PREM YAA MRIGTRISHNA ? UPDATE Pg. 139 *******17/04/16

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PREM YAA MRIGTRISHNA ?
(LOVE OR A MIRAGE?)

"Mrigtrishna" in English means "Mirage". Mirage is a term used when one has optical illusion of water being present even if its not. In a desert this often happens due to reflection of light on sand particles and it produces water like effect!

Friends,
This story shows extremes of life !

How difficult it is for a poor, young, beautiful, defenceless orphan girl to protect her values, dignity and character in most trying of times? But despite of trying times she believes in emotions whether good or bad are needed to fill colour in one's life! Will she ever find someone to love her?

A youngman who has all comforts and money, thinks life is a bed of roses as he has no pain and sadness in his life. He feels by only doing hard work and discipline one can earn money. And money can buy everything worthwhile. Emotions are useless! Can it buy love?
What do you feel? Read the story and give your precious feed back!
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INDEX

Character sketch Pg.1

Prologue Pg.1

Chapter 1 Pg. 5

Chapter 2 Pg. 8

Chapter 3 Pg. 11

Chapter 4 Pg. 14

Chapter 5,6 Pg. 17

Chapter 7 Pg. 21

Chapter 8 Pg. 23

Chapter 9 Pg. 27

Chapter 10 Pg. 30

Chapter 11 Pg. 35

Chapter 12 Pg. 38

Chapter 13 Pg. 42

Chapter 14 Pg. 47

Chapter 15 Pg. 50

Chapter 16 Pg. 53

Chapter 17 Pg. 58

Chapter 18 Pg. 61

Chapter 19 Pg. 65

Chapter 20 Pg. 69

Chapter 21 Pg. 72

Chapter 22,23 Pg. 76

Chapter 24 Pg. 80

Chapter 25 Pg. 84

Chapter 26 Pg. 88

Chapter 27 Pg. 92

Chapter 28 Pg. 97

Chapter 29 Pg. 100

Chapter 30 Pg. 106

Chapter 31 Pg. 111

Chapter 32 Pg. 114

Chapter 33,34 Pg. 119

Chapter 35 Pg. 123

Chapter 36 Pg. 126

Chapter 37 Pg. 129

Chapter 38 Pg. 133

Chapter 39 Pg. 137

Chapter 40 Pg. 139



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Edited by LM1991 - 9 years ago
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nice concept looking forward to it... 😊
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ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

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CHARACTER SKETCH


SAVITRI DEVI KHURANA
68yr. old. She was Chairman of Khurana Industries i.e. Khurana Constructions, Khurana Interior etc. but has now given resposibilities to her son, Ranjit Singh Khurana. She is currently Chairperson of Khurana Hospitals. She is also heading Charitable Institutions and Trusts. She is also Chairperson of newly inaugrated Khurana Foundation (KF). She has two grandsons-Maan & Vicky! She likes Geet very much as a person and future daughter-in-law of Khurana family.



RANJIT SINGH KHURANA (RK) :
50yr. old He is a widower. Chairman & CEO of Khurana Industries i.e. Khurana Constructions, Khurana Interior, Khurana Hotels etc. He is also MD of Khurana Constructions. He is a man of strong character. He loves Geet like his daughter. He has a wish along with his mother Savitri Devi to make Geet his elder daughter-in-law (badi bahu) i.e. Maan's wife, after Maan takes over responsibilities of MD of Khurana Constructions.



MAAN SINGH KHURANA (MSK):
29yr. old. Eldest son & heir of Khuranas. He has a degree in Bachelors of Architecture as well as MBA degree. He has looks that girls just die for! Tall, handsome, having sexy stubble on his face & well toned body with 8pack abs. Very loving & soft towards his family. He has just finished his job in another Company, Shekhawat Construction as he felt he will be given undue leniency in Khurana Construction while initial working days. Now after two years of work in Shekhawat Constructions, he is going to join his father's company as MD of Khurana Constructions. He still cannot accept that sometimes reality and situations forces us to change our rules and regulations.
The kind of life partner he wants he feels is impossible to get! Hence, he does not want to get married. Although he is not a "ladies man", but girls and woman cling to him for his looks, money and fame! He doesn't mind it as he feels that they are an arm-candy for him thereby helping him avoiding questions about his marriage and if there is a special woman in his life! He is very idealistic and is very particular about rules and regulations set by him or Khurana family even at expense of other person's happiness!



