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Amita Patel

@KaShforever06

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Posted: 9 years ago

#301

Fabulous update..

Aisha is jealous..

Love how shree keeps teasing riya using Arjun's name..

Poor ri.. Didn't even get to watch a movie..

Altaf is making plan to kill Riya under samjuns nose..

Well he doesn't know who he is messing with..

Thanks for the pm..

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Shreyashi Chakraborty

@shreyashi19mld

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Posted: 9 years ago

#302

very nice update

just love it

eagerly waiting for next

update soon

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shaheen82

@shaheen82

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Posted: 9 years ago

#303

awesome update...
Loved it..
Continue soon..
Thanx for the pm... 😊

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SATRISHI

@SATRISHI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#304

part 7

first half painfull aur second part achah hai dono acp ko bandi bandiay akmre me ..kayi ye dono us akmre ko jung ke maidan na bande abdem poor riay ki halal kya hoga

thnks for pm

sorry for late

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ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#305

Part 13:-

All had finally reached to the picnic spot..

They all are acting as they had come there for picnic..n enjoying..

Liza:-hey..kyo na ham sab kuch game khele..

Sakshi:-yes..mere pass ek idea he..sabke naam ki chit banate he..unhe mix up karte he..ek ek chit nikalege..jisake naam hoga usse dedicate karke ham baki sab songs gayege..

All agreed..

Shree make chits..

Riya:-dekhte he first chit kisaake he..?

Saying this she took one chit..

Riya(after reading the chit):-Sakshi..

Others(except samjun):-ooo..

Chotu:-come on guys..Sakshi ke liye gana he..

Shree started singing n all others(except samjun)accompany him..

Chui-mui si tum lagti ho..

Fulo jaise hasti ho..

Jabse dekha he tumko..

Tum meri sanso me..dil me rehati ho..

Chui-mui si tum lagti ho..

All claps..

Riya(took next chit):-Liza..

Shree:-uff..muze nahi lagta ke lizard ke liye bhi koi gana hoga..

Liza:-speky..tumhe chodugi nahi mein..

Shree:-lizard ki bacche..

Aayesha:-guys stop it..

Shree:-iske liye toh mein hi gata hu..

He started singing n Liza get more angry..

Khambe jaise khadi he..

Ladki he fulzadi he..

Shola he gulchadi..

Partake ke ki ladi..

Aakho me gussa he..

Labo pe lali he..

Dekho..Zara..dekho Zara..

Khud ko samazti he kya..

All laugh n claps..here Liza is just glaring Shree..Shree wink her..

Riya(taking out next chit):-next is..ooo..chotu..

Sakshi:-mein.mein gati hu..

Sakshi started singing..

Soldier soldier meeti bate bolkar..

Dil toh uda le gaya..

Yun milake nazar..

Karke jadugari..aage piche dolke..

Soldier.. Soldier..

All(except samjun)teasing chotu by 11:30 girl name..

Riya (opening next chit):-next is..Shree..

Liza get excited n give look to shree..

Shree(mutter to Riya):-Riya..bachale muzko..

Before Liza could sing for Shree..Riya started singing..

Riya:-ye dosti..ham nahi chodege..

Todege dam magar..tera sath na chodege..

Shree ,chotu n Riya give each other hug..

Riya(taking out next chit):-ooo... Aayesha..

Sakshi started singing for Aayesha..

Kiska he ye tumko intzaar mein hu na..

Dekh lo idhar toh ek baar mein hu na..

Khamosh kyo ho Jo bhi kehna he kaho..

(Sakshi signaling Aayesha to look Sam)

Dil chahe jitna pyar utana mang lo..

Tumko milega utna pyar mein hu na..

Aayesha glare Sakshi..while Sakshi wink her..

All claps..

Riya(took next chit):-next is..(after reading name she gulp saliva)

All just staring her..

Shree:-kisaka naam he..?

Riya just look Sam..all realized now its turn for Sam..

No one dares to sing for Sam..though they are acting as they are friends n come for picnic but in reality he is their boss after all..

