TWINJ OS: Roomates to ILU 15+

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey All!! This is my first OS on this forum. I never write OS and my hindi isnt great either so please forgive all the mistakes. I hope you enjoy it and feedback will be appreciated :)

The Mrs Amritsar competition ended with Mahi's win which was orchestrated by Kunj and Twinkle, much to Yuvi's disappointment. The organisers of the competition had planned for a couples retreat for all the contestants in a remote hilly location a short week later.

The sun set on their first day at the retreat and the couples gathered around a bonfire near a lake at the resort, surrounded by many villas. All the couples snuggled with each other as they shared their how we met' stories. Kunj and Twinkle sat next to each other with a small gap between them which made them stand out to the other couples. It was their turn and everyone eagerly awaited their story. Before Kunj could begin Yuvi interrupted and exposed their marriage to be nothing but a compromise.

Apni parents ke kehne par shaadi ki in dono ne. Kuch pyaar wyaar nahi hai inke beech Yuvi said proudly.

This earned him a strong glare from Mahi who was not totally comfortable watching her sister and Jiju get embarrassed.

"Maine Kunj ko kitni baar kehte hue suna ki vo dono sirf roommates hai aur kuch nahi."

Kunj clenched his fists which Twinkle's face visibly expressed hurt and anger. Before Kunj could reply Twinkle stood up abruptly and darted towards a cluster of trees which headed into a deep forest.

"Twinkle!" Kunj shouted as he ran after her.

After a short sprint Twinkle reached a clearing where she stopped and began to sob. Kunj reached her and asked her why she was reacting so much to Yuvi.

"Ghussa muhje Yuvi pe nahi TUMPE aya hai Kunj!"

Kunj was taken aback.. what did he do?

Kya hua Twinkle maine kya kiya?

" Kya kiya? Jab se humari shaadi hui hai hamesha ye roommate roommate ka rat laga rakha hai. THAG GAYI HOON MAIN TUMHARE MOON SE YEH ROOMMATE SHAB SUNTE SUNTE!!!!"nahi bana hai tumhari roommate muhje!"

Kunj was surprised at her reaction, he didn't realise it had hurt her so much. The storm clouds were rolling in and they had strayed far from the resort.

" Twinkle chalo wapas barish hone wali hai, chal kar villa main baat karte hai"

"Nahi jaana mujhe kahin bhi tumhare saat! Jao kissi aur ko apna roommate banao!"

Rain drops began falling and Kunj was starting to lose his patience with her, he understood she was hurt but then to ask him to go find someone else? He was walked upto her and pulled her close.

"Pagal ho gayi hai kya tu?, kya bakwaas kar rahi hai!!'

"Haan pagal ho gayi hoon main! Iss rishte ne muhje paagal kar diya hai!!!!"

"HO KYA GAYA HAI TUHJE TWINKLE KYUN TUHJE ITNA FARAK PADTA HAI!!!!"Kunj said screaming while shaking her by the shoulders.

Twinkle continued to cry without answering him

"BOL KYUN FARAK PADTA HAI"

Twinkle pulled her self free from his grip and screamed

"FARAK PADTA HAI KYUNKI MAIN TUJHSE PYAAR KARTI HOON!!!!!!"

Kunj froze as he heard those words escape her mouth. He could feel his whole body fired up despite the cool rain that was drenching him. Twinkle realised what she had said and was shocked by her own confession. She felt shy and nervous all at the same time. Twinkle tried to avoid his strong gaze but it proved to be impossible so she turned around and began to run. Luckily not far from where they were was a small straw hut that appeared to be unoccupied. Twinkle ran to the front porch and tried to steady her heartbeat and come to terms with what had just happened. Kunj swiftly walked up to her, turned her around and pinned her to the wall of the hut.

Avoiding his gaze twinkle muttered "c c choro muhje Kunj, muhje tumhari koi baat nahi sun ni"

Kunj didn't answer her, he kept staring at her making her feel nervous.

"Maine kaha choro mujhe" she struggled to get out of his grip which only made him tighten it more. She was scared and excited, anticipating what he would do. His proximity was making her breathing unstable and her heart beat out of her chest. Water droplets from his face were falling onto her neck which made her skin hotter instead of cooler.

"meri baat nahi suno gi?"he asked in a husky low whisper

"nahi!"she said turning her face

"theek hai, bolne nahi do gi to kar ke dikhana parega"

Twinkle turned to meet his gaze with a surprised look. She immediately understood what he meant and she grew even more nervous. Kunj advanced to her right cheek and placed a soft kiss and twinkle closed her eyes

"I"

Their eyes met at he brushed past her lips to her left cheek and placed a soft kiss

love"

Their eyes met again and Twinkle could guess where he was going. Her fingers gripped his shoulders, holding on to them for support. She couldn't feel her legs and her heartbeat was louder than the claps of thunder. Kunj advanced towards her lips, but this time it was not soft. He kissed her with incredible passion and she reciprocated. His hands went from pinning her shoulders to circling her waist as he pulled her in closer. After what seemed like an eternity they reluctantly broke their kiss.

you' he said watching her gently open her eyes and process what had just happened. He slowly took a step back to examine her. Her clothes were sticking to her skin and hair completely dishevelled from his handed moving from her waist to her hair and back again and her lips swollen and well kissed.

Twinkle who was still breathing heavily had a slight smile on her face as her shyness overcame her when she realised the state she was in. Without saying a word she ran into the hut to a window in the far corner. She rested her head on the cool bars of the window allowing the wind and rain to cool her down and compose her self. She knew Kunj would be slowly walking up behind her to continue his assault on her senses.

Just as she had predicted she felt a strong arm encircle her waist while his free hand moved the wet hair from her back exposing her low cut suit top. Whatever breathing she had managed to regulated was thwarted. He began kissing her the water droplets from her neck to her shoulder as she held on to the bars for support. His hand went to her dori and he pulled it without untying it which made her squirm. Then he slowly untied it and ran his fingers up and down her back. She suddenly turned around and met his gaze not being able to handle his advances anymore she grabbed him in a tight hug. They slowly separated from each other and Kunj turned his gaze to a comfortable pile of hay in the corner. He turned to look at her and she gave him a slight nod. He carried her over to the pile and gently placed her. He had been quite rough with her but he knew from this point on he would be gentle.

The rain relentless all night long which paralleled their love.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amaazing confession and amazing OS!
Beautifully Written!
Well done!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i loved it!
what a wonderful confession ❤️
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Wo wow a well written Os...
Loved it..
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#5
Awesome update. Loved it.
Continue soon plz.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome os..well written..Loved it
Do write more
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Really amazing OS.
Loved the confession and their hut romance😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi
Welcome to the forum 🤗


it was an awesome OS. Loved it. very well written. pls write more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing...loved it...confession👏...write more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks all for you comments

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