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Scene 1

Continuation from Yesterday

Leelaji- ab sach bola Maine to aap sab ko mirchi lag gyi...bade aaye mere sumit pe ungli uthane wale...she said this carrying her usual melodrama...

Dadaji- leelaji shayad aapne thik se suna nhi...Maine kaha *jai jinendra*...chali jaiye aap yha se...

Hearing this she greeted her teeth...and went from there angrily...

Ramesh- in maa bete ka kuch nhi ho sakta...bauji...

Mohan - ha bauji Hume jald hi kuch aur sochna padega...

Viren(angrily)- mera bas chale to mai in maa bete ko...aisa sabak sikhau ki ye zindagi bhar yaad rakhe...

Scene 2

At Terrace

Except dolly all cousins saurav kabir and viraj...were sitting on terrace ...while the moon was witnessing their sad faces...

Kirti- how blah ...hmesha hamari dolly di ke sath hi aisa kyu hota h...itni mushkil se unki life me fir se khushiya aayi thi aur ye sab...

Jwalu- ha kirti di mujhe bhi dolly di ki bahut tension ho ri h...she said this half crying..

Nisha then looked at kirti and jwalu...and said...

Nisha- kirti...jwalu bas karo yaar...kya drama laga ke rakha h tumdono ne...kuch nhi hua h hamari dolly di ko samjhe...aur him unhe kuch hone bhi nhi denge...hum sab h na unke sath...agar hum sab hi aise toot jayenge to dolly di ko kaun sambhalega...pata h na kitni emotional h WO...

Kabir- nisha bilkul sahi keh rahi h...hum sab ko dolly ki kamzori nhi balki unki taakat banana h...

Viraj- aur unhe humesha khush rakhna h...rahi baat sumit ki to hum sab milke unhe handle kar lenge...

Saurav- ha viraj sir...then he looked at kirti and again continued...aur miss blah...dolly ki tension tu mujhpe chhod de...*Mai hu na* dolly ka khyaal rakhne ke liye...nhi to pata chala tu tension lene ki wajah se aur moti ho gyi...
Hearing this kirti looked at him angrily n said
Kirti- saurav tension lene se log patle hote h mote nhi...
Saurav- ha but tera case different h miss blah...saying this he hi-fived to kabir..while kirti frowned...
Nisha then crossed her hang against her chest n said
Nisha- to ho gya tumlogo ka...ab kuch kaam ki baat kare..
All nodded in yes...
Nisha- OK to aaj se in fact abhi se Hume dolly di ko ekdam happy happy rakhna h...so..unko hasane ki responsibility...as soon as she said this bunty n sukku said in unison...

Bunty and sukku- hamari...
Bunty- mai unhe apne jokes se hasaunga...
Sukku- aur mai unhe apni acting se...
Uman- unhe accha accha khana khilane ki responsibility hamari..
Jwalu and kirti- unhe acchi achhi stories suna k unka mood refresh karna ki responsibility hamari...
Saurav- dolly ka acche se khayaal rakhne aur tumsab pe nazar rakhne ki responsibility meri...as soon as he said all of them glared him...
Nisha- unki sari problems ko share karke unhe minus karne ki responsibility meri...
Kabir- aur apni cuteness se dolly ki happiness ko multiply karne ki responsibility meri...
Viraj- aur us sumeet ko dolly ke aas pass na bhatakne dene ki zimmedari hmari...
*Happy version of song firdausiyana started playing in back ground*
Nisha- so mission happiness of dolly di on...she said forwarding her one hand while all other place their hand above her hand and said *ON*...then saurav excused himself from there to meet dolly...


Scene 3
Outside Dolly's Room
Saurav was about to enter Dolly's room when he saw all the ladies coming out from her room...seeing them he asked...
Saurav- dadi dolly ab kaisi h???
Dadiji- so ri h mhari bacchi...she said placing her hand on his head...saying this all left from there...
Saurav then went inside Dolly's room and sat beside her...

Saurav(monologue)- dolly tujhe jitna sehna tha seh lia...ab mai tujhpe tere beete hue kal ki parchaai ka aaya bhi nhi padhne dunga...tujhe har pal har lamha khush rakhunga...mai tera aur hamare baby ka pura khyaal rakhunga...kabhi tujhe shikayat ka koi mauka nhi dunga...he was in his trance then the coughing sound of dolly broke his trance...he then pourea water in glass from jar and said...concernly

Saurav- dolly tu thik h na...ye le pani pi...and he made her drink some water...

