HUM HAIN DEEWANE TERE DEEWANE RM FF updated 12/05 COMPLETED page-89 - Page 37

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Posted: 9 years ago
wesome update, loved it,
Both are in love but hav'nt realized yet, Malavika is going to play cupid for them.
Thanks for the PM dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice sorry for commenting late readal parts in one go rishbala solve their my my rk friend tries to make rk realize his luv for madhu madhu jealous of RMS friend nice continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update loved it 😊
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Thanks people for your wonderful comments😊


Part 26

RK was sleeping with a smile on his face when Bittuji entered his room

Bittuji: Chief Chief (he called his name)

RK: Madhu from when did you started sounding like Bittuji (He said while still in sleep)

Bittuji chuckled on hearing this and said

Bittuji: Chief it's me. (And saw Madhu's suit beside RK)

RK slowly opened his eyes and saw a vision of a fat man standing in front of him and he again asked

RK: Madhu why are you looking like Bittuji to me?

And Bittuji laughed and shook RK's shoulder to bring him out of his dream land

Bittuji: Chief we are getting late please get up.

And now RK realised that all this while he was talking to Bittuji and not Madhu and then he quickly jumped on his bed and said to avoid more embarrassment

RK: I'll be there in few minutes you wait downstairs.

Bittuji cleared his throat and said

Bittuji: Yes Chief. (He turned around but he thought of something and again looked towards RK and asked him) Chief but when bhabhiji is coming back home?

RK looke at Bittuji with a stern expression he knew that he was teasing him...Bittuji saw this and said

Bittuji: I was just casually asking Chief...but I should be going now.

And he left knowing that if he would stay there for one more second then his chief could eat him up with those eyes.

He woke up and took a bath and when he came out he saw Madhu's suit lying on the bed and remembered how he was missing her the previous night all this while he was smiling but then Malvika's words started running in his mind and then he made a confusing face and he asked himself "Why am I getting so much attached to Madhu...yesterday I even wanted to kiss her...am I falling for her...but how can i fall for her...what if she leaves me like others did...no I know she is not like others...but what should I do now...should I talk to Madhu...does she feel the same for me?"

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While heading towards the studio RK called Madhu

Madhu: Hello

RK: Hello Madhu

Madhu: What happened RK...you called me early in the morning is everything fine?

RK: Early...it's 8 in the morning...and you are still not home...yesterday you said that you will come today.

Madhu: Oh then it means that I should have come home after 12 at night right...because after 12 the next day starts?

RK: No I am not saying that

Madhu: Then what are you saying?

RK: Nothing I am just coming to pick you up right now.

Madhu: What?

RK: Yes be ready...I'll be there in 10 minutes

Madhu: But RK (suddenly RK interrupted)

RK: I know Biwi that you can give me a tough competition in an argument but you can never win from me...I haven't given this right to anyone...see you Biwi...Bye

And he cuts the call.

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Madhu: What the hell was that? (Madhu asked herself)

While Trishna who was sitting with her asked her

Trishna: What happened?

Madhu: Nothing this RK...

Trishna: What did he do now?

Madhu: I don't know...he is very difficult to understand..."Kabhi kuch to kabhi kuch"...he's coming here to pick me up right now...can you believe it?

Trishna: HAHA...what?

Madhu: What is there to laugh in this?

Trishna:I think he is missing you

Madhu: Missing me...are you nuts...why will he miss me?

Trishna: No I am not...you are nuts...he is your husband Madhu...If he is missing you then what's wrong in that?

And Trishna left from there to inform others of RK's arrival leaving Madhu all quiet "Husband...but there is nothing between us like a husband and wife...then why will he miss me" she said to herself and then she remembered how she read RK's interview last night as she was missing him.

And she was all lost in her dream land when suddenly she heard a sound of a horn and she came out of her trance "Oh My God he is here"

And after few chit chats they left from there

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They soon reached the studio

Madhu: Why here?

RK: Unfortunately I am shooting for my movie over here Biwi

Madhu: I know that RK...but why you brought me here?

RK was out of words...he himself didn't know that why he had brought her here...but his heart knew that he was missing her badly and as he couldn't see her yesterday the whole day so this was a way of compensation for that.

RK: You were at your Malik's place yesterday...soo...(Searching for words)

Madhu: Soo.??

