing my next update as well, I guess)
Enough blabbering on my part now and let's get to the review. I'm kinda short on words as to what to say because I've loved every part of this chapter. Be it the stunning way you've described the sunrise (well, you find different ways to describe the same thing with a beauty unparalled) or whether it be Ishaani finding out about her drunken antics with Ranveer last night, I've been halfway between laughing and drooling upon her.
The Hobbit! Ha! And Ranveer read out all her favourite parts from the book to her? Could he be anymore adorable and droolworthy? Again, the two of us have such similar thinking, it surprises me at times (I was going to mention something like this in the upcoming epistles too). And then there's Emily... I like her. She gives me a very warm vibe.
So Ranveer and Ishaani meet at the dining table and the former manages to run away without any satisfactory food (or even sleep, for that concern), and Ishaani was made to eat on his behalf too. Okay, two minutes out again to drool upon how much Ishaani reveres him (yes, she does. She's head over heels in love with him!)
Ranveer comes back home in the night and they have dinner together, have a decent conversation, and the ending at the porch was nothing short of my sweetest of dreams. <3 <3 So Ishaani had to sign Chirag's bail papers in exchange for the truth? That scumbag! Damn it! I can only imagine how exasperated Ranveer must have felt. But here again, he makes me go dewy-eyes at his loyalty and love for her.
Ishaani watched him fall asleep and was seized by the urge to kiss him. OH. MY. GOD. Seriosuly, now I don't know whether to drool upon the sleeping-Ranveer, the madly-in-love-Ishaani or upon your gorgeous piece of writing? Seriously, there's something about this chapter that's really caught my fancy. Okay, now I'm just stupid talking like I'm high, but still I hope you make sense of my review.
Brilliant job on the update, darling! Do keep churning out beauties like this and update the next one quickly! :D :D
Love,
LM
Ps. I might even edit this further if I think I've missed out on something. Also, I'll post the emos later.
Edited by LadyMeringue - 9 years ago
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Okay I need to stop blushing my cheeks are paining I mean girl see what you did
Each and everything about this chapter is so serene so beautiful that I am short of words to describe it for this chapter u definitely deserve a standing ovation can it get beautiful than this 👏 👏
Starting from ishani waking up to sleeping again at porch everything was so lovely
She made him read book I mean I am dilemma whether to drool over ranveer for doing whatever stupidity she demands or on ishani she is seriously so adorable when drunk
OK I thought how come she changed in new clothes well this was the overenthusiastical ishani who can even turn into a superwoman when drunk
So boy left and the way ishani came behind to watch him gave me a feeling like they are married and are living in mansion even she Waiting for him for dinner was so much like that m sorry I know that was too much to dream
Ranveer he is becoming a daring part I mean otherwise touching ishani was so much a sin for him
This ranveer is so lovely droolworthy adorable and what not
Is ranveer mad he don't know or what ishani now need his presence to sleep
O God urge to kiss I read this line two times and made me realise how much head over heels she is in love with him now when she is going to confess that
Well that last scene was like a beautiful pure soulfull love story novel am reading
I was so drowned in your magical writing that I forgot that chiru baba is a free bird now and next thing he ll do is to create problems for ishveer but I trust his antics that it ll make them more close to each other
Elvish I !must say that we are going to have two best writers with best selling novel I mean I can tell people later that look I read their work from start
U are so magical in expressing with your writing that I cannot tell you
U and LM take me another world with your writing
I ll agree with LM here that whenever you say that joota chappal I wish to through all confectionery and flowers on you of your choice
This was on time a total marvellous update I cannot say how much happy I am reading this update and now rushing to read it all over again
By d way ishani I in loose clothes will b drool worthy to watch
Kaki kaka is not there and dhikra is bringing bahurani
Sorry cannot use emoji but you can b assured that in this whole process I was smiling and my mom is having doubt on me bye
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Superb update 😊 thanks for pm
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This was the cutest chapter of your FF till now ! The whole chapter was damn adorable Elvish !! Now seriously I hope you'll not update the next chapter soon cos the hangover of this one will take many days to get over <3 <3

Ahem , now where to begin ? The whole thing will fit in my review but unfortunately I need to write my own . Anyway , the beginning part... XD , don't worry I didn't ran my kachra dimag knowing that he's our good boy but it still cracked me up , lol poor girl.

