Mannat Har Khushi Paane Ki: Episode Discussion Thread - 24
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Originally posted by: kusharberry
iam extremely sorry for the late reply dear
it is fabulous deari just loved itwow spending time at beachufff this haddi dhruv bhi nah wrong time manhope nothing happens to twinj relationshipplzzz do continue soon
Thanks again for all the amazing comments..means a lot to me..
Part 16
Her expression scared me too.. My heartbeats were giving a warning signal.. which I wanted to ignore..
Her troubled expression instantly caused me to want to drive away her fear..
But I decided not to do anything drastic..
She was listening intently to what this "DHRUV" guy was saying..
She had not looked up once towards me ...
I felt rejected.. aah silly me..
I was not one of those guys who could not bare their "girl" talking to another guy..
These multiple thoughts and the warning of heartbeats caused me to start getting up ..suddenly I felt that I was invading her space... for which my heart was calling me dumb but my mind had urged me to get up for some reason..
And she caught my hand..just at the right time..and I looked at her.. and her eyes said it all
They were pleading me to sit.. to stay...to be with her.. and well those eyes were enough for me..
I sat down.. expecting her to let go off my hand..but she did not... and her touch like always did wonders to my soul.. it was like purity had touched me and I forever could sit this way..
...
I looked at Dhuv's name and almost panicked.. and scared.. oh now Kunj is going to wonder why I look scared..
I will just pick it.. though I don't get why is he calling
"Hey twinkle Happy Birthday again"
And all I could say in reply was "Hmm"
Because my mind was full of how and what would Kunj be thinking.. I was suddenly scared .. too scared..
Scared to lose him.. I should have told him about Dhruv..
And suddenly he started getting up...
In reflex I caught his hand.. my fear overcoming my hesitation...
I looked at him and he understood like always..
Maybe I was over reacting..
But there was one thing I knew.. I didn't want to lose him
"Where are you Twinkle..?"
"Ummm I am.."
I realized that Kunj had also not tried to let go my hand.. in fact he had tightened his grip.. and I felt safe.. his touch ..his presence.. all made me secure.. like nothing could happen...but...
"I came to your place.. your friend was there saying you left...but she didn't know where...where are you roaming on your birthday?"
" At the beach..."
"With whom? I wanted to meet u ?"
"Umm"
"What umm? What's wrong with u.. U talked so nicely last night... now what happened? I thought all was cool"
I looked at Kunj .. he was staring into the almost set sun...
His grip still tight on my hand.. I just wanted to cut the phone.. and spend this moment with him..
I didn't want this moment to slip away..
Kunj appeared lost in thoughts... ...
" Dhruv.. I am with a friend.. Can we talk later?"
"Friend .. ahem ahem... ya boyfriend"
Dhruv said in his old teasing tone...
I almost giggled.. but before I could giggle more
he looked at me I saw an expression on Kunj's face I had not seen before.
... expression of jealousy and annoyance...
My heart almost took a leap...
He is jealous... lalalala..my heartbeats stupidly danced...
I had to shut my mind.. shut Dhruv but all I could think of was his jealous expression and how cute he looked...
He started loosening his grip .. but I held it tighter..I got scared
" Dhruv .. Bye..talk to u later "
I said in hurried voice.. and he understood because my voice now spoke of fear..
"Whats wrong?"
"Nothing "
Kunj said in a cold voice and still didn't look at me
"What happened?...Dhruv is an old friend.."
"Yeah alright.."
He said in a cold tone...
...
Why is she giggling.. ? What's soo funny..
I was feeling angry suddenly.. I was feeling jealous.. first of all she is talking to a guy while we are on a date ...
Date?? Seriously ??
I was too angry to laugh at my stupidity...
I started letting go her hand .. to which my heart was revolting...
She held on tighter...to which my heartbeats almost did merry dance...
My anger subsided a bit... I didn't look at her because I knew it would make me go soft...
She started explaining who dhruv was.. but I didn't feel like hearing
"Kunj..."
She sounded as if she was about to cry.. forgetting everything I looked at her
And all my anger .. subsided completely..
Her innocent face.. her scared eyes.. her trembling lips...
All forgotten I held her hand tight again...
"What happened?.. you need to go ? anything urgent"
I asked softly...
Her face immediately calmed down..on hearing my normal tone of voice...
"No ... he had come home to wish..."
"Oh okay..."
And we both fell silent..
I pondered on our unspoken bond.. our hands still tangled together..
All I really wanted to was to tell her how much she meant to me..
I didn't care who Dhruv was.. and I knew I had reacted stupidly... what if that hurt her? Or she would think I am possessive?.. What is she decides I am not her type..?
But her hand...her eyes.. her face spoke a different story...
For some reason I felt she was tensed.. and she was trying her best to fight it..
"Kunj.."
She said after a long pause...
...
I have to tell him.. before he finds out from anyone else.. I cant lose him..
"Kunj.. I need to tell something..."
"Yeah..."
He said in a concerned tone.. I think he understood I was tensed..
This unspeakable bond between us was beautiful..
But it as time I put my fears to rest so I can let this bond grow ...
"I have to tell you something..."
"Yeah.."
...
Is she going to propose? ... But she sounds tensed...
But what if she doesn't ?... Shouldn't I be the one telling her..That is why I had brought her here..
The sun had set completely.. and the moon had risen..
I wanted it to be special...
I was in a very confused state to understand anything...
And then my phone rang...
And I looked at it .. It was Riya.. I had been avoiding her calls..
Twinkle saw who was calling ...and to my surprise let go off my hand ... and started getting up..
I cut the phone and got up with her..
I reached for hand again to stop her..
She looked even more scared..
I realized tears were forming in her eyes...
"Twinkle! What happened?" I got scared..
In reflex I pulled her towards myself.. I wanted to hug her..
But she resisted..
"I need to tell u something...How do you know Riya?"
"Riya?.. Why??.. Well she is my cousin..but why??"
I asked inquisitively..
Twinkle didn't say anything.. but her fear increased..
My thoughts wandered to the possibility of Twinkle asking about Riya...after a series of thoughts that didn't seem to connect..
I remembered something suddenly
(6 years back...)
Riya was crying...
" he left me Kunj... I loved him so much .. Dhruv left me... for her"
...
Hope you all liked it...this ff is heading towards its endπ³π³ as much as sad I am to say this.. as this story is close to my heart... but I think I should end in 3-4 chapters..
what are your views??
Do comment /like.. means the world to me
Thanks
Cheers
Griffy
Originally posted by: kusharberry
wow awesome update dear
i loved it very muchnow this chudail riya will seperate twinj ia hate this dhruv and riya haddishope kunj wonn't misunderstand twinkleplzzz do continue soonthanks for the pm dear
Originally posted by: griffy.fz
hahah HAddisπππnice word lolthanks soo much... u read it so quickly means soo much to meππ³
Originally posted by: priyanvs
awesome update dear
loved itand kunj is jealous aww.. so sweetbut dhruv left riya for twinkle what is this twist noweagerly waiting for ur next update