FF: Mere Rang Mein Rangne Wali| Epilogue Pg 34| Complete - Page 17

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Amazing parts... Maan was shaken with geet condition n realize his mistake... He realised that the real culprits are her parents n geet is not to be blamed... He expressed all his feeling to geet to take final decision whether to give a chance to their relationship or to walk out... Wondering what geet will decide... Pls cont soon.
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awesome... loved maan's confession.. Geet took right decision ..not to go with karan..she wanted to give chance to maan..

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Part 13

Maan turned away from Geetafter expressing the words which his heart wanted to say. He was about to ascend the stairs when suddenly a gentle grip developed on his hand, and it didn't take long for him to realize that it was his love stopping him.


With slow movements Maan turned around to glance at Geet, whose eyes were misted but with happiness unlike the pain which clouded her eyes, and came down as the tears of anguish.

Geet suddenly enveloped Maan in tight embrace of hers, while it took Maan by shock. For Maan it was one of those dreams which always haunted him after he tortured Geet in the name of a silly revenge.

Geet pulled out from the embrace, which was not reciprocated by Maan due to the shock which Geet gave him. For him, it was a dream once again but it was the time when dreams met the reality.

When true love blooms, eyes speak the language of love more than mouth and silences express more than words ever can.

Geet forwarded the stone-studded intricately carved out box of vermillion placed in her hand towards Maan, whose eyes were tracing her shivering form with eyes misted with love and remorse.

" Make me yours again, by filling my partition, Maan." Geet's gazes voiced out to Maan, while Maan's eyes only asked questions.

He took the lid of the box from her other hand to close it, but refusal was what he got. Geet nodded in negative, while her body language and her respect filled eyes, pleaded him to make her his, forever with her acquiescence this time.

Thousands of emotions were resulting thousands of colors in Maan's eyes. There was pain that he hurt her, there was guilt that he used her for the revenge game. Then there was anger whose victim he himself was. But above all these emotions, there was just love which he had for her and which Geet started feeling for him not a long time back.

Maan's eyes still asked her questions but a certain determination on her face made him give in to her demands. The windows to his heart were still open towards only her, waiting for the refusal which never came. His hand slowly yet steadily reached up to the vermillion-filled box and took a pinch of vermillion.

Tadeva lagnam sudinam tadeva, tarabalam chandrabalam tadeva
vidyabalam daivabalam tadeva, lakshmipateh teghriyugam smarami

Red was no longer the sign of pain or of anger but now it was the color of their love, their feelings which run deeper than their blood and those emotions which will keep them alive.

As Maan filled her partition, marking her as his with his love and affection, a genuine smile adorned her lips after what seemed like ages. Maan had been the cause of her tears for 1 month but now she knew that he will be the sole reason of her smiles for a lifetime.

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Gupta Mansion, India


" Uncle, Geet is falling for that stupid Khurana's threats. I am sure that Geet would never agree to be there by her own will." Karan said as raw possessiveness took over him, being a very possessive guy.

" What do you expect Karan Beta? Khuranas are not the ones to be trusted. If their work is not done, they are ready to go on the crooked way too. And who knows them better than me, a person whom they betrayed?" Shashi said as the memories of the dark past brought wincing pain to his heart.

" Uncle, we need to rescue Geet by hook or by crook from there. God knows what tortures that Devil is inflicting on my Geet." Karan said who was actually concerned for Geet, and never thought anything bad for her.

" Rescuing her can happen only when we get the Maan Singh Khurana away from our path or else the fear of him torturing her or us will prevent her from taking help from others." said Shashi, while sipping the stringent and intoxicating wine from his glass after intently staring at it.

" But how will we do that Uncle? I mean Maan Singh Khurana is the biggest business tycoon of India and he has the tightest security measures, which are next to impossible to be cracked." explained Karan, who had done his R&D about Maan before reaching India.

" Leave that to me, Beta. Soon Maan Singh Khurana will become a history to payback what he has done to my daughter." vowed Shashi Gupta, while gulping down the champagne.

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Maan's Farm House,

" You have no idea, how happy I am, Geet! I am feeling as if I won the entire world and I am feeling as if even if I die at this moment I will not be sad." said Maan to which Geet gasped and stopped him by placing her slender and artistically crafted fingers on his lips.

Maan held the same fingers resting on his lips and placed a butterfly kiss on them, while eying at Geet with desire. Who said that desire was not a part of their love?

One look of Maan's and Geet's insides somersaulted and butterflies and what not fluttered in her stomach. An alien feeling took over her but whatever it was, it was pleasurable and memorable for her.

Seeing the hindrance visible on Geet's face, Maan held both her hands in his own and spoke with love,

" I am ready to wait for you for eternity Geet. So if you are not comfortable with anything, please let me know. I have caused enough pain for you to last for this lifetime, now I only want to see happiness glistening in your eyes, due to me."

Overwhelmed by Maan's words, Geet hid herself in his arms by hugging him tightly while this time, Maan reciprocated the hug with a rare smile gracing his lips, completing their first hug of love.

Maan caressed her hair with fondness and placed a gentle kiss on her hairs, as she smiled at her destiny which was intertwined with him, unknown of the storm that was going to shatter their lives again.

What were Shashi and Karan planning? Will they succeed in their plans?

Will Maan and Geet's love story end before Geet's 'I Love You'?

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Edited by .MereRangMein. - 9 years ago
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Part 14

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Infinity Mall,

Crowds of people surrounding them but all they could see was each other. From a person who was destroyed in his dark love to a person whose life depended on his love, Geet was surprised with her own destiny which united her with Maan, who loved her beyond anything.

