New Story - Part 1 updated on page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi All,
My name is swathi and I have always been fond of writing stories and my interest towards it increased more after reading many stories written here very beautifully. I had tried writing twice but miserably failed and this is my third attempt and I am not sure whether I would complete it successfully.


Here is a short prologue below:

Raman is arrested and produced to court on charges of killing Ashok and all evidences are against him including his parents. When the judge is on pronouncing the death statement against him,Ishita comes as his saviour and save him from the penalty.

Let me know if I need to continue or not.

Thanks,
Swathi

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Please continue.
I will like to read
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fr ur new story
Guess this is ur first story
So congrats

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yeah abt prologue
Seems promising
Let's c how raman is being saved
But y is his parents against him
N not to forget
Did he killed ashok
???
Update soon
N pm me...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Swathi...
Do continue it babe 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😃 wow raman killed ashok...interesting ...plz update soon!
ps: I would've been happier had he killed shagun instead 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi swati

congrats for new story dear

i am sure its going to be wonderful story ever dear

amazing prologue dear

continue soon dear

please pm me when you update dear

eagerly waiting dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi swati ,nice start .
Interesting concept .
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Swathi!
interesting prologue...
do cont it dear 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Swathi that was very intriguing!!
Raman facing death sentence and of course Ishita comes in the nick of time and saves him!!!!!!!!!!

Please, please, please continue soon and please do complete it too!!!!!😉

I would really appreciate it if you were to pm when you update please!!!!🤗
Thank you so much!!!!!!!!!

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