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Posted: 10 years ago
NAUC TSC
EPI - 502
written by mansi


SCENE - 1
Delhi

Alisha came back in the evening from her "date" and decided to call sukku. She ringed him and waited him to pick up.

Alisha - (monologue) pick up sukku... m dying to talk to u...

Sukku - hi alisha

Alisha - hey sukku... kya kar rhe ho...

Sukku - nothing...

Alisha - u know sukku mjhe kitna bada concert choregraph karne ka offer mila h... m sooo excited ur bhaiyu kh rhe the ki agar ye hit ho gya to i will get more offers isnt it great...

Sukku - yeah it is... that means u will not come back (sad)

Alisha - may be... may be not... will u be upset if i dont come back..???

Sukku - yes... i will be...

Alisha - why...

Sukku - because i miss u alisha...

Alisha was elated hearing it from him. For the first time he said that n that too without hesitation.

Alisha - i miss u too sukku...

Sukku - (smiling) tell me what u did all day...

Alisha - (all excited) are aaj to mai kunal k sath poora din baahar ghumi... hm log lotus temple gye the fir qutub minar gye... fir market m shopping ki then he took me to an awesome restaurant and then he gifted me a cute dress... such a lovely day it was...

Sukku didnt say anything and just stayed silent.

Alisha - sukku... sukku... u there??

Sukku - ha alisha... m here...

Alisha - u sounded angry... did i said something wrong...

Sukku - nahi alisha nothing like that... m good here... m not angry..

Alisha - u sure sukku

Sukku - yes alisha... i promise...

Alisha - ok... then tell me... when the movie is set to release...

Sukku - may be in 2 months... i dont know editing is going on n o seriously hope that ajay dont mess up with that or else u know what wil happen...

Alisha - he wont do something like that... itti himaat nhi h usme... ur agar usne esa kuch bhi kia na sukku i swear i will kill him i tell u...

Sukku - (chuckling) ok ok lady tiger... chill... sure u can do that...

Alisha giggled and both of them continued talking for another hour.


SCENE - 2
Jwalu school (next morning)

Jwala was passing by the corridor when she saw rishi running.

Jwala - rishi... kya hua

Rishi - dont stop me jwalu i forgot to bring my homework...

Jwalu - so...??

Rishi - m going to hide...

Jwalu looked at rishi incrediously and then laughed out loud.

Rishi - has kyu rhi h...

Jwalu - mr. Rishi are u scared...

Rishi - uh... umm... just a little...

Jwalu laughed again and shook her head at him.

Jwala - (handling over her notebook) ye lo... homework...

Rishi - par ye tumhara homework h na.. mjhe kyu de rhi h...

Jwala - (rolling her eyes) sir ko dikhane k lie... he wont punish me as u know i always do my work before time, being nerd has some perks too but tera mjhe pta nhi...

She laughed again as he scratched the back of his neck.

Rishi - u r not nerd... u r...

Jwalu - i m and m quite proud of it since u always give me a lecture about me...

Rishi - par...

Jwalu - par war mjhe nhi pta... now lets go back to the class... waise bhi i will be going to library to prepare for the state level quiz...

Rishi - oh yeah... how can i forget einstein...

Jwalu - gareebo ki...

Rishi - yeah right... can we go ur home after school... i want ur help in history u know...

Jwalu - u know history inside out rishi... baat kya h...

Rishi - kuch nhi bus... like always m going back to my empty home n i just dont feel like going... so can i just come with u and play with bunty...

Jwala - ur always welcome rishi... and never had to ask me to come home... u r my bestie and m here for u always...

Rishi - u r my bestie too n m here always too...

Jwala grinned at him while he too smiled.

Jwalu - plus bunty to bhot khush hoga aakhir someone will team up with him so he can play that stupid video game...

Rishi -and irritate u limitless...

Jwalu - yeah right...

Both of them laughed and head back to the class.


SCENE - 3
LA

Kaira came early in the mng to start up with her work when she noticed a daisey buqoute on her desk. She smiled fondly seeing them and smelled in the heavenly fragnance.

Kaira - (whispering) beautiful...

She saw a card stuck on the end of her table, she got curious and take it.out tk read.

