The life time love.... IMP NOTE* on pg-28

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello peeps...😊😛
This is sushma... I think I know very less ppl here though am bit old member here... and now I wanna try my luck here in this ocean of epic works... I know am very very small fish here... but also please support me...

Yeah am starting ts which is yet to be named... and for this am motivated by many emerging writers of forum and my sweet friends... and am really very thankful to all my friends for inspiring me with their writing...
Bhavi di
preet di
payal didu( meri pyaari payaliya)😉
lakshmi akka
avika akka
Sherry
shagun(sonu)😳
ashu(gudiya)😳
tanu( chotu)😳
deeku
soru
muskan
and many more... please forgive me if I missed anyone..😊😳

And very important thing this my very first ts is dedicated to my two darlings... a very sweet persons in my life... my lovely sisters... priya n neetu...

Priya please forgive me if I did any mistakes knowingly unknowingly... I didn't mean to hurt you darling... you know you can give any punishment to me I will accept it whole heartedly but don't stop talking with me I can't take it pri...😭😭😭 so please accept this my very first writing to my very first friend sorry my jaan pri😳❤️

And now neetu... bachha.. meri sweet si sweetie her this is your welcome gift from your loving didu cum akka...😉😆
after a very long break please welcome back to the akdha dreamland our jodhakbar forum...
I missed you like hell baby... 😭 kabhi bhi aise gayab na huwa karo... Ok... and han its for you my bachha...🤗❤️
Please accept this... I know I am not the best like you... but also i tried my best...😊

Ok ok now end of my bak bak..😉😆
here is the teazr... please have look and give your sincere opinion... am waiting for your response friends...😳😊

The old lady was very hurt by her daughter in law's gesture... but she sighed out and got up from couch to go to her bedroom... because she was habituated to this kind of behavior from her egoistic arrogant dil...

An old man in his late 60s feeling terribly suffocating by witnessing this unjustified behavior of his dil with his beloved wife... He was feeling guilty by his senseless act , due to which right now his and his wife's life became hell in the hands of his own greedy n selfish, once his loving " dulare", son...

Hai friends here I made decision to make this ts in ss... so I could convey all feelings of all characters properly... if you have any problems with it please do inform me... and here is the index...

~:Index:~

Part 1: page 9
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4595877&PID=132586523&#p132586523

Part 2: page 21

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harshu27 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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congo sushi on ur new story...d concept seems diff and interesting...do continue soon... 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Update jaldi jaldi. Can't wait.😃
Concept is very different.⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ammijaan aap main bhi hunar chupe hain... Bataya nahi aap ne kabhi iss hunar ke baare main 😆
Now to story... Concept is different and little suspense wala... Update soon 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats sissy for ur first ts 😃
Interesting teaser 😃 Umm now what happened with their dulare son He's changed haina 😕
continue soon
thanks for pm hehe love you
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: maniwood

Ammijaan aap main bhi hunar chupe hain... Bataya nahi aap ne kabhi iss hunar ke baare main 😆

Now to story... Concept is different and little suspense wala... Update soon 😆

Haaain ami 😕 ??
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshu27

congo sushi on ur new story...d concept seems diff and interesting...do continue soon... 😃

thanks harshu di😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Update jaldi jaldi. Can't wait.😃

Concept is very different.⭐️

thanks stuti😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congratulation fr ur frst TS🥳🤗
concept is very interesting n diffrnt😃
waiting fr frst update...
update soon😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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han soru ham sabki ammijaan he😉😆

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