Dolly- saurav mujhe bahut dar lag rha h...apne liye nhi balki hmare bacche k liye she said placing her hand on her baby bump ...Maine strong banne ki bahut koshish ki par...ye dar mujhe andar se khaye ja ra h...kahin sumit ne mere bachhe ko...hmare bacche ko nuksaan pahuchane ki koshish...as soon she said saurav placed his index finger on her lips n said...

Saurav- ssshhh...dolly kuch nhi hoga hmare bacche ko mai hu na tere sath...tere cousins h hmari family h...u trust us na...she nodded in yes while he again continued...hum sab hmare bacche ko aur tujhe kuch nhi hone donge kuch nhi...samjhi...chal ab soja...aur rest kar...baby ko nhi rest ki zarurat h na..aur waise nhi jab saurav is near..then there is no fear...on hearing this she smiled weakly and again went into deep sleep while saurav caressed her hair..and was adoring cute sleeping face of his would be wifey...

Scene 4
At Courtyard

As soon as all the ladies entered in courtyard...all of them asked them about Dolly's condition...

Dadaji- ab kaisi h dolly...???

Dadiji- pehle se behtar h...abhi sowe h...

Viren- mai aata hu dolly ko dekh k...

Vimla- suniye abhi saurav h dolly k pass...

Dadaji- bahut accha nasib h hmara Jo Hume kabir aur saurav jaise damaad mile...

Ramesh- ha bauji ye baat to aapne sau fisdi sahi kahi...

Rupan- WO sab to thik h par Hume jald hi kuch karna padega us sumit aur leelaji ka warna kal fir koi nya drama leke aa jayenge yha...

Laxmi- rupan bhabhi bilkul sahi keh rhi h...Hume ab dolly ko ye sab tension se due rakhna hoga..

Ramesh- bauji mai soch RHA tha ki kyu na hum ekbaar apne lawyer se baat kare...ab whi Hume is musibat se nikalna ka koi upaaye bata sakte h...

Dadaji- hmm sahi keh rhe ho ramesh...ab leelaji aur sumit ne yhi rasta chhoda h hmare pass...
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SCENE - 1

Everyone was waiting for the lawyer in the courtyard of gangwal house.

Viren came inside with mr. Saxena strolling behind him.

Dadaji - namaste wakeel sahab...

Lawyer - namaste gangwal sahab... bataeye kya jarurat pad gyi aapko meri sab thik to h na...

Ramesh - nhi wakeel sahab... kuch thik nhi h... ek bhot jaruri masle m aapka suggestion chahie..

Mohan - aapko to pta hi h ki dolly k baby ki custody uske paas h... ur jald hi uski delivery bhi hone wali h... par kal hi vo sumeet ghar m ghus aaya tha ur dolly ur uske bachhe ko nuksaan pahuchane ki dhamki dekar gya h...

Viren - dolly ne use jawab to de dia par vo bhot darri hui h... even is wajah uski tabiyat p bhi asar pda h... doc ka kehna h ki ye uske lie thik nhi...

Dadaji - hmne leelaji se baat karne ki koshish ki pr aap to jante hi h unhe...

Ramesh - ha wakeel sahab ab aap hi is prblm ka koi permanent solution nikalie...

Lawyer - dekhiye gangwal sahab is k lie to mai yhi salah dunga ki hm sumeet ur leelaji k khilaf permanent restraining order pass karwa le... matlab vo kabhi bhi dolly ya uske bachhe k aas paas bhi nhi aa sakte... ur agar unhone esa nhi kia to vo log seedha jail jaenge...

Everybody rejoiced listening to him but were interuptted by him again.

Lawyer - lekin is sab k lie hme ek thos saboot chahie... kyuki ye ek bada decision h... ek pita ko uske bachhe se door karne k lie hme ye prove karna hoga ki sumeet baby k lie dangerous h...

Mohan - par vo dolly ko dhamki dekar gya h...

Lawyer - is baat ka koi saboot nhi h... ur sumeet ko hm sab jante h... vo kisi bhi tarah ye prove kar dega ki vo yha tha hi nhi...

Dadaji - hmmm... to phir aap hi btaye ki hme kya karna chahie...

Lawyer - koi esa proof hme lana hoga jo ye saabit kare ki sumeet is dangerous... ur ha dolly k doc ka jo kehna h vo bhi hmare case ko strong karega par uske pehle ek prelimn proof is must...

