akya FF: i love you till 2xinfinity and beyond (Authors note no 2)

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Mehwish

@shanaya.oberoi

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

hi guys so i came up with this really weird love story concept i dont know if i should continue.its all fiction. this is just the prologue so after reading this please tell me if i should continue or not.

FF: I love you 2xinfinity and beyond.
Prologue

Akash Saluja: one of the best cricketer in the indian team he is batsman and entire India is crazy behind him.He only loves his Mom and grandma (beeji) and he hates his father. A dark past as made him really cold hearted but somewhere he has a soft corner.He is very rude to people even his fans.

Ananya Rawat: hails from a middle class family she wants to finish of her chemical engineering but cant afford it so she does part time jobs to pay her fees as her family cant afford it. She hates cricket to the core. ananya lives with her nani and her elder brother Shaurya since her parents died in a accident.

. Avantika Singhania: she is Akash's mother,she is a divorcee and she is really kind hearted and keeps forcing Akash to get married. She is the only person who can pacify Akash.

Vasundra Saluja: Akash's grandma she doesnt live with her own son as she doesnt support him she loves Akash and also only she can pacify Akash. Vasundra is one of the ladies Akash really loves including his mother.

Shaurya Rawat: his sister is the apple of his eye and he is trying to help his sister financially by working hard he is a struggling architect who is trying to support his family.

Harleen: ananya and shaurya"s nani sweet lady and really good friends with avantika.

so guys i dont know if you would like it please comment and tell me whether i should continue or no. and this is the first time im posting my story on this page so if anyone has already posted something with the same concept or title i really have no idea and havent tried to copy someones work. please do inform me of anything like that.

Index:
chapter 1-page 1
chapter 2 -page 1
chapter 3- page 1
chapter 4- page 3
Author's note- page4

Edited by shanaya.oberoi - 9 years ago

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luvakya

@luvakya

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Posted: 9 years ago

Amazing concept ... guess what? i love cricket and imagining Akash on the pitch is

please update soon ... vaise to i've no right to say that 😛

but please update soon

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Mehwish

@shanaya.oberoi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 1
The sun rays fall into a beautiful lady's room. she covers her face with the blanket but someone opens the window curtains even more, the lady says "kya hai akash please curtains math kholo".the man looks on with the smile on his face and moves towards the
lady who is none other than ananya. "kitna sogi c'mon get up " he says kissing her forehead. she gets up and responds to his kiss and hugs him "i love you Akash". he smiles and kisses her lips and they both share a passionate kiss. "tumhe yaad hum dono kaise mile the ananya ,main kitna khadoos tha thab tho main smile bhi nahi karta tha phir tum ayi aur tumhari wajha se maine zindagi ka matlab sikha i really love you ananya".
Ananya has a flashback as Akash gets ready to go for his practice.
(flashback)
"ananya beta jaldi se tayyar ho ja aaj tera woh interview hai na uss cricketer ke sat"." nani cricketer ke sat nahi uske kisi assistant ke sat hai pata nahi keh raha tha personal assistant ki job e liye interview hai, well i hope jo bhi hai bus mujhe job mil jaye. I really need this job to support my univerity fee. aur waise bhi unhone mujhe sirf ek saal ki scholarship di thi jo khatam hone ko hai.
saying this ananya left for the interview.
after reaching the office she saw a tall glass building which had the initials A.S. written on it. she entered the office and was told to wait for sometime by the receptionist.after some time she got called in and the interview went well and she was told to join after a week since Akash Saluja was out of town for a match.
while returning back home she thought to herself
"waise yeh crickt wicket mujhe bilkul nahi pasand pata nahi kaise kam karungi ek cricketer ke sat but i cant do anything because i really need this job aur upar se part time bhi hai kyunki mujhe din main kam karna padhega woh bhi 11 se 4 aur usse pehle college khatam karke sidha kaam pe.
In Kolkata
Akash gets a call from one of his clerks who tells him he chose a personal assistant for him who is suitable for this job.
he thinks to himself
"i hope ye baaki ki secretaries ki tarha na nikle jo sirf mere autograph ke liye join karti hai aur kaam karna nahi aata.Anyways mujhe kya hai meri life mein koyi nahi enter kar sakta.
saying this he takes out a photo from his pocket and burns it and says "har din apki photo jala tha hu tho bhout sukoon milta hai aisa lagta hai jo dard apne mujhe diya tha woh kam hota hai".
saying this he goes out to join the rest of his team for practice.

