HEARTBEAT -TWINJ- FF -Page 44- What is Love? Note page - 49 - Page 22

Originally posted by: frosty16

Hi, lovely story! Really enjoying reading it. You write so well, it's so interesting I'm hooked! :)

Not to be annoying but so eager to know when the next update will be?

Thanks- huge fan of your work :)

Originally posted by: griffy.fz

OMG after reading your comment.. my heartbeats paced.. I am so overwhelmed.. so happy and so glad to see how my story is reaching out to med students and I wished they would relate to it as I am myself a dental student..and here you are making my wish become true

I love how you have interpreted the story.. that's exactly what I have been trying to convey.. how people mix love and friendship... how a second chance or plan B like u said is the real thing!!

how we can move on from our messed up emotions to our real destiny!!

oh dear! you made my day.. I am so glad I could convey my emotions in the correct way !

Thank you soo much

🤗🤗

Cheers

Griffy

Originally posted by: 17.sonal

U r a Dental Students...OMG...

I am a Dentist... 🤣

Here We hav a Connection...

I am so happy To see Another Dentist Here. 🤗

Originally posted by: griffy.fz

OMG

I was a dental student!! now a dentist hehe😆😆😆

this is such a coincidence!!!

I am doing my happy dance at this moment😆

🤗🤗🤗

so happy to find u here too😳😃

Originally posted by: griffy.fz

<font color="#ff0066">I was left speechless after reading this comment... I took a day to find the right words to write a reply...</font>

<font color="#ff0066">I was myself a med student (dental to be precise) and some of the excerpts are from my collg as well (not the love part lol) I am soo soo glad that I found a reader who could connect with it personally.. I am amazed and overwhelmed! seriously..</font>

<font color="#ff0066">I am so honored!</font>

<font color="#ff0066">The library part is like so integral in a med student life! we spend half our collg life there..</font>

<font color="#ff0066">I wanted to show how connections are made there ...I am just so happy someone could relate with my story</font>

<font color="#ff0066">Thanks soo much for your beautiful comment! and for making my day.. I dont hv enough words to describe my happiness</font>

<font color="#ff0066">means a lot to me</font>

🤗🤗

<font color="#ff0066">cheers</font>

<font color="#ff0066">griffy</font>

Originally posted by: docritu99

Forgot to mention in earlier comment the title is also so apt.. I also write os and ff but I fail at is writing title..so hatts off..
Omg dentist.. M an MBBS doctor right now doing my bond and preparing for specialisation... Glad to see nerds here..
Yeah u r so right years change subjects change frnds change everything's changes what remains still is library(for med students).. My routine is library only..
Hey WHR r u from??
Commendable write up it is.. Do continue soon

Originally posted by: i rok

Great updatee...really cuteee how they are getting close...

Hey all I am so so sorry about the delay in update. I have been hell busy with assignments.. I have tried writing a long part to make up and will be updating next part by wednesday for sure!

Hope you all like it

Part 15

I always thought love was more pain... and how I never wanted to fall in love again..

Again? But then why this felt so new... so different .. so unique..

The truth is that love is beautiful when reciprocated ..

As we continued our paused.. awkward.. attempted ... conversations.. I could feel my heartbeats whispering a song...song of love...the heartbeats were content.. they were happy.. they knew that my heart had found the right place...

I tried stealing glances when he was busy looking at the crowd around but I guess his attempt to catch me was more successful than mine..

The butterflies in my stomach continued to their merry dance... ...as our shoulders continued to touch each other and neither of us attempting to break free... my heart sent waves of warmth across my body

Little was my world... and it all just wanted him and it all just needed him.. and it all just had him...

...

I caught glances of her now and then...she seemed at peace just like I was...

But I also wanted to carry this relation forward.. declare it to the whole world that she was mine and even before that... declare to her that she was mine ..

The hesitation of our conversation was fading off slowly... I knew I was at the right place.. I just wished I could look at her forever..

To me her love felt like a destination... like I had arrived at my final place of rest and nothing beyond this could cause me any trouble..

As her shoulder kept brushing into mine.. the tingling sensations in my body increased...

I wished to tell her all this.. I wished to speak my mind finally to her..

These conversations of my heart needed voice..

"Should we go to the beach?"

I knew it was almost sunset time.. I wanted to walk by the beach with her.. hold her hand maybe.. and I didn't realize I was already smiling

" You are already smiling without me answering "

For the first time I heard Twinkle giggle..

She looked so cute..Her eyes had already lightened up...

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I was giggling so hard.. after he asked me about going to beach... Eeven before I had replied... he started smiling dreamily..

He looked so cute that even if a nerve inside me wanted to say no.. could not..

As his smile had already swept my heart away..

Most of my friends had left

Chinki was dancing with Sunny...

I looked around..at how suddenly my small world now just comprised of him..

I did want to tell him all this..and the little hesitation I had was disappearing by the second..

