OS- Chori chori prem ram siya ne Pakda.

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Sruthakirti was sitting in front of the mirror. Haldi ceremony of Sita was over. She gazed at the mirror and then her thoughts went to that one face she felt so close to and then she thought guiltily
" What I am thinking. Is it right to think about some prince like this. He is jijashree's brother and Sita didi's devar" she chided herself.
But then the thought was not going. Those eyes following her as she left with the haldi. She blushed red hot and smiled unknowingly, only to hear the voices of her sisters
" Arey kirti what happened, why is she looking like this. " came in Urmila
" Sita didi she is blusing more than you " quipped Mandavi
Kirti was on the verge of tears now and she came and hugged Sita " Didi look what they are telling. Are these people my sisters or my enemies"
" Urmila you can take food for someone, and Mandavi you can go and hit someone accidently and poor kirti cannot blush. Why are you all so partial towards her " Sita patted kirti's cheeks
" Didi" Urmila and Mandavi cried looking alarmed as if their chori is caught by Sita. Sita looked at all her blushing sisters and began to laugh.
Shatrugna was in his room lost in thoughts, that blushing face which was looking at him sideways. Lakshman Bhaiyya was telling she is Sita Bhabi's youngest sister. She had an innocence about her, which attracted Shatrugna. He smiled.
" Someone is smiling from the time of haldi, ab ise Mithila ki kaunsi Mitti pasand aa gayi" came in Lakshman with his usual comments
" Mithila ki Mitti. Kya Mitila mein alag alag tarah ke Mitti hoti hai. Muje bhi dekhna hai" asked Bharat innocently not understanding what Lakshman was meaning.
" Bharat Bhaiyya aapko Mitti. Aap tho mitti ke peeche kyun jaayege, aap tho rang barsake aaye hain" Now it was Bharat's turn to go deep red as he understood what Lakshman was implying.
Now Lakshman was at the centre teasing both his brothers as Ram entered and Bharat and Shatrughna rushed to Ram. "Ram Bhaiyya dekho naa kitna chidatha hai"
" Tum dono usse poochthe kyun nahi, kaun si titli ke peeche bagtha hai aaj kal"
Bharat and Shatrugna looked at Lakshman and Lakshman was going deep red as all the 3 brothers surrounded him
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Posted: 9 years ago
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" Someone is smiling from the time of haldi, ab ise Mithila ki kaunsi Mitti pasand aa gayi" came in Lakshman with his usual comments" - This Line cracked me up 🤣🤣
" Tum dono usse poochthe kyun nahi, kaun si titli ke peeche bagtha hai aaj kal" - This was mast too 😆 Ram , as usual silenced Lakshman with his speech 🤣


Such a Cute OS with 4 bro's & sis's 😉 Continue with OS as well shruthi 👍🏼
Edited by Suganya.S - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks Jayashree.
@Suganya Lakshman should have mast lines. He is like that😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Someone is smiling from the time of haldi, ab ise Mithila ki kaunsi Mitti pasand aa gayi" came in Lakshman with his usual comments🤣

Tum dono usse poochthe kyun nahi, kaun si titli ke peeche bagtha hai aaj kal"🤣

Urmila you can take food for someone, and Mandavi you can go and hit someone accidently and poor kirti cannot blush. Why are you all so partial towards her " Sita patted kirti's cheeks🤣

Those 3 dialogues cracked me up... specially Lakshman wala 😆

Cute OS
Plz continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shruthiravi

Sruthakirti was sitting in front of the mirror. Haldi ceremony of Sita was over. She gazed at the mirror and then her thoughts went to that one face she felt so close to and then she thought guiltily

" What I am thinking. Is it right to think about some prince like this. He is jijashree's brother and Sita didi's devar" she chided herself.
But then the thought was not going. Those eyes following her as she left with the haldi. She blushed red hot and smiled unknowingly, only to hear the voices of her sisters
" Arey kirti what happened, why is she looking like this. " came in Urmila
" Sita didi she is blusing more than you " quipped Mandavi
Kirti was on the verge of tears now and she came and hugged Sita " Didi look what they are telling. Are these people my sisters or my enemies"
" Urmila you can take food for someone, and Mandavi you can go and hit someone accidently and poor kirti cannot blush. Why are you all so partial towards her " Sita patted kirti's cheeks
" Didi" Urmila and Mandavi cried looking alarmed as if their chori is caught by Sita. Sita looked at all her blushing sisters and began to laugh.
Shatrugna was in his room lost in thoughts, that blushing face which was looking at him sideways. Lakshman Bhaiyya was telling she is Sita Bhabi's youngest sister. She had an innocence about her, which attracted Shatrugna. He smiled.
" Someone is smiling from the time of haldi, ab ise Mithila ki kaunsi Mitti pasand aa gayi" came in Lakshman with his usual comments
" Mithila ki Mitti. Kya Mitila mein alag alag tarah ke Mitti hoti hai. Muje bhi dekhna hai" asked Bharat innocently not understanding what Lakshman was meaning.
" Bharat Bhaiyya aapko Mitti. Aap tho mitti ke peeche kyun jaayege, aap tho rang barsake aaye hain" Now it was Bharat's turn to go deep red as he understood what Lakshman was implying.
Now Lakshman was at the centre teasing both his brothers as Ram entered and Bharat and Shatrughna rushed to Ram. "Ram Bhaiyya dekho naa kitna chidatha hai"
" Tum dono usse poochthe kyun nahi, kaun si titli ke peeche bagtha hai aaj kal"
Bharat and Shatrugna looked at Lakshman and Lakshman was going deep red as all the 3 brothers surrounded him

Amazing os loved the one liners used pls continue.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aewwwee...how cute it was!konsi titliii ke peeche bhagta haii...this line was superb!!!shruti it was too gud
How innocent shrutkirti is!she's so genuine
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Posted: 9 years ago
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" Someone is smiling from the time of haldi, ab ise Mithila ki kaunsi Mitti pasand aa gayi" 🤣 I died laughing !
Come with more like this Shruti . Loved it.
I wish I could see something like this on screen

Love,
Sruthi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Extremely well written , We will surely die laughing if something like this really happens on the show.

Pls do continue dear !!!👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Guys thanks a lot for loving it. Actually SKR CVs have managed to bring out the romantic in me which has been lying dormant for a long time when I got irritated with DABH and EHT closed too soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shruthiravi

Guys thanks a lot for loving it. Actually SKR CVs have managed to bring out the romantic in me which has been lying dormant for a long time when I got irritated with DABH and EHT closed too soon.


EHT was a good show.
Dont talk about DABH 🤢

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