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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi!

Acha I wanna pen a story on once Raman has discovered the truth & he decides to end their relationship.

PROLOGUE

"Shaadi, pyaar, vishwas ... in sab ka matlab bhi samajh thi ho tum?"

"Mehez do wade kardiye aur tumhe laga ke tum mere peet peeche jo marzi woh karogi? Mera sawal tumse yeh hai Ishita ke tumne mujhse jhoot kaha kyun...?"

"Raman aap ki jaan ko khatra tha kissi apne se! Ashok ka koi khabri; humaare ghar mein se hai... Raman aap ko hi bachane ke liye ... I had to ... I'm sorry!!"

"I'm sorry... sorry ke maine tumse pyaar kiya, that I trusted you. I regret our relationship ...!!"

"Aisa toh mat kaho Raman"

Raman left

~

Then after sometime Sarika comes to Raman's room to give him his food and tries to instigate Raman against Ishita. That proves futile as he shuts her up.

Somehow Sarika manages to poison a glass of juice. She hands it over to him in the hope he'll have it.

He tells her to leave.

~

It's morning & Ishita comes into the room to talk to Raman & reconcile. As she inches closer to Raman she notices blood coming from his mouth. She believes that Raman coughed blood & calls a doctor over.

~

Ishita is deeply panicked, guilt ridden & saddened by the turn of events. Whilst the Doctor is checking on Raman, Mummyji comes to see Raman & seeing his condition she throws Ishita out of the house, with a heavy heart. Even Amma refuses to accept Ishu.

She weeps but is helpless as the participant of the circumstances.

~

The Doctor informs Mummyji and the rest of the family, with the inclusion of Sarika, that due to alcohol poisoning, Raman has slipped into a coma.

Mummyji, Papaji & Romi are disturbed whereas Sarika goes over to break the news to Ashok.

~

"tumne jaise kaha tha maine exact waise hi kiya magar Raman Bhai ne toh woh juice hi nahi piya. Ulta woh to alcohol poisoning ki wajah se ..."

"bole khabri ... main bhi toh sunun kya hua hai 'The Raman Kumar Bhalla' ko?"

"woh coma main hain ..." she uttered with great difficulty

"itna kuch karne ke bawajood mara nahi hai saala!!"

"main phone rakhti hoon... kissi ko shak hojayega!"

~

Mummyji sat right next to her Puttar hugging him tightly, weeping at the state her "Happy" was in today. She saw his face, devoid of any kind of expression... a sense of sombreness filled the air. It felt like he'd left the wish of continuing his life! Of course that would be the situation only, what else?

His life, his happiness, his tranquillity had not trusted him enough to tell him that his own life was in risk!

~

Ishita repeatedly called Simmi to discover that not had she only lost her hubby, she had also lead to his near death experience.

~

TO BE CONTINUED

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks guys for all the appreciation!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A great start and very emotional!!!!!!!!!

Please continue soon - please do not let them separate!!!!!!!!!

I would really appreciate it if you were to pm me please???
Thank you so much!!!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: nafnaf

A great start and very emotional!!!!!!!!!


Please continue soon - please do not let them separate!!!!!!!!!

I would really appreciate it if you were to pm me please???
Thank you so much!!!!!!!



So many exclamation marks????????? 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: kanajigokul

Good start. Continue soon.



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Posted: 9 years ago
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That I shall 😆
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Yes sir 😳

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