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So Flocks, here I present you the OS Contest Voting Round

Rules

* Do not create MID's and vote for your own entry,if found guilty,you will be disqualified
* Please Vote by hitting the "Like Button" .This is new style of voting,so please be careful in putting your vote,first read the OS and see if its appropriate to get a vote.
* For giving your review about your 3 voted OS for that you can use the comment option,otherwise you can just hit the like button.
*Do not hit "Like Button" for all OS's,hit "Like Button" for one OS,if you want to comment on other OS along with the voted ones then please mention in your comment separately by giving a heading like this.

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* Vote for 3 entries only .

* Last Date For Voting Is 18th April

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OS 1

The Day of Roses

Payal went out for shopping.She felt that there was a masked man who was following her.

She got scared:Who is this stalker?

That man went near her and gave her a white rose.She got scared.

Her hand shivered,yet she took it from him.He went away

PAYAL:I am confused.Why did he give me this white rose?

She walked forward thinking about this.

PAYAL:Why should I carry this white rose with me?This is given by a stranger.

She began to throw it.Suddenly a small boy came.

"Didi".

He gave her a pink rose.Payal was stunned.

PAYAL:Why you are also giving me rose?

He:One uncle told me to give this to you.

Payal was shocked:What?

He gave her a piece of paper.

Payal's eyes went through the paper.

"You got scared of me when I gave you the rose.That's why I entrusted this little boy to give the second rose to you".

PAYAL:My God!Why this stalker is giving me roses?

Payal went to a sweet shop.

PAYAL:I want halwa.

She bought halwa from there.

The middle aged man who was in the counter asked her showing her a yellow rose:Will you be my best friend?

She was shocked.Payal's mouth was opened in O' shape

PAYAL:Uncle,you want me to be your best friend?Do you think you are a teenager?

He was embarrassed.

He:Hey...these are not my words.One man gave this yellow rose to me and told me to give this to you.He only told me to say these words to you.

Payal could'nt believe it.

He:Take this yellow rose.That guy really wants your friendship.

Slowly she took the yellow rose from him.

She went to a park and sat there.

PAYAL:I want to see this stalker.That time itself I should have torn his mask.If so I could have seen his face.

Suddenly somebody threw a blue rose at her.She was shocked.

She looked around to find him.

PAYAL:He is here only.

But she could'nt doubt anyone in particular as all were busy playing in the park.

Payal was really tensed.

PAYAL:What is this guy upto?Why is he following me with roses?I have to tell Akash about this.But he must be busy with some meeting now.

She walked to her house.The post man came her way.

He:Hey...Mrs.Akash Singh Raizada!I was waiting for you.

PAYAL:Why?You want to give me any rose?I can't handle so many roses.

He did'nt understand anything:What are you saying Mrs.Akash Singh Raizada?There is a greeting card for you.I was coming to your house to give this to you.Luckily I saw you on the way.So I thought I will give it to you now itself.

Payal thought:Greeting?Who is there to send me greeting?My family member do not send greetings to anyone.Then who is there to greet me?What season's greeting is this?Is there any festival coming up?I can't recollect anything.

The post man gave her the greeting.

PAYAL:Thanks a lot.

He:Ok...I am going.

He went away.

She opened the post cover and saw the greeting.

It was a beautiful greeting which had the picture of roses.

PAYAL:Happy Rose day!

Automatically a smile appeared on her face.

But when she realized that sender's name is not written there her smile vanished.

PAYAL:This is sent by that stalker only.He gave me a lot of roses also.Why is he trying to celebrate Rose day with me?

She reached the house.She went straight to her room.

She was tensed:Oh God...what will I do?

Suddenly somebody extended red roses towards her.She turned back.

She was surprised to see Akash smiling at her.

PAYAL:Akash!

AKASH:Happy rose day.With this red rose in your hand you look beautiful.
She smiled.

PAYAL:How could i forgot that today is the first Rose day after our wedding.

AKASH:It's ok.I am there to remind you.

She smiled.

He whispered softly in her ears:I love you my pretty rose...

She blushed.She could feel his breath on her skin.

PAYAL:Akash...Happy rose day to you also.

Suddenly she remembered that stalker.

PAYAL:Akash...today a strange thing happened.

AKASH:Payal...before telling that you have a look at the pool room.

Payal:But listen to me first.It's very important.

AKASH:First you see what I have done for you.