Everybody agreed to the lawyer.

Nisha - uski fikr mat kijie wakeel sahab hm aapko proof lake denge...

Lawyer - thik h nisha... aap mjhe proof lake dijie tab tak mai papers ready karwata hu... agar sab thik rha to sumeet se dolly ko permanent relief mil jaega...

Soon after he took his cue and left as others too started pondering on what to do.


SCENE - 2
Terrace

All the cousins were seated in a circle thinking about the ways to trap sumeet.

Nisha - yaar bol to dia maine par hm proof laenge kha se...

Kabir - we have to fetch a plan...

Sukku - yes that too full proof taki dolly di ko koi khatra na ho...

Umesh - ha...

Kirti - par plan kya h...

Jwalu - yehi to sochna h...

Everybody sat thinking for another hour but didnt get on any conclusion.

Kabir - guys... lets not stress ourselves... aaj aaram karte h... ur sochte h...

Nisha - hm kal milte h ur fir discuss karte h ye sab...

Eveybody agreed and nibir took their leave after meeting dolly and everybody else.


SCENE - 3
KNH


Kabir and nisha reached their house and dumped themselves on the sofa all exhausted

Nisha - yaar kabir... m so tired...

Kabir - same here wifey...

Nisha - hm kya karenge kabir... dolly di kitti darr gyi h...

Kabir - sab thik ho jaega nisha... tu tension mat le...

Nisha - pakka...???

Kabir - pakka...

Nisha - sachhi ???

Kabir - muchhii...

Nisha - u sure???

Kabir - (looking at her with wierd expression) sure... tu paagal ho gyi h kya

Nisha - nhi... mjhe bhook lagi h...

Kabir - to mai kya karu...

Nisha - mjhe master chef kabir k haath ka bbj khana h...

Kabir turned to look at nisha who made a cute puppy face at him.

Nisha - pls hubby...

Kabir sighed and went into the kitchen making dinner for them while nisha stalked the fridge and attacked the ice cream.

Kabir came back into the living room and found nisha eating ice cream like a 5 yr old with the melting ice cream all over her and the sofa. Kabir smiled as she licked her hands. She saw him standing, leaning at the wall with his hands in his pocket and a fond smile on his lips. She raised her eyebrows asking what while he signalled towards her face which was stained with ice cream. She tried to remove it but couldnt leading to merge it more on her face. He laughed out loud at her while she made a cute pouty face at her. He chuckled and went to her side. Sitting across her, he cupped her face as she looked at him with love. He started cleaning her face with her thumb caressing her cheeks. He was busy in his work while she eyed him mischeviously. Dipping her fingers in the icecream tub, without making it known to him, she caressed his face while he didnt paid much attention to him. Soon he felt a sticky feel on his face and looked at nisha who giggled uncontrollably.

Kabir - kya kia tune nisha...

She didnt said anything but pick his phone and clicked a pic of him. She then showed it to him and bursted out laughing. He looked at her with horror and then narrowed his eyes at him. Soon nisha knew something is on her way so she took a jump and ran with kabir behind her heels.

Soon they spattered the ice cream all over the place and with this all of their worry and tension flew in thin air.
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Nisha and Kabir had called all the cousins home to discuss about the plan hoping that someone would have got the idea of what they should do. Nisha and Aman came with some snacks for everyone and started serving them.

"So, kuch socha kisine?" Sukku asked munching on the biscuits

"Mujhe toh koi idea nahi aaya" Jwala said dejectedly

"Par mere pass hai" Kabir said making them all look at him with hope

"Kya?" Nisha asked as she took her seat next to him

"Tujhe vo chip yaad hai? Jo tum sab ne sab ne Sumit ko phasane ke liye use kit hi?" he said and everyone started to remember about it

"Par humare pass vo chip thi hi nahi" Saurav said as he knew that they didn't have the chip

"Par abh hai" Nisha exclaimed

"Right, so hum iss bar bhi ussi chip ka sahara lenge" Kabir said and smirked

"Tu karega kya uss chip ka Kabir" Umesh asked and then Kabir told them about his plan in detail

"Plan to acha hai but kahin koi gadbad ho gai toh?" Kirti asked as she always had to be the unsure one and then everyone glared at her "Aise mat dekho yaar, hum sab ko pata hai ki hum jis insaan ke saath deal karne wale hai vo kaisa hai" she said and she was right too.

