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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

First a Big Claps for You KRITTIKA...👏👏

I can Understand what type of Difficulty U Faced while Single Handed the Story including Thinking about the Plot and how to make it Investigative and fit Both Organizer in it...⭐️⭐️

hawww...😲😲

Our Viewbie is such Big...😉😉

Friend of Inspector Purvi...😲😲

Classmate of Her...😉😉

ab tou Sherya JEE sy Darna Paray ga...😆😆

and Scolded Small Kids like Deba...😆😆

this is the TRP of your Story...🤣

Nice Start to bring the Organizers Direct from Canada (as I think, Deba really happy in that enjoying Her days as Free Resident in Canada, Air Journey, Staying with Sherya etc)...😉😉

the Narration is Good either at sometimes very Confusing...😊

I am really Amazed in Your History part...👏

but that Part was Not so Appealing...😉😉

Khair, the SWORD Idea was Fabulous...👏👏

the Purvi Entry and Her All Investigation with Team is Excellent...👏👏

Love to have ASHA as well...😳👏

Like Vivek part as Ethical Haker...😆😆

I Loved Small Small Things in Your Story, the Blue Print Plan, Not Indian SIM in Deba Cell, Locking the room having Luggage, Points Writing in Notepad, Placing Saket in Her House...⭐️⭐️⭐️

the Jonathan Relation was Shocking...👏👏

Arthur Idea was Quite Nice...😊😊

Somehow Story was Extra Lengthy...

the Part of SREE and SRI is Less as Loved to have them doing Something too...😉😉

But Really an Amazing Attempt Guys...👏👏

Well Done to You Ppl...⭐️👏

Thank You so much...😳😳

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1.KRITTIKA

@1.KRITTIKA

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Pehli bar dada ko mere stry mey jyada faults nahi dikha

ty ty

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Kousar-Aditya

@Kousar-Aditya

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: CT_Shreya
^ Bilkul nahi. Abhi tum log bhi peeche par jaoge toh main yahan aana band kar doongi. 😈 Mere parents pehle hi peeche paare hain ke jaldi se padhai khatam kar aur teri shaadi karwa denge. 😆

Arey di😉

Ye aap ka akeli ka nahi

hum sab girls ka fact he

My mom is also forcing me😆