okay so here was my first chapter i hope you liked it and please do comment and tell me if anything is wrong. will update second chapter by tomorrow evening.

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Mehwish

@shanaya.oberoi

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 2
(a week later)
Akash had returned from Kolkata and it was also Ananya's first day at work.
in the office
one of the employees to another, "aaj office ka mohuol bhout garam sa hai,sir wapas arahe hain na isiliye". "haan yaar aur agar har chiz sahi nahi hogi tho you know na Akash sir ka gussa".
suddenly the door opens and a man in sunglasses and a navy blue tight fitted shirt which looks like it would rip of any minute because of his muscles and fit physique enters.
the entire female employees start staring at him and everyone else rushes to work.He walks past by everyone and enters his cabin.one of the employees takes some files and enters his cabin and says "sir yeh kuch files hai jo apko sign karni hai". Akash replies,"hmm... keep them here and tell me one thing woh nayi assistant kaha hai?''
the clerk replies" sir woh athi hogi she said she will be here by 11".
"its already 11:05 where is she you know i hate people who are late and i am very punctual".
On the other hand Ananya enters the office and quickly runs to the cabin as one of the employees tell her about how punctual Akash is with time. She knocks on the cabin door and waits for someone to respond."lagta hai wohi hai sir". Aakash says "call her in". th clerk opens the door and she enters and he leaves.
"so you are Ananya Rawat", Akash says. "yes sir " ananya replies.
"waise first day and you are late"."but sir its only 11:08". "so what Miss Rawat apko time 11:00 diya gaya tha hai na, to be frank i hate people who are not at all punctual and ap first day pe hi meri bad books main enter ho chuki hai"."sorry sir i'll take care of it next time". "i hate sorries and this should be the first and last time this ever happens. now get to work, yeh ek file hai iss me sari details fill kar dijeye".
saying this Akash and Ananya both get to their respective work.
and in her mind Ananya thought,
"pehla din hi hai aur iss cricketer main ithna attitude,pata nahi aage kya kya karna padega,kahi mujhse cricket na khilwana shuroo karde i already hate him"." Oh yeah by the way you only have 10 minutes to do that we have a lot of other work to do as well".
Ananya had almost finished everything and it was also time for her to leave, she walked upto Akash and said,"sir maine sara kaam kardiya hai so can i leave?''."not yet Miss Rawat i have other things to do i guess apko thodi der aur rukna padega"."but sir mujhe tho kaha tha ke 4 baje mera cut off time hai"." oh tho ab aap kaam e liye mana ar rahi hai, Miss Rawat let me remind you apne office kyun join kiya hai,meri P.A. banne ke liye yani main apse kisi bhi waqt kaam karwa sakta hu samjhi aap"."yes sir" ananya replied hesitantly. They both worked until they were the only ones left in the office and it was almost 10 at night and Ananya's brother and nani were getting worried. She had already called them and told them that she will be late since there is a lot of work pending.
it was almost 11:00
and Akash thought he had dragged it too far so he told her to return home. she went outside and was waiting for some Auto to come but they was no Auto to be seen anywhere and she had been waiting for almost half an hour and too top it all her phone ran out of battery which meant she couldnt call her brother and tell him to pick her up.
Ananya now started getting a bit scared because of hearing about incidents happening with girls at night. Suddenly a black car pssed by her and left.After 15 minutes it returned and the owner slided the windows and it turned out to be her boss Akash.
" tum abhi tak yaha kadhi wi kya kar rahi ho ghar nahi jana hai kya?". Ananya replied,"nahi sir woh main kisi Auto ka intezaar kar rahi thi". "listen meri car main ake betth jao main tumhe drop kar dunga". "no its ok sir main manage kar lungi". "listen Miss Rawat ithni raat ko apko koyi auto nahi milega so just get into the car i will drop you". Ananya hesistantly agreed as she herself knew she would never find an auto at this hour of night. Soon Akash had dropped her and she had reahed home safe and sound.her brother heard the noise of a car and had come out," itni raat hogayi ananya kaha thi tu?", "woh bhai mera phone dead hogaya aur auto nahi mila tho mere boss ne ghar chod diya". "chal thikhe andar aa, aur agli bar call kardena yeh pehle din boss ke sat ana mujhe acha nahi laga". "thikhe bhai pehle hi call kardungi". saying they both went inside th house.
(flashback ends)
Akash:"kya hua ananya kya soch rahi ho?"
Ananya: kuch nahi bas soch rahi thi humari pehli mulakaat kaisi thi jab tum mujhpe kitna hukm chala the the aur tum bhout rude the pehle din and you kept me up till 10 in the night aise kisi ladkiko raat bhar rakte hai kya?
Akash: ok ok ab mujhpe itni purani bat ka gussa nikalogi kya.
Ananya: waise tumne mujhe itni raat thak kyun rukwaye rakha,matlab tumhare iraade tho naik thee na?
Akash:uss waqt tho iraade mere naik the par abhi ka nahi pata mera kuch aur hi man karne ko kar raha hai.
saying this Akash moved toward Ananya.
and before Ananya could protest she was in his arms and no one could stop them from making love.