I realized I was lifting the walls of isolation and they didn't even need effort with him..

It just felt so right..

He got up and gestured his hand to me

And this time I took it without a second thought..

And as I felt his touch I knew I was walking to my happy ending...

...

A part of me was relieved as she held my hand.. I remembered it had hurt quiet a lot last time.. when she had refused...

I realized .. I noticed emotions of mine which I had never acknowledged..

Twinkled had paved the door open to a whole different world for me..

I went out as Twinkle thanked everyone..The place was pretty empty now..

I was glad how readily she had agreed... I knew our relationship had already started and it didn't need words

But still I wanted to express my love to her..

Though I wanted it be perfect...

...

How many times I had wished to go for a walk with dhruv on the beach.. at sunset..

But my dream was crushed again and again and was eventually forgotten by me..

Thinking about Dhruv didn't cause me any emotions of pain or love to me.. instead they were blank..as if something had been erased..

As I got out of the house and I looked at him standing near the car.. eagerly waiting for me I knew each of my wishes ..dreams would be fulfilled now.. as I knew they were for the right person

He held the car door open for me...I smiled and got in

He sat on the driver's seat..

" Favourite song?"

" Agar tum saath ho..."

And he lowered his voice and said in almost a whisper..

" wo to main hoon hi"

I for sure blushed..I loved that song a lot... but I knew my emotions would be different when I would hear it now.. because yes I had someone with me..

I had him...

...

We reached the beach..

She got off and waited for me as I parked the car..

We went towards the water.. I tried to be close and yet maintain a distance.. I didn't want to do anything that would scare her off...

I just wanted to hold this moment forever...She looked even more beautiful in the light of the setting sun..

The winds were blowing her hairs away slowly and she was trying to keep them in place again and again..

Life is beautiful; I thought at how simple things could feel like a blessing sometimes...

She made life beautiful in the most simple way..

Like from the very first day.. her presence had a different effect on me.. I felt calm.. I felt peaceful...

I had always wished that when I fell in love.. life should become easier.. my problems would become insignificant and it is weird but I thought love was the solution to all..

If you have someone by your side through your good and bad.. wont life be easier?

Someone who would share your sorrows .. your pain and just hold your hand ...which would give you limitless strength to go through what your going...

one who would share the understanding of silence and appreciate you being honest to them

Maybe it would sound weird to others.. or maybe that I am expecting too much

But looking at Twinkle I felt.. I was at the right place.. if she understood my silence.. she would understand my other beliefs too.

As much as I knew her.. I knew she was a simple girl who didn't like to complicate things... in the little time I had spent with her ..she never fussed about anything...and that is the kind of girl I had wished for..

And My wish was coming true..

I wanted to hold her in my arms and look into her cute brown eyes... and say those beautiful words that would not be just be my declaration of love but also a promise... that I would stand by her no matter what...

I would understand her silence.. feel her pain and give her all the love I can...

I wanted to say everything and yet I was searching for words..

I wanted it all to sound right...

Suddenly Twinkle caught my hand...

She was about to fall and I quickly caught her..

She said a soft Thanks..

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As we walked beside each other.. somewhere my heart craved to hold his hand.. I wished I don't have to ever let go off him..I wished to wash away any pain that would find way to him..

I just wanted to take care of him and love him..

I knew my heartbeats had found their happy rhythm in his presence and the butterflies knew they were fluttering for the right person..

I wanted to tell it all to him.. even about Dhruv.. I didn't want anything to come in between us..

I knew I had found my destination and it was him..

My leg got stuck in the sand suddenly and I reached for his hand..

And even before I could balance myself.. his touch had already washed away my fear of falling..

"Shall we sit ?"

I asked him ...

He sat down and so did I

I looked at the sunset.. and remembered how many times I had sat here missing Dhruv.. pitying myself ... crying in loneliness.

But those memories felt distant now.. they felt a lifetime away..

All today I could feel his love washing over me..

His eager eyes wishing to be with me.. his cute attempts of finding the right words to say to me..or his silence which in spite of being wordless spoke the world to me..

It was like he had already made promises to stay by me...

"So... what do you most like about beaches?"

He asked in an eager tone.. like he had been wondering something and suddenly his mind had found the right words to start a conversation

" I like the sea.. it's calm but it can be ferocious when it wants.. I like the loyalty of the sun...it sets here leaving us but with promise of coming back the next day.. I like the sound of waves.. .. they leave a calming impact on me for some reason..."

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Twinkle kept on saying about what she liked about the sea... and the more she told me .. the more I knew she was the one..someone who could understand the meaning of nature..understand its language and how deeply she understood it.. convinced me further of she being the Miss Right.

Suddenly her phone rang..She immediately looked at the phone..and her expression changed to almost horror..

She picked up and whispered

"Dhruv? "

And somewhere my heartbeats started pacing on a different rhythm..

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Please comment and let me know how was the part.

Cheers

Griffy