RK:(while putting his hands inside the pockets of his pants trying to cover up his foolishness) So I thought you will get bored at home seeing those unwanted faces and then you will miss your Malik and tears will start flowing from your eyes and there will be a flood at RK Mansion and those people will get drowned in that...so I brought you here.

Madhu jerked off her head the other way when he teased her this way.

RK: See Biwi I am not so bad..like you think I am...I saved lives of so many people.

Madhu looked at him and her fake anger automatically turned into a smile and soon into a laughter...and RK saw this and was all lost is her...after so many days he saw her laughing like this which gave him a feeling of satisfaction. He felt light seeing her so happy. Madhu noticed that he is staring at her and she asked him

Madhu: What happened?

RK: Nothing I was just thinking that what a fool I was who snatched away all your happiness.

And then he brought his hand and slightly pulled back her flicks which were touching her cheeks...Madhu felt a bit nervous but when she saw right into his eyes all the hesitation went away and a curve came on her lips but then a girl came and said "Sir shot is ready" and both of them came out their trance.

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Madhu was sitting on the chair and was watching RK giving his shot

Dastaan ...scene 5...Take one...Roll...sound...camera...Action

Heroine: Arjun I want to say something

RK: No Anjali I will say first...from the day I saw you I have never been the same any more..

And while delivering his dialouges RK's eyes met Madhu's and he got uncomfortable on delivering further dialogues

RK: Cut it

Director: What happened RK sir?

RK: Not in mood right now...will do it after a break.

"Break" the Director announced and RK towards Madhu.

Madhu: What happened? (She asked confusingly)

RK: Nothing.

And he went to his Vanity and Madhu followed him

Madhu: Nothing what nothing...I saw you...you are exasperated with something or what..you never deliver your dialogues like this...that was so plain...No expressions...No feelings...nothing I could see on your face.

RK looked at Madhu with a stern expression. She was giving her remarks as if she was the Critics.

RK: Can you be quiet for sometime?

And Madhu sealed her mouth They went into the vanity where RK was rehearsing his dialogues...but every time he made some mistake and it was because he was getting nervous in front of Madhu and this time when he delivered his dialogue...

RK: No Avantika I will say first...from the day I saw you...

Suddenly Madhu laughed very loudly seeing him

RK: What is it Madhu?

Madhu: RK the Name is Anjali not Avantika

RK: It doesn't matter whether the name is Anjali Avantika or Madhu (And he opened his eyes wide on realising his mistake)

Madhu looked at him in shock...

Madhu: Ya but you should say your dialogues properly na (She tried her best to reduce the embarrassment)

And RK had had enough criticism from Madhu. He got very irritated and he asked her.

RK: Mrs. Madhubala Rishabh Kundra why don't you help?

Madhu's heart skipped a beat...The way he called out her name...Her name together with his name...it just gave goosebumps to Madhu...it wasn't the first time RK had called out her as Mrs Madhubla Rishabh Kundra but this time it gave the sense of authorization to him on her...Madhu gulped in...While RK saw her that she is staring at him and He snapped his fingers.

RK: Biwi?

And Madhu came out of her trance

Madhu: Yes?

RK: Will you? ( He offered her the script so as she can help him)

Madhu: what me?

RK: No...I am talking to the walls...Yes you Biwi...now come on take this script and read out the heroine's dialogues.

Madhu: But RK I can't do this.

RK: I am not telling you to act Biwi...just give me the lead.

Madhu finally accepted her defeat and started delivering the dialogue.

Madhu: Arjun I want to say something.

RK: No Anjali I will say first...from the day I saw you I have never been the same any more...Do you remember our first meeting?

Madhu: Yes I remember It was all dark.

Both of them looked straight into each others eyes

RK: And from that darkness I saw you coming towards me...(And they both remembered the day they met for the first time...when RK was delivering his dialogues and saw Madhu coming towards him)...It felt like the whole world has stopped only for you...I never had seen a girl like you in my whole life...such an innocent face (his voice was becoming more and more soft after each and every world he spoke which could give goosebumps to anyone)...very far from the glamour world...where there are only faces covered with mask of fakeness...but you didn't look like those people...It was like an angel has arrived on earth (Madhu smiled listening to this)...and you hair...the way they were falling on your forehead...they urged me to pull them to the backside of your ear.