next chapter to be uploaded by tomorrow do comment guys. it really means a lot and gives me motivation.😉😛

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Tumpa12

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Posted: 9 years ago

superb one loved it thnx for pm cont soon

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Mehwish

@shanaya.oberoi

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 3

(Past)
Almost a month had passed and Ananya had been working with Akash constantly, she was there for him during his matches and even there for him to handle his office work.
One day in the afternoon Akash had a meeting scheduled with the sports board in his office.Everyone was on a lunch break except Ananya since she had to help
Akash out during the meeting.The meeting had already started and one of the member of the sports board didnt seem to have any good intentions towards Ananya even during the meeting he kept staring at her, and Akash had very well noticed all this and had ignored it thinking it would end since these people are leaving. Soon when all of them left this one board member had walked upto Ananya and started misbehaving with her since no one else was left in the conference room and Ananya was sorting out the files when this man entered.
Ananya: ji sir ap kuch bhul gaye kya?
man: haan, apko tho hum yahi bhool gaye.
Ananya: main kuch samjhi nahi
man:(moved towards Ananya) ap jaisi khubsoorat chiz ko hum kaise bhool sakte hai.
the man tried touching ananya and had pulled Ananya's dupatta, Ananya tried defending herself but had failed and the man had already held her tight and was about to kiss her,tears started flowing from ananya's eyes but suddenly a powerful hand had punched the man and he was bleeding,
the hand was none other than Akash's hand he had come to check on Ananya and when he saw the man he became really furious and had beat him up until Ananya stopped him.
man:Akash Saluja main tumhara career khatam kardunga you just wait and watch.
Akash: we will see that agar maine apki complain kardi na tho ap zindagi bhar naukri dhoond the reh jaoge . Now get out before i call the police.
the man had literally ran for his life.
Akash turned towards Ananya who was covering herself with her hands and was sobbing really badly, Akash picked her dupatta and handed it to her.
Akash: are you...ok?
Ananya grabbed the dupatta and covered herself.
Ananya:hmm.. i'm i'm ok sir , main...main..ka
Akash: its ok tum ek kaam karo aaj tum ghar jaldi chali jao i mean its a lot for today. main apne driver se keh ke tumhe drop kar wadeta hu.
Ananya agreed and was dropped back home.
At around 9 at night Akash calls Ananya,
Akash: hello Ananya
Ananya:hello sir
Akash: tum thik to ho na i mean i dont know aaj yeh sab kaise hogaya mujhe kuch galat pehle se hi laga tha..i guess i should have taken action before itself.
Ananya: no sir its ok aap ko todi na pata tha aisa kuch hoga.
Akash:hmm...woh ananya mujhe tumhe ek aur baat batani thi kal mera match hai Chandigarh main and main car se ja raha hu so will you be able to come?
Ananya: sir.. kya mujhe waha stay karna padega?
Akash: tumhe atleast 3 days stay karna padega.
Ananya: sir mujhe phir college main 3 din ki chutti ke liye apply karna padega.
Akash: tum college jathi ho?
Ananya: ji sir main chemical engineering kar rahi ho.
Akash:ohh...tho tum college student ho.
Ananya:yes sir.
Akash and Ananya had a really long talk and for the first time he had actually talked to some girl so politely.Ananya had also finally agreed to accompany him to Chandigarh.
