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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amidst all the SaGa separation spoilers, and Niru character being butchered.Jhanvi and Yash not being exposed. Honestly, I am not liking the way the story is progressing now. However I would have liked the plot to be like this:
1) Niru, arrives from Mumbai and gets to know about the sindoor kand of SaGa. In evening when they arrive, Niru request Gangaa to come to his study room. He tells Gangaa importance of having a sound career, and financial standing on her own, so it gives her the guts to pursue something on her own.
2) Since, Niru doesn't want SaGa to get married, and he knows Jhanvi's parents will make Sagar a good lawyer. He further request Gangaa to leave Sagar and make something out of herself.
3)Shattered, Sagar on knowing that Gangaa has left him forever. But he knows, she loves him. He tries to find her, but to no avail. Finally, under the pressure of his family he decides to get married to Jhanvi.
4)Somehow, during marriage ceremony, Yash is caught red handed with Jhanvi and their truth is spared in front of whole family. Finally, Niru also realizes he did something wrong with Gangaa by asking her to leave the house. Ammaji and Madhvi also develop a soft spot for Gangaa
5) Sagar starts missing Gangaa all the more. Though he is physically at home his heart is somewhere else.
6) Gradually time lapses,( I mean leap happens). Gangaa is a renowned lawyer back in Banaras fighting a case for one of her clients, with defence lawyer as Sagar and judge as Niranjan
7) The case progresses, Niru is impressed by Gangaa, Sagar health deteriorate further in just the name of Gangaa. He knows he can never have her back in life. Gangaa reboost Sagar health to normal where he should be.
8)That's when Ammaji and Madhvi come to ask for her hand for their son and Gangaa agrees.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice plot ..but I disagree with ur 4th point though i too want this to be happen like this,.I swear but but bu makers have to show the strong bond b/w saga and sagar loves gangaa more than anything else and he is the son of niru and once he decides.something then he remains firm and resolute on it and this time he is madly in love with gangaa that's why I don't think he will agree to.marry
But seriously I like your plot
U should become a writer
Oho what I'm saying ,I dont have any right to say this..but in a friendly ways I suggest.u this

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