Just read all three chapters...phenomenal read..i love the simplicity and the realistic feel to the way you have told the story. I agree that what Shriven does is wrong, but in some way its the KID in him the hurt kid that wants the revenge...not the rational man he is today. I agree that how Sumo treated him was wrong...just to maintain an image...and you are right...Karma is a B***h...it hurts when its our turn! Looking forward to Shravan's growth and realization that what he thought he wanted in his zeal for revenge is not what he really wanted or can abide by. Lets see how he does redeem himself. 😛
Nice update dude! You showed Shravan's side and his past experiences and hurt really well. I agree Sumo was kind of a jerk back then, though she was young but no one should behave like that with a dear friend. Waiting to see how you take this forward. Good going girl. Keep writing!
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