"But jo insaan usske saath deal karne ja raha hai vo iss duniyaa ka sab se bada K hai" Kabir said and raised his collar in self-pride

"Aur kaam bigaadne main bhi toh sab se aage hai, tu akele nahi jayega" Nisha declared making hi frown

"Yaar Nisha kabhi toh trust kar le na mujh pe" he said and pouted but Nisha ignored him

"Toh theek hai, plan fixed but Sumit ko milne bulayenge kaise?" Aman asked and all started wondering about it

"Hum kuch madadt kar sakte hai?" Vasundara came in with Viraj and all looked at her

"Pichli baar jab Sumit ko jail hui thi tab humne uski bail karvai thi abh hum unhe duabra jail behjenge" Vasundara said or rather exclaimed in confidence

"Par Maa aap use bulayengi kaise?" Nisha asked as she was not so sure if this would be the right move

"Hum unhe nahi unki Maa se baat karenge" Vasundara took her phone and called Leela after two or three rings the phone was answered and she put the phone on speaker

"Hum Vasundara bol rahe hai, aapse baat karni hai hume" Vasundara said in her usual attitude

"Abh kya kehna hai aapko?" Leela asked her trying to show fake attitude

"Hum seedhe mudde ki baat karenge aap se, humare paas ek offer hai, aapke liye" Vasundara said and hoped that Leela would fall for it

"Kaisa offer?" Leela asked keen to know more

"Hum aapko 3 crore dene ke liye taiyaar hai, lekin aapko aur aapke bete ko Dolly ki zindagi se door jana hoga" Vasundara said and everyone's eye popped out of the sockets

"Teen... cr... crore?" Leela replied somehow as it was a huge amount for her

"Ji, leking aapko wada karna hoga ki aap aur apka beta Dolly ki zindagi se hamesha ke liye chale jayege" She said again and waited for Leela to reply

"Dekhiye Vasundara ji, Dolly Sumit ki biwi hai, abh isska faisla toh vo hi karega" Leela said to keep herself out of this matter but that amount had made her greedy "Main Sumit se baat karti hun aur koshish karungi ki use mana hi lun"

"Theek hai, hum aapko 1 ghante ka samay dete hai, dubara phone karenge hum apko, umeed ahi aapka jawab haan hi hoga" saying so Vasundara cut the call and took a deep breath. Everyone started bombarding her with questions

"Maa, 3 crores?" Nisha exclaimed

"Yeh kya tha Aunty?" Saurav asked as he couldn't believe his ears

"Aapko lagta hai vo maanega?" Viraj asked

"Shaant ho jaiye sab" Vasundara yelled and everyone placed their finger on their lips to and sat like disciplined students

"Hum jante hai humne kya kiya hai, aur vo yeh offer except bhi karenge, aur Nisha paison ki chinta aap mat kijiye vo unhe dene ki zaroorat padegi hi nahi" she completed her sentence and took a seat on the sofa

Kabir raised his hand and signalled as that he wanted to ask a question

"Bolo Jojo"

"Maa, aap kitni achi acting karti ho" he said and clapped while everyone gave him a stern look

"Kabir tu chup baith please" Nisha said and he scowled

"Hum aise logon ko bakhubhi jante hai Kabir, issliye humne unse yeh kaha hai, aur hum sure hai ki vo iss offer ko accept karenge hi" Vasundara said as she was really confident about this thing

Here, Leela was having a word with Sumit trying to make hi understand to accept this offer and Sumit was trying to analyse their condition

"Soch kya raha hai Beta, maan le na baat, Dolly aur uss bacche se tujhe kya kaam jab tujhe 3 crore mil rah hai?" Leela said trying to incorporate some sense in him

"Lekin Maa unhe yeh karne ki zaroorat kya hai?" Sumit said as he wanted to know the reason behind this offer

"Tujhe uss se kya? Tu aam kha na beta, gutliyaan kyun gin raha hai?" Leela said as she didn't want to let this golden opportunity slip from her hand

"Aur agar yeh unki koi chaal hui toh?" Sumit said as he knew that this can be a trap too

"Aur agar nahi hui toh? Dekh beta, 3 crore na choti rakam nahi hoti, aur tu toh nikamma baitha hai, jahan se paise aa rahe hai aa ne de, dekh abh 5 min main unka phone aane wala hai mujhe saaf saaf apna jawab de de..." Leela said and sat on the sofa

