swasan & Ragya ss - REALISING LOVE IN BETWEEN BETRAYALS * Pt 1- up - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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plzzz i beg u to update ur story
waiting...
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Thanks a lot to everyone who commented & liked the upd... thanks for giving me your love... dil se... love you guys... my name is Neha... harshriti... Special thanks to marooshmallik.. no words to say... you guys make me feel special!!! here's the first part... Amnesia. The cause of Ragini's comeback to MM along with Swara. As Swara entered MM, DP blessed her welcoming her not as bahu but as the daughter of the house. Now, when she sat on the bed in her aka sanskar's bed, she recalled how they landed up in such a situation. Flashback As the Gadodias & Maheshwaris registered what the doctors have said, firstly they wrre shocked & then worried for Ragini knowing her life can be endangered if any shock is given to her. They went inside & tried to find what exactly she remembered without letting her know. But, suddenly Ragini started crying hugging her dadima around her waist, "Why did they do this to me? He left me broken second time. Am I a toy that he used & threw away? For his brother, he crushed my feelings under his feet.?! And see! He didn't even care for me a bit that's why he didn't even come to see me.! " All were shocked. She remembers only till her broken engagement. Swara came forward & hugged her. "shhhush. Ragini bas. chup ho jao." Then Ragini looked at her sister's face scrutinizingly, notice vermillion on her maang, then proceeded her vision down & found mangalsutra round her neck. She was shocked, & fear started gripping her. "You are married." She exclaimed more to herself than anyone. When she didn't get any response from the bunch of people gathered in her room, she broke down into tears staring at laksh, who was just behind Swara having his eyes fixed on Swara & mocking at her. Laksh being unaffected by all this was going to make a grand announcement of him being married to Swara,"Meri shadi..." Swara who was frightened by his foolishness looked for help & just then sanskar jumped in to salvage the situation. He declared himself to be the husband of Swara Bose, her sister. while laksh looked on at him angrily. Ragini got confused, "lekin sanskar ki to..." Sanskar was about to go tell about his truth, when Swara interrupted, "He's cured." "But laksh aap kuch keh rahe the..." Again Swara took charge of the situation & declared, "You're married to laksh." in a calm & composed way. Whilst Sanskar knew this was coming, laksh was shocked & angered. Ragini relaxed Now. "But I don't remember.." Swara asked her to calm down & not think much.. Ragini looked at her dadima, "See dadima I told you na that my ma & my sister are not wrong. " Parvati looked at Swara with admiration, "ha Ragini, Swara kabhi galat nahi ho sakti." Ragini narrowed her eyes at this staement of her dadi who hates them to the core, but before she could voice out the sedative took over her & she drifted into slumber.." Flashback over Swara thundered remembering how laksh got angry & refuused to act as her husband.. & why act? Her sister is so sweet. Having forgotten what she had become Now she was her loving sister. Sanskar entered the room & saw Swara lost in her thoughts. He sat beside her. Swara looked at him, "what will happen Now? " He nodded, "Everything will be fine Now, don't worry. After a while, when Ragini is somewhat stable & out of her accusations against you we'll tell the family we want divorce. we tried but could not work out." Swara looked at him. "its not so simple Sanskar." Sanskar reassured her, "it is. you're just complicating it further by thinking so much.." after a pause, he brought a chocolate bar before her face. Swara raisd her brows, what's this for? I don't find any reason to be happy. Sanskar pretended to be shocked, 'arey how can you. forget to celebrate? we got our old Ragini back." "but what will happen once she remembers? " Sanskar ccalmed her down, "We'll give her so much love that she won't be able to accept that ugly darkness back in her life. Nor we'll give her any reason to.."
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb jst luved it...
waitng for nxt update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
lovely prologue nd update dear

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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
nice 1..
bt ye to chotu chotu tha
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
update this one
want to see how ragya happens
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Loved it loved it loved it..
Plz
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Plz update soon.. n do pm me...
Ur story is adorb
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That's lovely update
Pm me when you next update plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Read both parts together..nice concept...update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Nice update
Waiting for your next update

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