Sam looking questioning to them..

Shree:-aap hi ka naam he..

Sam smrik..

Sam:-toh gao..

But no one starts..

Sam(smriking):-no one..come on..atlest Someone from girls..muze laga hamare group ki ladkiya badi bahadur he .par yaha toh sab darpok he..

Sam said this looking to Sakshi,Aayesha,Liza n Riya..he know..ye sunane ke baad koi aur gaye na gaye.. Par Riya zarur jawab degi..kyo ki baat jab girls ki ability pe aa jaye toh Riya chup baithe aisa ho hi nahi sakhta..

Riya:-darpok..?ham darpok nahi he..

Sam:-accha..??then prove ..

Riya smiles n started singing..

Ek baat bata dun aapse..

Nahi darta kisi ke baap se..

Ek baat bata dun aapse..

Nahi darta kisi ke baap se..

Ja mere naam ke bill phad de..

Are ja mere naam ke bill phad de..

Jo ukhadna ukhad le..

Mein superman..salman ka fan..

Jo leve panga..kardu..ma-bhan..

Mein superman..salman ka fan.

Jo leve panga..kardu ma-bhan..

All claps..Sam smiling brightly..

Sab log wait kar rahe he ke Sam chillayega..ya fir kuch taunt karega..but no..they get shocked..

Sam:-are..ab next chit nikalo..

Riya took next chit..read the name..n gulp saliva..

All look each other..they realized who it must be..of course Arjun..

All now look to Arjun..who is giving them "don't u dare" look..

Sam:-come on..Arjun ke liye gao..

Shree(mutter bit heared by Sam n all others):-kisame itni himmat he..?

Sam:-kyon nahi..Jo mere liya ga sakhti he..usame itni himmat toh he ke Arjun ke liye bhi gaye..

Now all gaze turn to Riya..while Riya looking back them with shocked big eyes..

Sam:-chalo..Riya..suru ho jao..don't worry..mein hu na..Arjun tumhe khayega nahi...usaki zimmedari meri..

Saying this Sam wink Arjun..Arjun glare him..

All just waited Riya to say something.. Others even don't dare to suggest any song for Arjun..

Riya took deep breath n started singing..

Koi na Jane kitthu aaya he tu..

Sabke dilo vich ho gayi kukaddu Ku..

Koi na Jane kitthu aaya he tu..

Sabke dilo vich ho gayi kukaddu Ku..

Itna sona..itna cool..

Munda itna wonderful..

Ennu vekhe de kudiya toh kehdi..

Oh my god..!oh my god..!

Ha munda sabme sabse best..

Munda better than the rest..

Ennu vekhe de munde toh kehte..

Oh my god!

Oh seena 6 biscuit da..

Oh munda 6 feet da..

Oh dheere dheere karda kamal sa..

Oh munda kukkad kamal da..

Oh Munda kukkad kamal da..

Oh kudiya de Jo jaye effect thodi chal da..

Oh munda kukkad kamal da..

Oh Munda kukkad kamal da..

Bando me banda perfect bemisal da..

Kukkad kamal da..

Oh munda kukkad kamal da..

Oh Munda kukkad kamal da..

All looking Riya with open mouth n wide eyes..Sam is too shocked but come out of shock first..

Sam smiles with all his heart..n started clapping.. But rest of the etf team look to Arjun..

Riya too look Arjun n give him sorry look..

While Arjun is looking no one..but has clunch his jaw hard..

Sam:-ab last chit..??ye toh Riya ke naam ki hi hogi..

Liza:-come on guys..Riya ke liye song suggest karo..

They all started discussing song..but before they decide Sam started singing..

Aakhone..tumhari meeti baato ne..

Meri udayi.. Mera chain churaya..

(Sam hold riya's hand make her stand..pull her towards him..n started dancing with her..Riya is so shocked just staring him without blinking eyes)

Apna banake sapna sajaya..

(Actually Sam dekh leta he ke koi insaan unpe nazar rakh raha he..issliye Riya ko alert karne ke liye woh aise dance ka tarika sochata he..

