SwaSan Engagement OS: The Ties that Bind

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virman_superhit

@virman_superhit

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Posted: 10 years ago

#121

Oh my god... Loved your os... It's written beautifully and with the expected reaction from Sanskaar... Thou I wish Sanskaar had reacted a bit more strongly in the show as well like in ur os... 😆 😆 ... But at least he spoke in ur story.. 😆 ...

Sanskaar and Swara.. Sweet... Dreamy couple... 😳 😳 ... Loved the shade of red... OMG.. M gonna faint... 😆 😆 .. Hahahaha... I am sure he meant by the red in her lipstick.. Lol... Not the saree.. 😆 ..

Loved their romance and the fact that family helped them in it.. Haha.. Love Uttara and Parineeta.. :).. Loved the Mauli part of the ring in ur story more.. There relation is so our and love the way u tied it to the episode where Swara had tied one to Sanskaar.. Beautiful.. 👏 👏 ... You are an awesome writer.. Love to read ur updates...

Please keep updating more os and stories... Love to read them.. Love the couple and it's sweet to read their stories when written so nicely and in a loving way..

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: virman_superhit
Oh my god... Loved your os... It's written beautifully and with the expected reaction from Sanskaar... Thou I wish Sanskaar had reacted a bit more strongly in the show as well like in ur os... 😆 😆 ... But at least he spoke in ur story.. 😆 ...

Sanskaar and Swara.. Sweet... Dreamy couple... 😳 😳 ... Loved the shade of red... OMG.. M gonna faint... 😆 😆 .. Hahahaha... I am sure he meant by the red in her lipstick.. Lol... Not the saree.. 😆 ..

Loved their romance and the fact that family helped them in it.. Haha.. Love Uttara and Parineeta.. :).. Loved the Mauli part of the ring in ur story more.. There relation is so our and love the way u tied it to the episode where Swara had tied one to Sanskaar.. Beautiful.. 👏 👏 ... You are an awesome writer.. Love to read ur updates...

Please keep updating more os and stories... Love to read them.. Love the couple and it's sweet to read their stories when written so nicely and in a loving way..

Thanks so very much dear. 🤗 🤗. You really made my Sunday evening with these lovely words. 😊

Yup I really wanted to show SwaSan dealing quite firmly, though politely (just about! 😉) with people like Urvashi, Dadi and Ragini, who would try to spoil their special day. After all, they have suffered so much angst and pain. They need their due share of unadulterated happiness and bliss now.

They really are a dreamy, magical couple right? 😳 I was in SwaSan dreamland when I wrote that scene, so as you can imagine, I was overjoyed that you loved reading it. 😉 Sanskaar meant her lipstick and her flushed cheeks. 😆 He just adores the deep red color on those. 😉

I really wanted to show Uttara and Parineeta supporting SwaSan and planning their reunion before the Sagai. At least they should help them, SwaSan need some support in that Mental mansion! 😉 The courtship period is such a memorable part of a couples life, and surely SwaSan must have been yearning for each other, every moment of those 7 days apart. 😳 At least Uttara and Pari Bhabhi understood this pining, and let them have those Previous moments together before the function began. ☺️

I really loved that mouli ring idea the moment I saw it on the SBB/SBS videos. I felt it was so symbolic, and symmetrical to the mouli daaga scene from the Dhanteras episode. In a way, it meant that the love, trust, faith and devotion between SwaSan had come full circle, enveloping the two of them in utter joy and bliss. I also wanted to show Swara telling Sanskaar in the present, the dialogue which he told her on Dhanteras, and Sanskaar to reply to her now with the same words she used back then. 😉 They are truly soulmates na...they complement and complete each other, they are two halves of a seamless whole after all.

Thanks again yaar for those warm words of appreciation, that you loved the way the SwaSan relationship was portrayed. As a huge SwaSan fan, that is a huge compliment for me. 🤗

Cheers

Viji

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#123

Superb!!👏

Awesome!! 😊

Amazing!! 😃

Beautiful!!😳

Lovely!!❤️

Viji , loved ur OS vry much!!!⭐️

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: Humnava
Superb!!👏
Awesome!! 😊

Amazing!! 😃

Beautiful!!😳

Lovely!!❤️

Viji , loved ur OS vry much!!!⭐️

Thanks so very much, Aheli sweetheart. 🤗 So happy to know that you loved this OS.

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#125

Hi dear .
I recently joined this forum.
You are also one of the reason that I opened this account.
Your username ...it attracted me ...Its a kind of unique and different .
BTW what does it mean ?
So I always wanted to read your works ,
But couldnt read as they were member's post ,
So now created account to read them ,
and this is the first os of yours that I have read,
And let me tell you , mindblowing , amazing ,brilliant , superb , these words are nothing to appreciate you.
I m actually speechless after reading this .
I m not even finding words to appreciate your talent.
I dont know my words will make justice to your writing or not ,
but I just wanted to let you know that you are too good , you are just amazing.
The way you have written , the way you have expressed swasan's emotions , the whole scenario is no less than a Wonder.
It was a magical update .
Loved every single bit of your OS.
I m sure u must have got many complements till now ,
but I just wanted to tell you that you have got one more fan in your fan list
and thats me .
Loved the role played by uttara and parineeta in getting swasan closer , together .
Loved swasan moments .
I m still amazed that how can someone describe this so much beautifully , with this much of purity in words
It was lovely reading this os .
Stay blessed and keep writing.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: Alvapriya
Hi dear .
I recently joined this forum.
You are also one of the reason that I opened this account.
Your username ...it attracted me ...Its a kind of unique and different .
BTW what does it mean ?
So I always wanted to read your works ,
But couldnt read as they were member's post ,
So now created account to read them ,
and this is the first os of yours that I have read,
And let me tell you , mindblowing , amazing ,brilliant , superb , these words are nothing to appreciate you.
I m actually speechless after reading this .
I m not even finding words to appreciate your talent.
I dont know my words will make justice to your writing or not ,
but I just wanted to let you know that you are too good , you are just amazing.
The way you have written , the way you have expressed swasan's emotions , the whole scenario is no less than a Wonder.
It was a magical update .
Loved every single bit of your OS.
I m sure u must have got many complements till now ,
but I just wanted to tell you that you have got one more fan in your fan list
and thats me .
Loved the role played by uttara and parineeta in getting swasan closer , together .
Loved swasan moments .
I m still amazed that how can someone describe this so much beautifully , with this much of purity in words
It was lovely reading this os .
Stay blessed and keep writing.

Hey dear 🤗

Thanks so very much for your comment. I'm very happy that you loved this OS. I'm Viji, BTW. Do I address you as Priya? Nice to "meet" you. 😊

Cogito Ergo Sum is part of a quote by Rene Descartes. It means "I think, therefore I am" 😊. The full quote is "Dubito Ergo Cogito, Cogito Ergo Sum": meaning "I doubt, therefore I think; I think, therefore I am". 😊 It's one of my favorite quotes actually, that's why I chose that as my username.

I feel really touched and blessed by your warm words about my writing. Really a pleasure to get such amazing feedback. As a huge SwaSan fan, I take it as a lovely compliment when someone tells me that I portrayed their emotions in a beautiful manner. Thanks so much for that, my dear.

I have written many more OS/2S/3S on SwaSan. They are all on my index. Link to my index is on my siggy, at the bottom of all my forum posts. Do read when time permits, and let me know what you thought. Would be a pleasure to have your feedback.

Lots of Love

Viji

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