Soch Na Sake (OS) Updated 5/2/16

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Back with another OS. It is a variant of current track. For the first time I have written with respect to Raman's POV. I hope you people won't dealt tomatoes and eggs on me. It being an One short I didn't give some of the obvious details, I hope you will undertsand and if still you people find it incomplete let me know, may be I will work on it.


When you get a demand from your darling baby sista @sush , you cannot deny, especially when you are vellah sitting in one place with a broken ankle.😆😆... Here goes my favorite song, i don't know how much it matches with this track, But i just included it as it is recently on a replay mode in my playlist.


Enough of my ramblings, Do lemme know how you find this one. Do not forget to hit the like button, if you do so. Thanks for reading. Ignore Typos if any .


SOCH NA SAKE

--- Shravs😳




Life surprises everyone with a lots of ups and downs. That's what happened in her life as well. She was always praised by people for her innocence, but people always used it against her and the worst part is she never understands how cruel this World can get. But none of this stops her from being a courteous, kindhearted person. When my daughter fell in Love with her, I didn't understand how and why, because she doesn't even asked me about her mother ever then, I never thought she even understands any such relation exists in this world. The magic happened, she found herself a mother in a woman who was called barren by the World. I was ashamed of myself, As I think about my behavior with my own daughter, how bad I treated her when she doesn't even know she was being ignored by her own father. Then, the angel in our life came, she changed me to a better person, better son, better brother , better parent to both my children. This lady not only changed me like her, but she also changed my family like her. When I think back to how my family was, It is astonishing that she changed everything in just two years of her presence.


Today, yet again the world has proven her that her innocence or kindheartedness isn't what the world needs. The world doesn't want her humanity to be showered, as they don't reciprocate it to her. She went out of her way to help a lady whom she didn't even knew a few weeks back, and now landed in a jail for being accused as murderer, when all she did was just trying to save that lady from her torturous husband. Right now I am very angry on her, for not letting me know any of this before hand, but I have to get her back in order to show my anger on her. In the jail when I meet her I just don't know how to face those eyes pleading me to get her out of it as it's unbearable for her, given how they treat her. She must have never in her life thought something like this would happen to her. But again that lady used my wife's innocence and tricked her into her husband's murder case which is actually planned by her boyfriend and her.


The most difficult part in these fifteen days was to answer my babies about their mother. Their eyes had always asked me same question 'When will our Mom be home dad'. The helplessness I feel seeing my wife and children is something I cannot take. I don't think any man can take that. I do know i have to be strong for them and fight for them, but, all my strength just washed away today, when my wife was given verdict of two and half year imprisonment. I didn't/ couldn't wait any longer in the court to see her being taken to that place again where she feels suffocated. I didn't had the strength to handle my children in the court when they would drag their mother away from them for a period of two and half year. I aimlessly drove to that one place I come when I can't handle myself. This place is known only to my wife. I know my family would take care of my children, but I know I failed them as a father as I myself failed to fight and win my wife back.



Everything is over. This is what I feel, Are they kidding me, by sating, I will be able to meet my wife only twice a month with hell lot of people surrounding us and at the distance of 10 meters with a fence barrier which will not even let me see her clearly leave alone listening to her sweet voice. I just don't know how she will manage in there. The only thing that i can hear her saying to me the last time I met her before the proceedings was "Get me out of this place, It's suffocating, I will die Raman... Please get me out of here...".


A new fear scares me, what if she is not able to pull these two and half years, what if she gives up, like I am doing now. This thought pushes me up to fight for her, this feeling of her giving up on me, upon us, jerks me up to get up and win the race. I get up with a jerk. I see around to realise that I was just dreaming. The court hearing is today at 9 am in the morning. I see the clock it reads 4 am, I know she must have been awake by now too, will be praying her murugan to get her out of that place. I do the only thing that I can think off, I don't know how it will work, given how bizarre is my idea. The only thing I believe will get my wife out of this is by making that lady speak up about her boyfriend. I am going to do something which is going to make me abhorred of myself. I am going to fight for my family at any cost, that's what I think when I call my brother to help me through this.




"Romi, will you be a part of this" I ask him after explaining him what exactly I am planning to do. "Bro Are you seriously going to do something like this with a kid?" My brother asks me exasperated. "Don't make me feel more bad than I am feeling right now please, I can't see my Children and Wife suffer like this" , "Then What about my kid?", "I assure you I won't let him have a scratch, he is my son too." With that i breakdown, This was my only hope, I see my brother pleadingly helplessly crying onto his shoulders more. He hugs me back reassuring that nothing will happen to his beloved Sister in law and that he will help me through this. Our mission starts, I am somehow very confident that my mission will not fail, the only thing that I am going to rely on is that, the lady loves her son. I call the next person i trust with this, My other brother who no matter what stands by me , my Mihir. He gives me a show up too. Now my confidence level increases and I make the last call to that one person I am so unsure will help me, given his honesty and sincerity in his job. Our friend ACP.




