CID Story: The Three Friends (My Shatir Lekhak Entry)

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Gamayun

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Posted: 9 years ago

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visrom

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Posted: 9 years ago

I've read this once...😉 Will read again and comment soon.

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bluetides

@bluetides

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Posted: 9 years ago

will read when I get chance btw what was the plot? 😆

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Gamayun

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bluetides
will read when I get chance btw what was the plot? 😆

It was plot 3. http://cid.setindia.com/contest/3-English-%20The%20Three%20Friends.pdf 😆

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rina

@Trinaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

Amazing story👏

Seriously i dont know how u guys could write so wonderful stories

I wish I could some inspiration from u all

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Nandini

@NandiniRaizadaa

Trailblazer

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Posted: 9 years ago

I was remembering the old times and was watching some old cases and saw your PM.

Will definitely read and comment 👍🏼

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

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Posted: 9 years ago

Sheryu... 😊

after Reading Plot I ve got why People did not take much Interest in this Contest...

U really started Story Nicely...👏👏

the Team division was Quite Good...😃👏

Somehow I m Really Shocking that after Scanning only 3 Months Records of College, CID got Everyone...😆

The Investigation was Good but Difficult to Understand yaar...😳😕

these ASHOKE and ANUJ really Confused Me alot...

I Like that CID does not Stopped One Murder...👏👏

BTW, I did not get that How CID Sure about All Thrice present at One Tracking Spot...😕😕

All and All a Nice Effort...😳👏👏

but yes, Missing SHERYU-Ness...😉😉

Thank you so much...😳😳

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

Read it once again.

I thought the story ended rather soon. I wonder if you had a 40 minute episode in mind when you wrote this. It was too straightforward...find the locations of the guys and catch them.

I wish it had some more twists and turns. The question as to who put the letter at Abhijeet's home was also a bit too simple...not really your usual standard. I know you are capable of much more thrills. 😊 Please don't mind. 😳

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Gamayun

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Posted: 9 years ago

GD and Vis di - I was never much pleased with this story either. The plots were not that great, so I did the best on that. Thank you for your feedback! 😃

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23Diya

@23Diya

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#10

Sorry for being so late. I was busy with exams and other stuffs.

The story was very nice.

The investigation was detailed and I enjoyed reading it very much.

The only doubt is how cid got to know that the guy was rusticated in the past three months only and not before that. Also, they were sure that Roy and Ashoke were in the same year ? 😉

The scene where daya and abhijeet shared glacss and acp understood what they were upto and scolded them was also nice.

Overall, I liked reading this story. Thanks for writing it. 😃