SwaSan, Li'l Varun & Baby Shruti OS--'Baby Makes 4'

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Viji it was superb+cute os really 👏
I loved it totally
Swasan romance was superb 😳
But there romance time was disturbed 😆 it is called side effects of having children 🤣
Swara tension for varun was awesome 👏
I can feel what was varun feeling
Sanskar correcting varun confusion was beautiful
And finally the last part when varun was playing with shruti was so cute


Viji you have written it so beautifully i loved it 👏
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Aww.. Viji. This one was too sweet!<3 I loved it ssooo much. SwaSan are amazing parents! Mwwahh
And then SwaSan romance.☺️😳 Oh Jeez.. their love making was so ahem..ahem!! My poor babies. Might have had to wait so long! Aw..And the early morning romance!! Omg! These two can kill so easily<3

Shruti huh? Not bad! She is such a sweet child! Just like my SwaSan!
I can understand Varun's insecurities. Even I used to be like that when my younger sis had been born. I used to cry that nobody loves me here and trust me I used to create a ruckus and then my dad used to console me and say that he still loves me as he loves my sis, it's just that she needs to be taken care of just like Sanskaar explains Varun. The whole OS reminded me of my childhood when I used to be just like that. And I used to cry running in the whole house telling everyone, that you don't love me and you also don't love me. And when asked, I would say that you did this for her but not for me so you hate me! Finally everyone would give up on me and I used to sleep due to the headache of crying and running around whole of the house!

Sanskaar explains him so well! I really loved it, the way he made him understand and Varun of course being Sanksaar's son understood and the last seen was really too good! When he played with Shruti. What content must SwaSan as parents be feeling! Thoroughly loved it<3

Sakshi

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Viji darling 🤗 x 100 for another lovely mushy piece and another touching dedication to me (along with Lanny!) Mwwah.

Reading baby Shruti's name took me to that very long time ago when I first started reading your work and had come across Shiv and Shruti Maheshwari and we had had a brief exchange over comments 😃. Just like those works, this one is a balm during stormy waters on the actual show.

SwaSan as parents are so adorable, especially Sanskaar, to whom this piece really belongs IMO. His whole overwhelming love for Swara should have indicated - when such a man would become a father, he would be beyond amazing and he is!

The babies are super little mini me's of their sterling parents, with the best bit of all so how could anyone not love them and then to top that off, the dilemma every parent of a later born child faces- how to make the first one not feel excluded and insecure- was brought out so sweetly! I LOVED how after the lovely conversation with his adored wife, Sanskaar comforted his little tyke, first drawing him out of his new shell and then how they managed to make Varun feel part of, rather than part removed from, Shruti. Truly blissfully happy family by the end indeed- awww.

I also loved the tender of the beginning, showing SwaSan's utter delight still in each other, only enhanced by the completion of their perfect circle as the best relationships are- shighhh.

Such a sweet and adorable piece, full of those little but hugely significant things that make life special! Wonderfully written as always, which is a given anyway with your work!

Big love again for the dedication.

Love you,
Shru xoxo
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Thanks Apu my dear. 🤗 🤗
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Wow! So nice...complete family package
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Viji...Dear Buddy 🤗

I'm running out of words this time 😆😆 U just do magic with your work ...

Awww...Little girl Shruti...How perfect the family picture will be

Thank you so much for remembering me the incidents of my childhood...Though i don't remember them , My maa says about me going to a corner & crying as i thought that Maa & Papa r not paying any attention to me after the arrival of my younger brother...lol...😆😆 i remembered all those while reading about Varun

Sanskaar...this man , perfect husband now a perfect father...the way he initiated convo with varun & made him understand ..omggg...that is so perfect...

Awww..when varun said to swara,his mom "She Caught My finger " was so so lovelyyy...


i always say this...u r a brilliant writer who goes deep into the context of each & everyone's character...i love this & u too 😉

Very well written ...Keep writing more & more dear

Love
Suhasini
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Woww...!!! Sooo awesome ... Loved it... Beautifully written... :):)
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so shruti is more like swara..aww i love her button nose
loved very cute convo between papa sanky and varun...lol the way he said shruti is so tiny and varun can go potty himself...!! ole i feel like cuddling both cuties at that time and varun 's happiness hearing when shruti grows up she will need varun more...haha

the way varun said "she caught my finger ma" absolutely loved this one..hey can i copy paste this IF link to CVS of swaragini..wish they bring such tracks where a baby is born and they are shown this old video of baby days ??

u kept ur word i guess..swara sanskar are leaving no stones unturned in making babies.. are they planning for third?😆😛
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Hi Viji🤗...

While i always loved all your works . The Baby series is really becoming my favourite.. Awesome OS Viji, Swasan as parents is really an treat to read. Ofcourse how can i miss my favourite cutie pie Varun..He is an Gem❤️ .. Now we have new addition to the family Shruti...



How beautifullly you portrayed Varun insecurity and then Sanskar explaining it to his sweet little son about how much the family loves him too. I get the insecurity of a child on the arrival of a new one ..My parents used to tell me various tales rearding the same when it comes to me and my sister. And how we both laugh at our childish behaviour😆 .


Also my favourite part was the last scene between Varun and shruti where is parents watched lovingly. Especially where little Varun get excited when Shruti holds his hands.. Such a sweet family you have created Viji and i just love reading about them ...
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