I call our friend and explain him everything, after a lot of convincing trails he understands the gravity of my situation and the moral righteousness in my act. Though halfheartedly, still he accepted but all that maaters to me is his acceptance gave me a sense of assurance that this will not go wrong. Now I will show my Jhansi ki rani, what her Ravan kumar can do to win her back. I set up everything needed and get a untraceable SIM with the help of ACP, though illegal but when we do something morally correct, we can really not think about ethics.


Missions Starts


Morning 6:00 First call


"Hello, who is this in odd hour?"

"Smell the coffee lady, it's already morning and You don't have lot of time to save your kid"

"Hello, who, what, who am I taking to... "

"Too many questions lady, You will be answered only one question at a time, and Right now the only question you desperately want to know is what is that I am talking about... Right??"

"Who is this?"

"Patience lady, you won't get anything, the next time you cut me off while speaking, your baby is gonna lose one of his body parts"

".."

"Ohhh hoo silence not bad. Back on track... To question the what, listen to me carefully, because you won't get anything in return If i don't get what I want, straight and clear, You listening?"

"yes yess... what do you want?"

"The baby is just up from a good sleep, if you want him to wake up again then Do the one thing I ask you for without a why and you and your baby will be set free or else you will die with you baby and your useless boyfriend."

"Boyfriend??? I don't"

"You hear the baby crying?"

"No no please don't do anything to the baby, that boy is all I have for myself. please"

"If you want to have your baby and boyfriend safe for yourself, Do what I ask you to do"


Call ends.



"I hope this doesn't backfire on us." , "It won't I am very sure." , "What if she doesn't speak up the truth in the court", "Time for next call"



Second Call 7:00



"Hey Lady, how are you doing"

"See, I beg you please give my baby back."

"All you have to do is what I ask you to do, will you?"

"Please tell me what you want from me, I am ready to give anything"

"Make your boyfriend talk to me now?"

"He can't talk he doesn't live here, He went to dubai after the murder, please please don't do anything to the baby. please I beg you... please"

"How do I believe you?"

"I tried calling him, he is unavailable, please please"

"I'm not here listen you wailing lady"


Call ends.

"Can you get information of the last person she called?" , "I will try", "Try quickly" , "Yes, I will try"


"Bro are you sure of this?" , "Mihir, you know right what you have to do?", "Yes I am, I will leave now" , "Good luck, do not mess up, keep me posted." , "Yes, I will leave now."


"Abhishek you got any clue?" , "I am trying yet" , "It's been half an hour since you repeating the same" , "Raman all these things takes time, please, I am trying my best and reliable source"


"Bro, don't you think It's time for next call" , "Lemme get update from Mihir", "Okay.. I will call him."

"Mihir, what's up there?" , "She is in there talking to someone on phone" , "Is it a landline?" , "Yes It's looking like a cordless" , "okay then, cut the landline wire now?" , "okay." , "Did you?" , "I am not a circus guy, wait I will do it in my pace" , "huh... do it as quickly as possible, she shouldn't see you" , "It's cut bro." , "You sure that's the one" , "will check what's she is upto?" , "Quickly" , "Hmmm... Bro, She is trying to call again and again, I think it's the right one i disconnected" , "Do you see any other Landline" , "No, There are distributed to different lines and i have cut the main one, so I don't think she will be able to connect through this." , "Good job, keep a eye on her, anything suspicious, let me know" , "Yes bro."



Third Call 8:15


"Hello, please tell me what happened to my child"

"Still alive and intact with all body parts"

"I want to see him"

"I want your boyfriend to talk to me"

"I tried to contact him, He isn't available."

"You sure you aren't lying, If I find out you are then your baby will be so dead"

"No no... It's true... He is in Malaysia, I am not able to contact him."

