TwiNj 4Shot: 'Revenge Completed' Mature part4a page5. 8/5/16

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I am trying my hand at writing a 2shot for the first time. Not one of the best writers here on the forum so please bear with me. Apologies for the mistakes and if you found it boring. This has to do with the current track

Please note, the red sentences are simply Kunj's thoughts and the pink ones are Twinkle's thoughts. So here goes...


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It was just 10:30am and it seemed as if the clock hands were never moving at all. The constant ticking sound was up to par with its job, slowly infuriating and maddening Kunj with its every sound.

"Hmmph, this sucks. I'm not even half way through my classes yet I want to go home".

He was wrapped up in his thoughts that he completely blocked out his teacher's voice. Though he should've been listening and probably taking notes, his teacher's monotonous voice wasn't doing him any justice either. Kunj glanced over to Maya who was sitting behind him, unsurprised with the lack of enthusiasm on her face. History class was always boring, but today it was just extra, courtesy of his wife Twinkle.

"Why do we have to learn history. Why can't we learn Maths instead. Sex is similar to Maths. I mean, I add my bed first, then subtract our clothes, divide Twinkle's legs and then pray we don't multiply. If not Maths, then Physics should do just fine.

Even Richard Feynman accerts that "physics is like sex: sure, it may give some practical results, but that's not why we do it." Or biology.

Twinkle's XX chromosomes + My XY chromosomes= a baby. Don't judge me. It was Jenna Jameson who rightly said that "the best sex takes place in the mind first". Well thanks to Twinkle, I'll have to experience it mentally.


Just thus morning they got into a little altercation over Twinkle's inability to keep a promise. They were just completing their marital rituals and ended up being slightly tipsy. Maybe that was the reason why she couldn't remember what they almost did, and how many times they almost kissed. He believed that there was a possibility that she was pretending all this while and depriving him of his kiss. What Kunj did remember though was winning their little bet - the most important thing.

~~~ 2 hours later~~~

Class was officially dismissed and everyone left the classroom leaving him behind. Then in barged Twinkle with a smug look on her face. She had expected him to be angry with her, and when her gaze met his, she say the same expression present.

"Awww, there it is. The frustration is so evident on your face, but I want to trouble you a little more ".

"Here's your tiffin. Hmmn, you forgot to bring it with you this morning". No reply came from him.

"Perhaps this is the perfect time to get back at her, you know, settle the scores. Now Twinkle will know what it feels like."

"Here's your tiffin Kunj". Still no reply. Twinkle was now perflexed with his lack of response, but when he closed the door leaving both of them inside, an uneasiness began to settle inside her.

"Kunj, what are you doing? Aren't you going to answer me?", she asked. But still, he didn't open his mouth to talk. He opened it for a different reason, blowing softly along Twinkle's neck and ear.

"Kunj, ku..kunn. Kunj, D*mn it!!! Kuuu!!!!". Her sentence was cut off by what he had just done. Somehow, his hand had found its way under her dress and his fingers into her folds. Twinkle was literally caught off guard because she hadn't expected things to turn like this especially in this kind of setting.

"Gosh it feels so good. No, Twinkle you will not give in. Just run away and never look back."

Before she could even move, Kunj tightened his grip around her waist as if he didn't want her to go."

"Is he a mind reader now?"

"Try all you want Twinkle, but you will not move from here until the scores are settled."

"With that, his fingers intruded her body causing her to flinch at the pain. They were working magic down there making Twinkle go weak in her knees.



Part 1 - page 1
Part 2 - page 2
Part 3 - page 4
Part 4a - page 5
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Tranquility123 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Woah I did not see that coming 😳☺️


Dont know why you're doubting yourself, this was amazing! I'm still taken aback from how he did that to her at college. But I'm not complaining. I loved it.

Please continue soon.


P.S. The 'Completed' in your title is slightly misleading, I thought you completed both parts until I re-read the title and understood that you completed the first part only. Sigh. It's okay, I can wait. 😆


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tranquility123

Woah I did not see that coming 😳☺️


Dont know why you're doubting yourself, this was amazing! I'm still taken aback from how he did that to her at college. But I'm not complaining. I loved it.

Please continue soon.


P.S. The 'Completed' in your title is slightly misleading, I thought you completed both parts until I re-read the title and understood that you completed the first part only. Sigh. It's okay, I can wait. 😆


Thanks, I thought it sucked. My bad for the misleading title
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Posted: 9 years ago
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☺️☺️☺️ i think i just died!! 😆😆😆
and dont even doubt yourself about being a good writer!! this was REALLY REALLY good!! can't wait for the next part!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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👏👏👏
☺️☺️☺️

this and then yesterday's episode...
and well

I am dead...

cant wait for part two

cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Shakti...

☺️☺️☺️ i think i just died!! 😆😆😆

and dont even doubt yourself about being a good writer!! this was REALLY REALLY good!! can't wait for the next part!!

Thanks, and I'll take your word for it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: griffy.fz

👏👏👏

☺️☺️☺️

this and then yesterday's episode...
and well

I am dead...

cant wait for part two

cont soon

Part 2 will be up soon. However Kunj might end up slightly different .ie. vindictive
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Inkheart

Part 2 will be up soon. However Kunj might end up slightly different .ie. vindictive


😲

hawww..
but we get TWINJ romance😆😆


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: griffy.fz


😲

hawww..
but we get TWINJ romance😆😆


You can put it that way
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Inkheart

You can put it that way


even more excited!!!

plz pm me when u update!!
i loved yr writing style!!
😳

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