Kriyaansh short story *Reviews required*

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She was incomprehensive ...
She couldn't define her feelings the butterflies in her stomach
Rey the love of her life had emailed her that he has some important work with her She was pleasant so much that she took an immediate flight from NY to Mumbai..
The smile refusing to leave her lips..

REASON- simply because she knew that around this time both of them were aware of the circumstances and the reasons of why she pushed him away from her ..
She was so sure for the same coz she had seen it on his face that he had made out this particular time why she forced him to leave her and go back to India .
.She was so specific that unlike last time he will not punish her unknowingly and simultaneously he won't hurt himself too
She expected him to be mature ,to be happy that their love may be of majority of sacrifices and less of happiness but he will wait for her he will keep their love alive
..And this will the last test and the last hurdle of their love..She had seen that on his face.. Love quiet evident... "They will be one" with this thought sleep consumed her with some pleasant dreams of their unending love .
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On the other hand he was planning to tell her about his mistake rather his crime ..Rey was in total state of disgust with his own self ...as much he wanted to get over Sara and restart his life with his baatcutter destiny has dragged him to Sara again And now he can't ignore her even if he begs to god ...He has to be a MAN now as per his consciousness..
At the very same time he is convinced that she will understand him and she will remain with him for his life because he knew they will die without each other..
Maybe after he convinces her he will divorce Sara and they can be together as he was aware that by now Sara knows that he soul is with Kria and Kria is the heart if his body is said to be life ..
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Soon to her luck or rather her future dismay her flight landed early than the set time ...
Her savior and best friend Swayam called her at that time to know about her whereabouts and het comeback .He reached the airport after he knew that she is talking from the airport itself
And here was her bestie Swayam she was unable to make out the situation and was rather surprised to see her in a pleasant mode ..The last he knew that Rey had emailed her to talk about Sara issue and called her to Mumbai..
He thought maybe this sensitive issue will be unfolded now by him as it wasn't right to let her know any such thing when she is away ..
He rather found himself guilty here too he knew he should have stopped Rey to be close to his cousin Tani at the first place itself and now Sharon's cousin has come to destroy her happiness..
He remembers her each and every effort to make him and Sharon a couple see the irony of his life ..the reason for her agony was their respective cousins themselves..
He mentally cursed God for bestowing them with a pure soul like Kria..They fell so acute in front of her sacrifices ,her efforts,her hard work ,her friendship everything..
.THAT'S IT Swayam thought he now took it upon himself to free this innocent girl cum best friend Kria ..with that he drove reverse from the way to college to his house .
..He needs her happiness this time them its high time she has given herself for them
Swayam where are we going ? Kria questioned him
Seeing the reversed motion of his carI need to tell you something very important before you reach college .
Haan but kya and Rey bhi kuch batana chahte hai na ? So let's meet all and then you tell me whatever you want to ! After all hum sab friends hai
No Kria not this time please
neither I nor Rey ,Sharon none of us have been your true friends ..
that was the only thing she heard before she knew Swayam was on his feet crying ...
it made her remember that unfortunate day when she had to leave Rey heartbroken ..She can see herself, her tears ,her fears and all the feelings emotions that she suffered ..
She was sure that something is gonna break very badly again ..only if she knew that it was her nothing but her HEART again