Payal:Ok if you are that adamant.

He brought her to the pool room.She was surprised to see the room decorated with red roses.There was a red sofa also.

The pool was full of rose petals.

She could'nt believe her eyes.

PAYAL:Akash...

AKASH:This pool room gives us a lot of romantic memories.So I decided to celebrate our Rose day here.

She blushed.

Suddenly she had a doubt which made her stare at him.

PAYAL:Akash...is that stalker you?

He smiled nodding his head:Yes.

She was shocked:But why?You could've given me the roses directly.

AKASH:That won't give you any surprise.I wanted to surprise you with different colour roses on the Rose Day.What's the thrill if the roses are given to you directly?Good thing that you forgot that today is the Rose day.Otherwise i would not have been able to surprise you like this.

She smiled.

PAYAL:But the handwriting in the note was not yours.

AKASH:I knew that you will be able to identify my hand writing.So I made someone else write it.

She smiled.

AKASH:Let us begin our celebration.But before that...

He took her to the bed room and gave her a cover.

AKASH:Wear this dress and accessories.

She smiled.

He waited at the pool side.

She was surprised to see the dress which was decorated with roses.

The accessories were also full of artificial roses.

She wore that dress and accessories and went to the pool side holding red roses in her hand.

She looked hot.Akash was losing his control.He could'nt take his eyes off his Rose beauty.

He held her hand and led her to the red sofa.He sat there.She sat on his lap.They were very close to each other.

AKASH:You have the fragrance of rose.

She blushed.

Slowly they walked towards the pool side

He switched on the music player.

'Phool Maangoon Na Bahaar Maangoon
Main To Sanam Tera Pyaar Maangoon

Chain Maangoon Na Qaraar Maangoon
Main To Sanam Tera Pyaar Maangoon


Phool Maangoon Na Bahaar Maangoon...(Raja)..

They swayed to music.

While dancing both of them fell into the pool.They giggled seeing each other's faces covered with rose petals.

Purposefully he decorated her hair with rose petals.He removed the rose petals from her face.He smelled her skin which had the fragrance of rose.Their closeness made her feel special,after all she was Akash's Princess Rose .She closed her eyes feeling her Prince's romance.

He looked at her deeply.She blushed.

PAYAL:Why did you remove the rose petals from my face?At the same time you put rose petals on my wet hair.

AKASH:You look pretty when your hair is adorned with roses.But I don't like rose petals covering your face.Because your face itself is a beautiful fragrant petal my darling rose.

She blushed.

He touched her rosy cheeks.She closed her eyes feeling him.

AKASH:Your cheeks are pink like rose flowers.

He touched her lips.

She was mesmerized by his sensational touch.

AKASH:Your lips are like rose petals my beautiful rose

She was lost in him.He was already lost in his Princess Rose.

They went back to the bed room.She was surprised to see their bed decorated with red roses.

PAYAL:Akash...how was this possible?

AKASH:I had told my secretory to decorate this bed after we go to the pool room.

She smiled:This bed looks beautiful.

AKASH:We will make it more beautiful by using it.

She blushed.

They both jumped to the bed.

They both drowned in each other pouring rose petals at each other and tasting each other by adding the sweet cream of romance and love.


The End


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OS 2

Sathiya Ye Tune Kya Kiya

The lead actress of the serial Pavitra Bandhan's audition was conducted by the makers of the show.

The middle class girl Payal who wanted to make it big in the TV industry got a phone call from the production house.

"Miss Payal Gupta?You are selected as the heroine of our show Pavitra Bandhan'.

She jumped with excitement.

Payal:Thank you so much.

The popular actor Akash was already chosen as the lead actor of the show.

Location...
Payal comes out of the car in a black short top and jeans.Akash was surprised to see such a beautiful lady as the heroine.He had a special feeling towards her at the first sight itself.

The director introduced Payal to Akash.

"This is Payal".

Akash shook her hands:Hi Payal.

Payal was excited.

Payal:Akashji...I have seen your serials.I am a big fan of yours.

Akash smiled:I am happy that you are my fan.But don't call me Akashji.Call me Akash.

Payal smiled:You are so down to earth.

Akash smiled.

The director came and narrated the script to Akash.

"Akash...Payal will play your on screen brother Anuj's love interest".

Akash was sad that Payal is not his heroine,but Ankush's heroine .Ankush plays Akash's onscreen brother Anuj's character.He was upset to call her bhabhi during the shoot.

