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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
Amazing update...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Will be waiting eagerly 4 d next update...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: jamunamanik

Awsmmm

Awsmmm

Superrr

Awsmmm

Coun sooon

thank u do much dear will try to continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rockstarlover

Read it now.
Loved the start.😃

thanx dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shaan...

Amazing update...

Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Will be waiting eagerly 4 d next update...
Take care...
Stay blessed...

thank you dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: prathyushaeluri

i read the 2 parts now

they were superb
continue soon
thanks for the pm

thank you dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Nyc concept..


Prologue k badd se start hota to jyada achaa hota..

Plzzz run the storyy jaldi jaldi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: A12609z

Nyc concept..


Prologue k badd se start hota to jyada achaa hota..

Plzzz run the storyy jaldi jaldi

thanx dear. I have already planned everything for this ss it won't take too long to finish. I couldn't start from prologue bcoz its not start of the story hope you understand
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 3

Nandni was sitting in canteen when nayva came and hugged her from behind nandni was shocked
Nandni what happend navya she asked
Navya I have very exciting news navya Tell her excitedly
Nandni ab bata bo na her voice lack of excitement
Navya tumein to hamesha boring e raho gi nandu hum tumein achi news drna chahte hain or tum aise poch rai hon shr sounded very angry
Nandni: acha bata do apni exciting news mein sun rai hon..
Navya tumein to pata mein engaged ho to hamari shadi fixed ho gai hai is month pir hum London chale jahen ge she told her happily
Nandni was shocked..
Nandni kya sach mein navya pir tumari studies?
Navya kya yar tumein to pata hai na muje nai karni itni studies ab to hamara cabir hamein milr ga muje kya karna hai mein to buhut khush ho.
Her whole face was glowing from happiness..
Nandni aaiapa tumein aise r khush rakren she prayed for her..
Navya or hum me socha hum is khushi mein tumein treat den yai canteen mein aj bill hum den ge or dhurv ko b bula lo na..
Nandni teak hai navya mein usey call karti hon..
She took out her mobile and dial dhure number after some bell hr picked the call.
Nandni hey dhurv
Dhurv Hi nandni everything alright
He asked in worried tone
Nandni sab teak hai dhuruv she assured him
It's just navya apni shadi ki khushi mein hamein treat se rai hai to tum abi canteen aaho..
Dhurv OK
Then nandni hung up the call
Nandni: he told mein he will here in 5 mins she informed navya...
It was while when dhurv came
Dhurv hello girls hr greeted them and congrts navya..
These three were having good time enjoying and chatting. When navya saw manik sitting in canteen with his new girlfriend named aliya..
Navya; aj manik babd new ladki k saat kitni jaldi Yr girlfriend change karta hai
Dhurv navya ji jab insaan k pass dolat ho na to wo aisa band jata
Nandni acha agar tumare pass b itni dolat ho kya tum b aisa kartr? She asked dhurv
Dhurv han shayd
Nandni was shocked with his answer but didn't show it
Navya acha to pir burai manik mein nai
s ki dolat mein hai..
It was then when dhurv got a call an left from there and few mins lated navya also left from there
Now nandni was alone there. Manik saw this he wanted to talk with her so it was a good opportunity... So he walked near nandni table
Nandni was in her own thought when she saw manik standing infront of her
She was wearing simple pink chodi dar with long doppata she was looking very beautiful..
Manik was mesmerized with her beauty
Manik; muje tum se baat karni hai
Nandni but muje tum sr koi baat nai karni Mr malhotra
She told him sternly
Manik mein tum ae frnrship karna chahta hon he looked at nandni with anger
Nandni was very shocked and angry
Nandni koi zabardasti hai mein tum se baat tak nai karna chahti hon tum friendship ki baat kar rahe she told him in annoyed tone.
And she turned around and was walking from there when she felt grief on her duppata she was really annoyed that how could he held her duppata she turned to manik and slape him hard on face this left manik shocked..
Nandni: you monster tumari himat kaise huwi mera dopata kenchne ki.
Nandni was red in anger..
Manik wasn't expecting this every one wa now watching thim
nd without thinking he slapped nandni..
Manik: or tumari himat kaise huwi muj par itna gatiya ilzam lagane ki he show his hand where his dupata was stuck in his band
He freed his scarf from his band and kicked the chair and left there
Nandni was numb to react eyes full of tears..


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She locked her self in the room thinking what just happened in collage.. She was crying very badly.she heard knock..
Nandni mama hogi she went to washroom and washed her face eyes were red from crying..
She opens the door.
Mrs Murthy: beta kab se knock kar rai hon khol q nai rai ti she asked in worried tone and saw her red eyes..
Or ye tumari ankhon ko kya hua ye itni red q ho rai hain..
Nandni kuch b to nai mama its just sar mein buhut dard ho raha hai s liye eyes red o rai hain..
Mrs acha khane k bad dawai le Lena aa jaho tumara apa kkhane pe wait kar rahe hain,..
Nandni acha mamma ap jahen mein aa rahi ho..
She composed her self and went after her mother she was serving his father she took her father blessing and sit on the chair...
Mr Murthy: nandu beta tumari studies kaise ja rai hain.
Nandni; achi ja rai hai dad..
Mr Murthy very gud. Or han aj mein or tumari ama gahon ja rahe hai tumare bua ki tabiyat teak nai hai..
Nandni kya hua bua ko? She asked in a worried tone..
Mr Murthy pata nai beta ye to wahan ja kne pata chale ga.. Hum raat tak lot aahen ge..
Nandni OK dad ap bua ko mera dher Sara pyar dena or un se kehna mein jald us se Milne aahon gi.

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It was almost 11 o clock.. There were no sign of her parents she was really worried...
She heard her mobile beeping her mobile screen was flashing with dad name she picked the call..
Nandni: dad kahan reh gayr hain ap
She heard stanger voice..
Ap miss mrthy baat kar rai hain
Nandni yes her voice was trembling with fear..
Mein inspector raghav baat kar raha hon ap k parents ka accident ho gya hai..
Nandni what? Kaise hain mom dad kahan hai wo she said in crying tone..
Raghv I'm sorry wo dono ab nai rahe..
Nandni mobile slip out of her hand...
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So guyz do tell me..
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Love samaa..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
NICE STORY...
MANIK KI PAST MAE KUCH BURA HUA ISS LIYA USKI THOUGHT ASA HA...
NANDINI KI PARENTS R NO MORE...THAT'S VERY BAD NEWS...PATA NAHI KYA HOGA FUTURE MAE...COZ MANIK DECIDE KIYA WO APNI POINT NANDINI KO PROVE KARAGA...
NEXT PART PLZ ASAP...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: epshitatabassum

Awesome



Nice





Shocking




Amazing

thanx dear will continue soon

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