Originally posted by: teddyyy
The title has me SO intrigued, but I must do a paper now so I will enjoy this in peace soon! Thank you for the PM :D I can't wait for break next week š
Ha who was I kidding, I couldn't stop myself š Shakti not fair, why you gotta kill me with feels every time?! I am SO happy you started writing on Twinj and created an index because trust me when I'm bored in class I go through it and reread stuff, that's how amazing your ideas are! :D This piece so far is love! Both sides are right, but since Manohar agreed that he told Twinkle not to say anything, I'm happy, really happy you showed that Kunj went to apologize and bring her back. As expected, Usha didn't care about the actual video or anything but the fact that Twinkle hid something, how she manages to frustrate me every time is a wonder! I loved the Leela and Kunj interaction because you kept it so real to their relationship in the show and he is the beta of the house, of course :D RT is a pain but I actually like him in this story because because of him Kunj had to sneak into her room LOL. Bechara climbing so much for her, such dedication!
My favorite line in the entire thing was when Kunj was like what will happen to Twinkle if I fall? Like bro, you guys are so in love and you did such good job with that like omg. I LOL'ed so hard at Kunj falling into her room LOL and her screaming chor, so Twinkle š
I'm looking forward to the next part <3
Edited by teddyyy - 10 years ago