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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 3
Yeah I was very much hurt with plight of family. Every time they had to think about the new menu. Funny...groom same brides new...guests same menu new. I saw many people stealthily walking towards eating area. I too went away. After all hunger can't be controlled. And also I wanted to see what was new in menu this time..lol...Mr. Mehta was eating food..as if it would,dissapear any min. Yeah u guessed right. Maheshwari food was amazing always. So before being sent put better fill up our stomachs...coz am sure nobody wanna cook back at home after such entertainment...and nobody wished to miss such lovely food. After all generally food is the main reason for attending marriages...ESP maheshwari ones...coz marriage toh honi nahi hai..
As I saw that fruit load roller ice cream... and went to eat..they announced that marriage over all guests could return and they we're very sorry for hurting guests...
The fruit man was smiling. He told me..I knew issliye we caterers didn't make the whole food...why to waste every time...in fact they had toj already taken an other party order and would easily transfer that food there...
Waah are waah ...Indians have become so smart nowadays..I tell you. I told to at least hand me two scoops and then could leave...after all mm was is wouldn't throw any person who was eating, out of mm...I saw many people still grabbed few plates at last moment..rest left the place..
I heard Mrs. Rathi telling...awe if lucky wanted to marry..any girl..y didn't he marry mine...Mrs. upasne said..hailay daughter doesn't mind an other divorce..but at least for few days she would have lived so lavishly...
Thank God I had a daughter who was married already with kids...God knows what my family would plan...huh...I looked at the scene in front of me...
I saw a crying bleeding ragini...from stairs...calling laksh u made marrying the wrong girl...ragini are you so stupid...even I can recognise she isn't you...neither ur height nor ur smile...of course he married her by choice...but I wonder y...
Then laksh said he hated her...he would never marry a scum like her...and he had till now played with her...just to get himself free and marry by his choice his so called love.
The scene in front of me was no more funny. It was as if I as a women was being insulted this instance. The women in me started crawling to cone to fore. The food started tasting poisonous...but still I didn't throw it coz I wanted to witness... so I just held it. I felt like puking hearing laksh words. As for us society people...we always thought ragini was such a good daughter in law...yes we had heard she did wrong but..when we saw laksh and ragini enjoying many times we thought all is well. Such a disgusting twist was never expected by anyone..but it was all I happening here. And then what came next shocked us...laksh had become a full bed and tide husband of ragini... and just f OK or sake of revenge...OMG...I mean...he could have done anything...but using her body for revenge...even in worst of crimes I don't stand by laksh. As a women my soul petrified hearing this. I agree nobody sane would ever expect the physco ragini...and y should they...u can't force love...but... using sex is abhorred...it's repulsive...it's a whorish thing to do. Sex toys are available in market in abundance...but this...it was crime...
Laksh suddenly started looking like some cheap disgusting freak...I saw,people shrinking away...I heard same Mrs. Rathi,Mrs. Upasne...saying there daughter was saved...greedy agreed but we're not sex toy of someone...they left along with many others...but.. I couldn't move...that moment I that even drinking water of this filthy house will infect me...where they gave birth to man wh**es like laksh. Ragini deserves every pain insult she's getting...but not the scratch to her soul..and laksh in name of revenge and hate had ruined her soul bodily...scarred for life...as a women I felt ashamed and helpless as to how people we're just standing and hearing all this crap...and then I saw shekar hitting laksh. Any dad would do that..but too late shekhar...had u done that before and stopped ur mom from ruining ur daughter it weouldny have cone to this...and then my blood froze on spot...when laksh slapped back him...not in so many years of my life I saw anybody...even... foreigners...hitting and slapping elderly people...well that moment I forgave ragini...for her sins..for this was the second most devilish crime committed by this insane,crazy,looser,stupid,sick,arrogant,foolish man...even gods can't rescue him now. I so wished to slap him left right and centre but not my place...I hated that his family was just standing and looking...what the he'll...and swaragini..the daughters...we're they so weak and selfish still crying...I was about to go away thinking today's youth only say but don't stand up for there parents...too upset seeing where the youth of today was going..when I heard an other slap..and this was loudest of all...
Ragini had slapped laksh and looked like a chandi this moment...and swara about to just throttle him off...I had tears in my eyes...indeed youth is changing...here's what ragini said..
R: how dare you? Aaki itni himmat?? Humse badla liya,apmanit kiya,beizzat kiya,humare ruh se khela...him sab agree kartey kyonki humein ehsas hair humane kya kiya tha...him chip chap ro lete...seh let's...uff take nahi kartey...humari larni ki sazaa milni hi this ek din...humble khun me aansun rulaye aapko..an humari baari...par ab nahi...aapne humare papa par haath uthaya...apne ffayde me liye..u treated me like a who're...yuckkk...
L tried to slap her back but she held his hand...swara came but she stopped everyone...
R: nahin swara aaj nahi...yeah humari ladai hai...humse shuru Hui air about khatam bhi him hi karenge...itni himmat mat karna laksh...humps haath uthane ki galti mat karna...aapse mohabbat ki sazaa humein mil gayi...aaj humari aankhon par se Patti hat gayi...ab toh aap nahi humein ek dalal...ek rakshas...ek beech insaan nazar aata hai...toh wahaan take hisaab narabar...but u slapped my father and begun a new game of insult...now this new ragini..who is gladly happy to be free from u...this miss ragini gadodia. The daughter will make you she'd tears of blood...u will lose everything u love...I will make sure of that...don't worry I will never become the witch I are thinking..but I will become the daughter whom u dared to mess with...I will become the women..whom u treated like a who're...a toy to satisfy ur manly needs...he'll hath no fury like a women scorned...u have seen how dangerous I was when I loved you...now enjoy ur lovely honeymoon with ur new who're dreaming how deadly I can be now...u do know me right...have fun Mr. Manwh**e...
With that she went and got back down all changed in a t- shirt and jeans..put all her belongings in the fire and with a smirk left head held high...
R: common gadodia family...we gotta party at home...and swasan u r invited to stay there tonight...ciz I see this place is omen for begginnbers and am glad I saved my sister from such manwh**e...and in turn got a diamond friend and jijaji like you...and yeah rest of the maheshwaris.. when u come out of shock mode..can come and join the party...it's celebration time for two people...swasan for there happy beginning and laksh for beginning of his happy end...common...am hungry...I with this she walked outta door

After a long time I felt proud of what ragini did and prayed she gets all the happiness and laksh doesn't even get a place in he'll...I too left the place with hope for girls who should learn to stand up now for themselves in this male chavnist society...
Wrong is wrong. Whether u do it to make it right or to prove the wronged wrong...
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Edited by dreamyjennice - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Oh God Ana this is amazing😆
This is really a comic relief. What a thinking👏

Poor guests feels like this in mm weddings😃
Love you dear keep doing such things🤗
Edited by Senoritaamor - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Just awesome! Laksh deserves each and every word👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
firstly i m proud of ur thoughts nd I luved ur way from comic to reality... u r tooo good yar
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Wow Ana amazing brillantly written I like you wrote the scenes
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Beautifully written 👏

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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Nice post.
In mm the marriage is really a movie. We can expect twist and turns. The bride and groom will have some changes in the wedding.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Lol amazing lol. Manwh**e shame poor lucky poor
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
🤣🤣
Guest come to MM house less for wedding and more for entertainment

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