Ever since the much wanted confession took place in between them, Maan was pestering Geet to come out with him because he regretted the fact that they had never enjoyed the courtship period which was termed to be the most memorable period in a couple's life.

Maan pulled Geet along with himself into one of the big hotels over there which was completely booked for Maan and Geet, allowing them some privacy which Maan felt was, very much required.

But Geet all of a sudden felt someone observing them and when she turned around she saw a waiter staring at them and as soon as he saw Geet watching him, he turned around and went off hurriedly.

He looked vaguely similar to her but she couldn't identify him properly as he had covered himself with a mask and immediately turned away from her.

" Maan..." muttered Geet still looking at the retreating figure of the waiter.

" Arre Geet, you are still standing? Sit down." said Maan, while making her sit down while pushing her down on the seat by her shoulders.

Maan stood up and turned to speak to the manager whom he had sensed to be behind him. As Maan was talking to him about what all dishes he want, Geet noticed the manager signing to someone with his eyes and looked down to see that he made a thumbs up sign which made Geet look in the direction as the manager was looking at to find a person aiming at Maan with a gun in his hand.

Wave of shock resonated throughout her body as she sensed the person whom she started falling for in danger, but her instincts made her shout her lungs out but it was already late, as in the attempt of pulling him away, the bullet hit her on the chest, while sheltered the heart crying out for him.

" Maan!!"

Geet shrill and panic filled voice evoked fear in Maan's heart as he turned around to see Geet drenched in her own blood, due to a bullet that hit her on the chest. Involuntarily his eyes traveled in all the directions to see who the culprit was as he patted her cheeks continuously to make her get up.

" Geet, get up, dammit! This is not at all funny! You better wake up now or I will never talk to you." said Maan as he patted her cheeks without stopping as his brain stopped functioning.

Doctor, he needs to call a doctor, decided Maan as he dug out his phone to call for an ambulance.

Though it was Geet who was hurt, it was his life which he felt was going to leave the body.

Maan who couldn't hear or sense anything except for the heaving breaths of Geet suddenly felt someone close to him. Instinctively, he brought Geet closer to him as if protecting her from the possible threat. Maan looked up while formulating a plan to escape in his mind, if it was the person who shot Geet. But much to his surprise it was Karan Singhania standing beside him while looking at Geet with tear filled eyes.

Apparently Karan Singhania was there to take away Geet along with him once his men shot Maan Singh Khurana but the whole situation had turned upside down much to their bad luck.

Seeing Karan beside him, made Maan's guts churn with distaste that he tried to kill a person whom he claimed to love. Maan rose up with Geet in his arms and started walking to the entrance because the ambulance would reach there soon or if it doesn't reach by the time he goes down with Geet, he would drive her to the hospital. That was Maan's plan.

Karan had seen love in Geet's eyes when she placed herself in front of the bullet while trying to pull Maan away from it. And that minute his redemption began for trying to hurt a person whom the person he loved, loved so much that she didn't care about her own life.

As Maan took quick and firm steps, Karan stood rooted to the spot while digging out to call to Shashi Gupta, the mastermind behind this whole fiasco.

" Hello Uncle..."

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Leela Vati Hospital


"Mr.Khurana, your wife's condition is really critical. We cannot say anything now. Till she doesn't regain her consciousness, we cannot make any firm decision on this case. But we will try our best, Mr Khurana." assured the doctor, who had checked on Geet, whose breathing had become shallow.

" You are supposed to be the best doctor in this hospital, dammit! Then why are you saying all this? Go, do something and save her!!" shouted Maan, whose heart bled in pain by seeing Geet with oxygen mask and machines around her through the glass window on the door.

" Calm down, Mr.Khurana. I assure you that Mrs.Khurana will be perfectly fine as before. Now if you can excuse me, I will look into the case further." The doctor excused himself as the nurse came up with the scan reports to him while Maan stood rooted to the spot.

How can anyone's parents be so ruthless that they would want to kill their daughter's husband, the husband which they themselves chose when it was not even the age to get married?

He closed his eyes shut to let the threatening tears flow out of them, hoping that the pain in his eyes reduces but as soon as he opened them, he found the person he started to hate the most, Shashi Gupta, his supposed father-in-law and the person who ruined his childhood and his wife's ex-fiance, Karan Singhania, the person who was there on the spot but didn't care to come to Geet's help.

The levels of anger increased in his body as his blood started boiling in raw fury. How dare they come here to meet Geet when they themselves were the masterminds behind it?

" What brings you here Mr.Gupta and Mr.Singhania? Was there any revenge left that you wanted to take from me? And great timing I must say. I am in vulnerable state, and possibly I will not even try to protect myself. My guards are not here or neither anyone who can protect me. But most of all, my wife is not here to protect me again from you both. Time sense, I must say." Maan spat out controlling the anger which he was sure would not stay in control for long.

" No, Maan Beta. I am not here to harm my son-in-law. I am here to ask for his apologies." Shashi Gupta muttered with his eyes lowered and hands joined asking for forgiveness.

Was this even genuine or another plan by Shashi to trap Maan?

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Yayy she accepted his love for her and they are doing so great until this incident! hope Karan rots in jail for trying to harm Maan and getting Geet shot!
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Loved the updates. Geet has accepted Maan whole heartedly.
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Nice updates dear geet accepted Mann geet father and Karan planning to finish Mann and get his daughter when Mann takes geet to hotel they try to kill Mann but at that time geet came in middle seeing some is try to kill Mann she shot and admitted in hospital dr told she is critical geet father asked sorry to mann

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