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Lots of laughter...🤣..I know that the title is funny...but you see, it is it...
So these are three shots or three chapters on our favourite couple Ragini and Laksh...
Every comment or suggestion is accepted with open hands...but please prevent bashing RagLak...
Prologue.. .
Chapter 0 Of 3...
Place: Mumbai, India
Year: 2015..
Day: Janmashtmi..
In a house...
A lady called someone...
Lady: beta...jaldi aa...pooja ke liye der ho rahi hai...
In a room...someone is getting ready..the one is wearing a khakhi uniform. ..
She ties on the laces of her brown shoes..
The lady is coming upstairs to her room. ..
The girl now tightens a brown belt on her waist...
She buttons up her sleeve buttons...she sets her collar right...she pinned the batches on her shoulders...
Lady reaches outside her room ...before opening the door she says..
Lady: yeh ladki bhi na...kabhi samay se nahi aati...
The girl inside wears the khakhi cap...camera only shows her hand which is setting her cap and her beautiful eyes, which has pride in them after wearing that cap...
Now the camera shows her lips which curved a little giving a smile of satisfaction...with a thought of doing something for her land's sake..
The lady opens the door and the girl turns to her...
Lady: Ragini..itna late..
Yes that girl, the police woman is our female protagonist, Ragini Gadodia, sorry correction, ASP Ragini Gadodia...
N the lady was Sharmishtha Gadodia, her mother...
Ragini: maa hum tayaar hain...chaliye..
Shomi: kya chaliye Ragini? Tu aaj janmashtmi ke din bhi duty par jaayegi.???
Ragini: maa woh toh jaana hoga na...
Shomi: par yeh galat baat hai. ..festival ke din toh tu leave le sakti hai..
Ragini: kaash maa le paate ...par agar hum sab ghar par baithe rahein toh desh ki raksha kaun karega? Aur festive season mein toh risk aur badh jaata hai na...
Shomi: par beta...
Ragini: maa..
Shomi: achha..chal pooja toh tu hi karegi na?
Ragini: har baar maa hum hi toh karte hai toh is baar bhi hum hi karenge na..
They both smile..
Ragini: chaliye maa...
Shomi: Ragini wait...
Ragini stops...shomi takes out something from the drawer and shows it to Ragini...
Shomi: tu yeh bhool rahi hai..
It was a name batch..
Ragini: thanx maa for reminding. ..
Shomi makes Ragini pin it on her shirt...
They go downstairs n Ragini does aarti...
Ragini: Radhe krishna ki jyoti alaukik tino lok me chhaye rahi hai
Bhakti vivash ek prem pujarin phir bhi deep jalaye rahi hai
Krishna ko gokul se radhe ko - 2
Barsane se bulaye rahi hai
Dono karo swikar kripa kar jogan aarti gaye rahi hai - 2
Bhor bhaye ti sanj dhale tak seva kaun itne mahamaro
Snan karaye wo vastra odhaye vo bhog lagaye wo lagat pyaro
Kabse niharat aapki aur - 2
Ki aap hamari aur niharo
Radhe krishna hamare dham ko jani vrindawan dham padharo - 2
Ragini gives aarti n prasad to shomi ...n starts walking for duty...
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In a Slum...
There is a dahi-haandi programme...you know what is dahi-haandi, right? ...okay I shall tell you...on janmashtmi it is a ritual done by young men or women too...where ppl make a human pyramid n one, called the govinda or Krishna, climbs that pyramid and breaks the haandi or the pot that is hung high.. filled with maakhan(butter) inside it...same as lord Krishna did in his time...
Everyone is throwing colours n water here and there...there is very much crowd n noise..everyone is shouting one name...there are three pyramids. ..the first one fails in breaking the haandi...
But The second one reaches the haandi..and a boy in them picks the coconut n tries to hit the haandi but suddenly he loses his balance...
In the third team..
Everyone is trying hard to make the pyramid ...after two attempts they succeed. ..
A boy, the govinda, climbs up the pyramid. ..he us wearing a knee-torn jeans...with a red n tapori like shirt..n a band tied around his forehead. ..he is a total jerk. ..tapori is almost an exact name for him...
His face is not shown yet...he climbs up the pyramid and holds the haandi...his face is hidden behind the haandi. .he picks the coconut which is kept on the haandi n hits it hard on it..the haandi breaks n all the maakhan or butter falls off it..
His face is shown...suddenly he tends ti fall down the pyramid... but he holds the rope on which haandi was tied...n hurriedly came down on it...
His friends cheer him..
Omi: lucky tune toh kamaal kar diya...
Rakesh: haan yaar..kya banda hai tu...
Everyone praises him..
Sheena (a girl wanting to attract lucky): haan re...tu toh bada hi chhuparustam nikla..kya kismat hai teri
Lucky: jeetna lucky ki kismat nahi...uski aadat hai...
N he walks from there with full tashan...
Sheena looking at the going Laksh: haaye...kya chhokra hai...
Yes he was none other than our male protagonist, Laksh or Lucky. ...
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Friends this was the prologue or the character sketch of my TS...
Hope you liked it...
If I get good response then I'll definitely continue it...n I won't bother u if u didn't like it...