Swayam with all the choking and tears finally let out the whole truth ..
WOW She thought her ex boyfriend had called her up to meet to tell him that he made another girl pregnant and now he wants to be with that girl as now he has become a MAN - superb Kria thought
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REYAANSH SINGHANIA IS DEAD IN MY WORLD' with that declaration she walked out of his house never to come back for such selfish people again
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was the end ..her soul now tired and her body decided to free her from all bonds.. She had never been in such a state even when she faced innumerable hurdles ..Dictionary had no words neither to describe her nor life..After all what was her fault ??
Love ,Dream,Or Friendships... She reckoned all the said emotions were the root cause of her sufferings ...Now she decides to accomplish her dream of Dholgaon Dance Studio ...
she really wanted to spread the joy of dance there ...
While deep in thinking her cell rang ..
Hello ?
Hello Kria !! Raj this side
Haan Raj ?
Actually a very good news in fact the best news for you I am at the airport now ..
So this is the good news ?! I am happy
Raj wanted to hug his cute friend for her nature so pure ..Ahh no Kria jo good news hai vo milke bataunga its really huge
OK so I am coming to pick you doc Raj she said Aree no i am just few mins away from your place he said making her smile
Ok meet you then doc ...she hanged up
Welcome Raj ..she beamed happily hugging him and indirectly making his emotions deep
I am so glad and excited muje abhi hi batana hai tumhe ..he said unable to maintain silence
Ok if you are so excited batado nai to stomachache hoga ..she giggled
Ok so news of your life is that you are not just fit to travel but you are fit to dance ..
Her eyes welled up listening to this ..her life is really a film with an exception of she being only herione with no hero..she dismissed her thought of anyone like hero in her life
She was somewhere where her feet wasn't successful in being grounded ..she immediately left for the balcony to let her passion in ,her pride ,the room for dance to be filled with same intensity again
Raj went behind her..he had always been a great admirer of this girl..but these days he just can't hide how much he cares for her and he is well aware of his heart too..
Keeping all aside he started the lost conversation again
Umm Kria ? So you are coming with me hai na
Where Raj ?
She was clueless
You forgot your gang had organized fund raiser for your dream ..so we had planned that I will fund it ..remember na ?
Chalungi to sahi Raj but now you are not gonna sponsor the raiser.. she said with determination But why ??
Shhshh don't ask now you will know it further there ..


Rey was feeling quite odd ..He can feel her presence but how ? Her flight will land in evening.. Why is he having mixed emotions ..being clueless he was just roaming around seeing the preparations for fund raiser ...His cell beeped with message from Swayam ..- Rehearsal hall in 20 mins please
All of them reached ..the last one being Swayam.. had his head hung low which was new to the gang ..before anyone could question him ..
He spoke straight guys Kria and Raj ..hop in Everyone was happy and surprised to see her but with someone who holded her hands as if never to leave for a breather and more to shock was a black suited man who looked like a lawyer ..Listen you people..
Kria finally broke the ice
You are not gonna arrange any fund raiser if you attempt so ..
ALL OF YOU will be in legal hassle its my direct warning to all
But ? Sara spoke
Outsiders better be quiet or be OUT ! She kinda roared and everything stopped
The reasons are - 1 Dholgaon dance school is my dream..I am not dependent on you people for its completion ..Vaise bhi bade ehsaan hai tum logo ke mujpe ...She blurted out eyeing Reyansh 2- I don't have any kind of relation with anyone present here so my dreams do not need a push by strangers 3- if I give a media statement saying that you people are fooling around saying we are completing Kria Ghai's dream which everyone can see wide eyed then it is considered by my statement as Defamation of a professional by personal reasons/enemity
So if this fund raiser isn't stopped now all will be behind the bars soon .
.IS THAT CLEAR
She came like a storm and went like a hurricane blowing their senses and minds .


.SWAYAM?? everyone spoke in unison..
She did what she felt was right after all it was her dream and if she doesn't wanna get it completed by us ..then its her choice and I support her ...saying this even Swayam left
..He knew that only justifying the legal notice thingie wasn't the only issue ..he had to tell everyone what occurred when he finally let out the truth in front of her ..
so he sent a voice message to everyone ( excluding sara ) and except Rey ..
Rey he knew will counter him personally..
But its high time Kria is freed of all bondage .

.So even before he could mull over that he received a call from Rey and he didn't need to utter even yes to him as Rey was already driving ...
Why all this ? Swayam ? Why ? Rey spoke in absolute anger
As if you care ? Actually now seeing you like this I felt Maine sahi kiya .
.he uttered Maine Kria ko sab bata dia ..she knows about every damn thing..right from your desperation to meet Sara till the resultant effects for which you called her back..
Reyansh Singhania ,,Kria is not a toy and now she is free from all shit ..ab jake tum kisike peeche raho ya kisiko pregnant karo ...
she has discarded you like she had to way before
Rey stumbled upon ground here he was trying to balance out things and live a life with her and here his best friend bolted every effort in mud and shit ...
Swayam ?
He managed to speak
No Rey enough of this balance crap if you have to take care of your deed with that sara you cannot live with Kria and
dare you!! He said pointing finger on him
DARE YOU TRY TO CONVINCE KRIA or go near her I will make sure you dwell in hell
Edited by Barkha_ - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Kria?