Kaira - (reading) good morning kaira... i hope ur day be as beautiful as these flowers and u leave ur essence everywhere as their fragnance... hope in some way i can mend what ever wrong i did to u... and starting over with u again...
Viraj

Kiara grin go so wide that it looked like her face will split. She hugged the boqout and looked at viraj cabin. She knew he was in but knowing him all these years she know what to do.

As viraj came out of his cabin and went to the practice ground, kaira sneeked in and placed her surprise on jis desk before leaving.

Viraj came in after a minute and found a mug full of his fav coffee and his fav sandwich with a note lying there.

Viraj,
Itne mahino ki sabse achhi subah shayad aaj hui h hmare lie... thank u for the flowers... koshish sirf aapko hi nhi hme bhi karni h... ur hm karenge viraj... ur ha coffee pee lijiega, hme pta h aapko thandi coffee bilkul pasand nhi... ur aapne breakfast bhi nhi kiya hoga islie hmne aapka fav sandwich bhi rakha h... a small step from my side.
Kaira

Viraj smiled and took a sip of his coffee looking over his cabin to her desk where she was engorssed in work but still has an undying smile.

Viraj - perfect... just like u...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsm as usual... But mujhe ek baat samjh ni aandi ki y u write "dnt cmmt here".. So where shld i cmmt if not here? .. Plz teach me m new here so I jst know hw to lyk, cmmt nd open msgs.. So plz teach me
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Posted: 10 years ago
@plaksha... U can comment on discussion thread...
Link of discussion thread will be posted below the epi...
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Posted: 10 years ago
No Epi Today...

Sorry For Inconvenience...

I hope u will understand us...
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Posted: 10 years ago

NAUC TSC
EPI - 503
written by-Shibani

-Scene 1-

*Gangwal House*

Bunty was playing with the cricket stumps, when he heard the door knocked.

Bunty- Darwaaza khula hai...

Jwala opened the door and she was followed by Rishi.

Jwala- Kaha tha naa, cricket hi khel raha hoga, kab sudhrega yaar tu Bunty..

Bunty rolled his eyes.

Bunty- yeh dekho Rishi Bhaiya, Mujhe Maa ne naya season ball diya, aur Nishu Di ne Adidas ki bat...

Rishi- Aur main tere liye Tenis Cricket Ball laaya hoon...

Bunty- Chalo toh phir, ek match ho jaaye...

The two rushed out if the room and Jwala sighed.

*On the ground*

Bunty was batting and Rishi was bowling. Bunty hit a sixer.

Rishi- Wow yaar, tu toh too good hai!

Bunty- Thanks, par yeh sab mere bat ka kamaal hai...

Soon Bunty's friends joined them and they played a Twenty-20 match, which Bunty and Rishi won.

-Scene 2-

*Viraj's House*

Nisha, Vasundhara and Kaira were arranging the plates on the table when Kabir came from behind and shouted near Vasundhara's ears, scaring her. Kabir burst out laughing while Vasundhara tried to control herslef.

Nisha-(angry) Kya bakwaas hai yeh Kabir? Maa kitni darr gayi pata hai?

Kabir-(explaining) Arrey Maa ko toh iski aadat hai, main Bachpan se aise hi unhe daraata aaya hoon, hai naa Maa?

Vasundhara- Par ab aap bacche nahi rahe? Be serious about life now...

Viraj-(entering the dining room) Maa, lagta hai aapko kuch jyaada hi vehem ho rahe hai aajkal, Kabir and seriousness is, (thinking for some time)kya kehti woh Kirti?

Nisha- How Blah!

Kabir-(laughing) Badi jaldi pata chala aap dono ko... Waise khaana kisne banaya?(with fear in his voice) Don't tell me Nisha ne...

Nisha slapped him on his shoulder while Kaira giggled.

Kaira- Nahi Kabir, Nisha ne nahi bananya, maine banaya hai...

Kabir-(sitting on the table)Hush! Bach gaya main...

He was interrupted when the doorbell rang.

Viraj- Hum dekhte hai...

He left while Nisha served Kabir. In a few minutes he returned with ice cream packs.

Nisha and Kaira- (happily) Ice-cream?

Viraj- Itne dino baad saath mein lunch kar rahe hai, socha kyun naa aapko ice-cream treat de doon?