Madhu: How? (This wasn't in the script but it came automatically from Madhu's Mouth)

And RK moved forward and moved away her hair behind her ear...Madhu gulped in nervousness...and RK brought his another hand too and caressed her face...Both of them could hear the sound of their heartbeats...RK slowly started moving forward...and Madhu unknowingly kept her hand on RK's chest...they closed their eyes...Their lips were just an inch away when again Malvika's words stopped RK "Do you love her"..and RK opened his eyes and saw Madhu still standing with her eyes opened...and he said

RK: Madhu

Madhu opened her eyes and both of them removed their hands...Madhu was looking here and there in nervousness while twisting her fingers.

Madhu: A..a...S...see...This was so easy (While still breathing heavily)

But RK was continously looking at Madhu and said

RK: Madhu i want to ask you something.

Madhu: Yes?

When suddenly somebody knocked at the door

RK: Come in

Bittuji: Chief Malvika ma'am is here.

RK: Malvika?...Okay tell her I am coming.

Madhu rolled up her eyes

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Mavilka: Hey RK (While hugging him)

RK: Hey!

And Malvika saw Madhu standing behind him and walked towards her

Malvika: Hey Madhu...how are you?

Madhu: I am good...I how are you?

Malvika: Very well sweety...any way I don't have much time...I was shooting for my movie nearby so I thought to come and see RK...but even you are here...anyway it's good...actually I wanted to invite you both for tomorrow.

RK: For what?

Madhu: Your birthday?

Malvika was delighted on hearing his and said

Malvika: See RK you are my friend and you only don't remember...but your wife does.

Madhu: Actually...I have always admired you and your acting...and no one else is as talented as you.

Malvika: Thanks for the compliment darling but you know what you are more beautiful than me...Isn't it RK? (She asked him purposefully)

Madhu looked at RK was waiting for his answer

RK: Yes Indeed. (Looking at Madhu)

Madhu felt happy that RK said that.

Malvika: Okay guys...I got to go...will see you tomorrow at my pool party.

And she left...while Madhu was still blushing on remembering RK's words when she suddenly realised what Malvika said.

Madhu: What pool party...no no...I will not go to the pool party RK

RK: Why?

Madhu: First of all I don't know how to swim and secondly I can't wear those type of clothes.

RK chuckled on hearing this

RK: Biwi...pool party doesn't mean that you have to be in the pool...so don't give that excuse...and about the clothes..ummm...you just leave it on me.

Madhu: On you?

RK: Yup...now let me go I have to give my shot...Sayonara. (He winked)


THE END!!!
Edited by srksimran - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow! Rk started dreaming about Madhu.They r missing each other.Rk brought her at his shoot n rehearshed with her.These scenes made me nostalgic. Pool side birthday party of malvika.waiting.
Thanks for pm n I am first.🤪
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Posted: 9 years ago
Cool update dear fantastic ..rk still didn't realise his love that's bit worry's me but still having on ur writing once again amazing
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Posted: 9 years ago
I missed my place :(:( No worries ... ROFL ... Oh gosh I bet I can never get bord of RiTuji's bromance ... The way RK was dreaming of Madz in sleep and Bituji try to control his laugh was superb ... Ahaan aag dono side barabar lagi hai ... So even Madz was missing RK that she read his interview ... Hehe that scene was quite funny about 12 midnight morning starts ... See that is why we love this Rude Kundra , bcz he saved so many unwanted lives of ppl from the flood that would have come if he dint brought his Biwi to the studio with him (sab bechare ko Right Kameena samjhte hai , kitna acha munda hai sabki help karne wala ... Hehehe) ... OMG that practise scene b/w Rishbala was with so much of intensity ... Again I hate you for spoiling the crux ... What was the need to bring Malvi's word of "do you love her" in RK's mind at that time when they were just an inch apart to feel that "Yes , they have feelings for each other called Love" ????? I hate you for this girl ! ... Ohk so pool party will bring them closer , Not Bad babes ... Toh aaj blue hai pani pani ya lets do that do that pani wala dance ya Teri toh hamesha yaad satave ya phir Ladki beautiful kar gayi Chull ??? Romantic + Comical update ... Enjoying it thoroughlly ... Good going girl with this awesome story ... Love you ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update.I'm blushing like idiot after read ur story.
Rk somehow manage the reason about y he brought madhu to shooting spot and the reharsal indeed superb and romantic.update soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update simran. Loved it. So madhu is still doubting Malvika. And rk said he'll take care of the dress hmmm something fishy. Eagerly waiting for the next update. Thanks a lot buddy for the pm. Love u
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome live it
Thanks for pm
Waiting for party

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