After 2 months...

Then comes a big twist in the serial as well in his life.In the serial Payal becomes a widow and Akash marries her.

Akash was very happy with the track.Because of the track he could play Payal's husband's character.But still thoughts about the future gave him tension.

He asked the director:How long will i be Aradhana's(Payal's on screen character) husband?I doubt whether like we usually see in other soaps,the dead husband will come back and Aradhana will go back to him.
The director laughed:Being the hero of our show,you should not see it as a normal stupid serial.Our show will be a pure love story of Veer and Aradhana.Aradhana will always be there with Veer.
Akash was really thrilled.But he was a bit upset about not having romantic scenes with Payal eventhough she is his wife.Because in the show Aradhana has not accepted Veer as her husband as she has not forgotten her ex-husband.

Months passed without no love.Akash was fed up.

But later they decided to make Aradhana fall in love with Akash .Because of the public demand.they plan to shoot their consummation scene.Akash was very happy.Akash was dreaming about it.But unfortuntely Payal refused to do it.The director forced her to do it,since its essential for the story.

Finally Payal said: I will do it..but only if all the people except the director ,Akash and camera man go out of the room.

The director agreed.Akash became happy.

Payal was very nervous.

AKASH:Payal...don't worry.I won't make you uncomfortable.

She smiled.

They started shooting the consummation scene.Akash touched her softly..Payal did'nt feel bad.In fact unknowingly she got lost in him.

Sathiya ye tune kya kiya beliya ye tune kya kiya..

Maine kiya tera intezar .itna karo na muje pyar

She thought:What is happening to me?Why I feel nice when I do romantic scene with Akash?

Sathiya ye tune kya kiya beliya ye tune kya kiya..

Maine kiya tera intezar .itna karo na muje pyar

After the take,the director clapped:Awesome...you guys have amazing chemistry.

Akash-Payal smiled.

Akash:I hope I didn't make you feel uncomfortable.
Payal:I should thank you Akash.Usually heroines feel uncomfortable with love scenes because of their co-stars.But you are different.Working with you is really comfortable.
Akash was very happy.

Sathiya ye tune kya kaha beliya ye tune kya kaha..

U na kabhi karma intezar.maine kiya hai tumse pyar
Akash-Payal pair became popular..They become very good friends too.

They sh0t for an intimate rain scene.

Both of them were living that sensuous rain scene.

Itni mohababt saha na sakunga..

Sach mani zinda raha na sakunga..

After reaching home Payal sat thinking about Akash's soft touch.
Payal's birthday party took place.
Akash:Happy birthday Payal.You look stunning.
She blushed:Thank you Akash.
He couldn't take his eyes off her.

Akash came with a beautiful pendant for her.
Payal with a surprise:Thank you so much.
She wore it.
AKASH:You look really beautiful now.

Payal blushed.

Tujko samloo ye mera zimma
Main hu to kya hai jane tamanna

Payal gives the first cake piece to Akash. He fed her back.

Ab jeena marana mera janam tere hath hai..
Maine kaha na sanam ..ab tu mere sath hai..


She thought:Akash has all the qualities of my dream hubby.He cares for me,he treats me like a princess though he is the Prince of TV.

To phir samhal..le me chala .. Jana kaha ..aa dil me aa


Star plus decided to shoot a Jodi special episode ...

Akash-Payal reached.

All the jodies of Star plus stood in a row.

The men were asked to drap saree on their partner's body.Payal was shy when Akash draped saree for her.Payal felt a special sensation passing through her body.

The jodies were asked to sing a song for each other.They sang looking at each other. They were very happy singing for each other.

Sathiya ye tune kya kiya beliya ye tune kya kiya..

Maine kiya tera intezar .itna karo na muje pyar(2)

Sathiya ye tune kya kaha beliya ye tune kya kaha..

U na kabhi karma intezar.maine kiya hai tumse pyar

Akash-Payal came together for the star parivar award show.

All the fans surrounded them for autograph.Akash-Payal won the favourite jodi award at the star parivaar award function.They received award together.

AKASH:Thank you Payal for being my best on screen partner.

She was very happy because though Akash acted with many actresses he admitted that she is his best heroine.

Dil ke chaman ka hasna to dekha Jagi nazar ka sapna to dekha..

Ese bane hum ek jaan ek dil tu hai ke main hu Kahena ho mushkil..