I completely agreed with Emily on this, Ishani honestly becomes the cutest thing on earth in her inebriate state *blushes*. I loved Ishani's sudden change in behavior (though she was drunk ) she was serious moments ago and then suddenly her slumbering cuteness ka keeda sprang out ! Maybe because she is no more confused now and also Ranveer confessed his feelings to her which made her react this way , alcohol brings out the true feelings of a person ( not in Ranveer's case obviously , he has mastered the art of hiding his emotions ) and so Ishu ended up exploding her happiness bomb :D :D. Joker Ishani is really a treat to eyes, eek ! Miss. Cutie pie *blush*blush*blush*.

Ranveer reading out the book to Ishani mimicking the characters' voices reminded me of my childhood. My dad too used to read to me stories the same way Ranveer did, ditto ! Sigh , I still remember how much I used to irritate him for this and at the most bizarre timings :P :P , but he did nonetheless without complaining...Thanks for making me reminisce those moments , life is such a mess now.

Now let me come back to our Ishveer , I can play that whole scene in my head and believe me it was flooding with cuteness , I can imagine Ranveer doing that , his happiness makes us happy too ! It was a blissful moment. Hope the old friendship comes back soon they really don't look good acting like strangers meeting for the first time , I mean circumstances made them like this but still , they are and will always be childhood buddies at the end of the day !! I'm hoping that everything will get sorted out soon and go back to normal.

Ishani in Ranveer's cloths is like a toddler in a gunny sack, jeez ! I'm going insane by her cuteness * head spinning*. Btw, Mr. Stubborn brat needs to be more conscious of his health -_-

Chirkut's guest appearance is enough to melt me *blush*. I frowned at first at him for tapkofying so suddenly in such an awesomely adorable chapter, but he still played his chotu part brilliantly , he wasn't annoying like last time but was in his swagger mode again. So now he's gonna spill the beans, Ishveer toh gaye ! I pray that the dhamaka is far enough so that we can get plenty of Ishveer moments.

The way Ranveer thinks of Ishani makes my heart strings twang. Whenever he looks at her and she is oblivious of this is the best moment of all ! All I do is drown in his gaze , his eyes speak volumes... *bating eyelids*. They look cute when they fight with each other for each other , they don't pay attention to their carelessness and start pointing out the other's mistakes , sweethearts ! :P :P

The RV mansion is droolworthy and what to say about the scenic beauty , but with Ishveer in it the palace was radiating love , loneliness was wiped off , the whole description of the night time of excellent ! Great job *applauds*.

Naughty sunny ?! I should keep mum I guess XD. But really , the last paragraph made me shiver a bit , beautifully written :D. I want Ranveer to kiss her when the proper time comes , baby is gonna faint of joy !

Thanks for updating such a honey sweet chapter *hugs*. I don't know much of writing stuff but as a reader I think you have done a brilliant job so far and didn't hyped or jumped in nervousness( which I usually do) but climbed the steps of improvement properly and gracefully which is a really wonderful thing ! Also your chapters are quite long nowadays which is good for us :P. Great work ! Keep writing !

And hey , now I don't have any issue with you updating late , I'm going to read the chapter again & again ( I did this with recent chapters too but never told you :P :P )

PS : Today I was going to get caught red handed. Man ! You & LM will put me in serious trouble some day ! And I hope you don't get tired of reading my long comments , whatever I try , I always end up writing such long things , will never get tired of praising your pen's & Ishveer's magic ! <3 <3

Edited by Katniss07 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey EH!!!
So sorry for late u know the reason...

Whhooo...
Surprise...
I was not expecting ur this update so soon...
Bt it was ljke cherry on the cake...
As 1st so early & 2nd an amazing update... 😛

Ishani & her tantrums when she got drunk...
She is so cute yaar.. 😊

Ranveer... what to say about this boy...
He has crossed all the limits of cuteness...
How can be someone so cute & adorable... 😳
(Why u & LM r behind to make me crazy for him by writing so much cute things about him...
LM was no less in update when he got drunk 😛 )

Read book for her...
Aww... so cute...
Now I have to come back to this world 😉

Ishani wears his clothes... 😆

Whole update was supperbb...

The way u described surroundings of mansion was too good... 👏

& i got ur meaning behind resisting herself from him...
last paragraph was...
I read it thrice... 😛 😉

I hope ishani will done her incomplete work soon... 😉
So sorry bt after reading ur last para... 😉

It was like a chocolate box yaar...
Too sweet... 😳

Thnx for pm...
Update soon...


Ps. I need ur help...
I want to read some book online...
So how can I read it or download it?
Do u have any link or idea about it...

