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Posted: 20 years ago
WoW , Awesome Fan-Fic !! pLz Continue !! WoulD lUV 2 rEAD iT !!
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Posted: 20 years ago
Main Dhruv Kii Diwani Hoon

Episode 22

In The Hotel....

Suraj: Vedika....??

Angad: what happened to her?? where was she??

SUraj: i don't know.

Ms Ria enters..

Ria: where was she suraj??

surah has no words..

Ria: suraj are you okay??

still he doesn't reply..[ day dreaming 😆 😆 ]

Angad: suraj what the hell is wrong with you?? who the hell did she come with??

Suraj: she came with Dhruv..

Miss ria goes..

Misty: what did you just say??

Suraj: yes, she came with dhruv..

Kripa: does she knowe anything??

Suraj: how the hell would i know??

Angad: what do we do now??

Suraj: i don't know..

he leaves from there and is very tensed about what he should do now..

In Dhruv's Room....

Aarti: hwo is she??

Dhruv: she is very tensed..

Suraj: but why??

Dhruv: you knwo how we left from her that day..she felt bad and i told her about that day that day we say her in bed with suraj and it was not her..it was somebody else..she was sleeping by then..

Aarti: oh my!if it wasn't her then who was it??

Dhruv: i don't know..

Aarti: i think you shud go and talk to her..

Dhruv: i guess you're right..

In Mumbai....

Kumud: rajeev i think i am going to take up the role of Kali for Ekta..

Rajeev: i am glad to hear this ..i told you before too..

Kumud: yeah..rajeev i want to go out for dinner..

Rajeev: why??

Kumud: i just feel like going out today..

Rajeev: okay..go and get ready..

AT Aamnaand Cezanne's House...

Cezanne: lets go out today for dinner.

Aamna: i made food at home..

Cezanne: we'll have it some other times..i want to go out today..

Aamna: okay..let me get ready..

Cezanne: okay..

she goes and changes her clothes well takes a little time..[ lolz..girls r like tht..stop it tansha u r also a girl 😆 ]

To Be Continued...

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Posted: 20 years ago
lol great part....plz continue soon
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Posted: 20 years ago
awesome part.....cont. soon! 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
very good tansha pls continue soon.
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Posted: 20 years ago
Thanx guys for the lovely commenst and i'll soon cont..

Luv u all Tansha 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 20 years ago
plz cont.. 😉

YummY 😃
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please contiue!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
Chapter 23-Main Dhruv Ki Diwani Hoon


Vedika's room

Suraj comes to meet Vedika, she is very uspet and refuses to talk to Suraj. however Suraj manages to pacify her into talking to him.
Vedika: kaho kya kehna chate ho?
Suraj: Vedika tum kahan thi? are you okay?
Vedika: (bursts into anger) yeah i was fine until you interferred in my life.
Suraj: (shocked)me?
Vedika: yes Suraj you. Look Suraj i don't know why on earth you don't like Dhruv, if you don't want to be his mate then fine don't be, but why are you trying to cause rifts between me and Dhruv?
Suraj to himself: oh god, i think she's found out everything... quick suraj think of something quick...
Vedika: whats wrong Suraj, don't you have anything to say. (she starts to cry) why are you doing this to me Suraj?? why??
Dhruv is coming to meet Vedika in her room, he sees Vedika crying and Suraj standing beside her, he stops and decides to listen
Vedika: (still crying, and grabs hold of Suraj from both of his arms) what did you do Suraj? and why?? you know i love Dhruv then why didyou do this. (shouts really loud) why?
Suraj: (bursts) because I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!
Vedika and Dhruv are both shocked. "I LOVE YOU" is echoing in their ears.
Vedika: what??
Suraj: yes Vedika, i love you. i've loved you since the day i met you, we used to be such close mates, no one ever came between us, then all of a sudden you start taking interest in Dhruv, i just couldn't take it Vedika, i couldn't see my love being snatched away from me, could i? thats why i made such situations in which Dhruv would start keeping distances from you, so that you could come back to me. thats why i got help from Kripa and the rest to pretend you loved me infront of Dhruv.
Vedika: what?? you?? (she's very upset) i can't believe it Suraj, i can't believe that you've changed so much. i did hear that as time goes by people do tend to change but i never believed it, but today you've proven me wrong, people do change (shouting) just as you did! get lost Suraj, just go away from here, i don't want to see you again.
She falls to the floor crying, Suraj is upset and has tears in his eyes and leaves the room by saying sorry.
Suraj sees Dhruv as he's coming out. Dhruv sees the tears in Suraj's eyes.
Dhruv: Suraj im sor(Suraj interrupts)
Suraj: save it Dhruv, i dont want to know, because of you i've lost my bestets friend and love. she's all yours now!
He leaves and Dhruv goes in and kneels down infront of Vedika. Vedika hugs him.
Vedika: (crying) dhruv why did he do this? (cries even more)
Dhruv: (consoling her) calm down Vedika, stop crying. he did all this because he loves you. and in that love he tried to create misunderstandings between us.
Vedika: (calming down) no dhruv he try creating misunderstandings he DID. even you thought wrong of me. (starts crying again)
Dhruv: (hugs her tightly) im sorry Vedika, im really sorry. i shoudln't have thought such a thing im sorry. please forgive me Vedika.
Vedika: im sorry too.
Dhruv: i love you lots Vedika (kisses her hair)
Vedika: i love you too..(stops crying and cuddles up to him with her head on his chest)
Both are on the floor hugging each other tightly.Aarti is standing in the door-way watching this. She turns around and wipes her tears from her eyes and smiles.
Aarti: (thoughts) im very happy for you Dhruv, you got the love of your life, Vedika, but everyone is not so lucky as you are. it's all destiny and fate. pyar mile to kismat nahi mile to bhi kismat.
she smiles and walks off.
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Posted: 19 years ago
sorry tansha, i continued instead, but i'll leave da rest 2 u.. it isn't tht gud neway.. but i still tried!!

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