Payal:Thank you Akash.If you were not my hero,Veer-Aradhana's chemistry would not have been so great.

He smiled.

Chota basanti hai tu ..tan hai gulabi mera..

Do rang milen ke baad hote nahi hai juda..

Akash-Payal did a romantic dance at the function on the hit romantic track which is used in their show.People were jumping with joy when they were performing on the on the stage.

Sathiya ye tune kya kiya beliya ye tune kya kiya..

Maine kiya tera intezar .itna karo na muje pyar(2)

Sathiya ye tune kya kaha beliya ye tune kya kaha..

U na kabhi karma intezar.maine kiya hai tumse pyar.(2)


After the function...

AKASH:Payal...will you come with me for a dinner date?

She blushed:Sure.

To phir samhal..le me chala .. Jana kaha ..aa dil me aa

That night they both went to a restaurant for dinner.The whole hall was reserved for them as they needed privacy.

Akash :Payal,we are close friends.People have accepted us as a great couple.On zoom channel,they conducted a poll regarding which on screen Jodi the viewers want to be a real couple.We got 91 percent votes supporting our marriage and i also feel that we rock on screen.Why can't we rock offscreen too? I'm sure that we will make a good couple like Veer-Aradhana.Payal,will you marry me?
Sathiya ye tune kya kiya beliya ye tune kya kiya..
Maine kiya tera intezar .itna karo na muje pyar


Payal was surprised.She never expected it though she wanted it to be like this.

She couldn't control her happiness


PAYAL:Akash,i was waiting for this moment.I love you too Akash.


Sathiya ye tune kya kaha beliya ye tune kya kaha..
U na kabhi karma intezar.maine kiya hai tumse pyar


He was very happy.

They melted in each other's arms.

La..lla..lasathiya ye tune kya kiya beliya ye tune kya kaha..(Love).

The End

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OS 3

A Pleasant Surprise

Akash was really exhausted. He replayed all the events in his mind. Payal wearing high heels for him even when she was not comfortable with that and the way he scolded her. He was really stressed out with all the work in office, and he took out all the anger on her. He felt guilty. He felt bad.
Just as he entered his room, he saw Payal sitting in from of mirror. Her eyes were all red and swollen. But he observed that something was different. She was not wearing saree, but she was wearing chudidar with pink chunari which he had gifted her. 😳
He called her, "Payal".
She turned back. She advanced towards him. He could see that she was really angry. Before Akash can say anthing, he felt her lips against his. She kissed him passionately, expressing all her love and her anger. He was surprised, but he kissed her back. He hold her in his arms, her fingers running through his hair. 😳
Now he was placing soft kisses on her neck, when he heard her wisper, "I knew this would work. They do show it right in films."
He snapped back,"What?"
"Yes, I saw this in English movie which NK Bhai was watching yesterday. In that they had showed that hero and heroine had a huge fight and were really angry, but in that anger they kiss each other and all questions got their answers, all misunderstanding got clear within that one intense moment. So i just thought of trying it out.", Payal replied. 😆
"Huh?", Akash was shocked.
"Oh Payal, you always surprise me. This is what I love.. I love your innocence and simplicity. Nothing else matters to me. You have to understand this. I love you the way you are.. you don't have to change yourself for me. Never. Ok?", Akash explained his lovely wife. 😳
"And I am really sorry for being such a jerk. But I was really stressed out, so i said all that to you. I am very sorry Payal", Akash said guiltily.
"Koi baat nahi.. Bade bade desho me aisi chhoti chhoti baatein hoti rehti hai..", Payal said. 😛
(this is a dialouge from "Dilwale Dulhaniya Le jayenge" - Translation - Its ok. In big countries, such small small things happens.)
"Payal.. you know, watching movies and following them to such an extend is not good", Akash said winking with smirk on his face. 😉 Payal blushed and hid herself in his arms. and finally all the misunderstandigs got dissolved. 😳
The End

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OS 4

Ek Jaan Hai Bhale Duo Jism Ho Juda


"Akash , Akash ji get up " a girl said sitting up on the bed and opening the light . "Come on Akash Ji please get up it is urgent " she said as she shook the man sleeping at the side of her .

"Payal what happened yaar why are waking me up ?"asked Akash in a sleepy voice .

"I m not feeling sleepy at all ."

"What happened Payal , why is not sleep taking u ? "Asked he again as he sat up rubbing his eyes .