Suggest me if u know some good books...
Like LM'S NC...
Bt plzz not dark ones... 😊
Edited by Lovemyself... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ShadikaIshVeer


Hey Elvish🤗🤗

I could give you biliion hugs for this but it wont be enough yaar🤗🤗🤗 You write so magically dear, and this update was nothing but a beautiful masterpiece , when u & LM write a book of your own I can only hope they will publish here as well or else I will threat you both to send copies😆😆

Coming to this magical update Gosh they way you started chapter was so beautiful❤️❤️ And Ranveer read for her favorite parts of Hobitt Can these two get anymore cuter?❤️❤️ And Ishani blushing and smiling when she heard about it was making me smile and giggle . Damn they are so in love , Elvish get them together and I want them to have cute babies soon🤣🤣

The way Ishani did not want the conversation to get finish between them , and how these two care for each other is simply beautiful written by you sweetie❤️❤️

And the last part was FREAKING AMAZING🤗 I dont have any words about it , just pretty please with sugar on top get them together

As always you have written so damn beautiful🤗🤗 Update soon 🤗

Loads of love
MM❤️❤️

Ps.I am still waiting to when they have a football team of their own🤣



Hi, MM. So sorry it took me this long to come back. With another FF now having started it's become hell of a job to balance between both. But thank you so much! 🤗🤗

Books, hmm. I'm also waiting for LM's book. About mine, I'm still unsure, so...

It seems quite unlikely that Ranveer would have read something like that to her, no? He could've done so when they were friends, but NOW it seems bit hard. Oh, that was why Ishani herself was surprised that he'd read something her her favorite parts last night.

They'll have babies too. But they'd have to marry first. 😳 😳 Haha.

They care more about each other than about themselves, isn't it? Let her know he was in some sort of trouble, Ishani madam will have forgotten all about her own and same goes for him which is always proved in one way or another.

They'll get together too, just for a little more while.

Thank you so much, darling. I'll be updating the next chapter quite soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

Okay seriously, what are you made of, girl?

You are a magic box, you know that, right? Every time you say that you're afraid before posting a chapter, I know that there must be nothing short of a treat in wait for me, and you've never disappointed me even once. This chapter has just been a treat for me (and sufficient motivation to get my lazy ass back to completing my next update as well, I guess)
Enough blabbering on my part now and let's get to the review. I'm kinda short on words as to what to say because I've loved every part of this chapter. Be it the stunning way you've described the sunrise (well, you find different ways to describe the same thing with a beauty unparalled) or whether it be Ishaani finding out about her drunken antics with Ranveer last night, I've been halfway between laughing and drooling upon her.
The Hobbit! Ha! And Ranveer read out all her favourite parts from the book to her? Could he be anymore adorable and droolworthy? Again, the two of us have such similar thinking, it surprises me at times (I was going to mention something like this in the upcoming epistles too). And then there's Emily... I like her. She gives me a very warm vibe.
So Ranveer and Ishaani meet at the dining table and the former manages to run away without any satisfactory food (or even sleep, for that concern), and Ishaani was made to eat on his behalf too. Okay, two minutes out again to drool upon how much Ishaani reveres him (yes, she does. She's head over heels in love with him!)
Ranveer comes back home in the night and they have dinner together, have a decent conversation, and the ending at the porch was nothing short of my sweetest of dreams. <3 <3 So Ishaani had to sign Chirag's bail papers in exchange for the truth? That scumbag! Damn it! I can only imagine how exasperated Ranveer must have felt. But here again, he makes me go dewy-eyes at his loyalty and love for her.
Ishaani watched him fall asleep and was seized by the urge to kiss him. OH. MY. GOD. Seriosuly, now I don't know whether to drool upon the sleeping-Ranveer, the madly-in-love-Ishaani or upon your gorgeous piece of writing? Seriously, there's something about this chapter that's really caught my fancy. Okay, now I'm just stupid talking like I'm high, but still I hope you make sense of my review.
Brilliant job on the update, darling! Do keep churning out beauties like this and update the next one quickly! :D :D
Love,
LM
Ps. I might even edit this further if I think I've missed out on something. Also, I'll post the emos later.



Thank you, LM! 🤗🤗

Sighs! Thank you again (I need to stop saying thank you, otherwise the whole reply will have that thing only 😛😛 ).

