Swaragnini FF - A century of Love [Chapter 2 - Page 2]

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Swaragini FF - A century of love

This is my first Swaragini Fanfiction

Hope you enjoy reading it
Comments and Suggestions are Welcomed 😊

Plot

The story revolves around Swara and Ragini & Lakshy and Sanskar's journey of life

  • Ragnini Gadodia is from a Marwari Family while Swara Bose is from a Bengali Family - Both the families are neighbor's for many years but still hold grudges against the families.Yet it doesn't affect Swara and Ragnini's Relationship and bonding with each other
  • Sanskar Maheshwari and Lakshy Maheshwari are cousin brothers.They both love and trust each other unconditionally

Other characters Includes:

Shekhar Gadodia
- Ragini's Dad
- Sharmistha's love Interest

Parvati Gadodia
- Shekhar's Mom
- Ragini's Grandmother

Jhanvi Gadodia
- Ragini's Mother

Sharmistha Bose
- Swara's Mother

Shoba Bose
- Sharmistha's Mother
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DP Maheshwari
- Lakshy's Dad

AP Maheshwari
- Lakshy's Mom
-Wife of AP

Ram Maheshwari
- Sanskar's Dad
- Brother of AP

Sujata Maheshwari
- Sanskar's Mom

Uttara Maheshwari
- Sanskar's younger sister

Aadarsh Maheshwari
- Elder son of DP
- Lakshy's elder brother

Parineeta Maheshwari
- Wife of Aadarsh


[Other Characters will be added as the story goes ]


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~ Index Page ~

Chapter 1 - Page 1
Chapter 2 - Page 2
Chapter 3 - Page 0
Chapter 4 - Page 0

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Lovely intro of ur characters
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Chapter 1

Maheshwari Family were known as one of the most rich and famous Maheshwari Industry in the city, they are not only known for their name and fames but their tradition and values.

The story begins in Maheshwari Mansion, Where Durga Prasad is the owner of the properties and who has kept the family under complete strictness and discipline and no memeber in the family dares to go against his order

Anapoorna is his wife - She belonged to a Marwari Family
Ram Prasad is his one and only younger brother
Sujata is his sister-in-law - She also belonged to a Marwari family

Anapoorna and Durga Prasad had 2 sons - Aadarsh and Lakshy
Sujata and Ram had 1 son and 1 Daughter - Sanskar and Uttara

Durga Prasad never goes against his tradition and values and if anyone disobeys it ~ Punishment is given no matter they are his own family or any stranger. According to him, all the daughter-in-laws of the house should be from a Marwari Family as to keep respect to the cultural

It was a cold and breezy morning in Kolkata, everyone was busy in their own life, no one had time for anyone. In Maheshwari Mansion Anapoorna and Sujata were walking towards the hall and stoped as they came across the family photo in the corridor

Anapoorna gently feels the photo and cries

''kya galti kiya tha meine joh bhagwan ne mujhe apne dono bete chinliya'' Anapoorna said

''shant hogai ye didi.. agar app himat haarenge toh dusro ko kon sambal lega?'' Sujata consoles her

Then all of a sudden Uttara came running down the stairs. She started shouting ''maa..papa.. bari ma .. baare papa..Aadarsh bhaiya.. bhabhi"

'kya hua Uttara?' They ask her

'woh..upper..Laksh bhaiya.."

'kya hua Lakshy ko?' Anapoorna asked hurried upstairs

Upstairs in the room, was Lakshy lying on the bed, everyone had gathered around hoping for a miracle to happen. As he slowly started to move his fingers, a smile spreaded to everyone's face

'Laksh beta aanke kolo please..mere liye'Anapoorna says

Aadarsh enters the room ''ma meine doctor ko phone kardiya hai.. baas aray hoge" he says

Few minutes later, he opens his eyes and looks at everyone around.

'Laksh tum tik ho' Anapoorna hugs him while everyone else curiously wonders where DP had gone

At the same moment the doctor arrives and checks on Lakshy

''gabra neki koi baat nahi hai.. and congrats he is finally out of coma.. but remember no work no stress and complete rest for a week"

''I'll give you the prescriped medicine and remember to take it on time"

The doctor gives the list to AP

''Mein appko bahar tak chorde ta hu" Aadarsh says

There was a slience for a while but that didn't lastest for so long as Lakshy speaks "Maa..S-w-a-r-a" and tears dropped down his cheeks

All looked at him and remained slience

Scene changes to Bose House:

Swara who was still sleeping, wakes up from her bed

"Lucky" she screams

"Swara, kya hua?" Sharmishta asked

Swara gets up and looks around... "Swara? Kya hua bataao" she asks her again

Swara: Maa..Lucky...Mera Lakshy.. Mujhe aisa lage jise ussne mera pukara ho (She falls on the ground and cries)

Sharmishta: Swara...koi nahi he yaha, Ider deko (Swara looks at her) bul jao Laksh ko.. wo tumhara past hai.. adit hai woh tumhara

Swara: Kaise buljao mein ma? Mere wajaise laksh coma mein hai

Sharmishta: Nai swara

Swara: Yeh sab mere wajasee hua hai...na mein laksh se pyaar karti na yeh sab hota

Sharmishta: Kaa tum abhi bhi Lakshy se pyaar karti ho?

Swara: I love Lakshy mom ...

Sharmishta: Mujhe wadda karoo Swara

Swara: Kaisa wadaa?

