Abhigya OS - Rituals - Page 3

Originally posted by: -Tia-

Aww Rani, you dealt with Abhi's guilt and it finally coming out so well. So did your Pragya.

Was so happy Abhi knew something bad about Tannu at least here and of course that didn't sit well with him at all. Really liked how he thought about himself as a bad husband and could not resist bringing that up with Pragya. And Pragya was perfectly portrayed as how she saw the good in him and built on that. While the good she saw was about what he was to her family, it felt great to read how she felt free with him.

The ending moment was remarkable. It was positive and hopeful that showed how these could can actually make it in their married life.

Thank you very much for such a treat gift, Rani. Loved reading it. Feel good/heart feels stuff.

PS: Nutella and Indu Daasi!!😆🤗

Originally posted by: quirky_senorita

Awesome story.

Thank you!

Originally posted by: smala

Loved it.

Beautifully written.

Thank you!

Originally posted by: rbb1

Amazing story I like how he has finally realised that this marriage means so much to her, his questions and her answers were great

Originally posted by: MinMinMehra

Wow Rani!!! That was so beautiful!!! Loving how you explained the ritual and Abhi's feelings!! it was amazing!!!

The last line was simply beautiful...

And i'm a sucker for longer stories so I'm going to say it...what happens after???

Thanks MMM! What happens after...is a lot of awkwardness I guess! But the delicious kind 😳 I'm first going to write the next part of Vulnerable and then coming back maybe to this one.

Originally posted by: rutu83

what a lovely os!

if only abhi in the show had capabilities for this level of introspection and observation

Thank you Rutu! 😃I wish that too! I think he is slooowly showing more brains than before though, except not regarding the Tanu issue 😡

Originally posted by: MsTiara

AMAZING! 👏

Perfectly written & I loved to read the story in Abhi's POV

But... only a OS? Really? PLEASE write more chapters!

I'd love to read more!

Thank you Kate! I originally planned to leave it here but now based on popular demand I just might 😉

Originally posted by: kdsubs

Rani - this is absolutely beautiful. Will come back for a more detailed comment but just had to let you know - dil ko choo gaye aap aaj.

Thank you Kat! Will hold you up to that detailed comment you've promised!

Originally posted by: -Trishh-

Hayyye Rani!! This is a masterpiece!! The way that you crafted the story was brilliant!! Except I want more!! It's like you stopped at the climax!! Dil mange more lol!!

it is so awsm thanks for writing this rani

Amazing os. ..