Sam(mutter in riya's ear while dancing):-koi hame dekh raha he..may be wahi he Jo itne logo ke gayab hone ke piche he..u know what to do..

Riya now realized ke Sam aise dance kyo kar raha he..she come out of her shock..just flattered her eyelids to answer Sam..n smiles)

Sapna sajake sikhaya pyar..

Dheere dheere iss dil ka cheena he karar..

Dheere dheere iss dil ka cheena he karar..

Both samriya stop dancing ..all just staring them in shock..Aayesha is burning in jelosy..

Arjun iss tarah samriya ko dekh raha he ke ye sab ho kya raha he..

Riya:-excuse me..

Saying this Riya goes away from there..

Sakshi(to Aayesha):-sameer ne Riya ke liye gana gaya..upar se usake sath dance kiya..aur..dekho Riya bhi kaise sharmake chali gayi..

Aayesha glare Sakshi..

Here Sam realized the man who is keeping eye on them is not there..he must had gone after Riya..

Sam:-come on..Riya kaha gayi dekhte he..

All look him puzzled..

Sam:-fast..(glaring them)

All started rushing the direction Riya went..

After some minutes .

Aayesha:-yaha par toh dur dur tak koi nazar nahi aa raha..

Shree:-ye ri he kaha..??

Chotu(looking something in soil):-sir..yaha dekhiye..foot prints..

Arjun:-right chotu..aur yaha se kisiko drag karke leke Jane ke nishan bhi he..

Sam:-ye zarur Riya ne hamare liye surag choda he..

All just staring him..

Sam:-koi aadmi hampe nazar rakhe hua tha..meine usse dekha aur Riya ko bataya..n our planed work..woh usse leke gaya..

Shree:-lekin..aapne aur Riya ne plan banaya kab..??

Sam:-when we were dancing..issliye toh ham dance kar rahe he..

Arjun:-iss picnic spot se gayab hone walo logo ke piche iss insaan ka hath tha Jo hampe nazar rakh raha tha..ab woh Riya ko apne sath leke gaya he..matlab..

Sam:-matlab..Riya ki jaan khatare me he..move guys..

They all started following where the dragging nishan ..

Finally the reach a cave like place..

They hide themselves..they saw Riya had tied to chair there..

One man is standing near her..n having evil smrik on his face..

N infront of them..one tantric n his man doing some puja..

Riya(yell on that man):-chodo muze..??kyo leke aaye ho yaha..??

Man laugh..

Man:-ghabrao mat..bas thodi der aur..fir sab thik ho jayega..fir tumhe kuch bhi mehsoos hi nahi hoga..

Riya:-kya bakwas kar rahe ho..??

Man:-mehsoos nahi hoga kyo ki..mehsoos hone ke liye zinda rehana zaruri he..aur tum toh bas thodi hi der me Marne wali ho.

Riya:-marugi nahi maarugi tuze..

Man(laugh):-jitni baate karni he kar le..fir nahi kar paogi..tumhari hi tarah aur 10 logo ko bhi maaf chuka hu mein

Riya:-kitne ghatiya insaan ho tum..?itne logo ko Mara he ye bade shan se bol rahe ho..,??

Man:-shan se hi boluga na..kyo ki muze bahot paisa milane wala he..

Riya:-matlab..??

Man:-13 logo ki Bali dene ke baad muze..muze guptdhan ki prapti hogi..sone se bhare hue hande milege..10 logo ko toh maaf chuka hu..tum 11 vi banogi..aur fir baki 2 Jo tumhare sath aaye he na unn me se hi kisiko kidnap kar ke aise hi unki Bali dunga..

Riya:-chii..kitne ghatiya insaan ho tum..aise baato pe vishwas karke itne begunah logo ki jaan li..

Man:-ha..li..aur Teri bhi lunga..

Rathod (coming infront):-tum ye kabhi nahi kar paoge..

Man:-kyon ho tum..??

Arjun(coming out of hiding place):-tumhari shamat..