Sumit stood in his place trying to think what to do and right then Leela's phone started ringing

"Dekh aa bhi gaya unka phone" she said and answered the call "Namaste Vasundara ji boliye"

"Bataiye kya faisla kiya hai aapne?" Vasundara asked without wasting anytime and Leela looked at Sumit who nodded his head and Leela felt like she was on Top of the world


"Hume aapka offer manjoor hai" Leela said in a delighted tone

Everyone got excited but before they could make noise Vasundara signalled them to calm down

"Theek hai phir aap ek kaam kijiye ki Sumit ko aaj sham huare ghar bhej dijiye hum unhe paise aur aap dono ke Dubai ki tickets de denge, taki aap bina kisi der ke Dolly ki zindagi se chale jaye" Vasundara said and cut the call after Leela thanked her as she couldn't take her drama for more.

As soon as she cut the call everyone started rejoicing and Kabir hugged Vasundara

"Aap great ho Maa, kya phaisaya hai dono ko aapne" he praised her and everyone clapped for her

"Bas bas, abh aage ke plan ke bare main hume bhi detail main baitiye, hume toh bas yeh pata hai ki humne Sumit ko bulaya hai par plan toh baiatye" she said and Nisha explained her the entire plan

"Not bad Jojo, hume aapse yeh umeed nahi thi" Vasundara teased Kabir and everyone giggled as he made the cute puppy face

"Chaliye abh Mazak bohut hogaya, hume abh kaam pe lagna chahiye" Viraj said and all agreed with him, soon they all had dispersed to do their part in this plan.

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NAUC TSC

EPI - 513


WRITTEN BY VAISHU



At Viraj's penthouse

Summit entered the house where vasundara was waiting for him for him with a bag containing a sum of Rs 3 crore
"vasundhara ji" he called her

Vasundhara stood from the sofa and turned towards him
"aa gaye aap hamare paas waqt nahi hai barbaad karne ke liye yeh lijiye aapke paise aur yeh dubai ki flight ke tickets kal subah ke hai hum chahte hai ki aap aur leela ji jaldi se jaldi yaha se chale jaye" she said forwarding him the bag and tickets

Sumit-(taking the tickets and bag) vo toh thik h vasundhara ji par kahin isme aapki koi chal toh nahi hai

Vasundhara-hamari taraf se koi chaal nahi hai hum bas yahi chahte hai ki aap aur leela ji dolly ki life se hamesha ke liye chale jaye aur ek baat yaad rakhiye ga is baare me viraj kabir nisha ya aur kisi ko nahi pata aur hum nahi chahte ki kisi ko pata chale

Sumit-jaisa aap kahe kisi ko pata nahi chalega ab ma chalta hu

He was about to leave when kabir and viraj entered the house busy in their talks

"yeh yaha kya kar raha hai" viraj shouted as his eyes feel on summit

Vasundhara-inhe humne bulaya hai viraj

Kabir-(making a confused face)par maa aapne iss insaan ko yaha kyu bulaya

Vasundhara-kabir humne inhe yaha isliye bulaya hai taaki hum inhe aur leela ji ki dolly ki zindagi se dur bhej sake

Viraj-dur matlab

Vasundhara-Viraj hum sumit aur leela ji ko dubai bhej rahe hai hamesha ke liye ab ye kabhi dolly aur unke hone wale bache ko kabhi pareshan nahi karenge

Kabir-maa uski koi jarurat nahi hai kyunki sumit ab dubai nahi jail jayega

Summit-(in an angry tone) yeh kya bakwaas kar raha hai tu

Kabir-ma koi bakwaas nahi kar raha sumit sirf wahi keh raha hu jo hone waala hai

Sumit-aur tu yeh kaise karega ha koi sabut hai tere pass

Kabir-tujhe woh voice recording yaad hai jo nisha ne tab ki thi jab tune use building se neeche giraya tha

Kabir said the last part boiling in anger as that horrible event flashed in front of his eyes while viraj placed his hand on kabir's shoulder squeezing it lightly and blinking his eyes in assurance to which kabir nodded positively and looked back at sumit

Sumit-yaad hai acchi tarah yaad hai aur yeh bhi yaad hai aur yeh bhi yaad hai ki mane uska phone todke us recording ko barbaad kar diya tha

Viraj-manana padega aap ki yaadash bohot acchi hai par aap ki jaankari ke liye bata de hume vo chip mil chuki hai jisme vo recording thi uske sahare hum aapko criminal saabit kar sakte hai

Sumit-(evil laugh)kya viraj ji mujhe lagta tha ki aap un cousins se thode jyada samajhdaar hai par aapne mujhe disappoint kar diya...viraj ji vo case kabka band ho chuka hai aapki maa ne hi meri bail karwai thi

Kabir-sahi kaha tumne mom ne hi tumhari bail karwai thi aur vo case band bhi ho chuka hai par hum tum pe ek aur case kar sakte hai

Sumit-konsa case?