VIKRANT SINGH KHURANA(Vicky)
27yrs old. Fun-loving, jovial & a prankstar. He works in Khurana Interiors as the head of designing department. He loves to party and have a nice time. He is a big flirt but soft hearted! He can even flirt with his Dadimaa. He is in love with Meera and was heart-broken when she rejected his marriage proposal. He is trying to woo Meera with Geet's help! He considers Geet as a sister.



DR. SHASHANK GUPTA:
49yr. old. CEO & Head of Khurana Hospitals. He is a famous heart surgeon. A very close friend of Ranjit Singh Khurana. Though Dr. Gupta belongs to a business family but was always interested in becoming a doctor. He refuses to work in a hospital by his business family as he feels they are too business minded. Hence, he joined Khurana Hospital. Though Savitri Devi is Chairman of Khurana Hospital but only for name the main person behind it is Dr. Gupta. He is also Dadimaa's doctor whenever required or can assist them by sending someone in emergency.




SASHA MAHESWARI: 23yrs. Old. Works as an assistant architect. Very selfish and lazy in her work. Love to boss her juniors! She hates Geet as RK sir has a soft corner for her! She often belittles Geet on her way of dressing and behaviour! Her main aim is to marry one of the Khurana brothers.



Last but not least our favourite, ADITYA SRIVASTAV (ADI):
28yrs. old. He is Head of Accounts department. Very close friend of Maan! His father was loyal employee of Khuranas. After his father's death, Khurana's employed him. He is very loyal to Ranjit Singh Khurana and Khurana industries. Adi can do anything for Khuranas especially, Maan. Maan trusts him the most professionally & personally. Adi saves Geet from Sasha's jealousy. Adi is very impressed and appreciates her hardwork!



GEETIKA SINGH (HANDA) (Geet):
21yr. Old. Geet is doing Final Year Bachelor of Architecture on scholarship provided by Khuranas. She is very bright in studies, topper of her batch but does not have finances for higher studies. Ranjit Singh Khurana saw her when he visited her college as chief guest to award her prizes. He realised her calibre and potential, hence, offered her scholarship to study further and a part time job as his secretary in Khurana Constructions to make Geet meet her daily expenses. Geet never takes undue advantage of Khurana's i.e. Savitri Devi & Ranjit kindness.
She is true definition of beauty & grace. She has a milky white complexion, hour glass figure with doe-like hazel coloured eyes. She lives in a small house with her Mausi, Rajji and Tito. She is the only earning member of the family! A girl of very strong values and character. She never compromises on her self-respect and values. She has no time to think of her wishes and desires as she has no time between housework, studies and her job! There is one desire of hers or of all girls that is "a person to love her for herself as she is neither rich, beautiful (according to Geet),doesn't have a family or any status in society"?



CHITRALEKHA SINGH (CHARU):
48yr. old Geet's mausi. She is unmarried and doesn't have any child hence adopted Geet after death of her sister, Rano. Charu also adopted two more children. They are Charu's late neighbour's children namely, Rajji and Tito



MOHINDER LAL HANDA:
52yr. old. Mohinder is Geet's father. He is fairly well off businessman of Chandigarh. He remarried after Rano's death to a young and beautiful girl. But his new young wife, Pammi can't stand Geet. Hence, Charu adopted Geet at her young age of 5yrs.
Pammi and Mohinder could not have any children! Now Geet was also legally adopted by Charu. Mohinder realised very late in his life that he has lost his most precious possession in form of Geet. Mohinder tried to financially help Geet to make ends meet but she politely said that she can't take help from strangers! He also remembers KB's continous warning against Pammi, which is coming true now!



PINKY MANCHANDA :
23yrs. old. Receptionist at KC. Very jovial, full of life & loves eating. Geet is Pinky's friend since joining KC! She understands Geet's pain and helps her in her trying times. Pinky loves Adi !