Kabir- (happily) Very god idea Bro...

Vasundhara- Kitne dino se ice-cream khaane ka mann tha humara...

She picked up the pack, when Kaira snatched it.

Kaira- Sorry aunty, lekin aapko jaldi sardi ho jaati hai, isiliye no ice-cream for you..

Vasundhara-(sad) Not fair...

Nisha-(teasing) Everything is fair in love and family Mom... Chalo chalo, pehle lunch karte ahi... phir(eyeing Vasundhara) I scream, you scream, we all scream for (Kabir and she together) Ice cream!

They had a gala family time enjoying the lunch and ice cream with Nisha and Kabir constant bickering and Viraj and Kaira stealing each other's glances.

-Scene 3-

*NKH*

Nisha- Aaj kitna maza aaya naa lunch pe?

Kabir- sacch mein, Bade Bhaiya kya poems likte hai...maan gaye unhe...

Nisha-(teasingly) Aur ek mera pati hai, kisi kaam ka nahi...

Kabir-(pulling her closed to himself) Accha? Main kisi kaam ka nahi hoon?

Nisha blushed and pushed him away. She went in the washroom while Kabir switched on the T.V. After a few minutes Nisha changed and came in the living room.

Nisha-(sitting next to him)Tujhe Alisha ne call kiya tha kya?

Kabir- Arrey, accha yaad dila diya, Kal pata hai kya hua?

Nisha-(sarcastically) Tune bataya?

Kabir- Toh abhi bata raha hoon na...

He told her about his and Alisha's phone conversation and Sukku's reaction.

Nisha-(laughing) Haw! That's very bad Kabir...

Kabir- Bichaara... Kitna sad ho gaya tha pata hai...

Nisha- Kitna J ho gaya naa woh...

He mobile rang. It was Dolly.

Dolly- Hello Nishu, aaj zara ghar pe aa na, hum baby ke liye hum sabke puraane kapade nikaal rahe hai... Taayiji ki madat karne aa naa, please... Laxmi Chachi ne tum dono ko dinner ke liye bhi invite kiya hai...

Nisha- (excited) sacchi? we'll be there...

She hanged the call and told Kabir. The two went to Gangwal House.

-Scene 4-

*Gangwal House*

The house was in a mess as the three ladies and Jwala were searching their old stuff and reliving memories. Vimla, Rupan and Laxmi were telling Dolly, Nisha and Jwala their childhood incidents. Kabir admired the cute scene, when he felt a tap on his shoulder. It was Sukku.

Kabir- Arrey Sirf Suketu? Kahaan the tum?

Sukku- Dost ke ghar gaya tha, waise tum dono yahaan kaise?

Kabir told him the reason and the two went to Sukku's room letting the women enjoy their own time.

Sukku- Aur bata, academy kaise chal rahi hai?

Kabir- Mast!

Sukku- Aaj-kal students teri badi tareef karte hai, kal woh Swayam mila tha mujhe...

Kabir- Haan, he is too good at contemporary, waise, Alisha isn't bad at contemporary naa, socha raha hoon agar woh waapas aayegi toh usse hi contemporary and kathak sikhane doon... Ek extra batch ban jaayegi, what say?

Sukku smiled hearing Alisha's name, which Kabir didn't miss.

Kabir- Tu kyun battisi dikha raha hai? Main Alisha ko trainer banane ki baat kar raha hoon, tujhe nahi...Waise bhi I don't think woh aayegi, woh Kunal usse todhi aane dega...

Sukku's smile disappeared.

Sukku- (trying to explain) Par yeh toh Alisha ki life hai naa, why des Kunal matter...

Kabir- Bhai, jab pyaar hota hai naa, sab better karta hai, right Nisha?

Sukku turned to see a smiling Nisha.

Nisha- Bilkul sahi bola, ab mujhe hi dekho, kabhi kisi ki nahi sunti thi, aaj sirf Kabir-Kabir karti hoon... wonder Sukku ka kya hoga...

Sukku-(annoyed)Main jaata hoon...

He stood up, but Nisha pushed him back in the room. Kabir winked at her. Nisha nooded.

Nisha-Arrey yaar Sukku, life hai hi aisi, ek din tujhe bhi pyaar ho jaayega, tu bhi apni girlfriend ke best friend se J hone lagega... It happens, chill yaar...