Yes Raj ..she spoke and looked up to him and she knew he was gonna ask her about what she did

Before u voice yourself Raj I wanna make it simpler to u..my life was never they way I wanted I always faced hurdles lost my everything after meeting those people she sighed sadly pointing to the 'gang'..
Raj u know everything right so just listen out that I m done ,,DONE with dealing with ppl who dont care for me anymore.. DONE with the 'Lover' who thinks who loves me out of the world and reflects the same by gifting me wounds for a lifetime..
DONE not with the troubles of life but with trouble brewers in life..its high time that I thought for myself and high time I sacrifice my smile for 'destined ppl' of my life who just don't give a damnto my life..U may ask that y am I punishing my whole team just for a person then let me clarify the gang's behavior which off late has made me realize how ppl change..

Kria?
Raj nodded negatively as by now he knew everything of her life..right from her coming to her dream city to making a team of dancers who previously considered themselves as losers to her changing heart to her frndshp with Rey and her love followed by brutal incidents which changed her entirely ..she also told him about everyone's behavior when she came back ,their hatred ,then their acceptance to her,to her rejection and finally confession of Kriyaansh and then that accident which again broke her..

Kria saw his face burdened with emotions which was enough to tell her that
He got what she was trying to say

Raj I m fed up of breaking down still I want to voice it that the gang was all hateful towards her when she came back which was valid ...but then 'They never asked me the reason why I left raj none of them..its like unka fayda tha in affiliation n also they didn't bother y I was changed y I came it's was like maaf kar dia to hogya did they ever sat in peaceful place n confront me y did I leave OK leave it vo bhi hogya then when I was offered dance film n I couldn't meet they gang for 'our' academy dream tab bhi they never tried to meet me or call me up k Kria y are u keeping fine ..n then it was like for sympathy vo log hospital me aaye the mujse milne mujpe taras khane believe me when I say this I do not hate them but after departing to USA the contact was nil ..me to pagal hu abi b seedha airport se unhise Milne jarai thi but then muje flight me 22 hours mile to rest and in these 22 hours I replayed my whole life ..freaking pura sach every truth came clear ..pyar to dur ki baat hai but friendshp bhi jhoot thi ..not that they aren't my frnds but unki frndshp ka sole meaning hai k they will care for me as long as I m in their sight jab muje zaroorat hogi they escape from my life and jab unhe need hogi to they come back rushing to me giving the sake of our strong bond but in reality it was my strong bond to them not theirs..friendship me do logon k effort se bonds lifetime owned hote hai na lekin I realized frndshp to kabi thi hi nai as it was just me
Sare efforts to meri taraf se the ..n unki taraf se tha to bas sympathy and dikhava ..for my life's sake I swear I will rather stay lonely than having such 'use & throw' policy holders which are my frnds in the eyes of the world and not mine anymore...muje problems face karne se ya fail hone se ya even marne se darr nai lagta..dar hai to aise logo se jinhe mene mera world samjha jinke liye sacrifices kiye or unhone muje sirf dard dia ...

Raj was flabbergasted though he understood even before she explained but hearing her angle of frndshp in words made him teary he just caught her glum eyes for a second but the next moment he saw determination and her words 'I myself will complete my dream' confirmed to him that the girl he lost his heart wants to smile and ease out her life ..with his tears wiping he uttered that he is ready to do anything for Kria who is his inspiration now
Edited by Barkha_ - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome, do continue soon. I love it. I want to read more.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome, do continue soon. I love it. I want to
thank you
last part will be up by tonight
and I will review your story soon
sorry for being late had some issues
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Barkha_


No problem, it's ok. And i am waiting for this update😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome shot diii ⭐️ 😃
can't wait fr the nxt prt 😳
pls pls update the nxt part sooonishh😊 😊
Edited by KriYaansh-ArSha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arsha-K

Suprb story

continue soon


sure please like the part too as I send PMS on likes too
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: 9950649757

Thanx for pm update soon...

sure
please like the part as well
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank u Thank U Thank U so much 🤗
I always wanted this type of track in D3 😊

Superb start 👏 Now Can't wait for next part

And thanks again sis ❤️

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