MEERA GUPTA :
25yr. old. She is Dr. Shashank Gupta's daughter. She is Chief Architect of KC. She is Geets mentor in KC. RK & Shashank want Meera to marry Vicky. Although Meera loves Vicky but keeps it hidden. She has refuses to marry Vicky as she feels he is never serious about work and life! She admires Geet at being able to handle home, studies and work. She tries to support Geet whenever she can.



ADVOCATE KULBHUSHAN SHEKHAWAT (KB):
45yr. Old Mohinderlal Handa's friend cum lawyer. But he has broken all personal contact with Mohinder since he remarried and disowned Geet. He treats Geet as his daughter but could not adopt her as he was a divorcee with no intension of ever marrying! Geet's calls him "Dada". Mohinder without telling Pammi he has willed his property in Bangalore to Geet, which only his friend KB knows!



Rest office staff same as GHSP.



NEW CHARACTERS

RAJMATA SWARNANJALI SINGH
Wife of late Maharaja Rajveer Singh (fictitious name). Queen Mother of Kingdom of Vallabhgarh (fictitious name). She was a strict and always wanted rules to be followed. She was a typical royal i.e. aristocratic,full of pride and self-importance. She had four children - two sons and two daughters, Prithvi Raj, Harshvardhan, Rajeshwari and Chitralekha. Rajeshwari had married a commoner against Rajmata's wish hence she was disowned. Initially there was no change in her attitude after Rajeshwari left but with passing of time she realised the importance of family. She realised importance of having her daughters, especially after Chitralekha also left! Rajmata started missing her daughters and started searching for them. Rajmata is desperately trying to find their whereabouts but there has been not much success.



MAHARAJ PRITHVI RAJ SINGH
Eldest son of Maharaj Rajveer and Maharani Swarnajali. Present King of kingdom of Vallabhgarh. He was furious at his mother for disowning his sister and has not spoken to his mother since Rajeshwari left. He married against his mother's wishes to Sumitra. She was daughter of their Diwanji. It was love at first sight for Prithviraj when he saw Sumitra. Prithviraj and Sumitra have only one son, Brij.



YUVRAJ HARSHVARDHAN SINGH
Second son of Maharaj Rajveer and Maharani Swarnajali. Crowned Prince of kingdom of Vallabhgarh. He was married to a sweet and docile pincess, Pallavi. Although it was arranged marriage but Harshvardhan fell in love with his sweet and docile wife soon. He has twin sons, Udayveer (Veer) and Yashvardhan(Yash). He lost Pallavi during the birth of his still born daughter. Since then has become an introvert and started painting his love, Pallavi.



RAJKUMARI RAJESHWARI SINGH
Disowned elder princess of Vallabhgarh. Rajmata was very angry with her marriage to a commoner. After about half a decade of her marriage, Rajeshwari died.



RAJKUMARI CHITRALEKHA SINGH
Left Vallabhgarh around a decade and a half back. Rajeshwari died and Rajeshwari's husband did not want to keep the child with him and his new wife! Chitralekha stepped in and adopted an orphaned child of her sister, Rajeshwari. As Chitralekha was aware that Rajmata will not accept disowned Rajeshwari's child, so she too left the kingdom of Vallabhgarh.



YUVRAJ KUNWAR BRIJENDRA SINGH (Brij) 32yr. old next in line for throne after Yuvraj Harshvardhan. He is married to Padmini since past 7yrs. They have a 6yrs. old son, Rishabh (Rishi). He is the owner of meduim size construction company in Jaipur called BRIMINISHI CONSTRUCTION (BC). The company belongs to only his immediate family i.e. Brij, Padmini and Rishi and doesn't have anything to do with his royal family. Although he is the eldest son of Maharaj Prithviraj and is expected to handle the throne after Harshvardhan but he would rather like to hand it over to Veer or Yash. He prefers to be a selfmade man!



RAJ KUNWAR UDAYVEER SINGH (Veer) 26yrs. old. Veer is eldest son of Yuvraj Harshvardhan and twin of Yash. His main interest is in physical activities such as horse riding, polo, rowing and defence techniques whether its self-defence i.e. Karate; sword fighting or wrestling! Although he is a graduate but he doesn't have any interest in jobs which are sedentary! He is actually an undercover Commando. No one not even his family knows that he is a Commando.