"How should I know Akash Ji ? Why are u acting so stupid ?" Payal asked in a irritated voice and frowned .

"I m acting stupid ? U are the one waking me up at ...two am "he said checking his watch , "and u say that I m stupid !"

"Okay I m stupid but I m not feeling sleepy u get it !"she said in an angry tone.

"Okay okay come on calm down . God your mood swings are increasing each day . Now tell me what do u want me to do " Akash said in a calm voice as he calmed his wife down .

"Okay Akash Ji , now I want u to ..."her eyes widened with excitement and Akash could see his wife happy and somewhat excited .

"Do not tell me that u want to have ice cream like in every typical movie" he said as he looked up at her now scared what would she ask for .

"I don want anything like that Akash Ji , I am not feeling sleepy so can we talk for a while please."

Though Akash did not wanted to , he accepted it , scared of her mood swings .
"But first I will have to make some coffee okay so that I can stay up . Do u want some ?"Akash asked Payal as he got off from the bed.

"Okay "Payal agreed as she waited patiently for him . Payal had not even yawned properly when he came back . She first thought that Akash Ji had dropped the idea of coffee but then seeing coffee mug in his hand she was surprised.

"Akash Ji so fast "she said in a surprised tone .

"Yeah now days I have got the practice of cooking fast " he replied winking at her .

He gave one cup to her and took a sip from his .
"Akash Ji this is so ... Great , "she said after taking a sip . "So now Akash Singh Raizada knows how to cook " she continued smiling at him .

"What can I do mrs Raizada from the time u are pregnant I have been doing all the household works "he said smiling broadly at her .

"And have actually improved in it " she said in a teasing tone and both of them burst into laughter .

"Do remember Akash Ji we used to be so shy .."Payal said after a long silence.
"Yeah I remember , our shyness and our little shy talks . " Akash replied smiling as he remembered their old days .

"If our baby ask what was our love story then what would we say .?"

Payal asked thinking about their soon to come baby's reaction if he /she would know how their parents were .

"Do not worry they would understand that the love that starts even from shyness and last for forever like their parents "he said as he took her hands in his .

"And my daughter would be smart enough to understand that "Akash said proudly .

"Daughter ?"Payal asked narrowing her eyes at him.

"Yes u don know my junior Payal is coming to this world soon . "

"Who said ? Not junior Payal but junior Akash is coming ,get it !"she demanded .

"Look dear daughter what non sense things your mother is assuming , saying that u r a son . Tell her that your are a girl just like her and your are daddy 's daughter "he said placing his hands on her five months baby bump.

"Daddy's daughter ? No !not at all !"Payal said as she took off his hands from her stomach.

"What do u mean by that ? The baby is a girl and she is my junior Payal , "He said in a firm tone.
Payal laughed and finally agreed with him . "Okay okay the baby is a girl"

There was a long silence .
Finally Akash broke the silence.
"Now can we sleep please , now the coffee has stopped working "he said and Payal nodded her head.

"Ummm... Akash Ji "Payal called out .

"What ?"

"Ummm will u do something ?"she asked.

"What ? "

"Umm actually I now wanna have ladoo so can we get some?"she asked in a sweet tone and her eyes showed clearly that she was guilty .

Akash signed and said ,"okay let's go , how can I deny u my Payu and my junior Payal ?"

Payal's eyes widened and she got off the bed quickly to change.
"I love you Akash Ji "she said as she followed him out of the room.

"Yeah I know that "he said proudly and both of them disappeared into the hallway.

...

THE END



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OS 5


Honeymoon In Paris

In the Airport(Paris)

Payal looks at her husband romantically "I am so happy Akash we have come for our honeymoon to Paris.wow limousine for us yippee"

Akash smiles " Don't be so happy now its self there are more surprises waiting for you jaan"

Payal : My cutie husband so much u planned for us right now then what will happen later

In the Hotel
Payal gets irritated "Shona you are just come from Delhi and you are stuck on your laptop .I guess I should have not brought the laptop along with me"

Akash replies innocently "Please jaan.1 imp project is there in Paris so that's I booked this as a honeymoon trip so sorry."

Payal makes a puppy face and was angry with him she went near the pool side and thinking when he do things what he has come here for she slept on the poolside recliner Akash came near and carried her on his bare arms to their room and placed her on the bed

Akash cupped her face and sorry love. I promise the next morning and remaining 2 days of our honeymoon I will shower you with surprises.