This was the first time Akash had talked so openly with anyone that too a girl.
(Past ends)
Akash had planned a surprise date for Ananya.
Akash:Hello Ananya mera ek kaam karogi?
Ananya:tum jo kahoge main wo karongi.
Akash:ok..then listen main chahta hu ke aaj raat 7 baje ek meeting attend karni hai aur tumhe mujhe waha pe represent karna padega.
Ananya:ok then main pohuch jaongi lekin tum jaldi ajana.
Akash:ok bye
saying this Ananya started getting ready for the meeting.
Ananya's dress (http://www.santana.in/deepika-padukone-in-white-net-bollywood-replica-saree.html)
After some time Ananya left for the meeting
and kept waiting for the rest of the people it had almost been an hour and finally when she had no patience she called Akash and informed him that the people hadnt come for an hour and she was returning home when suddenly the lights of the restaurant went off.
Ananya started becoming a bit nervous and just wanted to leave but the door wont happen and even the restaurant staff had seemed to disappear when suddenly she felt a warm hand wrapping her waist and she understood who it could be.
she turned around to see none other than her own husband standing there who was looking devilishly handsome in a light blue blazer and a black t-shirt she turned around and hugged him he kissed her forehead and they both kissed each other. he whispered, "you look beautiful in white"
Ananya blushed a beetroot red.
Ananya tried to flee from Akash but he caught her pallu and pulled it towards himself she blushed and smiled,Akash bent down and left wet kisses on her stomache which send chills to her spine she couldnt take it anymore and hugged Akash.
Akash led her to a beautiful room decorated with rose petals and orchids.
Ananya looked towards Akash and her eyes were filled with tears Akash walked towards her and wiped her tears and carried her to the bed which had a white net covering it and it had rose petals scattered around it. Akash layed Ananya on the bed and stared at her,she looked like a divine goddess dressed in white. He bent down and gave her a peck and soon showered her face with kisses.He then tried to remove her sari but she escaped and he just stared at her like a fool. He removed his blazer and threw it and had an intense look on his face and walked towards ananya who had know way out since she was caged by Akash's strong hands.Akash removed her pallu and stroked his hand against her midrif which turned on Ananya even more. Ananya removed Akash's shirt and threw it and kissed his bare chest and then kissed his neck.Ananya slowly started walking towards the bed and hinted Akash to do the same.he followed her and soon lay on top of her and removed her blouse and made love with her for hours. Until both of them were tired.Akash then lay beside her and she was hugging Akash.He removed the tendrils of hair falling on her face and caressed her face lovingly and kissed her.
Akash: i really love you Ananya
Ananya: i Love you too Akash. kaise manage karlete ho mujhe ithna pyar karna. tumse acha life partner mujhe kabhi milhi nahi sakta.
Akash kissed her and they both spent hours talking until they fell asleep in each others embrace.

so guys here is the third chapter im trying to update regularly as most of the time i am free. Chapter 4 will be up today or by tomorrow. so do comment and tell me how it is.😉😛

Edited by shanaya.oberoi - 9 years ago