Ye Pyar Tune Kya Kiya SS Note pg. 44

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<font color="#990033"><font size="4">My First Short Story! Here is the prologue Please If I made any</font>grammar<font size="4">mistakeslet me know</font></font>

<font size="4" color="#990033">This story has the same concept from the original show but I willportray Raghav in a grey character and he will use both Pakhi and Kalpi tofulfill his revenge Plan. Eventually he will fall for Kalpana as you know WE ALL LOVE RAGNA๐Ÿค—Oh and in this story Pakhi will be one of the positive characters.</font>


Prologue

" Kalpi get ready quickly, Raghav is coming for Lunch
today and he has something to tell us" said Kamla. Kalpi gave a confused look
at Kamla and muttered, "Raghav sir is coming but for what reason?"


Kamla: I don't know beta but he said its very
important that everyone is here especially you


Kalpana: Hmm... that weird? What does Raghav Sir want
from us? It must be something related to the chawl or something.


Kamla: Kalpi go get ready quickly he will come soon.


Kalpana: Ji aai!


Everyone was preparing for Raghav's arrival to the
chawl. Kamla making Raghav's favorite food and kalpi was just helping her aai
out. Pakya and Vittal were cleaning the couch and setting everything right for
the arrival for their Raghav baba.



Singhania Mansion



Raghav was getting ready when Sammy entered his room
and said " why are you doing this to Kalpi? She has nothing to do with this. "


Raghav smirked and said "I know but this is the best
way to furfill my plan."


Sammy got frustrated and shouted " What plan! To destroy
the daughter of the woman who helped you escape the Kapoors. Raghav gave an
angry look and shouted saying " NOO! She will not be harmed but I have to use
her."


Sammy: I don't get this first you prentend to fall for
Pakhi now your doing this. I just don't get it?


Raghav: Sammy you will understand soon but Kalpi will
not be harmed since she's Kamla Ma's daughter and her life will be set after
this. I'll give her everything!


Sammy: I don't think she'll agree. She is a self made
person and you know that very well


Raghav: Sammy I will not let anyone harm her! Now let
go were getting late



Singhania Chawl After Lunch



Raghav: Thankyou Kamla ma for the delicious food it
reminded me of my childhood days with you.


Kamla: Raghav baba you like my son and I'll do
anything for my children.


Kamla: Kalpi bring the ladoos I made for Raghav baba
and Sammy.


Kalpi: Ji aai


Kamla: Sammy I hope you'll like besan ka ladoo?


Sammy: Yes Kamla Ma, I love besan la ladoo.


Kalpi went to get the small tray of ladoos when
suddenly she stopped and dropped all the ladoos after hearing what Raghav said


" Kamla Ma I'm here to ask you Kalpana's hand in
MARRIAGE. WILL YOU ACCEPT MY PROPOSAL"





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It's very nice dear!๐Ÿ‘
Please update 1st part soon๐Ÿ˜›
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Super update...waiting already for next update ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Fabulous 
Update soon 
Plz
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Nice concepts. Do continue. 
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Wonderful concept dear. Please pm me once u update.
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intersting start
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Intresting concept. ...plzz update soon. ...
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Hi dear very interesting concept.kya kammo ye proposal accept karega ๐Ÿ˜ฒ rags nai kammo sai directly kalpi ka haath maanga koyi ek tapad laaga taki mai iss shock said bahar awooo ๐Ÿ˜ฒ jawab tho hum jaanthe hai.kammo kahega raghav baba meri ๐Ÿท sai shaadhi karlo ๐Ÿคฃ .jokes apart kalpi kaisai react karega ๐Ÿ˜› really wonderful concept dear โญ๏ธ