Sukku looked at the two in confusion.

Kabir-(teasingly) Kahin tu Kunal se jealous toh nahi ho raha?

Sukku- (avoiding) What rubbish?

He walked out of the room and Nisha and Kabir burst out laughing.


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Posted: 10 years ago
Do not comment here!!!
Epi 503 DT
Edited by ...Shibu... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
NAUC TSC
EPI 504
WRITTEN BY MANSI


SCENE -1
SAURAV HOUSE (night)


saurav was pacing in his room talking on the phone with dolly.

Saurav - to would be mother... u r ready?

Dolly - yes would be father... waise ye sawal to mjhe tjhse puchna chahie na saurav... kyuki normally to esa hi hota h...

Saurav - vo normal cases m na dolly... par yha na to tu normal h na mai... ur mai to ever ready hu... i cant wait for our baby dolly.

Dolly - me too... (caressing her baby bump) baby is kicking me...

Saurav - kaash mai bhi wha hota tere paas... par tu fikr mat kar thode din ur fir tu yhi rhegi mere paas... achha sun esa karte h next week hi shadi kar lete h...

Dolly - oe... nhi mai ese football bnke shadi nhi karungi... jab hmara baby aa jaega na tab mai tjhse shadi karungi... waise bhi mjhe mere wedding photos perfect chahie...

Saurav - achha ji... ur kya kya chahie aapko...

Dolly - ur... ekdum perfect wedding chahie... taaki teri meri life m aage sab kuch perfect ho...

Saurav - tjhe jaisa chahie sab waisa hi hoga dolly... sab kuch perfect...

Dolly - i knows...

Saurav was smiling at her cute english when sudha came by his door to talk but instead looked at her son who was looking so happy talking to dolly.

Saurav - u know maine baby k lie room bhi tyar karana shuru kar dia h ur hmara bhi... i cant wait to have u here with me...

Dolly chuckled at the other end.

Sudha looked at her son once more and decided something. She went from there leaving saurav to talk to dolly while she dialled a no.


SCENE - 2
GH (MORNING)

Everyone in the gh was having tea and enjoying their morning when sudha entered the gh.

Sudha - namaste uncleji...

Dadaji - are sudha bete... aao aao... baitho...

Sudha greeted everyone and vice versa.

Vimla - sudha ji aaye baithiye...

Sudha sat beside laxmi and across dadaji while laxmi offered her tea.

Dadiji - sudha... itti subah subah kaise aana hua...

Sudha - (serious) vo ek bhot jaruri baat karni h mjhe aap logo se... dolly ur saurav ki shadi k baare m...

Everybody looked at her curiously while laxmi and vimla started having mini panic attack.

Sudha who was watching them keenly burst out laughing leaving everyone skeptical.

Sudha - are are aap log ese kyu dekh rhe h... mai to ye kh rhi thi ki ab hme dolly ur saurav ki shadi ki date fix kar deni chahie...

Viren - oh... kya sudha ji aapne to dara hi diya tha...

Sudha - maaf kijiega bhaisahab bus socha thoda majak kar lu... waise maine kal hi pandit ji se baat ki h... ur vo kuch hi din m taarikh nikal denge...

Laxmi - ye to bhot hi achhi baat h...

Sudha - ur maine pandit ji se kh dia h ki taarik jald se jald ki hone chahie... ab mai ur intzaar nhi kar sakti... isilie unhone 3 hafte baad ki taarik nikali h...

Rupan - par itti jaldi saari tyaari kaise hogi... maine to abhi shopping bhi start nhi ki h...

Mohan - rupan shadi dolly ki h... tmhari nhi h...

Everybody laughed at this.

Dadiji - hme bhi utni hi jaldi h sudha jitni tmhe... par pehle dolly ki delivery...

Sudha - ha aunty ji mjhe pta h... par ab usme bhi jyada samay nhi h... ur utna hi waqt tyari k lie to chahie hi... kyu uncleji...

Dadaji - thik h sudha... esa hi sahi... ramesh viren ur mohan... shadi ki tyaria shuru karo...

Aman who was there jumped in joy.

Aman - oe hoe... kya baat h... mai abhi sab ko bta k aati hu...

