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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello guys m back.
Okay? Okay.
Another SS for all my friends.
Hope you all will like it.
Plzz do like and comment.
Chappals and all are also welcome.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Introduction.
Ishita:A dentist , Loves children alot , Beautiful , Caring.
Raman:CEO of bhallah industry , Handsome, Sweet , Caring , Also loves children.
Shagun: Raman's Sister , Loves him alot.
Ashok:Raman's BIL and Shugun's husband.
Ruhi:Shagun and ashok's daughter.
Mihir:Raman's brother and Crime partner.
Mihika:Ishita's Bestie and Cousin , GF of mihir.
Abimanuy:Ishita's Big brother loves her sis alot.
Simmi:Wife of Abimanuy.
Adi:Abimanuy's son.
Mr and Mrs Bhallah: Parents of Raman, Shagun and mihir.
Mr and Mrs Iyer: Parents of Ishita and sholk.

Ishita(RED)
Raman(BLUE)
Mihir(GREEN)
Mihika(PINK)
SHAGUN(BROWN)

Rest all will be black.
Edited by romaisaromi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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INDEX:

Introduction:Pg 1
Prologue:Pg 1
Part 1:Pg 1
Edited by romaisaromi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prologue.

Ishita:Amma i don't want to get married.
Amma:Kanna why?
Ishita:Cause i don't like him.
Amma:But he is a good boy.
Ishita:But still amma. Doscussion end here.
An she went away

In Bhallah house.
Raman:I want to marry her ma.
Mr's bhallah:Ik puttar but she is not ready.
Raman:Ma i'll make her ready.But i will only marry her.

Y is ishita denying? And how does raman fall in lovewith her? How did they met?

Thats it.
Hope you like it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 1:

Iyer House.

Two girls are sleeping hugging eachother.
A lady comes in.
Lady:Kanna wake up.
Girl 1:Two min amma.
Amma:Wake up kanna its 7 in the morning.
Girl 2(Wakes): What 7 OMG chithi why you didn't wake me up before? I'll be late for collage.
Amma:Illey don't blame me i was waking you both since an hour miku.
Mihika: Then also chiithi m late see. And ishu akka is still sleeping.
(Tries to wake ishita) Akka utho 7 baj gaye wake up akka we are late today wake up.
(And shakes ishita)
Ishita(Half sleepy): What happen miku?
Mihika:Akka utho 7 baj gaye.
Ishita(Jump): What 7 baj gaye oh god mar gaye aj tu sir pakka naukri sey nikal dey gey.
Mihika: Akka yeh choro jaldi tayyar ho werna or late hojayegey
Ishita:Okay Okay.

Meanwhile in Bhallah House.

The handsome hunk Raman Bhallah is sleeping like a cute baby.
Shagun enters and throw gold water.
Raman(Woke up with a jerk): What the hell.
Shagun starting laughing.
Raman saw shagun laughing.
Raman(To shagun): Yeh kya kiya tuney?
Shagun:Bhai tujhey last 1 ghantey sye utha rahi hoon tu uth he nhi raha tha.
Raman:Han tu?
Shagun:Han tu meney teri ankhey khol di see.
And start laughing.
Raman:To bach beta.
And start to run behind her.
Shugun(Shouting):Bachao bachao ashok maa bachao bhai say.
Ashok comes and after watching raman start laughing.
He stops raman.
Ashok:Raman yeh kya hua bhai?(Still laughing)
Raman:Haan beta ura ley mazak yeh sab teri biwi ney kiya hai.
Ashok(To Shugun):Shagun yeh kiya kya tumney esa koi kerta hai.
Shagun:Ashok dekho yeh uth he nhi raha tha tu meney utha diya.
Hiding behind ashok.
Raman:Tu tu bas bach.
He tried to catch her but ashok comes in between.
Ashok:Bas hath nhi lagana meri biwi ko.
Raman:Acha beta meri behen hai pheley.
Mr and Mrs bhallah comes there.
Mrs bhallah:Raman puttar yeh kya hua?
Raman: Ma dekho apki beti ney kya kiya.
Mr bhallah(To shagun): Well done puttar.
Raman:Papa ab bhi.Ma dekho inko sab merey khilaf sazish ker rahey hain.
Mr's Bhallah:Oye chup karo sab ja putta ja ker naha ley.
Shagun: Naha tu already chuka hai bhai.
Raman give angry glares and walk to his room.

Next:Ishra meeting.

Hope you like it.
Plzz do like and comment.
Continuation based on your response.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Please continue
Raman wants to marry ishu but she isn't interested interesting and please do PM me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So Raman wants to marry Ishu but she is not interested..
Hmm.. Cont soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice dear..Good start...👏👏Title edit karke SS/TS/OS kuch toh mention karo yaar...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely and cute start .
Is Raman ishu's boss .
Continue soon sweety.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice start
loved it
shagun is raman sister😆
but i loved their bond
continue soon

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