Sharmishta: ke tum aaj ke baat kabhi bhi purane baato ke wajase nahi rogi

Swara: I promise I won't, mein apki strong beti hu ... Swara Bose Itni kamzoor nahi hai(They hug)

In Maheshwari Mansion:

Laksh takes some rest and rest of the family member goes down where they find DP

DP : I was waiting for you all ...

AP : App upper kyu nahi ayye?

DP : Mujhe app sab ko ek zaaruri baat karna hai.. Lakshya ke liye ek Bohot acche Marwari parivaar se rishta aaya hai ... And I think she would be perfect for this family...

RP: lekin bhaisab.. Abhi toh laksh coma se bahar aaya hai aur yeh sab itni jaldi

DP: Sirf rishta aaya hai abhi.. I'm not asking him to marry right now

Sujata: Aurr woh larki hai kon?

DP: Ragini Gadodia ... you must have heard her name .. They are coming tomorrow for proposal and confirmation ..
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awesome start 😊
continue soon
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Chapter 2


Ragini Gadodia is a simple girl who was raised by her parents and grand mother

"Ragini..Ragini" Parvati calls

"Ji dadi ma..Ek min" Replies Ragini who was busy writing her diary

"Achha hua tu milgai..Mujhe tujhe kuch baata na hai, tere liye rishta hai Maheshwari parivaar se..." She informs Ragini who remained shocked

"Maheshwari parivaar.. ?" Ragini wonders

"Haa.. Lakshy Maheshwari" she tells

"Pyaar dadi.. " before Ragini could say anything Dadi went back to the room

Back in the Maheshwari Mansion:

Uttara was giving Lakshy medicine and stayed with him for a while

"Bhaiya,woh nechee ... "

"Neeche kya Uttara?"

"Woh neeche appka rishta ter kardiya hai ek Marwari larki se.. koi Ragini Gadodia hai uska naam"

"Kya? (Completely shocked) Mujhe nahi karna kisi se shadi wadi.. karunga toh sirf swara se.. mujhe nahi karna kisise shadi"

Uttara takes Lakshy downstairs where everyone else was present, he was quiet neither he talked with anyone or listened to them.. He was just lost in his own world

On the other hand, swara gets to know that Laksh is now out of coma and runs to meet him when Dida and Parvati stops her from going

"Rukjao Swara"

"Dida.. Woh mein Laksh,,"

"Pata hai mujhe tum laksh se milne jarai ho? lekin kya tumhe lakta hai koi tumhe ghar ke under jaane dega .. kass kar Durga Prasad"

"Swara Maa is right .. jo Insan appne bete ke jaan lesakta hai woh Insaan kuch bhi karsakta hai "

"Paar maa.. karauu mein? App baatai ye ?"

"Swara please kuch din rukjao ... Usske baat milena ... "

"Maa .. mein laksh ko phone karru? "

Swara calls at Lakshy's home and Anupoorna picks it up

"Hello"

"Hello.. Aunty ... Mein swara.. Can i please talk to Laksh "

"Swara? "

Anupoorna puts the phone on speaker and gives it to Laksh

"Swara..." He says. "Laksh..Kaise ho ? " She askes

"Main tik hua... " He replies no realizing that DP was standing next to him, he snatches the phone away from him

"Swara (loudly) Tumhari himat kaise hua phone karne ka? Aajj phone karliya dubaara maat karna" DP warns and cuts the phone

Meanwhile Ragini was on her way to the temple, in the temple she prays to god and takes the blessing. On her way home she plans of meeting Swara as she didn't meet her for a long time, infact she also wanted to tell her about her marriage with Laksh

Ragini messages Swara and tells her to meet her after dinner in rooftop of their house

Swara and Ragini - Swaragini -- Although they were neighoours but any person could mistake them as sister seeing thier unbreakable bond

That night in the rooftop they meet -

Ragini: Swaraaa.. (Hugs her) I missed you

Swara: Ragini...(Hugs her back) I missed you too

Ragini: Kaise ho? Yeh sab choro mujhe tumhe bohot kuch baata na hai ..

Swara: Okay Madam chill ker .. Bohot time hai .. Aaram se baat karsak te hai

Ragini: Naahi Swara .. Abb bilkul koi time nahi hai .. Meri shaadi ter ho chuki hai

Swara: Kya? Shaadi? (Excited) Congrats .. Pehle kyun nai bataya?

Ragini: Abhi Abhi toh Pata chala hai dadi se .. Kaise baata thi? (Blushing)

Swara: Hai hai , dulhan shamarai hai (Teases her)

Just then Dadi calls Ragini and she gets scared that if she sees her with swara she will again create a scene

Ragini: Chal swara kal milte hai .. Music academy mein .. Abb mujhe jana chaiyee dadi is calling

Swara: Tik hai but jane se pehle karke ke naam to baata de..

Ragini: (Blusing) Lakshy Gadodia ...

Swara: Lakshy? (Shocked)

Dadi calls Ragini again and again

Ragini : Okay bye mein chalti hu.. Good night

Swara was completely broke, she didnt know what to do .. Laksh - she loved him but she Ragini she was like a sister to her. But How could she hide such a big thing from her and at the same time she didnt wanted to hurt and create troubles for her regarding her marriage as she knew how stright her grandparents were

Swara goes to her room all restless and not able to sleep, She thinks of talking to her Dida and Mom in the morning



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Nice .. But is story about SwaLak or RagSan or SwaSan or RagLak ?? 😲
I'm confused 😆
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Originally posted by: Kritika_warrior

Nice .. But is story about SwaLak or RagSan or SwaSan or RagLak ?? 😲

I'm confused 😆

Thank you dear .. You'll find out soon dear don't worry 😉
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Thank you 😊
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Thank you😳

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