She ran upstairs leaving everyone amused at her excitment. Soon everybody engrossed themselves in further discussion.

SCENE - 3
GH

Aman first ran in her room to find umesh looking for something in thier cupboard. She moved to him and back hugged him.

Umesh - are aman kya hua...

Aman - laddo... aaj mai bhot bhot bhot khush hu... pta h abhi niche sudha aunty aae thi ur unhone dolly di ki shadi ki date niklwa li h...

Umesh - (turning towards her) sachhi???

Aman - ha... 3 weeks baad ki...

Umesh beemed at her and hugged her back.

Umesh - dolly kitni khush hogi... tune use btaya...

Aman - nahi... abhi ur kisi ko bhi nhi btaya...

Umesh - chalo sath m btate h...

Aman nodded and uman left from their room. Soon they told all the cousins about dosa wedding except dolly and nibir.
All of them reached dolly room and found her and saurav sitting in the balcony talking.

Kirti - how blah saurav... tu subah subah yha kya kar rha h...

Saurav - apni fiance ko good mng wish karne aaya tha... miss blah...

Kirti rolled her eyes at him while jwalu jumped in between.

Jwalu - ohho saurav "jiju" ye sab chhodo hmare paas na esi news h ki aapki mng na ekdum best ho jaegi...

Dolly - kya news jwalu...

Sukku - vo ye ki sudha aunty aae thi abhi... ur unhone aapki shadi ki taarik...

All the cousins shouted together - fix kardi h...

Saurav - sachhi... kab... jaldi bolo tum log...

Aman - ohho saurav jiju... aaram se... btate h btate h... aaj se thik 3 weeks baad... hmari dolly di ki shadi h...

Everybody cheered for them as dolly hugged saurav with moist eyes. Soon the others joined them too in this grp hug.


SCENE - 4
KNH

Kabir and nisha were sitting on their couch, cuddling with each other, enjoying a movie.

Kabir - wifey... seedhi baith na...

Nisha giggled and squirmed in his hold causing disruption.

Kabir - wifey... sun na...

Nisha chuckled again but continued doing it.

Kabir - achha bachhu... tu nhi sunegi na abhi btata hu...

kabir started tickling her mercilessly while she started having fits of laughter.

Nisha - pls pls kabir sorry yaar achha chhod de pls...

Kabir - na...

Nisha kept begging him but he continued. They were still in thier session when a knock on the door broke them apart.

Nisha - thank god... jo bhi aaya meri jaan bachali usne...

She tried to catch her breath as kabir stick out his tongue to her and opened the door. Soon the whole wanar sena appeared in their living room with pizzas and drinks.

Nisha - oh tum log... ur ye kya h ye pizza kyu laye ho...

Bunty - taaki aap khana bnane ka offer na karo...

Jwalu smacked his head as nisha made an hawww face at them.

Umesh - are nishu ise chhod na... ye hm islie laaye h kyuki aaj hm celebrate karenge ek good news...

Kabir - dont tell me... aman...

He looked at aman curiously as amn smacked kabir at the back of his head.

Umesh - (blushing) nhi vo good news nhi... dolly ur saurav ki shadi ki date fix ho gyi h vo good news.

Kabir - oh...

Kirti - how blah jiju... ye kaisa reaction tha...

Nisha - are ise chhod ye to h hi duffer... tu mjhe bta kab ki date fix hui ur achanak... ur tyari ur...

Sukku - are bullet train aaram se... 3 weeks baad ki date fix hui h...

Nisha - sachhi... Wow...

Kirti - ha ur is baar sabki dresses mai khid design karungi... for every occasion...

Aman - wow... ur ha khane ki tension lene ki to jarurat hi nhi h mai ur laddu h na...

Kabir - ur entertainment ki jimmedari meri... be it sangeet mehndi ur anything...

Sukku - ur mai decoration ur baaki cheeze sambhalunga with jwalu and bunty help... kyu...

Both the kids nodded.

Nisha - ur mai kya karungi...

Umesh - tu bus dolly k paas rehna... tjhe pta h na aaj kal uska haal kya h... baat baat p jyada pareshan ho jati h...

Nisha - thik h... done... m soo excited...

All others - we too...
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