Kabir-kidnapping ki koshish karne ka tumne dolly ki godh bharai ke waqt dolly ko kidnap karne ki koshish ki thi aur proof ke taur pe un gundo ka statement pesh kar sakte haha

Sumit-kabir vo local gunde hai unhe paiso se koi bhi kharid sakta hai ma bohat aasani se proof kar sakta hu ki tune unhe paise khilaye hai aur aise paise khaane waale gundo pe koi bharosa nahi karega

Kabir-oh toh phir koi teri baato pe bhi bharosa nahi karega na kyon ki tu bhi paise khaane wala gunda hi toh hai

"Kabir" he shouted raising his hand in order to punch kabir but viraj held his hand on time

Viraj-apne haathon pe kaabu kijiye agar humne apna kaboo kho diya toh aapke liye achha nahi hoga

Sumit-(jerking his hand) dekh lunga ma tum dono ko bhi aur us dolly ko bhi...dolly aur uske bache ki jindagi barbaad kar dunga mein yaad rakhna tum dono... ussi k lie yha bulaya tha na mjhe... ab dekho mai kya haal karta hu uska... abhi tk to vo bachti aae h mjhse ab nhi bachegi... ur vo bachha... vo bachha mere lie ek weapon h weapon... usi ko use karke tum lgo btaunga ki mai kya cheez hu... huh...

Saying so he threw the Money bag on floor and stormed out of the house

There was complete silence once he left kabir and viraj looked at each other and then at vasundhara who passed them a winning smile soon everyone came out of their hiding place with huge grin on their faces

"guyz we did It" kirti said jumping in excitement

Jwala-haa


Sukku-vaise mere saath rehke kabir aur viraj sir bhi thik-thak acting seekh gaye hai

Kabir-sirf suketu ma aur mere bade bhaiya born actors hai samjha

Nisha-(side hugging vasu) haa ab meri maa itni achi actress hai toh unke bacho me bhi thode bahut gun toh honge hi na

Kabir-kaash tujh mein bhi laxmi maa ke kuch gun aa jaate toh mujhe roz tera sada hua khana nahi khana padta

Nisha-kya kaha tune

Kabir-mana kaha kuch bola

Nisha-kabir tu...


Vasu-ek min aap dono apni ladai baad me kariyega pehle hamare ghar ki cctv footage lawyer ke pass le jaiye

Viraj-maa sahi keh rahi hai ab hame chalna chahiye

Nisha-haa hum sab ko bhi ghar chalna chahiye dolly di akeli pareshan ho rahi hongi

Jwala-haa nishu bro

Viraj left to meet lawyer while cousins along with kabir left for GH



SCENE - 2
Lawyer's office

"Mr saxena" viraj said entering the room

"Mr Rathod please have a seat"

"thank you" viraj said making himself comfortable on the chair

Lawyer-Kahiye kese aana huaa?

Viraj-Mr saxena hume Ms dolly gangwal ke case ke silsile mein aapse kuch baat karni hai

Lawyer-ji kahiye

Viraj-Mr saxena hamare pass sumit ke khilaaf ek proof hamare pass ek video recording hai jisme sumit ne khud kaha hai ki vo dolly aur unke bacche ko barbaad karna chahte hai
Saying so viraj handed him the recording lawyer watched the video keenly and nodded in affirmation

Lawyer-very good Mr Rathod is recording ke jariye hum court ma yeh prove kar sakte hai ki sumit dolly ji aur unke bacche ke liye khatra hai aur ek permanent restricting order de sakte hai

Listening this viraj smiled

Viraj-woh toh thik hai Mr saxena par hum chahte hai ki yeh kaam jaldi se jaldi kiya jaye kyunki dolly pehle se hi bohot stress le rahi hai aur aisi condition main stress lena unki aur unke bache ki sehat ke liye achha nahi hai

Lawyer-I understand Mr Rathod aap chinta mat kijiye ma jaldi se jaldi restraining order taiyaar karwata hu

Viraj-thank you Mr saxena ab hum chalte hai

Lawyer-sure

Saying so viraj left
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At Gangwal House


Kabir along with cousins entered in Gangwal House...

