SwaSan SS: Stone Heart 16+ { Ch3 updated } - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Really nice story Esha dear 🤗

Lots of suspense, Swasan is poor I guess, and that mysterious caller, his intentions are wrong..Why is Sanskaar putting up with him.. Please clear all the mysteries dear

Swasan love is so strong..😃 And I am loving Mrs.Frost already..She and her tooti footi hindi😆

Waise Esha dear...How are you now..😊 hope you are coping up well with the circumstances..take care yaar..🤗

love
Naina😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank you all my dearies for your sweet replies..i am really sorry as i couldn't reply few people..Gayu And Naina..i love you both a lot..thank you for your comments..and naina thank you so much for your concern i am really fine now :) so here's the chapter 2 of my beloved SS..guys! to clear your confusion i'll tell you all that Mrs.Suzie Frost adopted Sanskaar when his mother Annapurna and father DP died in an accident,he(sanskaar)was then 5 years old..she(Mrs.Frost) has been the maheshwaris's beloved neighbour ...and the story continues ~ [PS- Some info about Mrs. Frost has been given in Chapter1]...

Guys i am really sorry for the short update 😳

CHAPTER 2

As i opened my eyes a huge gush of water came onto my face.."Hey! What the fish! Why did you push me into this river?"

Hey! Sanskaar are you mad? Come on get up! How did you faint?" Swara raised her brows...
umm! I think its for stress! I lied..

You didn't faint for that i believe! She fury"ed" "Oh come on swara! Come let's go to the bedroom!" I pushed her

We entered i jumped onto the cot with a relaxed sigh "Atlast"!

You didn't Answer Me! Did you?

No"!

Then"?

But first tell me why did you wake up for? Where's momma? Did you have the broth?" I put on my card for the conversation (PS."guys don't get confused with this sentence "i put on my card..." its a phrase)

No Answer me first!"

Swara"! I was louder this time

Ok"!Ok"! Momma is out for some work and i was having my broth when i heard a thud... i rushed and i found you unconscious... That's it

But where Did momma go so late?"

Sanskaar! Leave it ! She told me She'll will be back soon! Now answer me"!

Swara Don't you want to hear the song i learnt for you?"

You did it?" Really?" She was overjoyed

Yup!" I exclaimed i could finally divert the topic..

Start"!

I put on the guitar sling on my shoulder and put on the rythm

Hmm...

Ekhon Onek Raat
(It's really Very late(*night) )
Tomar Kaadhe Aamar nishwas
(My breath is on your shoulders)
Aami benche aachhi tomar bhalobashaye
(I am alive only because of your love)
Chhuye Dile haath
(You touched my hand)
Aamar briddho buke tomar matha
(Your head is on my aged chest)
Chepe dhore tulchi kemon neshaaye
(I am holding you tight as you are intoxicated)...


{Guys this is an bengali song from the movie HemLock Society..if you want you people can hear this melodious song..here's the link--}

Ekhon Onek Raat

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=0Xo4LjJ527Q [Same Link 😊 ]

Wow"! Sanskaar! You did wonders ! What a correct bangla pronunciation!"

So is my bengali sherni happy?"

Very much!"

She hugged me tight with all her will

Swara!" Careful your baby bump!"

Oh sorry!" I really want to cuddle you for this Sanskaar?" Can we?"

That doesn't need any pleading!" I smirked..

So, guys here was the update🤗 i promise i'll surely update the next tomorrow as this chapter was a small one 🤗 thank you all once again
Edited by _Esha_ - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Superb update 👏
Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Superb update 👏
Loved it



Thankyou so very much sujoy ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Nice update..thannks for pm 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sneharay

Nice update..thannks for pm 😊



Pleasure 🤗 and thank you too 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Awesome update

Love and hugs for you

It's one of my favourite songs
Thanks for adding it on SwaSan


I wished there was a VM on SwaSan in Bengali song

Never mind


I loved it

Update soon

Thanks for awesome song
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Nice update.
Thanks for the pm.
Eagerly waiting for your next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Loved the update swasan convo n hw cum he s changing the topic awesome continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
So many suspenses! Bt lovely SwaSan <3
Update soon & Lil bigger!
And plz PM me :)

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