My love will heal you (manan)...... Chapter 16 pg17 ....05/05

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi everyone this is my first ever attempt to write something and i am nit a writer so it might not be good i have read lot of stories here so thought to write something so here it goes

Intro

Aaj 6 saal hogye tumhe gye huye pr aaj bhi voh tumhe bhula nhi.Aaj bhi usse lgta h k ek din tum wapas zaroor aaugi. Pr tum toh vaha chli gyi jaha se koi chah k bhi wapas nhi aa skta.Mera dost jo kbhi kisi k liye nhi roya aaj hsna bhool gya h. Vada kiya tha tumse usska khyal rkhne ka pr tumhre jaane k baad toh jaise voh jeena hi bhul gya. Tum toh sb dekh rhi ho na tum wapas toh nhi aaskti pr usk jeene ki koi vjha toh bhj skti ho


Kaisa lga ?? Waise toh i will continue even if no one likes it because i am writting this for myself but still let me know if what do you think

Buddy me for PM.

Love
R


Index
Chapter 1...pg 1
Chapter 2...pg 2
Chapter 3...pg 2
Chapter 4...pg 3
Chapter 5A,B.pg 4
Chapter 6A...pg 4
Chapter 6B...pg 5
Chapter 7...pg 6
Chapter 8...pg 7
Chapter 9...pg 8
Chapter 10...pg 9
Chapter 11...pg 11
Chapter 12...pg 13
Chapter 13...pg 13
Chapter 14...pg 14
Chapter 15... Pg 17
Chapter 16... Pg 17
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sounds interesting...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#3
Teaser 2

So finally after 20 years I am here in India. I am super excited this is my first trip to india and i hope it turns out to be good. I was going thru my stuff when I remembered HIM . I saw HIM at the airport and he was looking so hot i just couldnt move my eyes from HIM but tere was something wrong with him , his smile it was fake . I wonder why

So aaj k liye itna hi . I know itna acha nhi h as i said i am not a writer and this is my first ever attempt . Anyways let me know if you like it .

Love
R
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 1

As the sun rises you see a guy sitting in a dark room With a frame in his hand and tears in his eyes, he is begging someone to come back. "Kyun chli gyi tum please please wapas aajao" .

Aaj fir usk room se usk rone ki awaaz aarhi thi 6 saal hogya h pr ek din aisa nhi h jb voh roya na ho tumhre liye . Kash main uska dhuk kch km kr skta pr voh toh humre saamne apne emotions ache se chupa leta h pr usse nhi pta uski aankhen kch nhi chupa paati.You can see the DARKNESS in his eyes and i am waiting for the day when someone would come and drag him away from this darkness.Aur yhi sochte sochte I called HIM for breakfast.

Main roz ki trha tumhri photo se baat kr rha tha k achank Cabir called me for breakfast and it was time to put a smile on my face and show my friends that I am fine as they are always worried for me from past 6 years.

Main niche aa hi rha tha when I heard them fighting.Aur kaun Cabir and Navya as always after each others life
Cabir: Navya ye kya h tumhe pta h na mjhe subhe aloo k paranthe chahiye hote h
Navya: roz roz aloo kha kha k aloo hi bnte jaa rhe ho . Nhi h ghr mei aloo chup chaap jo bna h kha lo .
And cabir had no choice but to follow her order.

I started having my breakfast without paying any attention to there fight as it was roz ka natak and in few min they would be fine.I still remember when cabir first met navya . They had fallen for each other the moment they saw each other and have been inseparable from then . They are getting married soon and I am happy for them.Navya is like my sister and 6 years back they both shifted with me at my mansion to take care of me.

I was busy in my own thoughts when i heard cabir calling me 'Manik chl yaar office nhi jaana kya ' .