In the Morning

Payal gets up and sees a note it said come to the restaurant downshe gets ready arrives at the restaurant there was a seat booked for her she sat there

A waiter arrives and says to her " Maam her you go your breakfast ,and this a note please read it after you finish eating"

Payal was surprised and she read it and it said to come Paris plage the chauffer will drop you.Payal reaches the Paris Plage and gets a note along with a rose from a small boy and it said " To turn back " and she saw her darling husband

Payal ran into into his arms and hugged him "where you went I was missing you "Akash smirks "so fast you started missing me jaan come I will takle you to the yacht".

Akash(In the evening he blindfolded her eyes and took her to see the Eiffel tower )Jaan now you can open your eyes how is it...

Payal : Beautiful the lights on the tower gives a beautiful to it. It's really beautiful.

Akash : But not as beautiful as you are my chand(moon)so Payal says and not sweet like my honey...

In their Room

He again blindfold her eyes and puts clothes on her for it's a surprise and carries her to the poolside .he opens her eyes and she sees the pol decorated with rose petals and water candles

Akash : Go inside gently and step by step (he slowly removes some candles out so that they can romance properly)

The fountain in the pool started to recycle as it was on it gave a good ambience they romance in the pool

saanson ko saanson mein dhalne do zara
dheemi si dhadkan ko badhne do zara
lamhon ki guzarish hai yeh paas aa jaayen
hum.. hum tum..
tum.. hum tum..

aankhon mein humko utarne do zara
baahon mein humko pighalne do zara
lamhon ki guzarish hai ye paas aa jaayen
hum.. hum tum..
tum.. hum tum..

he again carries her on his arms and places her on the bed they both kiss each other they then kiss each on their cheeks and they both made love ...

After few months

At Rm

Payal was busy writing in her personal diary. Suddenly Arnav came fromm behind and going to have a look on it

Payal hesitates "Akashji what are you doing" (she was trying to hide da book by her dupatta in a haste) Akash replies "Why Payal ? Why can't I see what you are writing."

Payal replies "No,this is my personal diary and no one has a right to see it ".Akash gets irritated Payal,we discussed that we will share each and every secret and matter towards each other without hiding" Payal feels sad from inside and she tries to hide her feelings.

Payal smartly replies "Yes ,but this is my personal diary and personal diary sharing we didn't discuss to share about it" Akash gets angry "I am your husband dammit,I have a full right to know about you and get to know about you ". Payal innocently replies "But this is my personal diary".

Akash replies "FINE" and he leaves the room giving a angry glare at her. Payal's POV "I also don't like to make you angry on such silly topics but I did this because when your birthday comes then I will finish writing the last page of this diary and give as a gift to you and I am trying my best to finish the writing this diary as tomorrow is your birthday Akashji

At Payal Akash's Room

Akash freshen himself and comes out from the bathroom and sees the room decorated with roses and red candles and on the recliner a gift with a note "Happy Birthday Akashji and this gift is your patience sweet fruit "

Payal comes from the door and says " Open the gift Akashji " A sweet smile palys on to Akash face and he replies sweetly "Okay"

Akash opens the gift and sees a diary,and he becomes happy and says to Payal "This is the same diary,that you were trying to hide it from me"

Payal smiles Yes Akashji,in this diary it has the love story from the day we met to this day "Akash replies " To this day meaning ?" Payal indicates him to see the last page ,he looks at last page to just know what she has written at the ending and it says "Today is Akashji's birthday and today I am writing this last page and I am going to give this diary to him and also tell him on his special day that in our this love journey,a new chapter is going to add in,mine and Akashji's love mark " Akash looks at Payal's eyes deeply and his hears are waiting to hear that yes that weather is doubt is true or not " Payal takes his hand and places on her belly " Akashji what you are thinking is true,yes you are going to be a father " Akash kisses Payal on her forehead and hugs her and says "This is the world's best gift I ever received" .

"Really Akashji ","Yes its true"-Akash replies

The End


Edited by Barmeenluv - 9 years ago
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OS 6

Ek Jashn Nayi Zindagi Ka

Its a Monday morning and the sun rays woke up Payal, she seen the time and got surprised as the clock passed 8 o clock, she scrolled her eye balls towards the other side of the bed and noticed to see Akash wasn't there,Akash came from the bathroom wrapped with a towel.Payal was sad that she woke up a little late ,she hurried herself and went near Akash.