Ranveer's adorableness, I wonder, if he's like a chocolate. I don't know why, but that's the word that came to my mind when writing this chapter. Chocolate. And now, you've again reminded me of those nuclear bombs. I swear I'll definitely be dropping one on you for giving these tiny hints about the future Epistles and then going into the hiding. Get ready. 😳 😳

I like Emily too, and she might appear in the future chapters as well and I kind of wonder if she should've been mentioned in the previous updates too. Sigh. But better late than never (slightly wrong one, but I don't remember another one right now).

Ranveer's tantrums are quite shabby at times. His mom would have better treatment for him (the same thing he tells Ishani xD). And he's that mahaan praani as well, so what to say about him. SMH. And yes, poor Ishani was made to eat on his behalf as well. At least that's what she herself would say. Ishani loves him, revers him and what not. She's having those weird sort of fantasies too. *coughs*

How else would Chirag have spilled the beans otherwise if there was no condition? Though it did crack me up how proudly and coolly he talks to the police officer. 😆 😆

Hehe. Thank you on that too. I personally drool over the madly-in-love-Ishani. She's adorable to write. Drooling over Ranveer isn't new, to be honest. I always do so in the show, and in the FFs. The last scene was again one of those my oldest of the planning that finally managed to make its way into the chapter at the most right time. Ishani is more comfortable in any kind of physical contact with him than he is. He'd think he's crossing his limits, whereas she is all okay with him in that (remember, she was the one who'd initiated their first kiss too?).

Thank you once again, mate. 🤗🤗 I'll try updating it soon. :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Okay I need to stop blushing my cheeks are paining I mean girl see what you did
Each and everything about this chapter is so serene so beautiful that I am short of words to describe it for this chapter u definitely deserve a standing ovation can it get beautiful than this 👏 👏
Starting from ishani waking up to sleeping again at porch everything was so lovely
She made him read book I mean I am dilemma whether to drool over ranveer for doing whatever stupidity she demands or on ishani she is seriously so adorable when drunk
OK I thought how come she changed in new clothes well this was the overenthusiastical ishani who can even turn into a superwoman when drunk
So boy left and the way ishani came behind to watch him gave me a feeling like they are married and are living in mansion even she Waiting for him for dinner was so much like that m sorry I know that was too much to dream
Ranveer he is becoming a daring part I mean otherwise touching ishani was so much a sin for him
This ranveer is so lovely droolworthy adorable and what not
Is ranveer mad he don't know or what ishani now need his presence to sleep
O God urge to kiss I read this line two times and made me realise how much head over heels she is in love with him now when she is going to confess that
Well that last scene was like a beautiful pure soulfull love story novel am reading
I was so drowned in your magical writing that I forgot that chiru baba is a free bird now and next thing he ll do is to create problems for ishveer but I trust his antics that it ll make them more close to each other
Elvish I !must say that we are going to have two best writers with best selling novel I mean I can tell people later that look I read their work from start
U are so magical in expressing with your writing that I cannot tell you
U and LM take me another world with your writing
I ll agree with LM here that whenever you say that joota chappal I wish to through all confectionery and flowers on you of your choice
This was on time a total marvellous update I cannot say how much happy I am reading this update and now rushing to read it all over again
By d way ishani I in loose clothes will b drool worthy to watch
Kaki kaka is not there and dhikra is bringing bahurani
Sorry cannot use emoji but you can b assured that in this whole process I was smiling and my mom is having doubt on me bye



HI, dv! Thank you so much. ☺️☺️☺️

Yes, IshVeer are terribly adorable when they are completely themselves and when they're completely free of their worries. That's what happened here with them.

You now, another friend who is not on IF told me the same thing how IshVeer gave her the feeling of being a married couple. It wouldn't be a lie if I say somewhere I had intended for that feeling too to creep in which it did. So, my mission accomplished. 😃 😃

Ranveer daring, um, yes! Few things will be revealed in the upcoming chapters too that why Ranveer has become so daring to go close to her like that. Oh, yeah. Ranveer should definitely be aware that Ishani needs him by her side to even sleep now. She's kind of getting used to him in different ways and all she needs is his arms around her so that all her fears and can be chased away. ☺️☺️

Ishani is vampire as has been proved so many times in the show too. She kissed him once and now she wants another peck. Whew! 😳😳 Let poor Ranveer know what his Ishani now thinks of him, he'll definitely go mad of shocks and pleasant surprises. ❤️❤️❤️

Hehe, thank you again, dv.

Ishani in Ranveer's cloths would look more gorgeous, I assume. ☺️☺️
Kaka and Kaki left on the perfect time, no? When dikra and bahurani can spend some quality time together.



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