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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 1
Rudra POV:
I am Rudra Pratap Ranawat, who was mercilessly teased in the childhood from the boys for the mistake which I have not committed. My mother ran away with love of her life leaving wounded son and egoistic husband. From the small age I learnt only failure. My egoistic father thought three lines which were written in my heart by hot iron rod. Don't trust beautiful girls. Beautiful girls are our weakness. Beautiful girls don't belong to anyone. Those words are the cause of my mother. Girls are just for sex which I found in my life. I learnt to be alone, I learnt to fight the world alone, I learnt to live alone, i learnt failure only gives you egoistic victory. Loneliness is my best friend they accept what I am. My father repenting for his mistakes what he done to me but I am not, I gave him the punishment to live without me. There was a night which I wait looking at the door without sleeping for my mother to come back but my father will happily celebrate his loneliness with liquor. My waiting never ended and my mother also never came back. My Life is full of darkness and I am not afraid of it because I am the maker of that darkness. I was one of ruthless man, I never cared about others feelings. I am famous of not respecting elders in my field. to get the position girls will do anything. Today morning I got a call from my so called father to come and see him for at least the last time. I laughed by hearing those words he told me he is the last relation i have, no he is wrong my loneliness and darkness are my relations. But something told me to go and visit him because still I have small affection for him in my heart for which I hate myself and I left Mumbai to see him without knowing my life going to change in the place which I hated the most. My childhood memories. Now I am may be successful business man but i am a failed kid, a kid who lost his happiness and still don't know what is to be loved by someone, still don't know how it felt being hang out with friends, still don't know what it will be when pampered and now I don't want those alien feelings. I stepped inside the main gate of the Ranawat palace but the atmosphere shocked me. The place was beautifully decorated with lights and flower, the moon and start added extra beauty to the place. The people around gave me a look which made me to bark at them, they talked about some girl. My ears got those lines "she is the bad omen from the childhood". "its her horoscope killed her parents". "Now the groom also not has come". The more I got to know my heart started to beat faster, I dono about whom they are talking but the word groom absent sent shiver to be, my father sudden phone call made me to think together which only increased my anger more. Suddenly I heart my father's loud voice. I hurriedly took my steps to see him. He my father turned and dragged me with him to the center of the hall. I looked around the place where I ran and played in my childhood, I saw my cousin brother and my mother's so call selfish sister and my eye stuck to the one girl who bowed her head down and tears rainfall is pouring. Her heavy golden color dress, simple jewelry made beauty to her body. This the first time I am getting attached to a girl by seeing her outer curve alone. My heart asked her to lift her head and look at me but sudden outburst words of my father made me to control my heart. I heard the words of my father "Ranawat's will always fulfill his words even at the last breath from his body. My son will marry her." By hearing those words I pulled my head high to look at my father with the burning eyes but I meet a pair of beautiful eyes which is looking at me. Those eyes showed so much pain which reflected mine, loss, hatter and small glitter which I was not able to describe. Those eyes kept me as a captive. That look cleared my darkness which was surrounded around me with the bright golden color light like her dress. Today morning I started my day as a bachelor guy and but fate made to end as a married man. I tied a black beads chain to the girl who is sitting next to me and whom I met two min before and also whose name is unknown. I don't the reason for accepting to marry, I told my heart my father's pride in his family name made me to do so, but corner of my heart told those eyes are the real reason.

Sorry due to network problem I am not able to post the chapter. pls forgive me. this SS will have only 10 chapters. I hope u will all support me by giving the comments.

Note: please press the like button and give your valuable comments my dear friends.

Edited by prabha.abha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG Abha,it's beautiful...beautiful ...beautiful...it's PERFECT.👏...from start to finish its 'perfection' at the optimum level...as I started reading , I was thoughtful. In the minute after that, I understood how deep the words were...For a few moments after reading , I was completely silent. It was as if my mind was trying to find appropriate words to describe how amazingly well you have written it but my dictionary faild me... This is the first time I am reading your work and cursing myself WHY oh WHY did I not read any of it before.
Really looking forward to it,Abha.🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: NavyaKavya30

OMG Abha,it's beautiful...beautiful ...beautiful...it's PERFECT.👏...from start to finish its 'perfection' at the optimum level...as I started reading , I was thoughtful. In the minute after that, I understood how deep the words were...For a few moments after reading , I was completely silent. It was as if my mind was trying to find appropriate words to describe how amazingly well you have written it but my dictionary faild me... This is the first time I am reading your work and cursing myself WHY oh WHY did I not read any of it before.
Really looking forward to it,Abha.🤗



Thank you thank you thank you so much dear...my first comment I best dear. Your words made my day beautiful.

My name is Prabha dear, abha is the name I choose for writing story. Today u praised me with that name I am so much happy..

My story book , is my index if u want you can read some of the story I written for Madu and Sultan. Sohum and Rajj ( bhani serial in colours).
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start. So Rudr is a businessman. His parents directly or indirectly have managed to make a monster out of a child, who hates women. But if his heart has started to flutter at the sight of a girl and her eyes has made him do the impossible then there is still hope for him.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: custodian75

Nice start. So Rudr is a businessman. His parents directly or indirectly have managed to make a monster out of a child, who hates women. But if his heart has started to flutter at the sight of a girl and her eyes has made him do the impossible then there is still hope for him.


Thanks dear.
Ya there still good person living inside him and surely his wife will pull out of the good boy 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing Start Dear...
All ranawat characters r remain d same except Rudra's Job so Rudra is nt belongs to BSD...
His mother leaving him & makes him as a Same Rudra what v r al seen in RangRasiya...
At first sight itself Rudra is Fall in Love Wit Paro sooo Cute Eyelock scene Dear..
Watever d reason behind,finally Rudra is Paro's & Paro is Rudra's...
Hope Paro ll definitely heal his Pain wit her Eternal Love...
Perfect Start Dear...
Eagerly waiting for your next Update...
Thanks for PM...
P.S: Only 10 chapters r there in this SS so sad...
Pls try to add few more Chapters too...
Edited by -BhavyaEsther- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: bluetitliya

OMG what a chapter 👏
I am just speechless don't know how to put my feelings into words.
Your each word made me feel Rudra's pain .chapter is so intense.

Thanks for the PM


Thank you so much dear. I am glad that you all like it😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -BhavyaEsther-

Amazing Start Dear...

All ranawat characters r remain d same except Rudra's Job so Rudra is nt belongs to BSD...
His mother leaving him & makes him as a Same Rudra what v r al seen in RangRasiya...
At first sight itself Rudra is Fall in Love Wit Paro sooo Cute Eyelock scene Dear..
Watever d reason behind,finally Rudra is Paro's & Paro is Rudra's...
Hope Paro ll definitely heal his Pain wit her Eternal Love...
Perfect Start Dear...
Eagerly waiting for your next Update...
Thanks for PM...
P.S: Only 10 chapters r there in this SS so sad...
Pls try to add few more Chapters too...


Thank you dear. In this story u will send a diff rudra. He himself will fall in love with his wife.

Note: actually typing is big pain for me, I all ways wished the some machine typed for me. I will try to add more chapter dear. 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shafoo

that is nicee update


Thank you dear 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh wow what an amazing start, ur description of a life he carved out for himself was heart tugging. U capture that first look and the impact it had on him so beautifully , in da serial the first sight if her had effected rudra just as much but CVS didn't do justice to that so reading ur work and his brilliant u highlighted the impact on him is such a pleasure. Well written, excited to read next chapter, thks for the pm

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