Payal : Akash, show let me select for you ,your suit. I don't know how I slept so much, usually I don't sleep so much. I am sorry Akash

Akash smiled at Payal and consoled her : Payal you don't need to be sorry, I can understand in this state,women tend to sleep more and by the way I have even asked Hari Prakash to get for you bed tea .

Payal smiled but still she wasn't satisfied, she selected the suit .Payal and Akash descended down the stairs and they sat on the dinning table for breakfast and Hari Prakash came next to her .

"Bhabhiji,here you go your breakfast" Payal smiled by the treatment that her family members are giving for her.After the breakfast Payal went near Akash : Akash,do you remember what's tomorrow . Akash tried to deny it and he said : Payal I guess tomorrow is a Jag rata of of a Goddess.

Payal felt sad : Hmm,it's ok.By the way Akash I will make for you ,your favorite food for lunch,I will send it with Hari Prakash later .Akash smiles, his smile hides a surprise in it for her later.

In AR Designs

Akash was busy thinking about the surprise for his lady love and how to make her feel happy, he neglected his work and told his younger brother Nk to his part of his work, as Nk sits idle all the time,Akash ordered his assistant to do as he says to plan the venue and make it a beautiful evening tomorrow.

The time had finally come when Akash surprise needs to be disclose in front of Payal,he covered her eyes with a cloth and took her slowly to the venue and be slowly opened her eyes .Payal witnessed to see a beautiful table for 2,a pool side view of their mansion was beautifully decorated .Akash planned it out in disguise so that she wasn't able to get a hint all thanks to Arnav Khushi.

Akash extended his hand : May I

Payal smiled and placed her hand on his ,he danced with her romantically,it was his and Payal's 3rd wedding anniversary,he swirled her around making careful to not to strain herself as she is 2 month pregnant and this stage is very crucial

Payal : Akash,you remembered our anniversary.

Akash : Yes,how can I forget the most beautiful moment of my life, when in my life a angel appeared and gave me all the happiness I needed,you are my first and my last love of my life Payal.

Payal smiled and hugged Akash,Akash hugged her back ,he took her hand and brought her to the dinning table and spent romantic candle light dinner with her .

Akash then gets romantic with Payal ,by singing her favorite song "Main Hoon Hero Tera" Payal is delighted by his song,her eyes bursted into tears of joy and happiness : Akash,you are my hero in every way,you are my everything. I love you Akash

He came closer to her,Payal's heart picked up a fast rate,Akash placed his hand on her waist, bringjng her more closer to him.

"Akash" Payal resisted and she tried to move and walk away, he stopped her and his tight hold brought her towards him "Shussh Payal,not a word more"

Akash caressed her face ,she blushed, he smooched and he pecked her on her forehead and then slowly carried her on his arms,and he placed her on their bed and their room was decorated beautifully with roses and candles, he slowly extended himself and parted her legs and got into her and he then kissed her belly and kissed her shoulder, he tugged her strand of her hairy behind her ear and they consummated thier love.

After few months

Payal gave birth to a baby girl,she was named Pari,an angel who changed their lifes and gave them a new beginning with the entrance of her coming into their life, their small little angel .

Akash carried his little princess and pecked her on her forehead and then he even kissed the mother of his angel on her cheeks and forehead showering all his love on her for giving him the precious gift to him.

Akash and Payal celebrated the joy of having a baby,a celebration of a new journey as parents and a celebration of the birth of a new life their Pari.


The End


Edited by Barmeenluv - 9 years ago
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OS 7





Flirting With My Boss

It was a busy morning, and everyone in AR designs are focussed on their new fashion event, the boss ASR calls in his personal assistant to his cabin and orders to the rest of the staff to not to disturb them as they have a important meeting they are attending.

A lady knocks at the door of a cabin of her boss,her boss husky tone says "Enter Ms" she enters and then with his request she closes the door and sits on the chair and facing the back of her Sir "Sir,is there any work for me that I am supposed to do!!" she asked simple question and her boss replied in a lusty tone "Ms Payal , you know your work beautifully right ,so go ahead "

Payal smirks "ASR,before that I am also employee and I am here for my profession".Akash Singh Raizada isn't satisfied with her answer and he turns himself and faces her,coming closer to her and stares at her "Being formal isnt bad,but I guess you have some other work with me Ms." Payal who knows his intentions slowly comes more closer to him and slowly unties his tie "ASR ,I know you are hungry that's why I have brought food and too hot " .

