a new fresh story..........part 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
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😕😳as we know ridzy and angie have patched up and back to their original personalities😛 but then something bad is going to happen.......... sorry i wrote this very late..... diwali and such making me busy...😊

part 4

the next day

manchali is sitting in her bed getting very bored. ridzy comes back with her churidar😛

manchali : wow, tum kitna badal gayi kisi ladke ko impress karna hai kya?😆

ridzy: ( ignoring her) manchali decko maine jo tumhe barah bura kaha mujhe maaf kardo ( holding her ears, isn't she sweet😳)

manchali : thank you bhagwan ab apne mujhe acha doctor diya hai

ridzy : ( smiling at her joke) toh......

manchali : ha ha maine tumhe maaf kiya

they hug. ridzy feels really happy being her real self.

ridzy : chalo ab jaldi dava kalo

manchali : nahi. meethi nahin hain

ridzy : nahi, ache bache zid nahi karthe chalo chalo piyo.

manchali : mein koyi bachi nahi ho😆

ridzy : acha toh kya ho

manchali : abhi toh mein jawan hoon😆

armaan walks past as his pager rings.

armaan : chalo ab rounds per jana hai

armaan bumps into ridzy.

armaan : oh sorry maine........

( that tune comes when he normally looks at ridzy in dmg😳) he looks at her in her baby pink churidar😳 and what shocks him most that her hair is open!😆 and now that song comes ' ude jab jab zulfe teri '😕😆

he stares at her thinking she looks gorgeous and then he's distracted.

manchali : hi handsome😆

armann : kya?

manchali just laughs.

ridzy : koi baat nahi, tum toh rounds per ja rehe teh na

armaan completely forgot about that and leaves.

sapna gets a new patient her name is Mrs. Naina Garewal. sadly she had a car accident and her husband died and she was injured😭😭 they had just gone for their honeymoon and he died😭😭

she's kind of in a state of shock now.

sapna : aap kasi tabiyath hai apki ( giving her an injection)

naina says nothing and remembers the bitter momets of the accident

sapna tells the ward boy to shift her in the ward as she leaves to call the police ( because it was an accident)

she goes to the phone but then suddenly a very LOUD noise of the ambulance comes outside. everyone rushes outside and they are 3 people in critical condition. they were in a shopping center and part of the building fell down only 3 were injured.

they put them on the trollyes and rushed them in. ridzy put the injections on and the masks for all. armaan was checking heart rate. atul was getting the things ready just in case anything happened.

ridzy : oh mein bhulgayi woh mein cotton lekar aati hoon.

the goes in the lift and the just before the door closes armaan and dr. keerti come in too 😕

the door closes they go up but then suddenly the lift stops. the light goes off.................

dr. keerti : yeh kya.......

armaan : koyi baat nahi mein phone kartha hoon.

ridzy : jaldi karna patients ab bhi critical hain.

armaan : tum fikar na karo backi doctors bhi hain.............

he picks the phone but when he does the lights come on.

they quickly open the door and are terrified by what the saw.....................

wow i made this one more serious, but don't worry i'll try and put more comedy too😉

thanks do comment........😛

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mannyz_1 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😭 😭 😭
36 views no replies 😭 😭
pwincess kanzi thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i have not read part 1 so dnt know da stoy plz nxt tme said all da parts 2gether 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: mannyz_1

they quickly open the door and are terrified by what the saw.....................

ya it is interesting.... just keep on going... well, i wonder what terrified thing they saw.....😆😉 is it funny or sad????/

the pt is continue writing

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome dear do continue...and plz read my FF also

afifa 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: pwincess kanzi

i have not read part 1 so dnt know da stoy plz nxt tme said all da parts 2gether 😛

same here where r part 1 to 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
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kk what i will do is i'll write them again ok.
and basically the terrified thing is supposed to serious at first but then funny. 😃
you'll love it 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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good part..i think i read lik 2 part of this story before....is this thestory where ridz was behaving rude lik angie but really she is not tht kinda thing...and sapna falls for armaan...is this tht story...lol...i m reaading diefferennt ffs everytime and get messed up with the stories...i wonder wht they saw
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yes you got that right dhvanisoni ( sorry dunno your real name) 😊

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