So these are three shots or three chapters on our favourite couple Ragini and Laksh...
Every comment or suggestion is accepted with open hands...but please prevent bashing RagLak...
Prologue.. .
Chapter 0 Of 3...
Place: Mumbai, India
Year: 2015..
Day: Janmashtmi..
In a house...
A lady called someone...
Lady: beta...jaldi aa...pooja ke liye der ho rahi hai...
In a room...someone is getting ready..the one is wearing a khakhi uniform. ..
She ties on the laces of her brown shoes..
The lady is coming upstairs to her room. ..
The girl now tightens a brown belt on her waist...
She buttons up her sleeve buttons...she sets her collar right...she pinned the batches on her shoulders...
Lady reaches outside her room ...before opening the door she says..
Lady: yeh ladki bhi na...kabhi samay se nahi aati...
The girl inside wears the khakhi cap...camera only shows her hand which is setting her cap and her beautiful eyes, which has pride in them after wearing that cap...
Now the camera shows her lips which curved a little giving a smile of satisfaction...with a thought of doing something for her land's sake..
The lady opens the door and the girl turns to her...
Lady: Ragini..itna late..
Yes that girl, the police woman is our female protagonist, Ragini Gadodia, sorry correction, ASP Ragini Gadodia...
N the lady was Sharmishtha Gadodia, her mother...
Ragini: maa hum tayaar hain...chaliye..
Shomi: kya chaliye Ragini? Tu aaj janmashtmi ke din bhi duty par jaayegi.???
Ragini: maa woh toh jaana hoga na...
Shomi: par yeh galat baat hai. ..festival ke din toh tu leave le sakti hai..
Ragini: kaash maa le paate ...par agar hum sab ghar par baithe rahein toh desh ki raksha kaun karega? Aur festive season mein toh risk aur badh jaata hai na...
Shomi: par beta...
Ragini: maa..
Shomi: achha..chal pooja toh tu hi karegi na?
Ragini: har baar maa hum hi toh karte hai toh is baar bhi hum hi karenge na..
They both smile..
Ragini: chaliye maa...
Shomi: Ragini wait...
Ragini stops...shomi takes out something from the drawer and shows it to Ragini...
Shomi: tu yeh bhool rahi hai..
It was a name batch..
Ragini: thanx maa for reminding. ..
Shomi makes Ragini pin it on her shirt...
They go downstairs n Ragini does aarti...
Ragini: Radhe krishna ki jyoti alaukik tino lok me chhaye rahi hai
Bhakti vivash ek prem pujarin phir bhi deep jalaye rahi hai
Krishna ko gokul se radhe ko - 2
Barsane se bulaye rahi hai
Dono karo swikar kripa kar jogan aarti gaye rahi hai - 2
Bhor bhaye ti sanj dhale tak seva kaun itne mahamaro
Snan karaye wo vastra odhaye vo bhog lagaye wo lagat pyaro
Kabse niharat aapki aur - 2
Ki aap hamari aur niharo
Radhe krishna hamare dham ko jani vrindawan dham padharo - 2
Ragini gives aarti n prasad to shomi ...n starts walking for duty...
*************************************************
In a Slum...
There is a dahi-haandi programme...you know what is dahi-haandi, right? ...okay I shall tell you...on janmashtmi it is a ritual done by young men or women too...where ppl make a human pyramid n one, called the govinda or Krishna, climbs that pyramid and breaks the haandi or the pot that is hung high.. filled with maakhan(butter) inside it...same as lord Krishna did in his time...
Everyone is throwing colours n water here and there...there is very much crowd n noise..everyone is shouting one name...there are three pyramids. ..the first one fails in breaking the haandi...
But The second one reaches the haandi..and a boy in them picks the coconut n tries to hit the haandi but suddenly he loses his balance...
In the third team..
Everyone is trying hard to make the pyramid ...after two attempts they succeed. ..
A boy, the govinda, climbs up the pyramid. ..he us wearing a knee-torn jeans...with a red n tapori like shirt..n a band tied around his forehead. ..he is a total jerk. ..tapori is almost an exact name for him...
His face is not shown yet...he climbs up the pyramid and holds the haandi...his face is hidden behind the haandi. .he picks the coconut which is kept on the haandi n hits it hard on it..the haandi breaks n all the maakhan or butter falls off it..
His face is shown...suddenly he tends ti fall down the pyramid... but he holds the rope on which haandi was tied...n hurriedly came down on it...
His friends cheer him..
Omi: lucky tune toh kamaal kar diya...
Rakesh: haan yaar..kya banda hai tu...
Everyone praises him..
Sheena (a girl wanting to attract lucky): haan re...tu toh bada hi chhuparustam nikla..kya kismat hai teri
Lucky: jeetna lucky ki kismat nahi...uski aadat hai...
N he walks from there with full tashan...
Sheena looking at the going Laksh: haaye...kya chhokra hai...
Yes he was none other than our male protagonist, Laksh or Lucky. ...
-----------------------------------------------
Friends this was the prologue or the character sketch of my TS...
Hope you liked it...
If I get good response then I'll definitely continue it...n I won't bother u if u didn't like it...
Mangal Lakshmi