Kabir - finally hmara plan successful ho gya h...

Nisha- ha kabir ab bas jaldi se jaldi permanent restraining order mil jaye taki dolly di ki life stress free ho jaye...

All nodded...

Kirti- how blah...hum sari baatein yhi hi kar lenge kya...chalo dolly di ke room chalte h aur unka mood thik karte h...

Then they all went into Dolly's room...and they saw that dolly was lost in her own thoughts...

Nisha then signals kirti and jwala through her eyes while they thumps up...

Kirti then enter in room with fake anger...n said...

Kirti- jwalu mujhe na tujhe baat hi nhi karni...she said...coming close to dolly in order to interrupt her from her chain of thoughts...

Jwala- ha to mujhe bhi tujhse baat karne ka koi shauk nhi h samjhi...jab dekho apni marzi chalati h...she too came in n sat beside dolly...

Dolly- kirti jwalu kya ho gya tumlog kyu lad re ho...

Nisha- dolly di ab aap hi samjhaiye indono ko...kab se lade ja rhe h...hum sab ka dimaag kharab kar dia h indono ne

Dolly- par hua kya h???
Nisha- jwalu bol ri h ki baby boy hoga aur uska naam ahaan hoga par kirti bol ri ki baby girl hoyegi...aur uska naam ahaana hoga...she said cutely...
Dolly- wat??? Is baat pe fights karre ho tumlog n she started laughing...
Seeing her laughing they sighed in relief...n all smiles...

Kabir- waise dolly agar tujhe twins ho jaye ek ladka ek ladki...to ahaan aur ahaan dono aa jayena na??I mean to say ahaan ke sath ahaana muft muft muft...he said opening his palm in air with k panti...

yha bhi k panti shuru kar diya...kitna k h tu kabir nisha muttered under her breath while kabir comes towards her n said in her ears *aur mere k se kitni j h tu*...saying this he winks...n then a cute small eyelock was shared by nibir...which was interrupted by sound of dolly...

Dolly- aahhh...she winced in pain holding her stomach...
Nisha- dolly di...lagta h labour pain h...
Seeing her like dis all of them got worried...sukku went to told elders about dolly's condition while kabir n umesh picked dolly up to take her to hospital...soon they all with dolly reached to city hospital(except Dada dadi)...they laid dolly on stretcher...

Kabir went to call doctor meanwhile saurav also reached there...as sukku had informed him

Vimla- dolly beta tu tension mat le...sab thi ho jayega...she said holding her hand with her..

Viren- ha beta himmat rakh...

Saurav- dolly tujhe aur humare baby ko kuch nhi hoga...plz dolly calm down he said seeing her worried face which was covered with pain...

Soon doctor came n took her to emergency ward...for her treatment...

Bunty- mujhe dolly di ki bahut tension ho rhi h...he said biting his nails...

Nisha- bunty kuch nhi hoga dolly di ko hum sab h na...she said to make bunty feel better but the truth is she is also very much worried for her...

Kabir then placed his hand on her shoulder...n assured her through his eyes that *nothing will happen to dolly*

Ramesh- Bhaiya aap tension mat lijiye...hmari dolly bhut bahadur h...he said placing his hand on his shoulder...

Viren- tension kaise nhi hogi chhote...dekha tha na dolly ki haalat tu...he said being sad n worried...here on the other hand rupan and laxmi were consoling vimla...cousins kabir and saurav were giving each other strength...that soon dolly will be alright...

Saurav- dolly ko kitna pain ho ra hoga yr...he said being concerned about her while his feet were trembling in worries...

Kabir- be strong saurav he said placing his hand on his shoulder...

After a moment doctor came out and as soon as she came out all of them ran to her...to ask about Dolly's condition...

Nisha- doctor dolly di kaisi h???

Saurav- thik to h na WO???

Viren- doctor kuch to boliye...

Doctor- dekhiye...patient ke bahut jyada stress lene ki wajah se unke delivery me thodi complications aa gyi h...

Vimla(panickingly)- kaisi complications???

Doctor then told them about Dolly's complications hearing this all became tensed...

PS:sorry for short epi guyzzz
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