"Just an hour or so back he was in Dubai, Now he is in Malaysia. Wow. Baby say goodbye to your Mumma"


Call ends



"Bro Why did you cut the call, are you mad?" , "She wouldn't have told the truth, anyways Where is abhishek" , "I am right here with all that you want, The number she called is local number and It is in the area where your home is" , "What?" , "Bro may be they are checking if the baby is at home" , "Quite possible" , "Should I go and check" , "No... Call dad and ask him to just go for and walk and check this, If he encounters any suspicious person, tell him to follow that person." , "Bro Mihir's call"



"Yes Mihir" , "She is leaving somewhere urgently, she took a cab, and I am following her, she didn't notice me yet though" , "Be very careful, which area is she travelling can you guess?" , "No abhishek, we are going in a route I am not familiar of" , "Is your gps on" , "Yes", "Okay you follow her, I will keep you posted about your location", "okay"



"Bro, I called dad and told him, he was a bit apprehensive, but then he is off for his walking act and you Father in law joined him too." , "Abhishek send some of your teammates to my home to keep an eye on them" , "Yes" , "What now?", " We have to wait" , "Court is gonna start in 10 mins Raman, we should move out of here." , "Where is mihir?" , "He is (checking the current location) near your house location" , "what"


"Bro, dad has something for you he says?" , "Yes dad, What's it?" , "I saw a man trying to look into our house, as he wasn't able to, he left from there frustrated, I think he knows me, He ran away seeing me, but our security caught him." , "Good... Keep him captive and bring him to the court now, be very very careful dad." , "Okay, don't worry, will see you in court"


"Lets leave", "Raman what about mihir" , "Call him" , "Yes"


"Mihir" , "Where are you?" , "Following her, she stopped in front of your house for two minutes, but something and now she is again travelling somewhere" , "Where to" , "If i am not wrong she is heading towards court I guess" , "Okay"



"Raman what now?" , "Call amarnath chadda's Dad" , "What?", "Do as I say" , "Huh... k.. relax", "Romi start the vehicle, to Court" , "What do i tell him after calling" , "Give me the phone once it gets connected"


"Hello, who is this"

"Am I speaking to Mr.Chadda?"

"Speaking"

"Can you met me now"

"Sorry I'm in a rush"

"Rush with to get your justice for your son"

"What"

"Mr.Chadda, I cannot tell you anything on call, I have to meet you, If you want to get justice in your son's case give me a chance."

"My case is already strong, I have evidence against that lady who killed my son, I don't need your support"

"If you think by punishing that lady you will get your justice, then you are wrong."

"See the proceedings have already started I"

"Please Mr.Chadda, I'm your son's friend, please"

"I am in court if you can meet me there"

"I will be there in 2 mins"




Court scene



"Based on the evidences and acceptance statement of the culprit about the murder, This court sentences 2 years of Jail and a fine of 2 lakhs 50 thousand under IPC act 1860 section 267 and 273 "


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A sigh of relief washed through my Wife's face which brought back to me my peace. The family celebrated her home return as if she has won gold medal in Olympics. She would have noticed my ignorance, though I hugged her when she came after the legal proceedings which took three more hours to free her, but I didn't talk to her after that, She might have noticed the same. It was a very dramatic day but I know there is more to come, as I want her to understand that this World doesn't necessarily be as good as her. With determination to make her understand i head towards my home, which I left after the grand lunch which was planned as part of her celebration for comeback. I also had to thank Mr.Chadda for his last minute help and support in releasing my Ishita. I park my car and see my wife waiting for me, A smile creeped my face but I managed to put a straight face and head to home without looking at her or acknowledging her. This would hurt her, I know, but I have to do this to make her understand this is not the World as what she sees it. No one is a snow white as her.




"Mom... Water please" I say relaxing my tie, I see Ishita bringing water for me, As I don't wanna create a scene in front of my children I take it and head towards my room, expecting her to follow. As I expected she came behind closing the door. She had kept my night clothes on the dresser, I avoided them and took a new pair, this will infuriate he, I know.


"What happened you didn't like these night clothes"

She asked me amazed, I guess. I didn't reply her, and went to shower.


As I opened the door changed she was sleeping on the bed in a sitting position, reality hit me hard, she has become dull and very tired due to the jail. It has took a toll on her, rather than resting herself after being home, she has started with her routine as if nothing happened. She will never change, her goodness shouldn't be redeemed.I will protect your goodness from people misusing it Ishita, I thought to myself and went to her. She jerked open her eyes.


"You came back, I was waiting for you to have dinner? I missed having dinner with you, please"

I didn't utter a word and nodded my head.

"Are you ignoring me? or Is it in my mind?"

This lady will never understand I thought again and told her what I was pinning to tell her.