So here is the first chapter . So cabor and navya are engaged . Something happned to manik and he has stopped living his life . So what actually happened 6 years back And will someone be able to drag manik from his darkness . Stay tuned to knoe more . And let me know how was it

Manik is a business tycoon and runs his family business . His dad and mom lives in London and loves him a lot they know what happened 6 years back and are worried for him but Manik has asked them toh stay in london and not to worry for him. He also owns a fashion company with Cabir.something happend 6 years back that has changed him and he is not the carefree manik anymore

Cabir runs the fashion company owned by him and manik. he is the ceo while manik helps him whenever Cabir needs him as he is busy with his family business as well. Cabir is trying to bring his old manik back and is worried for him. Loves Navya a lot and soon going to marry her.

Navya is a sweet and simple girl. She is a trust fund baby and has no one excpt for Cabir and Manik. She has done fashion designing and helps Cabir in his company. She has done her fashion course from Denmark and met cabir at the airport when she was coming back from DK . Loves him a lot and consider manik as his brother.

Other charactes would be introduced as the story progress.

Love
R


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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
Hey guys lgta h kisiko ko story zyda pasand nhi aayi. Not even a single comment 😭 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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No No its awesome...
Waiting eagerly to see what has happened...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 2

While here Manik was getting ready for office, In another part of the world the sun was rising and spreading it's light.

You see a girl welcoming the sun with a beautiful smile . She was busy admiring the sun rise when suddenly someone called her.

Aayi bhabhi uff main bhi na firse late ho gyi .Aaj fir bhabhi se daat khani pregi . Main niche pohchi hi thi k meri pyaari bhabhi shuru hogyi. She was scolding me as always and I was just standing there pretending to listen . Dont get me wrong I love her a lot. She is my best friend.

She was busy scolding me when bhai came to my rescue. 'Mukti bs bhi kro yaar kitna daatogi isko ek mahine k liye jaa rhi h ye toh iska mtlb ye todi tum uss ka qota bhi aaj hi pura kr logi'
Bhabhi gave bhai a deadly glare aur bhai chup. Mujhe pta h Abhi, ye ja rhi h isliye hi smjha rhi hu vaha hum dono nhi honge iski help krne k liye.

I know she is worried pehli baar hum kahin akele ja rhe h Nd she loves us a lot isliye aaj toda zyda daat diya pr hume toh jaana hi hoga . Btw hum mtlb main aur rishu. Rishu as in rishabh my baby brother. Usk treatment k liye I am going toh INDIA for the first time.

I was again lost in my thoughts when bhabhi again started yelling 'Nandu late ho jyga jldi kr breakfast , flight miss na ho jaaye dekh rishu kbse ready hai'. Aree apna intro toh dena main bhul hi gyi main Nandu as in Nandini Murthy currently living in Denmark and I am excited for my first ever trip to India.

So here goes the next chapter. So nandini ki entry toh hogyi ab aage kya hoga jaane k liye yaha bne rhiye
Let me know how is it . Itni kanjoosi q h comments ki bhailog.i knoe manan k scenes abhi nhi h pr story k liye ye sb zaruri h to few chapter would be basically introducing all the characters.

Here goes intro of few more characters
Nandini a carefree and lively girl. She is modern and happy go lucky kinda person.Lives in Denmark, a fashion designer and loves her family a lot. Her mom and dad died few years back but she has learned to live happily. Moving to india for her brothers treatment.

Mukti is married to Abhimanyu and is nandini's bhabhi and best friend. She loves her family a lot . A very kind and emotional kind of person she is a doctor by profession

Abhimanyu Nandini's elder brother, married to Mukti. He is also a doctor . Loves his family a lot. He handles his family hospital with help of Mukti .

Rishabh is nandini's and abhi's lil brother. Being the younger one he is pampered a lot. Loves nandini a lot and takes care of her as if he is the older one . He can speak lil bit after some treatment in Dk but for some bettr therapy he has to go to India .

Baaki character ka intro in coming chapters
I want a name for manik and cabir fashion company any suggestions?

Love
R


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesum concept waiting to know wat happened 6 yrs back update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Read all d updates in a go...
Must say both r awesome...
Wanna know wat hppnd 6 yrs back wid manik???
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Guys suggest me some name for cabir and manik fashion company I have written the next chapter but i am not able to come up with the compny name please suggest something and will update the part soon.

Love
R
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