RAJ KUNWAR YASHVARDHAN SINGH (Yash) 26yrs. old. Second of son of Yuvraj Harshvardhan and twin of Veer. He is happy go lucky man! Extremely good at heart and sympathetic towards poor and needy folk. He is willing to give away even the shirt on his back for poor people! He is in Final Year of MS (Master in Surgery) wants to become a Surgeon specialising in Oncology (Cancer) so he can help poor and needy people in his Kingdom and outside as well!



SIDDHARTH KHOSLA (Sid)
29 yr. old. He runs an Interior Designing company. Childhood friend of Vicky. He loves Dadimaa and RK like his own family. He is not pally with Maan and tries to stay as far away from Maan as possible. Vicky requested Sid to help teach Maan a lesson and help Geet to win Maan's love and win back her prestiage in KM and Maan's life!




Dr. VARUN SHAH
30yr. Old Psychiatrist. He had a crush (which Varun is thinking to be love!) on Geet when she was in school but couldn't tell her his feelings as she was too young. Then he had to leave Shimla for his MS in Psychiatry in Mumbai. When he returned, Geet had left Shimla. Now when he has found Geet, she is not only married but pregnant as well! To top it all now she has lost her memory as well!



SAKSHI CHOUDHARY
21yr. old. She is Gayatri / Geet's secretary. She is very simple but well educated girl. She is an orphan. She wants to do well in life but by hardwork not by buttering up the bosses!
She is very fond of Geet and protective of her as well as Geet is pregnant.



RAHUL MALHOTRA
He has no morals and beds a new woman every night! In office surrounding he was forced to keep himself in check hence curbed himself by just passing lewrd and obsene comments on female staff. He is very angry with Geet and Maan at getting him arrested. Rahul has made a vow to destroy MSK and Geet. He is basically an evil person. He is involved in smuggling of arms and ammunitions! His main business is to supply arms and ammunitions to the terrorist organisations and underworld. He can easily murder anyone if it is beneficial for him. WANTED BY INTERPOL!



DEV SINGH RATHORE
He is married to Naintara Singh Rathore, but still wants to bed a new woman every night! He married Naintara as she came from a rich business family, but soon lost interest in her as the male family members refused to invest money in his useless business propositions. They are only tolerating him for their daughter/sister's happiness as Naintara belongs to a traditional and conservative family, hence her family is not agreeable for Naintara's divorce!



Dev would have long back lost his job had it not been for his father, Diwaanji and Naintara's pleading in front of Rajkumari Padmini. He is a man of expensive tastes i.e. Wine, women, gambling, night clubs etc. As he requires money for his expensive life style he joined Rahul, but Dev only does Rahul's dirty work of baiting the prey, whereas Rahul does the killing. He wants to bed Mrs. Gayatri Singh but was unable to as Yuvraj Brijendra transferred him to Jodhpur making him extremely angry.





Edited by LM1991 - 9 years ago
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PROLOGUE

In thirty minutes her whole life changed! The small family she considered her own for past 16yrs. have left her and now only their memories remain. The place she called her home was now a blackened rubble of bricks and glowing embers! The only eerie sound of fire engine alarms and gush of forceful spraying water was breaking the deathly silence! Geet wanted to know if the Almighty was making a jest of her or trying to reduce her problems. If there was no family, she didn't need to earn to feed, clothe or educate them? No expense on last rites as well as there is nothing to cremate except ash! She had never thought that when she was going to buy a carton of milk and few other household essentials in a nearby supermarket it would be the last time of seeing them alive! Suddenly the voices seemed to be coming from far away and her vision was being covered by darkness!

Edited by LM1991 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CS in fab I'm in love with it...but in prologue .. she lost her whole family...how will she cope up now...due lost her meaning to live...they are alive??would love to read further...
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congrats on the new story! superb prologue n awesome cs! looking 24ward to the updates. njoi reading all ur stories, thanks
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Congrats for new one. Concept is intresting. Fab CS n prolong is intresting. Waiting for this to start.
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Congrats for the new story 🤗
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Prologue... Poor geet lost her family 😔
Will be waiting for the update
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Congrats on another story

Character Sketch is Vibrant and Interesting while Prologue is Intriguing

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