Akash smiles "Which food home food or home chick which is my employee Payal " he slowly unbuttons her blouse and she unties his shirt "Hmm,ASR I guess both, but your home chick has brought a sweet along with her but for that you need to satisfy your hunger" Payal smirks.

Payal goes next to Akash and pulls his collar,which brings Akash towards her, and she smooches him ,they enter into another world as their kiss makes them forget everything what's around.

Akash has no control over him ,Payal sits on the table with only her opened blouse and nothing down, Akash grabs her by her waist, and she brought him towards her by her leg,he carries her and places her on the recliner and then smooches her lips ,

"When I see you, I feel i am amazed by your beauty I feel like chasing you but when I sense your heart beats it gives me connection to love you ,I stay alive with your heart beats .I love you my sweetheart " says Akash ,Payal is over whelmed.

Payal surrendered herself to him,she felt heavenly with his touches,Akash was drowning himself in her and they consummated .

Payal then grabbed her clothes and her bra which layed on the ground and went to the washroom to change and she came out and drank a glass of water,she sat on the chair and gazed at her boss who was lying on the recliner naked with just putting on his boxers. Akash was concerned about her and went near her "Are you ok ,you look pale.Did I did it with too much force." Akash looks at her love bites on her hand and kisses it .

"I am ok ASR,it's just that I am feeling a bit weak ,smooches that we do everyday but consummation ,( Payal paused for a moment) it's been a long time since we had it ,remember during our honeymoon ,our shower romance and then that consummation in the bathroom that's our last consummation we ever did in our marriage life and now we gave it a try."

Akash holds her hand and calms her down "Mrs.ASR ,hmm I guess I am hungry now " Payal looks at his actions by saying he wants to have food .Payal opens the tiffin and Akash comes from the washroom changed back into his formals "So Mrs.ASR I mean my employee Payal ,what's there for lunch today my lady love ".

" Mr.Raizada today ,I have cooked your favourite Bendi Fry with hot chappatis " Akash then hints her about the sweet which had earlier said about .Payal bits her lips,Akash seen the way she was bitting her lips made him get romantic ,and he extended himself to place a wet kiss on her lips ,she resisted and pushed him away .

"Akash soon your employee will take a break from her job for 9 months" Akash was confused by her statement that wasn't clear to her ,Payal hinted him by going closer to him and taking him hand and placing it on her belly "Soon you will meet our Jr ASR " Payal smiles and looks at her hubby ,yes she is his wife Mrs.PSR and soon in their lives a Jr.ASR will enter.Akash was surprised and he accepted this surprise with so much of exceitment.

Akash comments on his wife's sweet statement "I shall put my favorite employee on leave right now itself as I can't wait to take care of home chick at home and warm my bed with your presence everyday ,these 9 months leave ,your boss is all yours all the time at your service".

Payal smirks " I always warm our bed everyday honey,everyday is like a leave for me as you are my boss and my hubby too and I can take leave any time as I wish,and I guess we did spend time each other every time be it in office or at home.Remember during board meetings you and I touch each other legs and get lost in each other ,being your personal assistant I am always called in your cabin and instead of office work,we do our romance work, when I have a problem with the virus in my PC,you take my hand and make me use the mouse and keyboard by your touch as a guidance those are the romantic moments."

"Yeah it so does" Akash swirled Payal around and started to dance as they were celebtating their love of being soon to be parents by a soft music romantic dance in his cabin.

Akash took half day leave from office and fulfilled all the pregnancy desires to have whatever she likes ,Akash pampered her alot and after some few months she gave birth to a baby girl and they live happy ever after

The End

Edited by Barmeenluv - 9 years ago
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all were very good
but if I have to choose NO 1. would be my fav
with NO 7 as a close 2nd
as for 3rd I liked OS NO 2
the reason I like these three OS the best is im a sucker for romance especially when the couples r just starting out or keeping their passion for each other rekindled ( I hope that makes sense)
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Edited by Heatsha8176 - 9 years ago
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#10
Wow lovely entries
Beautifully with written by all
I have voted for
I loved OS 4,OS 5 and OS 7 these are my favorite OSs lovely

Other OSs
I love even the First Entry ,Second entry, and the 3rd Entry also beautifully written mates

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