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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Res for Chapter 57

Dear Bubble,

One more update like this and I shall make it official that I am a Ragya Fan (Though I am and will, first and foremost, remain a SwaSan shipper- but the Ragya you portray -

So Ragini decides to seduce Lakshya (she really did not have to try too hard - a simple sway of her hips and Lakhya is hooked and singing!!!!!!😆) But I did like his no-nonsense attitude - "What is the point of wearing anything that's going to be taken off you in precisely two minutes, Ragini?". Very to the point and he proceeds to 'unwrap' his present😉

Now you have us waiting for our present - when is the next update?

love,
Nyna



Dear Nyna,
Thank you so much - very happy you liked this 😃

Oh hahah seducing him wasn't even necessary at this point... just a friendly 'hey, I'm going UPSTAIRS... wanna come?'
Lakshya is a bit rough and ready, isn't he? 😆😆 But she doesn't seem to really really mind 😆😳 ☺️

In the larger sense, she finds that very trustworthy about him - he plays straight, which is what has brought her around as well...

Update some time today 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
Short chapter... kaan pakad ke sorrys in advance!
The Best of Things
(Ragya, Swasan) Fan Fiction Series +16
By Bubble

Chapter 58

Three weeks later

Swara flounced on to the terrace in a huff. A minute later Sanskaar came out as well in great strides.

"That is not fair, Swara!" he said, holding her arm, "You have to pay up!"
"Not fair?!" she demanded, "You are the cheater!"
"What rubbish!" he said. "We agreed on five and you're welshing on the agreement!"
"No! Because you just go on and on - you take something like six or seven and call it one!" she turned her back on him with a pout.

"How sweet!" said a voice behind them.
Swara and Sanskaar turned, startled. They hadn't even checked to see if there was anyone else here.

"Dekho, Ragini, it's Shona and Shona! Squabbling over some little love game... how adorable!" drawled Lakshya.

Swara and Sanskaar both blushed - they had indeed been quarreling over the terms of a bet Swara had lost. But their embarassment only lasted till they noticed exactly how Lakshya and Ragini were positioned. Ragini was sitting on the swinging three-seater, and Lakshya was lying across it, his head resting in his wife's lap and his feet dangling over the sides of the arm-rest.

Sanskaar and Swara shared a half-grin.

"Ow, why're you prodding me, Ragini?" complained Lakshya.

"Uthiye, Laksh!" she said, poking him again. She was pink-faced herself, shy at being found canoodling on the terrace.

"Nahin!" he said, obstinately."We were here first and if it's only these two, they don't count as 'Public' under the Public Display of Affection Act."

"Uff!" she said, despairing and throwing a glance at the other two, pleading for understanding.

"Rehne do, Ragini," said Sanskaar, sitting down on one of the other chairs, "Yeh toh paidaishi besharam hai."

Laughing, Swara plonked down in another deep cushioned cane chair.

"Alright, alright, fine!" Lakshya hauled himself upright. "So what's up, Shona?"

"Agar toone abhi Swara ko Shona kaha hai, toh tera muh tod doonga!" said Sanskaar menacingly, "Aur agar mujhe Shona kaha hai toh muh, haath, pair sab tod doonga!"

Both sisters burst into giggles at that.

"Oooh!" said Lakshya, going slightly effeminate for dramatic effect, "these brutish caveman tactics are so hot... Shona!"

The girls laughed harder still and Sanskaar couldn't hold back a grin either.

"Waise achcha hua tum donon mil gaye," Sanskaar said. "Swara aur mai tum donon se kuch poochna chah rahe the."

"Kya?" asked Ragini.

"We've had this travel plan for a long time... we wanted to take a trip along the Ganga. Start at Gangotri or even Gaumukh... and then follow the river back to Kolkata... you know... touching Rishikesh, Hardwar, Prayag, Banaras... a nice journey that's cultural, spiritual, scenic, adventurous... Now seems like a good time to go..."

"Okay..." said Ragini intrigued.
Lakshya remembered that he'd secretly overheard them once, discussing this trip...

"Aap donon hamare saath chalenge?" Sanskaar asked.

Ragini and Lakshya looked at each other. Then, Ragini turned to look at Swara, who was waiting serenely.

Ragini was incredibly moved at the invitation. "Are you sure, Swara?" she asked.

"Yes," said Swara simply and emphatically.
Ragini turned to Lakshya again. The silent communication channels thrummed between them. Then Lakshya looked over at the other two and said with a little formal nod of the head, "Thank you, we'd love to go with you!"

Edited by soapbubble - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Bubble...
I wonder what was the game swasan were playing. 😆
Sanskar took 6 or 7 as one ..lol😊
So there was another love bird on the terrace...
It was so funny when laksh calls sanskar as shona...😆
So both the couples are going on the trip...thats cool
Update soon dearie
Love,
Simi😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Absolutely awesome shona and shona & Ragya 🤣 oh the trip seems interesting well the four are going ...awesome work bubble no words for your humour too 🤣 ab ki baar small update diya na toh 🤬
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Posted: 9 years ago
Such a short update..
But it was lovely...

Waiting for more...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shona😆😆😆 Can't wait for the trip!!! These four can be a riot together!! Waiting for the generous dose of romance n hilarity😉😛 Us readers have become very demanding na Bubble???😳😃😆
Sorry Shona😆
Love,
Akshata😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: simsen23

Bubble...

I wonder what was the game swasan were playing. 😆
Sanskar took 6 or 7 as one ..lol😊
So there was another love bird on the terrace...
It was so funny when laksh calls sanskar as shona...😆
So both the couples are going on the trip...thats cool
Update soon dearie
Love,
Simi😊


Simi, let's just say that for a sharp Marwari businessman, Sanskaar's arithmetic completely fails him once in a while 😆

Thanks 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: _Esha_

Absolutely awesome shona and shona & Ragya 🤣 oh the trip seems interesting well the four are going ...awesome work bubble no words for your humour too 🤣 ab ki baar small update diya na toh 🤬


Shona, Shona and Ragya... khoob rang jamega 😃

Thanks a lot, Esha... next one is longer 😊😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dewcute

Such a short update..
But it was lovely...

Waiting for more...


Thank you so much, dewcute! 😃😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dear Bubble,

Loved the squabble - Swara should have had Sanskaar agree on what exactly constituted 'one unit' before agreeing to pay up with five😉. Sanskaar would have used all his 'devious wiles' to twist the count.

Lakshya calling SwaSan as Shona and Shona 🤣🤣🤣🤣 - and he finds Sanskaar's caveman tactics 'hot' - OMG if not for the Ragya scenes, I might have been forced to draw a slightly different conclusion as to what 'turns' on Lakshya.

So a joint trip - sounds...interesting!

love,
Nyna
Edited by Nynaeve - 9 years ago

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