Chotu(coming out of hiding place):-aur ham bade hi shaan se tumhe jail bhejege..

Shree n Aayesha too come forward pointing their guns..

The man try to attack Riya..but till then Sam n jun had reached to them..

They arrest the man..tantric n his helper man..

They complete all formality n handover the culprit to local police..

They was sealing the place..

Riya(looking towards the statue of kalika mata):-bhagwan ye kabhi nahi kehate ki apni icchao ko pura karne ke liye kisiki Bali do..pata nahi ye log kab samzege iss baat ko..

Choree,samjun ko toh pata he Riya ka aise emotional hona..but Aayesha,Liza,air Sakshi Riya ko aise emotional dekhne hairan he..woh ye soch rahi he ke Jo ladki itni bahadur he ke exora 2 virus kha li..sikandar ko pakdwaya..aur woh aise emotional ho..??

Shree come forward n just put his hand on her shoulder..

Riya:-kitne bekasur logo ko maar diya..paiso ke liye..kash ye log bhagwan aur usaki shakti ka sahi arth samaz pate..

Arjun:-usse accha toh tumhe ye kehna chahiye Riya ke kash ye log samaz pate ke iss duniya me bhagwan he hi nahi..

All knows Arjun don't believe in god..

Riya:-aap bhagwan pe vishwas kyo nahi karte Arjun sir..?ek baar maan ke toh dekhiye ke bhagwan he..ek baar usse apne dil ki murad maang ke toh dekhiye ..zarur aapko yakin hoga ke bhagwan he..

Saying this Riya left from there..

They all back to their mini bus..but all are silent..Arjun is lost n thinking about riya's words..

Sakshi(trying to cheer up all):-guys..sabne song gaya ek dusare ke liye..bas ek hi insaan he jisane nahi gaya..aur woh he Arjun..come on Arjun..gao na..dekhte he ke ACP Arjun ko gana aata he ya nahi..

All are looking Arjun waiting for him to say something..

Arjun(looking to Riya):-tumne kaha ke ek baar bhagwan se maang ke dekhu..woh meri wish puri karega..

Riya just stared back to arjun..she don't know what to say..

Arjun started singing..

Mere kismat ki har ek panne pe..

Mere jeete ji baad Marne ke..

Mere har ek kal..har ek lamhe me..

Tu likh de mera ussey..

Har kahani me..sare kisso me..

Dil ki duniya ke sacche rishto me..

Zindagani ke sare rishta me..

Tu likh de mera ussey..

Aye khuda..aye khuda..

Jab bana usaka hi bana..

Aye khuda..aye khuda..

Jab bana usaka hi bana..

Arjun stop singing..all are so silent..

Arjun (to Riya):-kya tumhara bhagwan ..meri ye wish puri karega..??nahi kar sakhta..kabhi nahi kar sakhta..kyo ki mare hue log lautke nahi aate..

Saying this he started staring outside window..softly wipe his tears..

All get silent n sit on their sit quietly..

Sam too get teary but control himself..

Riya wipe her tears unknown to all others except Sam..he saw her tears..

Precap:-

Sabke samne toh samjun ne Riya ko unke liye song gane ke liye kuch nahi kaha..but kya hoga kab teeno akele honge..??

Stay tune..

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Prabhleen Arora

@7APK

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#306

Super - Duper Amazing
Fabulous Update
Loved It
Post Next Part Super Soon
Thanks for the PM

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0913155

@0913155

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#307

Awesome superb amazing fab update😛😛😃loveddd it plz cont soon thanks for pm

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angelshah

@angelshah

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#308

awesome update
first I was shocked that Sam sang song
loved it

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 9 years ago

#309

Loved it Sonu
Awesome update dear
Well mujhe lagta hai Riya ke aane se Samsha ki kahani aage badegi
Apt dedications to all ETF members
Case was interesting maza aaya
Hmmm Arjun ko galat ched diya Riya ne
Lagta hai ghar jaa ke buri fasne waali hai Riya 😆
Let's see what happens next
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