"I wanted to shout at you and be angry at you Ishita, for putting us through this, You always blame me for not sharing things with you or keeping things from you, whatever you do, you claim I did what was for the best, I agree we both do that, because we always misjudge this World to be white or black, but the reality is we all are grey Ishita.. When you took Ruhi away from all of us just because you cannot let Shagun take her is/was a small example i can quote here to make you understand that people sometimes do only those things which are best for them, their selfishness blooms, No one is selfish or selfless Ishita everyone has their own percentages which makes us tag a person Good or Bad. Given the situation If you see Pallavi was also not wrong, she wanted to be free, so she just used you, framed you, this is what world is Ishita. But you have to understand that your husband and children's world crumbles down, I know whatever you do is with a good intention but please Ishita give me and your children your priority, This room doesn't look like heaven when you aren't beside me to hug whenever I feel like. I cannot look into my kid's eyes which searches for their mother. We all have our share of heartbreaks and separations faced don't put us through that phase again. Let us be your priority. Help others but have me as your companion, I will never deny like i did before hereafter. I will guide and support you through please." I folded my hand not looking at her, I was about to shout at her but i couldn't get myself to, I love this lady more than i knew. I was expecting some kind of reaction from this woman, when I didn't get it I looked up, to see what I dread to see. Her feeling little as a person, her being guilty for helping a person out of good intention. She sat there holding her head in her palms trying not to sob hard, though i could hear her long loud sobs. My eyes filled with tears when call I could do was take her in a Hug and tighten it, when I see her crying more seeing my tears. She cried in my arms mumbling sorry, but all i want to ask her is to be with me forever.



"I Love You Ishita"


Tenu itna main pyaar karaan

Ek pal vich sau baar karaan

Tu jaave je mainu chhad ke

Maut da intezaar karaan

Ke tere liye duniya chhod di hai

Tujhpe hi saans aake ruke

Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon

Ye tu kabhi soch na sake


"SORRY"


"I love you's reply Should be I Love You, you duffer"

"Raman"
"What"

Kuch bhi nahi hai ye jahaan

Tu hai toh hai isme zindagi

Kuch bhi nahi hai ye jahaan

Tu hai toh hai isme zindagi

Ab mujhko jaana hai kahaan

Ke tu hi safar hai aakhiri

Ke tere bina jeena mumkin nahin

Na dena kabhi mujhko tu faasley

Main tujhko kitna chahti hoon

Ye tu kabhi soch na sake

Tere liye duniya chhod di hai

Tujhpe hi saans aake ruke

Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon

Ye tu kabhi soch na sake

Aankhon ki hai yeh khwahishein

Ki chehre se teri na hatein

Neendon mein meri bas tere

Khwabon ne li hai karwatein

Ki teri ore mujhko leke chalein

Ye duniya bhar ke sab raaste

Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon

Ye tu kabhi soch na sake

Tere liye duniya chhod di hai

Tujhpe hi saans aake ruke

Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon

Ye tu kabhi soch na sake



"I Love you Raman, I have nothing without you, like seriously nothing. I am really very very sorry, I will put you and my children's first. I promise. I will never do something that will separate us. "


"You aren't wrong Ishita, just i want you to make me your companion for better handling of the situations, We are not two different people Ishita. Understand that"

"Yes, Is your stomach growling"

"No, why?"

"Because mine is? shall we proceed for the dinner"

She wanted me to smile, I understood her intention. She will never change, i have give this lecture to her every now and then (for a change😆😉 ) Let her know how it feels to be lectured. Btw, I forgot to introduce myself. I am RBK, Ishita's Ravankumar and always be one, I guess i have a royal meal waiting at the dine and bed😉😉.

See ya RKB.


Thanks for reading...
Lots of Love,
Shravs😳

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mayasun thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Shravas,
Beautiful I hope RKB emerges like this in YHM too.

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was beautiful and perfect
Thanks for writing this OS
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awesome...
beautifully written👏
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wow wow wow

amazing

excellent

outstanding update dear

i loved it so much dear

thanks for fulfill my wish dear

this is i want to happen in yhm dear

thanks for given back our rkb dear

thanks for pm me dear

please write more os

i wish if you are a writer of yhm means we all save from cvs mental torture dear

👏👏👏...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was really nice shravs...
U mixed the story really well..
It would be awesome if they show mighty RKB in action rather than majboor crying Raman..
Superb OS yaar..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That is such an amazing piece of writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
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can i give you a kiss???
Omg yes i will! one thing your stupid act of breaking your leg got is to get you to write a story!!! that too so fast! i just requested it like last night and i come on forum to see this pm!!!
yiyyy
i was so excited!
and wah!!! kya baat hai!!! kaha se aaya yeh bakwaas idea heheh jking!! its chennai express dialogue btw!
i am so happy!
loved the way you have shaped Raman's character. He is back with a bang! a much needed thingy!!!!!

Love you sharu di!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb update dear
luvd it
n d song selection was nycc
lykd ishra convo
thnxx 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome is dear...I really want rkb in action in show like this...ishra confrontation ws amazing she needs to understand everyone is not good like her n she should think abt her hubby n children first...loved it!!

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